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Let you guys know about one thing..don't expect samrat or gunjan to think or feel about each other constantly same.. their reactions would be much effected by the on going situation..as the sudden reply of action...not the one actually it should be ...they are very much intend to react for lil things... i hope the update is upto the mark..as ur comments encouraged at same time made me fearful if this is not upto your expectations..Leave honest views .. Thank You !!

Chapter One
The Unexpected Clash

Part A
A Ruling Princess Enjoying Limelight<3

Dream.. How she wish to live in dream..the whole new world..where she is happy..smiling face..laughing loudly..giggling ...free from every remorse , tension ,hatred or any other negative thoughts,feelings or situations...dream is the only place she feel she is there..

But as soon as her sleep get disturbed..bringing her in very odd world according to her...the smile..the innocence ..the sweetness was now just like a dream...

She was furious listening the noise of alarm clock..She tired to shut it up while closing eyes still but irritation was written all over her beautiful face..when she was unable to do..she pick it up n threw in right side wall which she was facing...It created more noise which continued alarm still ringing..she made the worst face as finally opened eyes by getting more irritated of sunshine peeping through curtains in front of big window..She Called her maid on top of her voice..leaving her lungs wishing for a relief...She stopped screaming till heard her rushing through door...but her Yelling continued till the maid turn off the alarm..A lady in her Black and White uniform spoke up while her body language was showing how much panic she was feeling at that time..

"Sorry Mam..I was just preparing your coffee..Sorry i got late today..."

Gunjan sighed...ignoring her excuses...moving away her comforters while covering herself in her night gown..she ordered...

"I am going to get fresh..My breakfast should be in room exactly in half an hour..."

"Mam Sir is waiting for you on breakfa..."

Gunjan turned n the maid stopped seeing her deadly look...

"How many times i have to tell you that i Give a dam to you or your Sir..It is your last warning mind it.. Never let me repeat it.."

Her raised eyebrows..and glaring gaze..made the maid tremble to death..she was furious in her normal mode..n in her upset or angry mood she is no less than a devil..

"Yes mam Your breakfast will be in room in half an hour.."

The maid stammers as looked down on ground wishing herself to vanish from her sight..

"Good now you can get lost dear.."

Gunjan smirked evilly n moved towards her wardrobe as heard her leaving..She felt relieved as she left..but she frowned as heard another knock..but soon she flashes a wide smile...as saw an old man dressed in a tux which certainly had made him look younger than his age..had a glass of her favourite orange juice..

"Baba Why did you come all by yourself ? I was about to come ..."

Gunjan putting away her clothes hugged the old man..as he smiles affectionately at her lovely hug..

"Yeah I know My daughter was about to come..I came here to lower down your temper which certainly can make me even tremble.."

Gunjan made a fake upset face..and then smiles a bit as know he was just pulling her leg..as he offered her juice..which she took happily..

"Baba stop saying that..i can never yell on you ..you know that..you know i hate Miss.Vain Because she is so typical Tamed Lady of my dad.."

She had disgusting face while speaking up which was showing her hatred clearly for not only her father but also for her maid..

"Gunjan..that's not right.."

The old man tried to make his point but he get the least chance as she handled him an empty glass..

"OKay baba now please don't take her sides..It's already about to eight i will get late i should get ready fast.."

The old man smiles at her cute face as she licked like kids the tiny juice left over her lips...

"OKay your breakfast is on way Sweetheart..after getting ready don't forget to do that..otherwise.."

Gunjan turned to him after taking up the dresses n replied smiling..

"Yes if i didnt you will yell at me..n baba don't wory i wil not give you this chance.."

She kissed his cheek n moved away ...leaving an old man with tears in eyes..who hurriedly left the room before he fears she finds him shedding tears.
The old man to whom she was used of calling baba were one of oldest servant of her parents..after their divorce growing apart from her family..it was old man with whom she used to play, learn how to ride a bicycle..n along that she had grew up with his daughters who used to live at back side of their palace...she always looked at him seeking him as her guardian..

For old man, gunjan was just like his other children..he had saw her ignored by her parents n shattered at such young age..the harsh realities had just become her nature now..how much he had tired that she doesn't become what she certainly not deserve..but it seems.. fate had written in this way..as gown up she was much harsh n rude to everyone she dislikes or hates..there is no traditions,values or respect of any person anything ...not even herself...for her...

Wrapped in her pink towel she was humming the song along singer which was going over music player since she had woken up...after thinking a lot...choosing her dress in thousand dresses messed up all in her wardrobe..she was now taking out the matching accessories along it...

She was enjoying the song while blow drying her hairs n glancing at her beautiful face in mirror..she was blessed..more than anyone ...her white flawless creamy skin..her beautiful eyes...her beautiful medium length hairs...her perfect facial features had just added up an element ..to her perfect lifestyle...envying any princess of the world of any time..her attitudes compliments her beauty n classy look..

The fifteen minutes long knocking at her door ended when she clicked the button to allow person to open door...

She was done with her last touches..when she turned and saw the whole table filled up every dish which she could wish to eat in breakfast..From egg butter bread to pasta macaroni..along juices n shakes ...say healthy diet..fruits..whatever her heart wishes for..

She smiles widely as she sat down thinking what to chose..n she end up tasting a shake and grabbing an apple...she took her purse..and left the room..n the servants started cleaning up her room mess...it was every day's routine..princess leaving away the room..n the wardrobe mess room mess every single thing was made to its place before she was back..n it should be in correct place at right time..otherwise who would love to bury alive by a girl?

Instead of stepping down she slid herself on side of slippery railing of stairs which was there to support occasionally..but for her it was there to make her morning a bit glowing...

She eyed at breakfast table where his dad was still waiting up for her most probably reading newspaper..she put on her gogles..n moved away...like who cares..? even several calls would have made any person listen..but she proved to be real deaf to those calls..

The gates were opened hurriedly at her first voice of shoes.. she gets in her red Ferrari ..n ignited engine...forcing it to moved out of palace more Fastly than a second stand in clock could move ahead..

The Maximum Volume... a Rapping song piercing ear drums of everything around it...she was just enjoying her hairs waving in air...At traffic signal she hardly waited for it to be turn in green that her car's horns were piercing now ear drums in order to ask some bikes n bicycles to move away from her way...
She looked over her iPhone on dashboard whose screen had started glowed ..she accepted the in coming call while slowing down the music...

"What it is ?"

'Where are you Princess ?"

She without replying cut it off n again max up the volume..she was adjusting the mirror when she saw a small kid crossing over the road...the car honked horns but like the kid was deaf or was so engrossed in his puppy that she had to raced down...the speed but she feared she would make it stop before hitting the kid..so she turned the car a bit towards her left without seeing at back..n she end up hitting a bike...she sighed..she was angry on that bike who had hit her car..she slammed the door of car..as came out ..looked at kid who looked at her fearful while hugging puppy..Gunjan smiles a bit seeing the kid n puppy..before she could think more..she heard a guy's mumbling..or more than cursing..she was sure he is saying something about her...

As she approached to him..she saw him ranting about his bike..n his near death experience..she looked at her car..which was almost safe..she looked at guy who was expecting an apology...she ignored his gaze at her..as she looked over in her car n found a bunch of currency..without even caring how much it is n of which country..she gave in his hand...

"Do you have an Identity card written your name " idiot" there?"

"what ? ..."

"Next time do remember to take it along you..because next time i will not miss hitting you n then i would need your address to send money to your family..Be careful next time...for your family..."

She gets in car n in less than a minute she was back on track...

Her cell was continuously ringing n she keep on ignoring till her car entered in excel college...

Suddenly along the entrance of her car there had started a noise..or it was someone name calling up..sounded like..Princess Coming ..Get aside..

As she stopped car in front of college entrance...she gets down taking along her purse..she threw her key cars at her back while entering in college...
She hardly look over the crowd who was passing by her or was following her..till she reached the locker room..n met three girls there..in cheer-leading outfits...n three started speaking as saw her..

"where were you gunjan?" Match is going to start.."

"Cut this crap girls..n tell those stupid guys i wil be in court in just five minutes..."

She ignoring them placed her belongings in her locker room ..taking her sports outfit..she get in adjoining rooms to change...

The whole college was gathered outside basket ball court..they were cheering up for two guys standing there exchanging glances...the crowed was chanting.."Mayank..Arman.."

Till all eyes fixed upon as..they looked at entrance..where three girl cheering up in their own way was welcoming the diva..as they moved away..everyone was able to see a feminine beauty in a sleeveless greyish top which hardly was over her waist..along white trousers...with her high pony tail n blue band on forehead...catching everyone's attention..she loved the attention she gets every time she is in college or anywhere else...She glares the two guys who were grinning at her entry..

It took seconds that she was facing those two hunks...n crowd was chanting their names..

"Princess still you have time to back off.."

"Never Mr.Mayank Sharma ...You should have listen to this remember last time what happened with you ?"

As she smirks , arman mayank exchanged looks as they remind last year they had lost fight against her n she made them roam with her handling the never ending shopping bags in every single mall to her standard of whole city...and not this literally they were begging at end of week to release them from her slavery...

Mayank and Arman had swore that they will win this time...

Soon game was started...it was going fine..two by one...when it was almost near ending...gunjan was approaching towards..goal..she was much confident..as she looked at two hunks ready to jump over her...as she jumped in air to aim ball to basket.she felt his arm around her waist..n literally she gave up ball gripping her nails in his arm around her waist...Arman screamed on top of his voice...as left her..n both fall in ground n she was on top of him..hitting him continuously...

"How dare you amy i will kill you..."

"Gunjan Gunjan please spare me i am soory...please...Mayank Helppp na..."

Arman had gripped around her arms to stop her from hitting him but her legs n joggers were continuosuly making him scream in pain..and mayank who was chanting they won..was now clueless what to do...

At last as Three girls approach them..one of them hit mayank n glare him..while others one tried to move away furious tigress and save little chipmunk..

"Arman this is your first and last warning if you ever tried to cheat over me I will kill you n I mean it.."

Gunjan glared him who was now trying to figure out which part of his body is aching more..

"I am soory gunjan..i swear it was mayank's idea.."

Arman made the worst soory face..n tried to calm down her..

Gunjan shot a glare to mayank who just smirks..he knew whatever happens she can't be upset n more he was ready to take revenge from her of last year..

"Sweetie forget it..we won now u have to agree on everything we will say.."

Mayank looked over her who pulled away her band from hairs n let her hairs fall ...for a moment every guy skipped heart beat seeing her waving her hairs at her back...

"Oh really Mr.Sharma? You are still sure after cheating one me ?"

Gunjan looked at him while taking a step closer to him...


"Gunjan Malothra doesn't back off right ? Scared princess ?"

Mayank tried his last shot..n he knew he will get there..challange is what she just can't resist..to prove herself...

"IN your dreams..tell me what i have to do.."

Gunjan said while moving towards corner taking bottel of water..while the whole gang followed her..n Nupur backed up Gunjan..while gunjan just shaked her head listening her..

"Like there is something which gunjan can't do ..Say it Mayank Arman ? what is your big picture ?"

"Well..Gunjan...Your remember newibie coming today..Just make sure he feels comfortable here and...{Mute}...Thats it.."

Everyone listened to Mayank as he spoke up n and as he ended gunjan who was drinking water threw out ...n everyone replied in union..

"WHAT?"

"Yeah"

Mayank grinned looking at gunjan who was glaring her n it seems she wish to burn him from fire of her gaze..

"Mayank you are gone case.."

Benji Commented..while mayank was just interested in listening gunjan's reply as he called out her..

"Gunjan?"

"OKay Fine..But I will do it in my way..n let you guys know if anyone of you tried to screw it i swear i wil bury you Mayank first after shooting you guys in head.."

Gunjan got up looked at everyone..n mayank arman exchanged glances n smiles widely...while others were truly scared to death about her warning..

Gunjan smirked as she knew what she have to do...
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Scroll down please for Part 2:)
Edited by MSluvsSI - 11 years ago
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Chapter One
The Unexpected Clash

Part B
A Prince born with silver spoon!!

As soon as the alarm rings...his hand put off it to silent..n pulling the comforter.. he again slept taking turn on other side hiding face so sunshine couldn't irritate him...but soon he felt the comforter pulling away despite of his effort..n making up worst face...which certainly had add up the adorable look in his cute face.. he turned n opened eyes with difficulty...

"Dad.."

The Man in his early fifties in his track suit was reasonably good looking , handsome n fit contrary to his age...smiles at him ...
"Get up Son ..Today is our Race..i Told you last night to sleep early.."

The son was certainly a carbon copy of young era of his dad..He felt himself so sleepy to reply him even hardly..

"Fine Dad.. I am coming downstairs in ten minutes..let me sleep for more five minutes.."

Before he could sleep again turning..he received a smack on his back..which made him groaned in pain..

"No..Get up at once..Your mom will exactly call us in an hour..n i don't want to postpone today's race.."

He turned n glared at his dad...as he made up mind to get up knew his dad's stubborn nature ...

"Ahh...Great.. Dad today i am gona make you lose for sure.."

"We will see my son.."

His Dad smirks where his son gave him a serious look..

After sometime, we could see them running on a jogging track in a park...Sharing jokes n laughs..they were covering up distances between each other..vice versa...it was son ahead of his dad..singing his victory..n running in back mode..while grinning at his dad..who had slowed down..to keep up pace with his breathes...Samrat sighed as he slowed down himself to stop..n joining his dad to a nearby beach..who was now drinking water...

"I told you dad..Now that's final...this weekend we are going to doctor for your medical check up.."


"Samrat i m fine..just ..."'

Samrat looked at his dad worriedly as saw him trying to steady his breaths.

"What just dad? You always finishes of track along me n now you are not even able to do it more than half.."

"You will know it when you will grow up older."

His dad smiles at him as they gazed over some kids playing BB in ground.

"huh? older n me ? dad even i am going to get older still i n you are going to have race in morning..'

Samrat looked at his dad lovingly..he Would never lose him at any cost...

"I can't promise that but i certainly can wish your son beats you then.."

His dad patted his cheeks..his son had certainly made him to believe on being blessed..

"Dad stop this okay..Me n you forever.. I don't want to lose my best competitor.."

Samrat hugged his dad like a kid wrapping himself in his father's arm to be away from every harm..

A loving dad , you could never afford to lose...

"Shut up Sam.. Let's go home your mum must had made delicious breakfast.."

Little realities scares you..

Samrat glares a bit as received a smack on his shoulder in return from his dad..n they got up to leave.

"Oh God!! Dad you should stop such oil n frying things.."

Samrat genuinely stated ..his dad had cholesterol problem..along diabetes..but his dad hardly ever cared about it...used medicines occasionally but now regularly because of samrat's attention..

"Shut up Son!! That's why i didn't allow you to go in medical ..you would have made it terrible for me.. "

As they were ending up ground , samrat 's back got hit up lightly with ball.. he turned n looked at kids who were sorry..he smiles as he threw the ball in basket from there...n both son n dad smirked..

"I can stop you still dad.."


"You can never beat me son in this..it wil be always you who would have to listen.."

"I am goona listen you dad of course..you shouldn't worry about this.."

They entered in their home ...samrat smiled at his mother who had almost done with breakfast arrangements..n after wishing her good morning getting fresh ,family joined each other for breakfast ...

"Sam we will leave today after you wil leave for your college.."

"What?But dad u guys promised..."

His mom patted his cheeks lovingly to make him feel better as knowing they had promise to stay with him in mumbair for a week at least...she made him eat breakfast..

"Sam you can visit us on weekends na...dont be worried my son ..your dad has an official meeting.."

"Dad.."

"Sry Sam we have to go.."

Ridhima ,seventeen years old, who was seated next to samrat held his arm n stated like a kid..samrat smiles at his younger sister to whom he had always look after like his own baby..

"Bhai I don't want to go without you.."

Samrat embraced her in a side hug n kissed her forehead..

"Aww My Princess Don't Wory i will come n visit you and i promise i will get the most expensive gifts for you.."

Ridhima smiles widely listening him..

"I know You are the best brother in world..You know I will call you every night n make u remind of drinking milk before going to bed.."

Samrat smiles half heartedly as he realized from now own he wil have to be away from his suh loving n caring family..

"I will love your call but will hate your reminder ridhi.."

His mother looked at his son...who were feeling it hard to leave him alone ...there...

"Sam..you promised me that you will take care of yourself.."

"I wil maa..."

"Of course he have to otherwise he knows me.."

His dad looked at him and samrat smiles ..as knowing whatever he is doing a lil separation will be worth of paying..for what he wil get later.

"I know you Sir..Now can i hurry up My dear family i have to leave for college soon.."

Four smiles..as samrat did his breakfast n get ready for his college's first day..

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Scroll down for Part C :)
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Chapter One
The Unexpected Clash

Part C
Meeting with a Beautiful Psycho!

Reaching up in college on a red heavy bike which seemed more like racing one..wearing black hamlet dressed in his blue jeans,white shirt and black jacket.. Guy got off from his bike as he parked it..n removed away the hamlet .the only thing which was common on guys and girls face..was 'WOW' and 'Cool' look...the impression was certainly good...as he moved towards the entrance...he smiles to himself as heard compliments about himself..he was used of it now...

He was bit late..n he wanted to meet princi before attending his regular class...

He was rushing towards Princi office when on way he saw a girl in sports outfit coming from corridors which lead four stairs connecting corridor to hall way...He had moved further ignoring her completely to walk towards princi office..but before he could...he heard some noise n voice for help..as he turned he saw the girl slipping..n before she could fall on ground..she felt herself in a two muscular arms..his heartbeat skipped for a moment..as she looked above..he was taken back totally as he saw her big eyes gazing at him..only word he had heard saying to himself..was Wow...she was extremely beautiful..he confessed to himself as he gazed over her face..it wasn't so much make up that he could ignore the attraction..she was beautiful ..he get back on earth as heard his cell phone's message beep..He ignoring her gaze made her to stand on his feet..while moving away his arms from waist he saw her pulling away her arms from his neck..it was hard to ignore her as she was standing close to him..he thought as he looked back to take out his cell phone n checking his message..he replied what he needed to do..n looked above wishing her to be gone...but she was there standing..he was not getting reason of her gazing...He ignored n was about to move away..but his feet remain on earth when heard her voice..

"Thank You.."

He smiles as heard n nodded accepting her thank you...but again as he took some steps..he heard her groaning in pain..he turned n saw her hand reaching upto her feet...he saw her feeling difficulty in standing up..n before she could lose balance again he moved to her supporting her..as put her arm on his shoulder n bent down a little to try to see her difficulty..

"Are you fine?Is it paining bad ?"

"i am fine..its..just i think i hurt my ankle.."

He looked above at her..as heard her slow whisper...

"Can u walk ?"

He felt concerned to her.. she nodded in no..

"Can u just help me till locker room Please?"

He nodded in yes as saw her genuinely in pain..as he put arm around her waist while her arm around his shoulder..he made her to walk ..asking her way..he was leading to her desire place..he could see her gaze..he mentally tried to ignore her gazing...hitting himself to get agree on helping her...while for him now it seems like a trap instead of genuine injury...


"Ouch.."

He was in his thoughts when he heard her n quickly looked at her with concern n saw her feet hit to a near by bench..he was quite surprised how it happen as they were at reasonable distance from the bench..

"Hey..Is it fine?"

"No..it is paining so much now..i can hardly walk on my feet now...i just can't take one more step..."

She stated in almost crying voice..

"Hey relax..its fine..let me see your feet may be..."

"No its okay if you can't help me ..."

"What?i am offering you help miss?"

"I asked you to walk me upto my locker room..there are my friends waiting up for me.."

"You just said you can't walk one more step.."

Now that girl was getting on his nerves..he had already wasted much time in helping her n she just made him clueless once agin..

"So ? aren't you a guy ? Can't you offer lifting me up ?"

"Huh?"

Samrat was shocked at her attitude n boldness..He sighed..as listened to her crap

"Oh Leave it..guys like you never help girl..."

He ignoring everything lifted up in arms..he wanted to be free from this non-demanded trouble..he asked her avoiding her completely..

"Where it is ?"

"What? my home ..."

He was just surprised listening her..he was helping the girl who seemed total gone case to him..

"I am asking about your locker room miss.starey.."

"It is on right from here Mr.Attitude.."

Her voice was letting him know how much she is enjoying this situation..it totally made him to pissed of at situation..

"Whatever.."

As he walked few steps he heard voice n he could recognise this as he had heard him on phone..he left her..n next moment she was on earth..n in shock even not she was able to speak..

"Samrat Shergill..."

Samrat quickly composed himself without taking her fall in account..turned n moved to principal offering him hand to greet..

"Yes..Yes Sir.. I was just coming up to your cabin but just get...well that's not important..Hopefully Dad had talked to you in morning.."

"Yeah come in my cabin i wil explain it there..."

Princi greet him happily as they both walks towards cabin..while samrat turned around n could saw the girl's gaze while some girls were around her..

He didn't get ..what was in her gaze..? shock ? surprise ? anger ? what?

Should he be sorry for doing that ? but her act was much fake to him now after she had asking him to lift up..he was not totally assured of considering the whole situation as accident.

He threw away his thoughts as princi made him acknowledge about his classes n schedules..
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Scroll down for Part D :)
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Chapter One
The Unexpected Clash

Part D
Handsome Fresher Makes an Entry in Her kingdom!!


I will kill Mayank arman.. what a stupid dare they gave to me..n that too not up to point..ugh i will make their life hell then for sure they will think before making my life complicated..i love to play pranks..but i was just not in mood to play at that moment...she thought while walking up towards excel entrance...

her heartbeat skipped as she saw him..he was dashing..it would be fun now to play...she thought...

He didn't stop after seeing her..what ? it was kinda insult for her..where she checked up her reflection on nearer glass n no doubt she was looking way sexy...

She was still staring at his back ..hoping he would see her again..but contrary to it..she herself forget about the upcoming stairs..n she misplaced her feet..it remain in air..n unintentionally she called out for help...she was sure she will hit bad...and in fear she had closed eyes...but few seconds she didn't feel herself hit..she opened eyes..n was left amazed..his eyes made her forget the whole world...he had perfect facial features..if it is allow to stare at him ..she would have consider it more than to do anything in rest of life...she wished that his arms held her like this forever..but bad luck his cell phone's beep..she cursed n make a sad face..as felt his arms moving away..she was back on earth..it felt like something missing..as she stares at him while he was replying the text...she smiles to herself while gazing at him..as he looked at her..she felt her heart beat loud...she wanted to say..something..n as saw his confuse look n moving away...she said quickly to make an effort to stop him.."Thank You."..

His Smile was so dreamy..that she grab the staircase railing to help her from not fainting..she made bad face at his back as he had moved ahead..she hated his attitude...she tried to ignore him..and tried to move..but left groaning in pain...she was feeling difficult to put her feet on ground...she felt herself losing balance before she could think anything to grab..she felt once again his touch..she looked above n find his arm around her waist..while he was trying to put her arm around his neck..to support..he is so cute..she thought..but pain in her ankle just made her realize that there is something more deserving one to get her attention in this situation

"Are you fine?Is it paining bad ?"

His voice made her heart beat twice...she tried to overcome her drooling over handsome guy which was adorably trying to help her out...

"i am fine..its..just i think i hurt my ankle.."

Her voice seem not to help her as she just was able to whisper which had made him look at her..she gasped at their closeness..but he really seems handling situation more casually than her..this thought make her a bit sad..sensing he is not feeling the same way..

"Can u walk ?"


He was just concerned ...she thought disappointedly ..

"Can u just help me till locker room Please?"

She had covered her depression by pain...and she hesitatingly ignoring her heart anomalies started walking with his help..it was so hard for her not to gaze at him..it was just five minutes but it was hard to ignore him..he was not only handsome...but cute and adorable element made her more drool over him...In looking at him..she totally forgets about her ankle which made her realize when she hit it once again by bench..

"Ouch.."

This time the injury was sudden n more painful..she was feeling like she will die sooner because of this pain...or it seems to her...

"Hey..Is it fine?"

She felt like banging his head on asking that question at that time.

"No..it is paining so much now..i can hardly walk on my feet now...i just can't take one more step..."

The pain had made her almost cry..

"Hey relax..its fine..let me see your feet may be..."

She was so pissed off at his utterly good guy image..that she thought to pushed him away..

"No its okay if you can't help me ..."

"What?i am offering you help miss?"

Oh now he can taunt at me too..just good to call up my temper...She thought..she was now least interested in anything..

"I asked you to walk me up to my locker room..there are my friends waiting up for me.."

"You just said you can't walk one more step.."

Does he miss anything out ? she thought cursing the moment she asked help from Mr.Hey...

"So ? aren't you a guy ? Can't you offer lifting me up ?"

"Huh?"

So he is now pretend to be shock ? like he never lifted a girl..huh..these guys all are same..passing time was adding up fuel in fire in her head..

"Oh Leave it..guys like you never help girl..."

She had plan to continue her ranting but just to her surprise he lifted her in arms..it was heavenly feeling she felt at that time..she would die in those arms..she thought..

"Where it is ?"

his voice seem to come from long distance as thoughts had clouded her mind so much.she was clueless about her reply..

"What? my home ..."

She would have continued if she hadn't see his shocked face...which later turned to his annoyed one..

"I am asking about your locker room miss.Starey.."

Oh Crap!! Now he can look hot even while being so annoyed...But certainly the situation was amusing for her rather than embarrassment...embarrassing gunjan takes a huge deal...as any other guy would have took her to his home without even asking..she thought..but he is just too good to be bad..she had a smirk which certainly had made him annoyed more..

"It is on right from here Mr.Attitude.."

"Whatever.."

It was the best moments of her life...staring at him..feeling of being in his arms..n annoyed face...she could make him annoy..irritate him..isn't that more cool ? rather than being approached back like usual ? ...n just when she was lost totally in him...she felt herself smacked on floor mercilessly..thank god her back was not hurting like her ankle did..she looked above at him..who walked past to her..she was still staring at him without any expression or thought..

"Gunjan what happened? are you fine ?"

She could hear her friends who had came there after some seconds...but she hardly heard them..as he was still under her gaze...

Did he intentionally throw her ? did her presence was not up to mark ? Not for once she effected on him? or attracted him?

Now what he is trying to watch over to know her feelings ? Dam this Guy..I hate him...
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Press Like button n drop a comment !! Thank you !! If the update is too long then i am sorry i tried to make it reasonable but i think i just stretched it a bit :O Waiting eagerly for reading response !! Be free to pointing out any loopholes kindly !! Replied everyone in previous pages anyone wish to read reply !! Thank you for wonderful response.. !! Sorry No preview !! would do it for sure next time !! just feeling so lazy to paste here :P
love
Marie
Edited by MSluvsSI - 11 years ago
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#65
res


edited

Emotions well described
situations description AWESOME
Characterization fabulous

part one loved the title 👏👏👏

Gunjan's entry ek dum princess type. and you described it so so well. from her Dream to she left home. her relationship with her baba is very nice. ohho bad past opss poor girl I can understand her feelings.

Rude side of Gunjan well it was like bade baap ki bigdi huyi ladki 🤣 but its much needed for her character bossy side is more good on her princess character. soft side was too another personality of princess Gunjan. then she crashed with someone Ohho.

I liked that past too.. awesomely described.

treated by friends too good.. and her anger was cherry on top 🤣

then masti will her friends another part of her life and BET or Dare for Diva was too good..


Entry of prince was not less .Loved the bond of father and son I so much wanted to see this bond in MJHT but alas my wish was never fulfilled but finally you did it 👏👏👏

race talk was superb 😃😃 then his bond with his younger sister superb

ohhh they are leaving him tsk tsk.. hope to see family scene every soon..


then in college Entry. Samrat's POV.

Entry was like a royal King. 😉 and soon then clashed aahan 😆😆

ohhh dard ka rishta bada hi pyaara hai kitna pagal ye dil humara hai 🤣 🤣

Opss mr advance was already lost in her beautiful facewa 🤣 dekh beta dekh fir iss thobde ko zindgi bhar samne rakhna hai 🤣

Help aahan.. psycho seek help hard to believe bt attitude helped say what 😆

their talk was mast mast ... 😆😆

Gunjan POV

well u describe POV from both side i loved it so we can understand situations feelings and emotions from both sides

awesomely described her POV

her cursing session then lost in Handsome face then Jealousy and EGO Hurt then actual hurt seeking help mr attitude helped. enjoyed ride in his arms... and felt strange feelings 😆😆😆

then thinking of her that he is too good to be bad. 😆😆😆 not my type and all

Awesome awesome awesome

i want regular updates no delay please becuase EID is gone 😆😆

dont even try to discontinue it and more over dont forward story with tortoise speed 🤣

till now its perfect as you promised well presented well choice of words . well written in english
good with emotions different story different starting everything

hope for same thing in future and want next part as soon as possible.
and as promised long comment 😆😉😆


With love
Bholi_Punjaban



Edited by MSmyworldMS - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Ok m just cheking d FF.. .let me Res for d 1st chapters now... just commenting over into...

I just loved d tittle That's How I Fall for You...
A Journey from lust to love...

So Gunjan is different from d gunjan from our show... and Samrat's is some what same.. it will be interesting then..
Gunjan d spoiled t brat n Samrat focused.. there will deffo be 'crashes' when d meet...
So this story will proceed in past n present right.. ok m already curious to know at the past dat will change d pov of Gunjan n Sajan's life...

Talking abt d other characters... i liked dem all n specially Armaan n Riddhima is dis ff :D

This ff is going to be interesting n different.. i liked d way u have written d intro of d ff.. n i loved it.. keep writing wid dis style...

At last talking abt Siggys all the three ones are wonderful siggys... loved dem..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: charmee_sammy

Ok m just cheking d FF.. .let me Res for d 1st chapters now... just commenting over into...

Would wait for your comment <3
I just loved d tittle That's How I Fall for You...
A Journey from lust to love...
Thank You :)
So Gunjan is different from d gunjan from our show... and Samrat's is some what same.. it will be interesting then.. Hope so :)
Gunjan d spoiled t brat n Samrat focused.. there will deffo be 'crashes' when d meet...
So this story will proceed in past n present right.. ok m already curious to know at the past dat will change d pov of Gunjan n Sajan's life...
There is a past but not is going to be part of story soon.. currently only SaJan college life is under limelight :) so be free from it's curiousity..
Talking abt d other characters... i liked dem all n specially Armaan n Riddhima is dis ff :DThey are going to prove as cupid at some point of story :P

This ff is going to be interesting n different.. i liked d way u have written d intro of d ff.. n i loved it.. keep writing wid dis style...
Thanks.. would try my best :)
At last talking abt Siggys all the three ones are wonderful siggys... loved dem..Thank you so much.. Really Glad to see you comment di <3 Thank You !!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was a great update! Scenes were amazingly written! Superb..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update marie, really parents play a very significant role in in the life of an individual
the way you potrayed sajan's feeling was really nice, and their first meeting was quite cute😳
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edited my comment on page 9

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