Raj's Fall Now Kranti's turn-Uptd Part XVI Pg 30 - Page 23

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Posted: 16 years ago
After long time Ranjana. Wonderful update . Story is really good. We are fortunate to have some beautiful writers here. U gals are really entertaining us wonderfully. But u have taken so much time yaar.
Thanks for updating.
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Posted: 16 years ago
thank god u updated...
update is too good as usual......
we reallly missed u n ur updates
I liked dialogues.....
thank u 4 update
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sasha722

Wel come back ranju
really missed u
But happy dat u r back

I shall comment on it later little busy

but I know it superb 👏⭐️ u all write fantastic
I am rally happy dat u r back

Thanks a lot for teh warm welcome sasha. Shall wait for your comments.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pennu

Oh Ranjana... you are back.... Welcome home dear.... I almost forget your story... so went back to those early parts.... Thanks a aot for giving such a good update...

Hmmm.. so Kranti's mission got failed... who was that, who betrayed the KKs... hope Kranti won't doubt Raj for this... (anyway he was also aware about their mission na....) And Kranti even got shot.... hope her wound will cure fast..... BTW what was Kranti mensioning about Raj's missing... along with Raj I am also worried about this.... Now waiting to see both of them sharing a good conversation on the roof.. on your next update.... So this time make it fast.... Once again thanks.....

Sorry for the delay Jaya. I knew I will have all of you whenever I come around thats the kind of friends I have fouond on IF. Dont worry Kranti wont doubt Raj for this my Kranti is a very sensible woman. About someone Raj missing you shall find out.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sami01

wow wow ranju so happy to see u back ......and loved the update ..so sad that mission failed and badi bi is no more and who could be informer hmmmmmmmmmmm i sincerely hope kranti doesnt blame raj .....and what would raj be missing if not kranti.. but i like this relationship which is realistic..philosphy is diffrent but pull of love is there and they r not just enemies.............but normal indviduals with heart and at same thime they have their prinicples....

Yeah the mission got into jeopardy thanks to some traitor but dont worry Kranti is not blaming Raj for his she is aware of teh situation. We shall find out in the next part whom Raj is missing.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Sri_Nidhi

After long time Ranjana. Wonderful update . Story is really good. We are fortunate to have some beautiful writers here. U gals are really entertaining us wonderfully. But u have taken so much time yaar.

Thanks for updating.

My apologies for teh delay Sri I hope I will not give you any reason to complaint now. Will be psoting next part very soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: tetuty66

thank god u updated...
update is too good as usual......
we reallly missed u n ur updates
I liked dialogues.....
thank u 4 update

Thanks a lot I am back and so are my updates.
Thanks for writing in. Will be posting the next part very soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Here is Part 16 friends hope you enjoy it too.

The breeze was slow and soothing. Kranti was sitting on the swing and her good foot was on the ground and she was using the force of it to move the swing lightly. He could sense that she is relaxed and not much was there on her mind may be a relaxed day after so many days on turmoil, tension and grief. He quietly sat beside her on the swing and it stopped moving due to his weight she looked up.

Kranti tried to get up to leave. Raj held her hand and stopped her.

R: Kranti sit here with me please.

K: I have to go fleeing sleepy.

R: Kranti why are you so elusive all the time.

K: Raj I need to go and sleep.

R: Enough Kranti what the hell I missed you like a mad man. I couldn't sleep peacefully for even a single night since I can back from Amritsar, thinking about your well being and you don't even want to sit with me here and talk to me. (His voice was quite loud by now)

K: Raj why do you forget always that we are not the regular married couple at all. We need to be happy and with each other in front of the family and I understand the need of it. But when we are alone then I don't see the need of it. So please stop………

R: You stop it Kranti. Yes I agree we are not the usual married couple but we are a couple and that's the truth. We care for each other and no one, even you can't deny this fact. So why do you keep pretending and fighting with yourself and me. I think it is high time that you accept the fact.

Kranti stood quite and kept looking at his agitated face for a while. Then she turned to leave quietly leaving an angry and frustrated Raj behind her.

Raj kept sitting on the swing thinking he didn't realize how much time had passed his thought process was broken by Kranti's call.

K: Raj don't you have to sleep it is too late now.

R: who……

K: It is late and of you want to sit with me and talk then come inside my foot is hurting need to straighten it up alright.

Raj looked at her puzzled for a moment and then smiled.

Will I ever be able to understand this woman all my life? God

He got up and walked into the room. Kranti had laid her bad at its usual place and was sitting with her back against the wall and a pillow nicely nestled between her back and wall.

Still on the floor never mind at least she is talking now.

K: So how have you been?

Her tone was surprisingly mocking a far cry from her earlier tone of lecturing Kranti.

Raj was slightly taken aback. He was very confused now didn't know what to do.

K: Everyone on the house is been saying that you have been missing me a lot. I must compliment you on your acting skills. And what I am? A fool! Why are you doing this I need to understand it now. I am sure now you are not doing this to get information out for your bosses as I believe that you are a fair fighter. So Mr. Rajbir Lal I need to know the purpose of your pretence and act.

R: Kranti what are you talking about. Me acting? What has gone into your head woman. Now I need to know that. Those snide comments in front of buaji whats all that.

K: Why Raj? You must have been happy that I am away from your life and you could live in peace with your Sa………..

Her senctence was cut short by Raj.

R: With…….what are you talking about Kranti? And whom are you talking about?

K: Raj you need not act now there is no one around.

Her tone was turning into and angry one.

R: Enough Kranti what are you talking about?

K: You are asking me this question Raj.

R: Yes cos I am not able to understand a word of what you are saying.

K: don't tell me you don't know whom and what am I talking about.

R: No I don't.

K: What a liar and actor you are I am leaving I am feeling suffocated around you.

She got up to move out. Raj held her hand in his strong grip.

R: Now tell me what are you talking about and then go where ever you want to.

He hissed.

Kranti turned around and he could sense the fire in her eyes.

K: I am talking about Sanjh Raj and now do you get it.

R: Sanjh……….how come……….

K: Yes Sanjh. And you thought that you will carry on doing things and I will not get to know. At least you could have been fair in doing things. Whats my concern right however you could have told me about this. At least I would have saved you in front of the family incase there was any issue. But you didn't say anything at all. But I don't care about you and your Sanjh or whatever. Good you didn't tell me now leave me I have to go.

Her anger had translated into tears by now. She probably didn't realize what all she was telling Raj and he was standing quietly and listening to her.

K: Leave me hand Raj I have to go.

R: I have left it long time ago Kranti.

Kranti looked at her hand which was not in his grip any more.

K: Fine and Thanks.

She walked out of the room wiping her tears. Raj kept looking at her receding figure not knowing what to say.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi Ranjana welcome back🤗...............i have joined the forum lately so couldn't reply to your post.......sorry for that😔.........but i read all your updates and....... among those who had been egearly waiting for your comeback.😊

Now coming to the FF.........I like the way you show kranti in your
FF.....very mature n sensible unlike MRD.... jaha vo humesha Raj ki
galtiyan nikalti rahti thi.
waiting for your next update
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Posted: 16 years ago
Oh ranju wel come back
I read from Part 1
very wel written but little unhappy part 16 was 222 short
but happy for quick update
Each & every character so wel describe
the suspense is killing me what happens next ???????????????
I just loved in the end when K talks about sannj
& R is dumbstruck
I could visualize his expression
( this reminded me of serial MRD when
K always walks out Our R is always speechless)
But ur is different I love their conversation
just couldnt understand what the hell she was talking
pl ranju post soon part 17
I want 2 know how R will convince k
They both r madly in love but she does want 2 commit it s
she wants his warmth but afraid to accept so wel u hve portrayed
it
PLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLl update sooooooooooooooooon👏😃😛


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