Raj's Fall Now Kranti's turn-Uptd Part XVI Pg 30 - Page 9

Ranjna ........... I read 2 parts together today ..........

Bhawana Raj never wanted to let her go. it is his vouch that he will take care fo her and win her back with his love and care. He never intended to let her go anywhere.

Originally posted by: pari29

ok its getting more n moer intersting come tell me the next part i want to read whet Bi is going to tell arj how to win the trust of his lady love? jaldi karo

kash isis se humare pirye CRETIVEs kuch seek le le.

any way ranjana two thumb ups to u 👍🏼👍🏼

Originally posted by: Dawn Idol

Ranjna ........... I read 2 parts together today ..........

They were really wonderful ......... 👏 Thanks a lot dawn.

Your story is shaping up better than the serial ............I am honored.

I loved their visit to Badi Bi's house ............. it was superb ..........Thanks once again I will my brains are running over time to get more interesting ideas and characters.

I think in the serial also R & K need to get away from that mad house for sometime ............. So that R can see & hear something about K's childhood Yes they need to Definitely get away form BBR, she is getting irritating now. She keeps aneaking on Raj and Kranti and no one notices.

Wow Rajna.. the last two episodes..Oopsss sorry stories were superb yaar.... I felt as if each and every scene which you were narrating was happening just before my eyes.... Awsome work .. keep on...

Thanks a lot pennu will continue very soon.Dont worry already writing it.

Ranju,

Lovely story 👏 and you have written it so beautifully.

Hmm, so Shubhankar also has feelings for K? ☢️ See this is why I don't want Shu in the soap. The makers will make it a stupid triangle then.

AM waiting for the next part very patiently. 😊

Dont worry Rachna It is not going to be a triangle here. You will see it very soon . Will continue.

Great Ranju. I was writng my FF so cud not read page 10 n 11. u named Kranti pinku. cute thing. bechara Raj. Shubhankar is so adorable in ur FF