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ana.khan

@ana.khan

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#781

awww u wrote it beautifully...seriouslyyy luved dis update to bitss...

🤗

u said u r nt gud at writing romantic lines...i think u did it perfectly...

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Anila

@-Anila-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#782

hi...

atlast u updated...

i was eagerly waiting for ur update...

thank u sooo much for updating...

love ya...🤗

now abt d update...

wow it was so beautiful n romantic...

hayyy i jst loved it...☺️😳☺️

first toh dat morning kiss wala part was awesome...

bechara mera Mayank...

kitna tarpaya usse...

pehle gopi n den Suhani...

awww Suhani was soo cute...

it was hillarious...

i loved it lodsss...

n den d kiss was too good...☺️

phir oart 21B ke bare mein kya kahoon???????

m jst blushing like hell...☺️☺️☺️ ☺️☺️☺️ ☺️☺️☺️

beautiful update...

waiting for d morning...

update asap!!!!!!!!!!

love ya...🤗

Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#783

OMG Priyankaaa- itna romance- bapre- it was totally romantic update
hehehehehe the morning scene was damn cute..lol
ek kiss k liye itna sara hungama- poor mayu- finally he got d kiss but he had to jhelofy lots of difficulties..:D:D :D

suhani baat sun ke tou mera haste haste halat kharab ho gayi...lol lol lol
Chachahiii, Kyaaa kar rahee hai aap😲''''..Suhani interrupted them
nupur replied-Suhani, tumhare chachau ko sar dard ho raha thaa to main sar daba rahi thee- r a wah she is too smart...:D :D

but suhani bhi kam nehi
Chachiii, Sar dard hota hai hath se dabate hai, lekin aapka hath to chahuuu ne pakda hai , to aap kaise sar daba rahee thee, aap boliye, main mummy ko bataoongi naya style sar dabane ka , woh bhee papa ka sar aise hee dabayengi..

lol lol lol lol..hehehehehehehehe- Oh GOD - it was just so hilarious ... i've enjoyed a lot...

and then mayur romance- main tou blush karte karte laal, hara,pila hogayi hu..
Hai ALLAH - priyanka - u r so romantic.. how could u say that u cant write romantic stuff- pher ya kya hai?????????? it was damn romantic update yaar...

mind blowing update- i m really very happy for mayur...
weldone priayanka
keep it up
take care
and do update next part soon

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#784

aww.. priyanka!!!
me goin all red over here!☺️
finally MN becum 1 in all senses...😍☺️
it ws utterly romantic update... luvd it 2 d bits...😛☺️
u wrote it really well... luvd it!👏
cont soon!
luv ya!🤗

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#785

Superb update

That was so so sooo lovely, romantic, hot n sensuous.Loved mayur romance fully n u write amazingly.

Loving it:)

Cont soon n tnx fr pm

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Its-My-Life

@Its-My-Life

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#786

Oh great , u updated at last 😃 Part A n Part B was awsome... Beautifully Written

Please continue soon ...

You write good romantic lines tooo...😳

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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#787

this was so Romantic update Priyanka.

Mayank's teasing was wonderful, and again n again interuptions in their Morning Kiss 😆

and his idea to send them to boarding school, that was so cute 😆

we know they love each other bt they care for each other.

and their dinner was very nice.

Brilliant Part Priyanka

precap was also so nice 😳

thnx for the pm.

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mayur_eternal

@mayur_eternal

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#788

Romantic update..
lukng forward to the next update

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490368

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#789

Originally posted by: ana.khan
awww u wrote it beautifully...seriouslyyy luved dis update to bitss...
🤗

u said u r nt gud at writing romantic lines...i think u did it perfectly...

Thanks Ana 🤗

I m glad u liked it ... Ys i struggle when it comes to writing romantic lines 😆😆 but manage to do it with the help of Google Search 😆😆

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490368

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#790

Originally posted by: 18anila1
hi...
atlast u updated...

i was eagerly waiting for ur update...

thank u sooo much for updating...

love ya...🤗

now abt d update...

wow it was so beautiful n romantic...

hayyy i jst loved it...☺️😳☺️

first toh dat morning kiss wala part was awesome...

bechara mera Mayank...

kitna tarpaya usse...

pehle gopi n den Suhani...

awww Suhani was soo cute...

it was hillarious...

i loved it lodsss...

n den d kiss was too good...☺️

phir oart 21B ke bare mein kya kahoon???????

m jst blushing like hell...☺️☺️☺️ ☺️☺️☺️ ☺️☺️☺️

beautiful update...

waiting for d morning...

update asap!!!!!!!!!!

love ya...🤗