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This FF truly deserves being your most mysterious one 😆 with so much to look forward to.
Ah loved this chapter a lot<3 To the core. It had so much in store for us to love and be amazed about. Uff Sweetheart you just made me witness a pure Sajnish update.
The words from Gunjan's goodbye letter were ringing in my ears when I started reading this chapter. Curiosity rising in me and as I read on my anxiety increased and it is still coz I don't trust you with this FF 😆😈
I am hooked onto it and I want the next chapter asap but no wait not so soon let me first sink in to the fact that you actually decided to end it 😲 😭 I just can't believe it. I had so much in reading each chapter..each line...each sentence...feeling each emotion each feeling that I can't believe it came such a long long way. I remember you starting it with curiously and excitedly as to how it will go but I am so proud to tell you that it just went so smoothly and the journey was simply amazing. You were not sure how it will turn out be but I am very pleased to announce that not only the plot..the characters or the emotions related to them grew and intensified but you as a writer grew as well which is just commendable. Hats off!! 👏👏
WE as readers experienced Sajan as 2 new characters...new individuals who are stubborn and arrogant. They started off as strangers but even in the first meeting there was something in them that just had sparks...it was surely your characterization. They were never bound to happen if they had hold onto to their ego's and have not given love..themselves a chance to explore their true selves especially Gunjan who has gone deep into the world of darkness.
Even though she resisted but finally gave in. "Love surely makes you vulnerable. They fought together but never lost the courage and faith in their love. Even after letting go of each other they actually didn't because it is simply impossible.
Samrat and Gunjan are incomplete as individuals and have their own short comings but together they are compete..perfect and form a complete whole. Like you said pieces of a "jigsaw puzzle". Now I just hope that you make it a "happy ever after" for them and for us as well. After suffering so much they do deserve each other and a chance...a fair chance to prove that they truly deserve each other...always did.
Coming to this chapter...I simply loved it. It had so much to talk about it...
Starting off from Gunjan returning back...she was helpless and emptied from love. You portrayed her emotions beautifully.👏👏 They loved each other unconditionally and this is what they both did in this chapter and in the entire journey as well.
But the best part here was that at least Gunjan found a friend in Lily I also loved how you penned down her feelings...she wanted her to be valued enough at least as a person and their daughter. But the firing thing completely got me off guard. OMG!! 😲 Just look at your guts tauba dara hi diya tha but I still had trust in you 😉 after all its Sajan that you are writing about.
I was glad knowing that Sajan were finally together by the way the will wala fiasco was just bang on!!
But chalo yahan aika ur twist now Samrat left her. Ma'am would you ever let the soulmates me in peace? Unke pyaar ki dushman😆 And Gunjan's expecting Woho!! 🥳now I do expect a reunion wala chapter bas. 😛
But I loved how you showed the flashback and that was it. True love cannot let you hide. I loved how he handled her in the restroom as well as in their won room. His possessiveness...his care...his love...his attention was all hers. I loved each and every thing about that might that they shared be it their physical display of love or their gestures.
Steak with roasted potato yum!! 😆 How she could have missed that too with him...her life. They shared all their emotions in one night.
I found this chapter a recap of all that happened till now and I simply loved it. You were brilliant while handling each and every part of it.
Separation...pain..emptiness...helplessness..desire to go back...resistance...and making it out finally...All Emotions just well described!!
I think I can't even describe your brilliance in this entire journey of Sajan. We experienced Sajan like never before and all credit goes to you for making us introduce to Sajan of this type and then making us love them to no end. Is indeed an achievement .
Now coming to few of the dialogues and moments that literally touched my heart<3
Ah so much pain in this dialogue. Bang on Gunjan!!
but i know you are a wise business dealer.. you believe in safe investment.. I'm your investment.. i know my worth dad.."
Surely it will be<3 Mere Sajan 😳
"I love you .. will this reason be enough?"
Well observed and very well defined!!
Gunjan rested her head..at the back of bed.. as tears rolled over her face.. he had given her a new life ...a life without any fear... still empty...now void of happiness and pain both...because he wasn't there...her heart was no longer beating.. without him..nothing had ever work in her life..neither her fate nor her heart ..
It just made me awww<3 No words. Just wow
Gunjan looked at samrat..feeling lost .she felt she got abandoned.. Something valuable for snatched before it was about to feel real..
He realized what he was doing..he realized..he had again gave in..himself..surrendered.. In front of same girl..for whom he had fall for..n it was almost impossible to fall out of love from her..
They are soulmates in the true sense of it!! Every word assures me of it.
He arrogantly replied at her question..at that time he felt her most stupid ever she could have been..she was making him helpless in every way..the thought of keeping himself away from her was the alone thought who made him think what if he doesn't ?.. Hope.. He wasn't ready to let go..after her..
I want a goodbye. Ah but there can never be one... Loved everything about this one<3
"like first time you had made me slap you...(she closed eyes for a moment..as he continued..).like first time..u forgave me in rain..(he read her instability..as his thumb..creased her lips)...like first time u confessed on pool party...(his hand crawled down n rested against her neck curve..while fingers runs in her hair at back..).like first time u dated me...(he lifted her chin with thumb..to make her open her eyes n look at him..) Like first time ..I had made u married..(his hand slid down..n held her from waist..as she got pulled close .). Say me goodbye..like any other moment where you made me believe that I fell for a girl who was crazy about me...(she watched him gazing at her..while her arms...from his waist..slide upside..as creased his chest..) A goodbye that could make me believe that it wasn't I dreamed..or just an illusion..but a reality...(he leaned more closer..as let their forehead inclined..in helplessness..).that she fell for me too like I had fell for her...(her hands rested against his neck..creasing his jaws..)...I want my goodbye gunjan..a goodbye that make me sure that it is over. So I dont have to fight with myself everyday..(she felt his cheeks moist..which made her teary..and she embraced him..as lifted herself on her toes..placing his head on her shoulder..creasing his hairs..as held him to comfort him..she closed eyes as felt his arms embracing her completely..). "
Your love is what I always carved for...❤️
"Coz last time I had wear this dress.. You had made me feel what it's like to be loved by you.."
Awww this was the most sweetest thing to do<3 It just made me awestruck!! 😳
Her heart sank..as time came more closer to leave the hotel room..she was unable to stop staring at his bed side..she kept creasing it. N hugging his pillow like might be she could preserve his feeling ...before going back to the place where there was no presence of him except in her illusion..she found a cufflink on floor. As she looked at them..she recognized them to be his..with a small smile she kept it in her palm..n with a deep breath exited the room to return to the hell..
Sooo true.
She held his arm..looking at him to let him know it is okay to be vulnerable to your loved ones..
Awww...the hurt being so evident<3
No ..Gunjan..Not this time..I can't give you this chance.. I don't want you to hurt me more..or i don't want you to hurt yourself... You were..right.. This was our destiny.. You were.. Are and will always be my soulmate..my wife..even if I don't let myself to be with you..even when I don't deserve you...
He let himself breath in smoke of cigarette in his hand..which he lighted as soon as she had left...He was done ...done being vulnerable..towards his wife..their love..n relationship..
I just loved Armaan for this<3 Finally he made her realize that she had to avail this chance this time!! Indeed their love has come a long way it was no less than a fairy tale in fact in many regards way better<3
She looked back at his journey with samrat..realised ..there was always something more than that between them.. they had a habit to stay with each other even when it was unreasonable of other person..they was used of forgiving n moving on after their every fight..never bringing it on back..they had shared the ugly truths of their lives with each other..they have been honest to each other more than they have been with themselves...it was just a friendship or a marriage between them..they were more like two jigsaw puzzle ..meaningless alone..but as put them together..everything used to become more meaningful..
😆 Amazed at the intensity of their love<3 Hayyeee
The air hostess who was already disappointed on hearing her calling the handsome guy husband.. speechless at their kiss..left from there..burning in jealousy..
Phew finally done. Let me tell you this was by far your best chapter..seriously!! I don't think I was able to justify and praise it well but I still hope I made you smile. 😳
Love you a lot<3
Stay blessed.
Ye Hai Mohabbatein
Mangal Lakshmi
