SaJan FF:That's How I Fall for You[UPDATED LAST CHAPTER 15 DEC 2014] - Page 50

Originally posted by: ISHQMONAYA

Hey even i feel same.the climax would had been much better than how they had shown.
Sometimes i really get annoyed as MJHT S2 would have been much better than how they did it.
I mean mature concept in SaJan story would have been handled in a mature way.but they had ruined it later. 😡

Chapter Twenty Two ... Sweet Sorrow..

Originally posted by: ritzsammy

Awossome update.loved every dialogues n scene n u r just perfact with every emotion u really very well described it as I can feel every bit of it.loved sajan bonding n the way they supported each other it was just an amazing.keep it up marie. 👏

Originally posted by: SM_317

woww amazingg update again marie.😳.the lovely sajan moments and then gunjan's father..he ws with mayank..how could he do this with his daughter..gunjan's bonding with samrats parents is really sweet..wondering wts writen in gunjans diary...eagerly waiting for next part..finally the truth will be out..updte soon..and ur othr fics too..

Meri Sweetheart 😆🤗 First of all, I am really sorry for being so so late😳 was messed up with stuff but finally I did. And you know my opinion about it,don't you? 😛

So starting off with Chapter 21..Ah the romantic part was just fab!! This update was well defined. Sajan revisited each other with a tinge of romance and understanding. Just loved it!! You described the entire chapter beautifully. I love how you have developed the story so far with so many ups and downs. You did a commendable job with the characterization and the plot of the story<3 Just too good. I am truly amazed by your writing skills as well. 👏👏 With every update you come with a new twist and keep us rooted to this FF. Hats off!!

Now coming to Chapter 22. Well first of all I loved the title. Sweet Sorrows ❤️ Its was very interesting to read how they tried to solve their problems. Their togetherness is the main reason they have been fighting so hard and I am glad you highlighted this point. You literally took my breath away by bringing in the police but the way you handled all the fiasco was brilliant. 😃 I am glad Sajan were back together. So Jao Maaf kiya!! 😆

Gunjan is a real tigress and this update really proved it. The way she listened to him despite being shocked was phenomenal but more inspiring was the way she responded. 👏⭐️ Also enjoyed the passion and possessiveness that they share<3 It brings a new flavour to their relationship which is worth seeing. Their care towards each other always stands out and you have described it beautifully!!

Now coming to the last chapter. I happily read it untill the very end and here comes another twist 😆 Now it will be quite interesting to read how you take it further and make Sajan as a happily married couple 😳 I am very excited to read further. You know the best part of your stories are that you develop them in such a way that each update is a story in itself. You portray a whole journey in each of your updates. For me the best of this update was Samrat's dialogue and the ending of Gunjan's monologue. It simply defines what Sajan are for each other and how difficult it is to live without each other. Pain..anguish everything is there and beautifully depicted. 👏👏 Also loved the way how he left letters for and his voice messages were bang on. Now plz make things easy for them.

Phew..Done with it. I hope you had a good reading.😆 Btw I proudly announce to be your biggest fan. Keep growing this talent. Hugs!!

Love you Take Care!! ❤️