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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

Oh dear that was so lovely So romantic and so hot

I loved it
Thanks for pm

Thanks for liking it 😳...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Priyank my name Samira i've been reading ur FF so long since part12 .. Sorry dear i couldn't comment b4 😔 but that doesn't mean i didn't loved or unapriciate i really did loved each n every part but 1s i was busy.. but here i'm now it was really adorable FF n loved how amazingly mayur relationhips developed from Mayank who doesn't bileave commitment at all now r head fall crazingly in love with his sweet n lovely Nupur 😍
and last 3 updates was wooww romantic n sweeet loved their moments ☺️☺️☺️☺️ i'm Mayur dream-land 😍 spcly last update well done dear beauifly written
n after 2day insha-ALLAH i'll do comment
so plzzz do pme from next update thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SamiraARTiMAYUR

Hi Priyank my name Samira i've been reading ur FF so long since part12 .. Sorry dear i couldn't comment b4 😔 but that doesn't mean i didn't loved or unapriciate i really did loved each n every part but 1s i was busy.. but here i'm now it was really adorable FF n loved how amazingly mayur relationhips developed from Mayank who doesn't bileave commitment at all now r head fall crazingly in love with his sweet n lovely Nupur 😍

and last 3 updates was wooww romantic n sweeet loved their moments ☺️☺️☺️☺️ i'm Mayur dream-land 😍 spcly last update well done dear beauifly written
n after 2day insha-ALLAH i'll do comment
so plzzz do pme from next update thanks

Hey Samira... thats so sweet of you ...thanks for the nice feedback..
I m not a FF writer at alll , it was just a trial , i just started it without even thinking because i love mayur,they are my all time favourite onscreen couple...
thanks for your feedback.. willl send u pm 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
i knw i m late...sorry jee...😳😆
abhi mein reading...the updates...😎

Edited:

u r kidding me...😲
ye kya tha priyanka...☺️
mein kya bolon..mujeh samjh nahi a raha...☺️
pehlay morning scene...pe atay hain...😆
BY GOD..maynak tu chorany ko tayar nahi tha...nupur ko...or gud morning kiss bhi chaiye...wo bhi usi waqt...😆
Naughty mayank sharma is back...😎😆
or jab finally nupur mani tu...Suhaniii a gayi...poor mayu...chance miss ho gaya...😆
God mayu fulltooo flirting han...😆
n this line just cracked me up...:



I m going to send Suhani to boarding school with Gopi, dono hamare married life ke peeche pade hue hai,

🤣
Luvd the kitchen n dinner scene...😳
acha tu nupur...ab mayank ki class le rahi hai...she is tarpayofying him...😆
bas karo nupur...ab or imtehan mat lo mayank ka...😳
Awww...the surprise was indeed Gr8 for mayank...😳
n Finally he saw her Beautiful Bride...☺️
ab usk bad ka... i can't comment...☺️
God priyanka...dat was so Damnnn Romantic...☺️☺️
n u said u can't write gud romance...tu ye kya tha...balikey...😳😆
u wrote everything Beautifullyyy...😳
starting frm the morning scene😳... till the end...
☺️
well...it was a ROMANTICCC...Update priyanka...☺️
i just became a red tomato...☺️🤣
speechless...
just blushing hard...☺️

just continue soon sweety...😳
Luv ya...❤️
Annu🤗





Edited by Annu_Arti_Mayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for late comment. beautiful. plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Annu_Arti_Mayur

i knw i m late...sorry jee...😳😆
abhi mein reading...the updates...😎

Edited:

u r kidding me...😲
ye kya tha priyanka...☺️
mein kya bolon..mujeh samjh nahi a raha...☺️
pehlay morning scene...pe atay hain...😆
BY GOD..maynak tu chorany ko tayar nahi tha...nupur ko...or gud morning kiss bhi chaiye...wo bhi usi waqt...😆
Naughty mayank sharma is back...😎😆
or jab finally nupur mani tu...Suhaniii a gayi...poor mayu...chance miss ho gaya...😆
God mayu fulltooo flirting han...😆
n this line just cracked me up...:



I m going to send Suhani to boarding school with Gopi, dono hamare married life ke peeche pade hue hai,

🤣
Luvd the kitchen n dinner scene...😳
acha tu nupur...ab mayank ki class le rahi hai...she is tarpayofying him...😆
bas karo nupur...ab or imtehan mat lo mayank ka...😳
Awww...the surprise was indeed Gr8 for mayank...😳
n Finally he saw her Beautiful Bride...☺️
ab usk bad ka... i can't comment...☺️
God priyanka...dat was so Damnnn Romantic...☺️☺️
n u said u can't write gud romance...tu ye kya tha...balikey...😳😆
u wrote everything Beautifullyyy...😳
starting frm the morning scene😳... till the end...
☺️
well...it was a ROMANTICCC...Update priyanka...☺️
i just became a red tomato...☺️🤣
speechless...
just blushing hard...☺️

just continue soon sweety...😳
Luv ya...❤️
Annu🤗



Annu Lav Yaa 🤗 ❤️
I m so loving your long comment .. it feels good.. well its true i struggle with romantic lines but inspirtation bahut multa hai IF per Google per...😆😆😆
You have become tomato..Shocked🤣
Will update by thursday or friday ...
thanks for the feedback
Love yaa
Edited by ..Priyanka.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

sorry for late comment. beautiful. plz continue soon

Thanks for liking it keya ..will update soon😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for liking it Bhavna ..will update soon😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for liking it Priya Madam, It was ur birthday gift 😳😆 ... kitne research karna pada mujhe romantic line likhne ke liye 😳 ..will update soon😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
i know i am late for comment😆
sorry for that

this part was good
i am happy that Mayank he is controlling his anger and irritation and happy that you show that progress slowly and didnt show him calm in one update😃

Note:-

1) after reading your part dont think so that disclaimer needed🤔😆

2) you are becoming naughty update by update😳

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