Love... A januable feeling!! Sajan mjht ff - Page 4

your ff is superb

Laxmi really nice part..All characters were really good..Can't wait for Gunjan' sintro..Plzz continue soon..😃

Originally posted by: mars14

firstly title is aweseome..lvoed it...

then update was not long enjyd it a lot

cant wait for next

it was amzing n superb...

love

meri

thanks for ur encouraging comment. I'm glad u liked the title n update. I'm very happy to know that u have enjoyed the update.

Originally posted by: tanisha997

your ff is superb

pls pm me😊

thanks a lot for commenting. Will surely add u in my pm list.

Originally posted by: RadhikaBhushan

nyc starting yar.

thanks a lot for commenting.

Originally posted by: monaya_sajan

excellent update...amazing start!!!!!!!!!!

thanks a lot for commenting.

Originally posted by: Anjali_12

Laxmi really nice part..All characters were really good..Can't wait for Gunjan' sintro..Plzz continue soon..😃

thanks a lot for commenting. I'm glad u liked the charecters. I hope u'll like the other charectors too.

Originally posted by: Shreya30456

Nyc start luved it

thanks a lot for commenting.

Originally posted by: SIZZZLER

<font color="#6600ff">Hi LAKSHMi !! Sorry for little late comment. But,I must say...Its very very good part...I can't believe that this is your 1st attempt in writing. Truly AWESOME. And spl. attraction of this Update is... Its Dialogue portion.It was so simple and realistic...not very Filmy-Filmy. Very balanced and natural convo. All characters in this Update was balanced and showing their Character Graph , very well. But,I M little disappoint with SAMRAT entry..It was so simple...just like others characters entry. I mean,woh character open hi nahin ho paya...some routine lines mein limited sa ho gaya. But,His lines was impressive so,Its Ok. I hope,GUNJAN's entry will be better then SAM's entry.

Sorry,If U felt bad with my any words... By the way, JOS is very excited to read your Story...And He gave his all Best wishes for Your FF. Sorry,for my Little long n Boring comment. And,Please do more Long Update.Thanx a lot for the PM.</font>

Thanks, a lot for commenting. And don't say sorry, u r not very late. I'm glad that u liked the update and dialouge portion. And thanks a lot for telling u r frank opinion on samrat's entry. I'm very very sorry, for u r disappointment. Actually, this part is little more long, which include sam-ria personal convo or i say ''fight''. But, i have thought the readers will be bored by this long part. So, i have posted till here only. I'm sorry. And yes, i'll try to make gunjan's entry betterthan samrat's. No, i haven't hurt, not at all! Instead, i'm very very happy that u gave the frank views and pointed out mistakes. I request u, please give comments like these only...frank n honest. And please don't think that i'll feel bad or hurt. Joseph, knows about this ff! Did u told him? And tell my thanks to joseph for his wishes. And no, u r comment is not at all long n boring.