Mayur FF Upd-Pyar Bada Ya Abhiman Last Part -P 146

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Posted: 14 years ago
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This is my first mayur FF so you will find so many mistakes .I m not a FF writer at all so please do not expect much from me.😃..Please do not hesitate to point out my mistakes.. If you do not like the storyline than do tell me, I wont mind😆😆...

I have never written anything like this in the past. My exam finished last week and i was getting bored n keeping myself busy with Mayur Scenes than Supriya made VMS on Abhiman Songs ..I just wanted to give a try..
The Idea abou this FF has come from the movie called Abhiman and couple Amitabh and Jaya ( my mums all time favourite actors ) , So i decided to Write Mayur FF and took ideas from Abhiman Movie and applied in Mayurs Life.. let see how it goes , 😆😆 ..Please do not hesitate to critcise 😆😆
BTW do not throw chappal at me 😆😆...Uday ko maine Mayank ka bada bhai banaya hai aur Diya ko mayank ka so called GF 😆😆... just wanted something differnt that is why
Character Sketch & Storyline -Page 1
Chapter 1 - Page 3
Chapter 2- Page 6
Chapter 3- Page 10 A & B
Chapter:- Page 15
Chapter 5:- Part A- Page 19
Chapter 5:- Part B- Page 24
Chapter 6:- Page 28
Chapter 7:- Page 33
Chapter 8 :- Page 37
Chapter 9:- Page 42
Chapter 10-Part A & B -Page 47-
Chapter 11:- Part A & B- Page 53 -
Chapter 12 :--page 58
Chapter 13:- Part A & B -Page 63
Chapter 14 :- Part A & B :- Page 70
Chapter 15 :- Part A & B :- Page 75
Chapter 16:- Part A & B :- Page 81
Chapter 17- Page 86☺️☺️☺️
Chapter 18- Page 94😕
Chapter 19 A & B - Page 97😊
Chapter 20- Page 103
Chapter 21 Part A & B- Page 108
Chapter 22- Page 113
Chapter 23 A & B - Page 119
Chapter 24 A - Page 122
Chapter 24 B-Page 125
Chapter 25 A- Page 128
Chapter 25 B- Page 130
Chapter 26A -Page 134

Chapter 26 B-Page 137

Chapter 26 C & D - Page 140

Chapter 27 -Page 143

Chapter 28- Last Part
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Character Sketch

Nupur Family: - Upper middle class, traditional n simple family

Nupur Bhushan: - 24 yr old very beautiful, shy, positive, happy go lucky girl whose life revolves around music and her naphew n family. She loves singing all the time either its sad moment or happy moment. Her first love is Music although she never thought of making her career in music. Done graduation from Delhi n now shifted to Mumbai as her father got transfer here. Nupur is trained classical singer n wants to teach music to young children in school. Nupur believes in relationship n gives 100%

Sushma Bhushan: - Nupur's Dadi and most loving lady who lives for her grand daughter and son. Sushma dream to see Nupur getting married to nice guy n settle down happily. Sometime dadi is very strict, sometime funny. Sushma is an emotional lady who lost her husband now Grandson n his wife ( nupur brother n bhabhi ) . She is very close to Shashi, Kavita , Nupur and Aditya n believes in GOD a lot.

Shashi n Kavita Bhushan:- Nupur father, nice hardworking gentleman working as an accountant in Delhi Branch of Sharma & Company and now got promoted and shifted to Mumbai as a head of accountancy department. His life revolves around his wife, mother, daughter and grand son. Kavita Bhushan is a heart broken lady after loosing her son n daughter in law n lost her mental balance n cannot talk. Nupur looks after her mother n nephew.

Aditya Bhushan: - Nupurs 5 yrs little Naphew. Nupurs bhaiya and bhabhi died in car crash 4 yrs ago when nupur bhabhi was pregnant with Aditya. Doctors manage to save the baby but could not save nupurs bhabhi. Nupur has been mother figure of her nephew since he was born 😃and he calls her Nupsi Mummy .

Mayanks Family: - High class, Very Modern n Rich family in mumbai

Mayank Sharma: - A 27 yrs old a very arrogant, modern, well educated and westernised guy who only believes in success. He is workaholic and an ambitious guy and for that he can go to any level. Done MBA from USA n lived their for the past 4 yrs n adopted all bad things such as drinking, smoking, having girl friends , partying and not committing etc .Mayank is close to his mum and grand mum , Suhani. Mayanks love of his life is his niece Suhani.Mayank does not believe in marriage and relationship😆

Janki Sharma: - Head of the Sharma house, mother of Ajay Sharma and grand mother of Uday and Mayank and mother in law of Shilpa. Janki is powerful lady but could not manage to keep family together due to her decisions. Janki and Shilpa are very close to each other.

Shilpa & Ajay Sharma: - Running Successful business all over India and are the owners of Sharma Empire. Shilpa is very sweet lady who believes in tradition but Ajay Sharma is more kind of modern who believes in business parties, success etc. Shilpa's dream to see his son getting married to a traditional girl who can sudharo mayank. Ajay believes that sons should choose their partners by themselves. Shilpa and Ajay does not have good relationship due their contras personality (one is traditional n other is too modern) but still live together for the family.

Uday and Tammanna Sharma: - Uday is eldest son of Sharma's and married to his college sweetheart Tammanna, he calls her sweetly TAM. Uday is funny guy but yet very hardworking n he is very close to Mayank. Tam is modern girl n feel proud to be in the part of high society, parties etc, that is why she is very close to her father in law.

Suhani Sharma: - 5 yrs grand daughter of Sharma Family and daughter of Uday and Tammana and very much into music.She is the darling of the house and brings happiness in everyones face.

Diya Kapoor: - Sister of Tam and so called girl friend of Mayank Sharma. Mayank and Diya like each others company and was seen in all parties. Diya is a struggling model and want to be successful in modelling. Tams dream to see her sister getting married to Mayank in the future. Mayank and Diyas so called relationship is always in a newspaper, media, TV so people assume that they r together.

Edited by ..Priyanka.. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG Priyanaka- u wrote mayur FF--- BY GOD...
congrats hun

hmmm so u gonna write this FF based on abhiman
i saw this movie and i really loved it...
it would be very nice to imagine mayur here
Do cont it dear
and pm me
All d best
TC
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice FF Priyanka!😃
doesn't seem like your first! continue soon!

~jiya~
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice cs
would love to read it
congrats for ur first mayur ff😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Priyanka

wow u start FF...really nice
nice CS
waiting for update.continue soon n do PM me.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice concept...
congratulations on ur first FF...
continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Priyanka .. you and FF Writer , never expected .. 😲.. Very Good Surprise ..I liked ur honest comments on MJHT forum but now i m going to read ur mayur FF..Please send me PM ..
Loved CS and Concept.. Best luck to u for ur first FF ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Priyanka😛
Loved the cs and story line of ur ff.
Update soon and do pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its really interesting. i have never seen the real movie so will be a total new experience for me. pls pm me when you update.

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