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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks guys, had an amazing time at KOTW. All the best to the next member on the hot seat.. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
For you my prickly pear,
It was a rather busy morning. Dewy had to catch up on several things. The last thing she wanted to do was to go to the supermarket for grocery shopping. But the Home front was important and so this chore had to be done. Her meeting with an important client was in half an hour. Anyway, much of the list had been taken care of. It was now just a dash to the car and she would be on time for the appointment.
She collected her bags after paying her bills. As she turned, she saw a figure in the corner ahead of her. The figure came forward. It seemed to be a woman. She was wearing a long black dress; she had a stick in her hand; she was wearing an old grey straw hat. Her head was bent.
"Excuse me," said Dewy.
The head lifted. Dewy saw a pair of green yellow eyes staring back at her. There were two prominent warts on her face, one on the chin and the other above the right euebrow. Her hair was like grey and ochre with a rough texture. Her free hand lifted.
"Hello Dewy," said the woman.

On seeing this strange lady, Dewy was startled. But since she had no time she was neither frightened nor astonished by this creature. All that was on her mind was her meeting. It was an important client and she wanted to put her best foot forward, bring forth all her skills of conviction to clinch the deal. It was important to her and to her company. And she had worked at for it

"I'm sorry, ma'am," she said, "I'm getting late. But I'm a regular customer here and shall definitely give you a donation next time." She rushed towards the lift as the doors opened. Her car was in the basement. She would dump all the parcels in the car, drop them off at home and be on her way. The lift doors closed. She didn't see that figure.

Donation? What the Devil was that? Did that silly thing think that I needed help? Aarghhhhh!! Anger seethed within me. My eyes screwed to slits and began to blaze; they changed colour and the green orbs shone with suppressed fury. My gnarled hand remained outstretched. I was about to gift something to her. But she had no time. Things had changed somewhat. I would still give her the gift but with a clause. My forefinger pointed to the doors of the lift. The finger was crooked with its grey claw.

Who the hell did she think she was?

To just walk by without a pause….

With a click of my fingers just like that

The tyres of your car will soon be flat.

I spun on my heels. Poof!....... I was down in the basement. I knew where her car was. I walked silently to a pillar from where I could get a clear view. She came running and opened the dickey. She noticed the wheels. She blinked several times in disbelief. Her tyres were flat. Who could such a thing in this protected car park? I smiled. What holy pleasure I got. She looked forlorn and upset. I felt a twinge of remorse. She was a friend, wasn't she? The earthlings say friends should help no matter what. Oh I just don't understand them. She was now trying to find help. I blew hard towards the wheels. The tyres slowly swelled up. She put her hands on her forehead. The car shook a bit. She was surprised. She noticed the tyres. Huh? Back to normal? What was happening to her. Her MIL was right. She should have had breakfast. She got into the car and drove off. Not so fast, pal. I stepped on my broom. My hands folded. My broom lifted and I followed her. My bag was well balanced on the rod and by feet planted on the bristles. Swooooooosh !!! I remained invisible.

She had by now reached the portals of her office. Ugh! It was a clean structure with beauty all around. Landscaped gardens on one side and an artificial waterfall on the other. My lips curled in derision. What pathetic taste! I hated such neatness and such brightness. It hurt my eyes.

My world, I would any day prefer

Where earthly manners do not deter

Where malice and curses rule the day

And treachery always paves the way

Where darkness never really hinders

Where cauldrons boil on red hot cinders

The yellow moon in the dark velvety sky

Owls that hoot and the cats that cry.

We entered the lift and rode up to the 9th floor. She had her briefcase in one hand and her laptop in the other. I glided on the floor behind her. The room was a bit dark. Oh I thanked the devil for that. People were seated around a table-like structure. Dewy went to meet her clients and the presentation began. The laptop however started to play up. She got flustered. Hey, I assure you this wasn't any of my doing. All her efforts seemed to be in vain. I could read the worry on her face. I realised this was indeed very important to her. Her boss, her clients and her colleagues began to shift in their seats. She began to try all ways to get her computer started. My lips began to smile. It stretched on just one side of the face. Should I step in? My shoulders shook with laughter. I bared my teeth, my jagged teeth and released a slow breath. Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Silently, the magic worked and the device started to function. Dew was soon explaining her points quite emphatically, I must say.

I found it very boring because I didn't understand a thing. What a lot of gibberish!! I think I dozed a bit because I woke up to the sounds of claps. People were shaking hands and smiling. So was Dewy. People left one by one. A young lady entered the room. She helped her to pack up. I saw Dewy clearly in the darkness. Her eyebrows were furrowed and there were worry creases on her forehead. What was wrong? Her assistant went to bring her coffee. Dewy stood by the window and looked out, her finger idly curling her hair. She was in deep thought. Her coffee was set on the table and she was left alone. I snapped my fingers and the lights came on slowly. She looked around surprised. Her eyes fell on me as I became visible again. Her mouth dropped open.

"You? How are you here? How did you get in?"

"Sit down Dewy. I can see you are tired."

She came forward and looked at me. There was no revulsion on her face, just traces of distaste.

"Hello Dewy, I don't think we've met before, I'm ………"

A diminutive figure entered the room. And along with her was her entourage of sprites. I was on immediate alert. My being was on fire. My rage was palpable. I raised my hand to swipe. But the lady shooed them away.

"Dawn, it went off well. But I'm not sure." Dewy said.

"Dew, this is Wendy……. Our friend"

"What? She is from the supermarket; who approached me for a dona……"

"Stop. Stop it." I inserted. "What do you people think of yourselves?"

"I'm sorry, I never meant to hurt you. I genuinely thought you wanted ….." She was contrite and her voice trailed away.

"When a hand is outstretched, it may not be asking for help chica, it could be offering help," I explained.

"Oh my God……. Skep!!!!!!!!!!!!"

"The deal is yours, sweetie. I can predict that quite well."

I smiled. It was time for me to leave. I caught my cape and turned several times round my heel. POOF …….!!!!!

I returned to my world. My aunts had prepared a special meal today. It was Christmas after all.

Merry Christmas to all my friends on Earth.

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Posted: 16 years ago
Fabulous Skep ................... 👏
I am running out of words to describe your writing ............
How do you come up with such exquisite work - time after time - every time ?????
Just when I think she has topped it now .............. you come along and out do yourself, raising the benchmark all over again ..............
Your version was brilliantly protrayed from your angle ...........👍🏼
I loved the ending ................ you were hurrying home for Christmas ............ the season of love, cheer. hope and joy .............
God bless you dear,
MERRY CHRISTMAS & A HAPPY NEW YEAR !!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
First of all, Congratulation Dew.!!!! for being KOTW. I'm sorry for being so late I was not active much so couldn't be here earlier and that saved u from answering my illogical question and dont worry I won't ask u anymore question as ur fingers are already in pain. I won't add to it I just read this thread as much as I could and realised how great and happy members are here with such great imaginations and this thread revealed skepti identity. No wonder her each and every post had a magical effect on its reader (including me😆). Your amazing answer to everyone's question was a great fun to read and yes u r right that being a KOTW was a ride as it expressed in your comments and amazing writing which I read and I was like 'am I really on KOTW?' because it was so different and entertaining. Atlast, Merry Chritmas!!! Dew😊
@ skepti- Thanks for informing dear through PM. I missed this thread somehow. I read your writing yaar.....and ...what shoul I say??.hmmm, MAGICAL...yaar...U have explained things in a very amazing way. This witch world....I mean ur world sounds so cool and familiar. Keep Writing this great stories these are just amazing. I agree with DI...How do u manage to deliever wonderful peace of writing time to time. Hat off to u !!. u keep us wonder dear and give to read amazing writing. I loved the ending too. It was superb and suits the season very well. Merry Chritmas!!😊
morningdew thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
Brilliant Skep.. as usual, the finest comes out of your pen.. or shud I say keyboard? 😉
Your version was surely crisp, neat, smart and concise.. I almost wrote a novel in comparison.
And Dawn features here too? So we have common ground on atleast one of the parameters. 😊
Thanks for making the KOTW such a marvelous experience for me, and combined with the B'day sticky, this was a double treat, I was center of attention on two major stickys for such a long while.
It has been a most gratifying experience.
@Seebz- thanks for your wishes, and yes, I had an amazing time here.
morningdew thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thank you everybody for such a beautiful time for me here at KOTW.
WIsh you all a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New year !! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: morningdew

Neha, answers to your Qns. Finally 😃

Some answers-
1. He said, "You'll sentence me to six years in prison." If it was true, then the judge would have to make it false by sentencing him to four years. If it was false, then he would have to give him six years, which would make it true. Rather than contradict his own word, the judge set the man free.

2. Fill the 3-gallon container with oil and pour it into the 5-gallon container. Then fill the 3-gallon container again and use it to fill the 5-gallon container the rest of the way. One gallon will be left in the 3-gallon container.

3. Five. There are only four colors, so five socks guarantee that two will be the same color.

4. Silence.

6. Seven. The four daughters have only one brother, making five children, plus mom and dad.

7. Queue.

8. A lie. It can't be the truth without contradicting itself (and therefore being a lie), but some of my statements can be lies, and this is one of those statements.

9. Her autobiography.

10. She was a hurricane.

11. You can't use curlers to take photos! You need a camera.

12. You have just one - the one you took away.

13. A river.

14. There are eleven letters in "the alphabet."

15. A towel.

16. A stamp.

17. Fire.

18. The word "wholesome."

19. Bacon.

20. When you're a mouse.

21. Just one - after that it won't be empty.

👏 GREAT JOB....ena....wa can i saii each n' every answer is xceptionally' correct...👏👏...hhhahahha must saii lot of research has been dun...😆
Great job again...!!!!
thx 4 answerin' dese quest....4 me..dear..😃
MERRY CHRISTMAS..!!!!!!😳
LUV
NEHA😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Ok I was a Silent reader here..but now opening my mouth😉😆...

Skepti and Dawn some wonderful Story-Telling done by you Both👏👏...Ena thanks once again for answering all the questions beautifully and in such a dignified manner👍🏼..not to forget your stories were just outstanding and I really take a bow here👏

This was the Best KOTW of the Season I guess😳..
The Next KOTW thread will be up by tomorrow Afternoon Indian Time😃...I m sure everyone is ready to grill our next Bakri now😉😛
Last but not the Least..Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to Everyone🤗
Edited by jyoti06 - 16 years ago

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