Raj's Fall Now Kranti's turn-Uptd Part XVI Pg 30

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Ranjna Narang Monga

@ranjnanarang

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Posted: 16 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: dinky_05

Hi Ranjana welcome back🤗...............i have joined the forum lately so couldn't reply to your post.......sorry for that😔.........but i read all your updates and....... among those who had been egearly waiting for your comeback.😊

Now coming to the FF.........I like the way you show kranti in your

FF.....very mature n sensible unlike MRD.... jaha vo humesha Raj ki

galtiyan nikalti rahti thi.

waiting for your next update

Thanks a lot dinky it is nice to see that new people are joining he MRD family. Dont worry about not replying when ever you can just drop in a line so no issues. Thanks a lot for liking my FF will be writing in soon.

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Ranjna Narang Monga

@ranjnanarang

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Posted: 16 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: sasha722
Oh ranju wel come back
I read from Part 1
very wel written but little unhappy part 16 was 222 short
but happy for quick update
Each & every character so wel describe
the suspense is killing me what happens next ???????????????
I just loved in the end when K talks about sannj
& R is dumbstruck
I could visualize his expression
( this reminded me of serial MRD when
K always walks out Our R is always speechless)
But ur is different I love their conversation
just couldnt understand what the hell she was talking
pl ranju post soon part 17
I want 2 know how R will convince k
They both r madly in love but she does want 2 commit it s
she wants his warmth but afraid to accept so wel u hve portrayed
it
PLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLl update sooooooooooooooooon👏😃😛

Second welcome what for thanks anyways girl Yeah I know that part is small but it had to be like this as the things are moving towards change.

Actually I am happy that u didnt get what she was alking about thats what I wanted to conver as she does not know herself what is she talking about. Wanted to potray her confusion. She is in denial and the things will get clearer in the next part and dont worry will be updatign quickly noe. I have kept you all waiting for such a long time cant commit the same mistake again.

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skeptical

@skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#233

Helllllllllllllllllllllloo Shellllllllllllllloo,

So your story is back on track? And the Rat does not know how to guage my kudi?

Oh those were the days...................... sigh!!!!!!!!!!!!! Remember all our arguments????? 😲 😉

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pennu

@pennu

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#234

Sannj..... Oh no!!... who is it.... ab kya hoga... arey all these doubts are killing me... Rajana... Once again a very good update... But don't you think.... this part was little bit short.. any way no probs... always love to read what ever you write, wether it is small or big.... Good job Rajana...

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Ranjna Narang Monga

@ranjnanarang

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Posted: 16 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: skeptical
Helllllllllllllllllllllloo Shellllllllllllllloo,

So your story is back on track? And the Rat does not know how to guage my kudi?

Oh those were the days...................... sigh!!!!!!!!!!!!! Remember all our arguments????? 😲 😉

Yeah those were the days sighs. Actually skep right now your kudi is confused.

Hopefully will be posting the next part very soon.

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Ranjna Narang Monga

@ranjnanarang

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Posted: 16 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: pennu
Sannj..... Oh no!!... who is it.... ab kya hoga... arey all these doubts are killing me... Rajana... Once again a very good update... But don't you think.... this part was little bit short.. any way no probs... always love to read what ever you write, wether it is small or big.... Good job Rajana...

Jaya sanjh is teh same girl whose picture BBR had shown to Kranti. Remember. I will clear the things in the next part. sorry for writing in a short part but there was a logic to it as things will be changing from now on. I will be posting in very soon now. Cant keep you all waiting anymore.

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dlip

@dlip

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#237

very good ... I liked the story and updates

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Ranjna Narang Monga

@ranjnanarang

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Posted: 16 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: dilipc302

very good ... I liked the story and updates

Thanks a lot Dilip all the appriciation is very encouraging.

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namita25

@namita25

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#239

hey...ranj welcome back dear................
so finally we got an update from you ..........😊
I have been waiting for this like anything....................😳😳
anyways loved reading your update..................😊
the entire Raj -Kranti convo was terrific.................👍🏼👍🏼
bas yaar ab next update ke liye zyaada intezaar mat karana .plz...............................