Love... A januable feeling!! Sajan mjht ff

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Hi friends, i'm lakshmi. Some people knows me here. And some people don't know my real name as they think my id is my real name. And my friends will be suprised to see me here and thinking that what am i doing here? So, friends it will be a shock to u all, that i'm here to write a story on sajan. I know i'm not a writer, but inspired from all ur writings i also decided to post the story which, i have in my mind from long time. So, here it is...

INDEX
Charector sketch - pg 1
part 1 page 4
part 2 page 7
part 3 page 9 & 10
part 4 page 12
part 5 page 15
part 6 page 17
part 7 page 23
part 8 page 27
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LOVE... What is love? Every one have their own opinion and different answers about it as per their views. For me, love is a feeling which will be in every relation. It needs trust to maintain it. Trust on what? Trust there is someone for me who will be there for me in thick or thin. Trust that there is someone, who will stop me when i'm doing some thing wrong or something which hurts me. Trust that there is some one for me, though the whole world is against me. Trust that there is someone who supports me, in all means. Trust that there is someone to keep me happy all the life, with their love. Trust that they won't leave us in any circumstances. Trust that there is some one with me, till mine or their last breath. Trust is very important for every relation ship. If we won't trust someone, its clear that we can't love that person. I feel that there is love in all our relations by some or other ways. For example, parents, siblings, cousins, friends etc. And about bf-gf love. I feel that it is a kind of affection developed by great understanding and 'trust'. And there is no place for lies in love. Because, we lie, only then when we feel that other person won't understand us or trust us or when we won't trust them to share our real feelings. So, its proved that if we need to lie to maintain the relation, it means there is no love between them! Its better to end that relation because neither of them will be truely happy by lieing. And there only one chance to keep that relation alive is to start understanding and 'trust' each other.

By this ff, i'm trying to express my views on love. I promise that i really try hard to put my imagination in words. Its a little difficult for me as it is my first attempt. And one more thing samrat's charector in this ff is adopted from the telugu movie 'orange'. But, the story is very different from it. It'll be 'little' similar in initial as the main lead is adopted from it. It is a simple love story with a twist. It is based on trust and the fact that if, we lie to someone, its sure that we don't truely love that person.

Thank you so much for spending ur valuable time read my bak-bak. I'm really sorry for wasting ur time by boring u. Please share ur views on it. Please, give true opinion. Please point out my mistakes as it will help me for improving my self. Criticism is highly welcomed. And yeah, please suggest me the title for this ff, if possible. Will post cs very soon.

Thank you.
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Hi guys, i'm sorry for the delay. Actually, i'm in a trip, thats why haven't got time to post the cs. Thanks a lot for pressing the like tab. Here is the cs...
Gunjan :-


She is 21yrs old. She is in her college, studying final year of her graduation in fashion designing. Lives in mumbai with her family. She is a very sweet girl, who cares for everyone. She is little shy and introvert and needs little time to open up with others. Very innocent. But not a dumb! She is very sensitive. She is a metured and well mannered girl. Never thought anything bad for others. Anyone can easily fall in love with her. She loves her di n bauji a lot. And her jiju is her bestest friend. And her second best friend is niel. She is a girl with golden heart. For her, her family means everything. And love means 'trust' for her. And she thinks that when 'true love' happens it won't die till our last breath.
Samrat:-
He is 24yrs old. Lives in london with his mother. His parents r divorced when he is 10yrs old. Loves his parents a lot. Cool dude, basket ball champ, smart, intellectual, very friendly with everyone. Very handsome. Fun loving, respects elders and never meant to hurt anyone. He is very honest. He is taking care of his mom's company. He wants to rise company and want to be independent. He is coming to mumbai coz he wants his company to start at india. He hates lies!! And his opinion love... For him, love is a bonding which binds people in a relationship which very 'pure'. And he thinks being honest to others is very essential for a relationship. He respects love a lot and feels that lieing to ur lover is a big sin. He have so many ex-girl friends. But, he haven't misbehaved with any one! And he never tried to cover up his defects to impress girls. He has smoking n drinking habit, but he don't do them daily!! He has a helping nature. He wants the girl to love him the way he is. And his views about love is little different! He doesn't believe in marraige. And there is a reason behind it. (confused that even though having good opinion at love, why doesn't he wants to get married. Well, don't get confused u'll able to know about it, when i'll reveal the important view of samrat about love, which i'm hiding now. I want to keep this as a suspence for sometime). HIS CURRENT GIRL FRIEND IS RIA.
RIA:-
perneet chauhan
She is a sweet, fun loving, bubbly n modren girl. Loves samrat a lot. For her, love is a bonding which makes happy with the one we are. But, she knows that sam can't becomes hers!!! Still, she hope n prays god that one day sam becomes hers for ever. Will god fulfills her wish? Have to wait to know it.
Niel:-


Niel is gunjan's family friend. He loves her from childhood. He can do anything for gunjan's happiness. He know that gunjan won't love him. And he don't have any complaints also. He know that gunjan can't be his! And he don't wish for that also. He only wishes for gunjan's happiness. He is a film writer and partner of gunjan's dad in his company. For him, love is a feeling which gives us happiness. And it doesn't matters that is our love with us or not. What matters is the happiness of our love. And the sweet memories of gunjan is enough for him to live the whole life with a smile on his face. He feels that when love happens, it won't die till our last heart beat. (he didn't said anything about his feelings to gunjan).

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Mayank sharma:-

He is a business man. Loving husband. Responsible, sensible, smart, intelligent. Loves his wife a lot. Can do anything for her. He loves his saali too. He feels her more than his own sister. And is extra protect towards her. He won't spare the one who hurts her.
Mrs. Nupur mayank sharma:-
She is gunjan's elder sis. Loves her a lot. She is like a mother for her. And she is darling wife of mayank. She loves him a lot. She is very bubbly n talkative. Just like in mjht.

Dia:-

She is the diva of the college. She is gunjan n nupur's cousin. Likes her cousins a lot and feels them as her own sisters. She is dating rv. And she don't know what is true love. She feels that when she fells in love, then she'll automatically came to know about love. She is serious in relation ship with rv.
RV:-

He is also studying in the same college of dia n gunjan. He is dating dia now. He has so many ex-girl friends. He is also dating another girl. For him, love is just a time pass. And having a girlfriend like dia, the college diva, is prestigious for him. As, she is the most popular girl in college.
Uday:-
He is just the same as in mjht. Dia's younger bro n gunur's cousin. Love his sisters a lot.
Benji:-

He is samrat's best friend. For him, love is a lifetime relation which gives us support in whole life. He is currently single. And he is also coming to mumbai with sam as he works with him.
Adhiraj:-

He is also samrat's best friend. He is a nice guy. He is engaged to suhaani. She is his love, life, everything. Thats why he is insecure about her that she'll leave him when she knows about his bad habits. So, he always keep saying lies to her to keep her happy with him. He know, he is doing wrong. But can't help. He is also coming to mumbai with samrat as he is his partner.
Suhani:-

She is very nice girl. Adhiraj's fiance Loves him a lot. She trusts him completely. She can't even imagine that adhi could lie to her. And who ever say anything bad about adhi she don't even think or ask him once about it, before denying it. She is going to shift to mumbai as she wants to be with adhi.

Thank you so much for reading it. I'm sorry, if i have bored u with this and wasted u r time. Please give me ur true views about it. Please, point out my mistakes. It is my humble request as they help me to get improve. Please suggest me, the title for this ff. And whoever wants to get pms from the next update, please press the like button on the pm list box below or write it in ur comment. I'll do pm only those who did either of this two. Coz i don't want to distrub non-readers with my pms. Sorry, once again for boring u.
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Edited by gnaneswari - 13 years ago
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firslty congrats on ur first ss n best of luck
the description of love was awesome n mindblowing...
agrres with u completly trust understanding...is most imp for a relation..n in love...
it was superb loved it
add me in pm list
best of luck wil love to read it
love
meri
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hey plz cont its very nice
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plz add me in d pm list!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Originally posted by: monaya_sajan

plz add me in d pm list!!!!!!!!!!!!


Thank you so much for commenting. I have posted the cs. Please do check if u have some time.
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thanks for commenting. Have posted the cs. Please check it, if u have some time

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