Love... A januable feeling!! Sajan mjht ff - Page 3

Originally posted by: Anjali_12

Laxmi really nice concept & very nice CS..its different & refreshing..I didn't know u also write stories..Any way really happy that you are writing..Congrats !!for your first story...Plzz continue soon...😃

Thanks a lot for commenting di. I'm glad that u liked it. Yeah, i'm not a writer. But, this concept is in my mind from so long time. That's why i had thought to pen it down. Thanks for ur wishes. Will update part-1 today.

Originally posted by: SIZZZLER

<font color="#6600ff" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Hi GNANESWARi !! Very NICE Concept and CS.👏 👏 👏. Its looking so promising. I always read your Replies on our Updates or JOS's Updates so,I know your depth of view about character and their characterization so,my expectations is little -bit high.😊 But,as a writer I want to sugges 1 thing... introduce characters...but,don't portray them as a fillers... If,story mein unki importance nahin toh story automatically weak ho jaayegi... In this story... U are going to portray a very large number of characters so,My best wishes is always with U. Please continue soon... Eagerly waiting for 1st part.</font>
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Thanks a lot for commenting. I'm glad u liked it. Its very encouraging for me to receive a comment from one of my fav writers. U have high expectations on me!! Ok, now i'm feeling very nervous. Because, i'm not a writer. But, i'm trying hard to give words to my imagination. Thanks a ton for u r suggestions and wishes. And trust me, i'm not using any charector as a filler. They have their own importance in the story. But, the focus will be on sajan. And please give frank comments. And point out my mistakes. As, they'll help me to improve. I'll update in few hours.

Hi friends, thank you so much for comments. Here is part 1...
Part 1
London
Time : 10:20pm
At a disco.

A guy in a black jeans and violet t-shirt was waiting at the gate for some one.
Guy: Yaar, yeh sam kaha reh gaya! Abhi tak aya kyun nahi. Kaha tha ki 10 baje tak ajayega. I'm sure woh ria ki wajah se hi late ho raha hoga. Obviously, yeh ladkiya tayyar hone mein, itna time jo lete hai!
Just then another guy said from back.
Aur suhaani, woh kya kum time leti hai? Isiliye, woh bhi abhi tak nahi ayi, aur tum kehte ho ki, she isn't like other girls who does over make up! :-D
Guy 1 turns back, he is adhiraj and the other guy is benji.
A: Yes, ofcourse woh auron ki tarah over make up nahi karti hai. She is prefers to look simple.
B: Acha, toh woh ab tak kyun nahi ayi?! (said little teasingly).
A: uski kal ek presentation hai, kuch preparations karne hai. Isiliye, usne kaha ki woh der se ayegi.
B: oh! Ok.
A: Aur tumhara kya hua?
B: kya? (benji asked frowningly).
A: Wahi, jo tum adhe gante se kar rahe the. Date dundna! Mili koi?
B: Nahi yaar, yaha koi bhi aisi ladki nahi hai, jo single ayi. Sab ke saath, unki boy friends hai!(said benji little disappointingly).
A: oh! Don't worry, tumhare life mein bhi jaldi koi girl ayegi.;-)
B: Really! U think so! (asked exceitedly).
A: Ofcourse yaar, bhagwan sab ke liye kisi na kisi ko banata hai. Chahe woh todi funny aur ajeeb ho!(said laughingly). So, tumhare liye bhi, koi badsurath boring ladki hogi. (this time laughing little loudly).
B: Ha! Ha! Very funny(said in a little sarcastic tone).
A: Just kidding yaar! Chalo, andar chalte hai! Lagta hai sam abhi nahi ane wala.
B: Chalo.
They goes inside and sat at bar counter.
A: Two drinks, please!(said adhi to bar attender).
B: Kal toh tum ne kaha tha ki tum drinking chod rahe ho, taki suhaani se aur jhoot na bol sake.
A: Ha, par kabhi-kabhi toh drink kar sakta hu na, aur aaj celebration hai. Sam-ria ki conffession ki third month anniversary hai. Isiliye toh hum yaha hai, taki hum ache se enjoy kar sake. Toh, aaj drink toh banti hai.
B: Tumhe toh bus drink karne ka bahana chahiye. And for ur kind information abhi take 12 nahi baje hai! Unki anniversary kal hai. Tum kehte ho ki tum badal jaoge, waise jaise tumne suhaani ki samne impression bana rakha hai, par karte nahi ho. Aur us bichari se joot pe jhoot bole ja rahe ho!
A: yaar benji! Main use koi dhoka thodi na de raha hu. Main bas use joot bol raha hoon, mere buri adate chupa raha hoon. Taki woh mujhse door na jaaye. Kyun ki, i love her a lot and can't live with out her.(said little emotionally).
B: Aur isiliye mein chup hu. Warna, mein kab ka tumhara saare pol khol liya hota.
Mean while, at the entrance.
A red sports car came and stopped there. A guy wearing white t-shirt, brown jacket and blue jeans, looking very handsome and a girl wearing red-tube top n denim mini skirt came out of the car. They entered inside and all girls started to drool over that guy. Yes, the guy is our one and only samrat. And the girl is ria.
Adhi-benji got their drinks and going to finish them, then benji looked at entrance and found sam-ria.
B: Lo agaya sam.
Adhi also turned back.
Sam-ria came to them. Sam hugged benji n adhi while saying hi. Then, all seated there.
B: Kya, sam aaj bahuth der kar di?(said little frustated).
A: Ha, sam! Kya hua?
Sam looked at ria, teasingly.
R: Mujhe kya dekh rahe ho, tum bhi toh dus minute late aye the mujhe pick-up karne keliye, traffic ki wajah se! Aur jab hum a rahe the, tab bhi toh traffic tha! Aur waise bhi, hamara 3rd month anniversary ki party hai, mujhe toh puri tarah tayyar hona hi hai, aakhir main host hu is party ka.(said in a little angry tone).
S: Main, dus minute late aya, aur isiliye tum 20 minute extra li tayyar hone ke liye! Us dus minute ka extra time tumhare liye sufficient nahi tha, toh meri kya galati hai!(said in a same tone, which ria used).
R: Ok, ok! Cut it now, drinks order kare? Hum yaha enjoy karne aye hai, nahi jagda karne, right!
S: Toh! Kya mein ne shuru kiya! Said sam with little frustation!
B: ok guys! Now leave it!
A: Chalo kuch order karte hai!
S: ok, champaign order karte hai.
A: (to bar attender) 3 glasses of champaign and one whisky.
S: Whisky?!
A: Suhaani aati hi hogi dekh li toh gadbad hojayegi. Wisky hai toh main use soft drink keh sakta hu.
Drinks were served.

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S: Adhiraj tum bahut galat kar rahe ho, jab tumhe pata chalega tab tak bahut der na hojaye. Aise apne pyar karne walon se jhoot bolna bahut galat hai. Isse na tum khush reh sakte ho, na use khush rak sakte ho!
A: Please sam, abhi yeh sab chodo na!Said while drinking.
Hi guys, sorry for being late! Said a voice from behind. All turned back. A girl wearing a blue jeans and pink sleeveless top came to them. She is suhaani! Adhi got up n hugged her. Ria too hugged her.
A: Beito na, kya koge?
Su: No, thanks main abhi kuch nahi lungisaid while sitting.
S: Arrey, lo na. Yaha soft drinks bhi milte hai.
Su: Main janti hu sam, but mughe abhi kuch nahi chahiye.
S: Tum kaise jante ho, tum toh yaha pehle baar ayi ho!
Benji and ria rolled their eyes, as they guessed what sam is trying to do, and they knew that it is not possible, coz suhaani trust adhi a lot.
Su: Adhi pe raha hai na! Said pointing towards adhi's glass.
S: Tum kaise janti ho, ki yeh soft drink hai! For ur kind information its whisky! Suhaani rolled her eyes! And was up to say something, ria interrupted and said
R: Sam, chalo na dance karte hai!and dragged him to dance floor.
Sam-ria at dance floor. A soft soft is playing in bg. And they r doing slow steps. Ria saw samrat's upset place.
R: Angry at me?
S: No, par tum ne mujhe kyun waha se laya?!
R: kyun ki mein janti hu ki, woh tumhare batane se believe nahi karegi, aur nahi adhi pe doubt karke uski glass check karegi. Aur bewajah tum donon me jagda hojata. Waise bhi, isi issue ki wajah se tum dono ki friendship mein darar a chuki hai.
S : phir bhi, woh meri dost hai. Aur adhi ki in harkaton ki wajahse woh hogi. Kyun ki main janta hu, jab use sach pata chalega toh use bahut bura lagega, uski dil toot jayegi.
R: Aur use dekh kar tum bahut upset ho jaoge.
Sam twrilled her. She came back with force and hit sam's chest.
She looked in sam's eyes and said...
R: Abhi yeh sab chodo na sam. And enjoy these moments. Hum jab saath hai hum woh pal fully enjoy karte hai na. Kya pata kal hum saath ho ya na ho. Itna toh kar hi sakte ho na mere liye.(said with a smile.)
sam also smiled. And looking into each others eyes they have enjoyed the dance to the fullest.
Meanwhile, at bar counter.
Su: Yeh kabhi nahi suderega na! Kyun yeh hum donon ke beech jagda karwana chahta hai. Hamesha aisa kuch na kuch bolta rehte hai. I can't belive ki yeh, wahi sam hai jo kabhi mera best friend hua karta tha!
Adhiraj felt guilty n sad for a moment to be a reason for two best-friends misunderstanding and grewn distances between them. But, composed himself quickly as he felt a hand on his shoulder, it was benji, who signaled him that everything will be fine and pointed towards suhaani, who was looking very upset and looking down.
A: Chodo na, suhaani, the truth is we r together n happy. And for me u r happiness is everything. Aur tum aise udas beitoge tho mujhe bahut bura lagega. So, please smile for me. And keep that samrats thoughts away from her mind. Ok! Suhaani, smiled only for him and nodded in yes.
A: Will u dance with me? Asked her offering his hand.
Suhaani accepted it smilingly, they both went to dance floor and started dancing happily.
Benji smilied seeing these two couples having their happy moments.
Precap: Sam-ria fight. Gunjan's introduction.
Thanks a lot for reading it, by taking out ur valuable time. I'm sorry for long update. I haven't realised that i have became long. I know, it was not upto ur expectations. Not, a little! But, i'll try my best to reach them. I'm very very sorry, if i have wasted ur time by the boring update. Please share ur frank views about it. Please, kindly point out my mistakes. Its a humble request. Btw, i have edited the title. Please say how is it. And if u have suggestions, u r most welcome. Please share them.
Thank you.

tht was really awesome love it

Originally posted by: Shafoo

tht was really awesome love it

thanks for commenting. I'm glad u liked it.

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Originally posted by: sajanlove3

its was a beautiful update

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Originally posted by: roknstarz_mjht

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