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@sami01

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: skeptical

Sammy,

Don't know why, but I am always impressed by your quotes. And I like yr explanations very much.sweetest skepy coming from u i am extremely honoured......sorry for late reply holidays have thei rtoll on womens time ...

Here is something for you, (its very amateur, but for whatever its worth .......)

Jaane kya yeh baat hai

Bheege hue haalat hai

Beheke hue jazbaat hai

Masti bhari barsaat hai

Na jaane kaisi raat hai

Hum tum ek saath hai

aur aap ki kya baat hai..

kya khoob andaaz hai

moti--on se alfaaz hain....

aur zindagi ka saaz hai...😳

Is nazuk se mod par

Hosh havas kho kar

Pratigyaae tod kar

Halki ashaae jod kar

Ateet ko peechhe chhod kar

Nikle armaano ki khoj par

forum ke aakaash par

chamkti mehfil mein.

chand ki shama hai jali hui

khayalaat ki roshni se hum sab ki zindagi mein basi hui....

Kudi meri jis or chali

Guzar rahi hai jis gali

Umad padi hai har kali

Man hai kora soorat bhali

Jao manao rangrali

Raho azaad khushiyon me palii

zindgi kee rah teri roshan kare teri......pari..

har mod pe wo saath de...

raste ka pathron ko bhi phool sa ehsaas de..

tere safar mein saath tere.....

akhshron ki shama jali....skepy teri kalam chali...

kudi teri naye safar pe chali...

andhi bani toofaan bani...

saath is sailaab mein wo munde ko bhi le chali...

chal pari wo chal pari kudi naye safar pe chali..😳

skepy it was very very sweet indeed i loved it ....i am no poet so cant even think of penning something with to go with your so beautifull .nazam..but phir bhi ..mere is nazraane ko kabool karo..😳

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purvi

@coolpurvi

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: skeptical
My cool Purvi,

I should like to say it was kind of you to not only say how much you liked reading my story but which part impressed you the most.

A nonsensical verse for you:

Ek hawa ka jhoka aaya (my cool purvi)

Saath mein khushiya le aaya

Komal jaise ma ki maaya

Kya sukoon hai jisne laaya (My gratitude)

Karu mai jo aapne pharmaaya

Kya le aau mai aapke liye?

Jalaoo kya mai hazaar diye?

Aaon chalo inse miliye

Jinhone hai aasu bahot piye

Zakhm hai jiske dil me siye

Meri kudi apna dil de diya

Par hairan kare uska miya

Bechari bole "piya, piya"

Raj bola 'ye tumne kya kiya"

Toot gaya ladki ka jiya

Skep u do magic with Hindi also.

u know why I loved that part because u made Raj feel Kranti's pain without SN's intervention. I always wanted Raj to feel kranti's pain before coming so close to her. "He stroked her slim neck trying to erase those whip marks from there and from her shoulders. He couldn't understand why anyone would want to do this to her. " this line is simply amazing yaar. In the serial we always saw kranti getting irritated whenever Raj showed his concern or felt bad for her but here "She shivered and her eyes remained downcast. His hands brought her closer and she rested her forehead against his chest. She sighed for she felt safe." loved kranti's reaction

U made the character of Raj n Kranti in ur story so beautiful n adorable. U never do any ched-chaad with the beauty of the characters in ur FFs n predictions. There was nothing like getting drunk as happens in movies or ghisa pita soaps. As Dawn said it was sensible yet romantic. U r great dear.

Edited by coolpurvi - 16 years ago

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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

Alumni

+ 8

Posted: 16 years ago

#33

I can see that everyone is showering praises over our dearest Skepti😳😳...No doubt she is the driving force of this forum👏...She always keeps us engaged in some or the other work...b it puzzles or predictions or FFs or celebrations😳...I don't think I can ever imagine this forum without my soulmate Skepti😳

And yes I won't praise her much because the war is still on between two camps😉

Edited by jyoti06 - 16 years ago

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Too good Skep. 👍🏼 Absolutely amazing and fantabulously romantic.

It would be really an everlasting essence if their love is pure, and not shown in any tacky way.

Then only the concept of pure love will reign supreme over everything else in the world and RK will come together in the correct sense. The bodily lust should transcend into a realm of ethereal belonging. Reminds me of a poem by Elizabeth Barrett Browning

How do I love thee? Let me count the ways.
I love thee to the depth and breadth and height
My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight
For the ends of Being and ideal Grace.

I love thee to the level of everyday's
Most quiet need, by sun and candlelight.
I love thee freely, as men strive for Right;
I love thee purely, as they turn from Praise.

I love thee with the passion put to use
In my old griefs, and with my childhood's faith.
I love thee with a love I seemed to lose
With my lost saints, I love thee with the breath,
Smiles, tears, of all my life! and, if God choose,
I shall but love thee better after death.

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Hi Poetic,

Robert Browning wrote the most beautiful poem The Pied Piper. One of my favourites. Just like the piper, he too had a profound influence on Elizabeth Barrett, a lonely crippled young woman caught in the clutches of an over protective father who eventually disinherited her. I have found the love story of Rob Browning and Eliz Barrett sweeter and cuter than no other. And of course their poetry. She left her father's home to marry this man who took her away to Italy. She wrote as she always did and translated some of the finest of Portuguese poems.

She was ill and she finally died in her husband's arms. He did everything he could possibly do for her. It all comes out through her poems.

If you are interested in this fab couple, do see the film called Barretts of Wimpole Street. Her whole life is depicted there.

Sorry I really got carried away. But poetry is my favourite subject and these two poets are my favourite jodi.

I am glad you liked what I wrote. Incidentally, I'm Skep.

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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

Alumni

+ 8

Posted: 16 years ago

#36

Hey Skepti I m still waiting for your next story😉😳..I m sure by now u hv made up your mind regarding the much awaited RK-Milan...how,when,why and where😛😛...U know more than the episode I m now interested in knowing about your vision😆😳

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#37

@ Skep : I know a bit about both Robert and Elizabeth's work but didn't know about their real life story, so I would definitely watch the movie you mentioned. Now I realise the deep layers of meaning in every single line they wrote.

I am with Jyoti here, you really need to write something about this MIlan track. I am sure it will be something beautiful again.

Please.

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HaYa

@IsHq

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#38

HeLLo Skepti............

Luved Ur FF....It Was Awesomeeeeeeeee....👏👏👏

PLzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Do write abt RK Milan..........🤗🤗

Waiting For ur FF...

Regdz DaKzz

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: IsHq
HeLLo Skepti............
Luved Ur FF....It Was Awesomeeeeeeeee....👏👏👏

PLzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Do write abt RK Milan..........🤗🤗

Waiting For ur FF...

Regdz DaKzz

Hi DKz, 🤗

Thanks for your appreciation. Yes I was thinking of writing something this weekend. Let's see how things go. However I must mention I am not so good at graphic description of ... you know what. But the emotional side is what is important, isn't it? That's what i am going to do. Put things through my perspective. I do that anyway. 😉

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Dawn

@Dawn Idol

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#40

[QUOTE=skeptical

I'll be eternally gratefull if you do a FF about the "Night & Morning after" - in your special way .............

@ Pink ........... That's exactly what I want to read .............. I was never one for the graphics ..........

A look / a glance / a fleeting touch / a lift of the eyebrow / the smile beginning in the eyes / a supressesd smile / the lowering of the lashes ................

Oh the list is endless ............ If one has the flair ( which you do ), to depict a love scene in this way ..........

Please try and do a FF in the week end ............😍

Edited by Dawn Idol - 16 years ago