Raj's Fall Now Kranti's turn-Uptd Part XVI Pg 30 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Greenday

hey ranjana....dis is greenday....awesome work i must say !!!!

Originally posted by: bakwas1

Wow this is really wonderful .I have never read it before and so i read all the parts at a strech.They are far above excellent. Keep going.....

I wish the show could have shapen this way but the so called creatives are spicing the show with all sorts of rubbish masalas😡

Originally posted by: pennu

hi rajna....

awsome work yaar

I loved to read those RK fighting sequences...

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Haila Raj getting all naughty thoughts😲😛...Ranju I hope in the next part he kisses her😉😆..at least in the dream yaar😳...

Ok coming back to this part,wonnderfully written as usual👏...I wish creatives would hv simply followed your brilliant FF😳...Loved the entire Shubu-Jealousy track too😉..and then Kranti keeping a vrath for Raj and then taking the bath early morning..woww superb thinking👏😳...I m loving this idea of two jealous men fighting with their ownselves😆😳;I hope BBR can put some ghee in fire and try to provoke Raj more so that he can go and confess his love for Kranti😳..

Overall Ranju I can see that u r back with a bang😃...Amazing piece of writing👏

Originally posted by: Dawn Idol

Haila Ranjana............... I'll consider this your festival offer ...........

We just finished celebrating our harvest festival ......

And your episode is terrific .........

Like Jo ..... I hope R gets to kiss K soon ....

And if Shubbu is to be a Kabab-me-haddi..... plz make it a very small teeny-weeny haddi ...........

Very soon sami .

Thanks for putting in a line.

Originally posted by: ranjna_m2010

Kranti was sitting on her bed and looking angrily at him.

K: What the hell are you doing here?
R: (Didn't knowing what to say) Oh I must have fallen form the bed.
K: What. ???

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