Mayur FF Upd-Pyar Bada Ya Abhiman Last Part -P 146 - Page 2

Good CS...Classic n all time fav movie it is...cont soon...add me too...!!!

Wow..nice to get response from all of u .this is my first FF n i have no expereinace in writing stories but i m mad fan of Mayur. so i decided to take risk this time n write something differnt from their college love story .. 😃,

will wait for it... its always a treat to read something mature on MAYUR...

I love the story and the concept...keep writing...

Hi dear this is really an interesting Concept and CS dear

Originally posted by: -Faria-

OMG Priyanaka- u wrote mayur FF--- BY GOD...
congrats hun

hmmm so u gonna write this FF based on abhiman
i saw this movie and i really loved it...
it would be very nice to imagine mayur here
Do cont it dear
and pm me
All d best
TC

Chapter 1:-

Nupur House: - Today is the new day AND FRESH START for Bhushans, Shashi Bhushans first day in the Shrama Empire Mumbai Branch, Aditya ji is going to attend his school for the first time, and Nupur is going to join the same school also as a music teacher.

Every morning nupur dadi starts her morning with loud bhajan n roaming around each n every room n waking up n that's irritates nupur a lot. Nupur n Adi are sleeping n dadi came to her room to wake her up

SB:- Uth jaa Nupur bitiya , subah ho gayee , school jana hai

Nupur :- Dadi abhee 6.00 baj rahe hai, mujhe 9.00 baje school jana hai

SB: Uth abhee , Adi ko bhee to ready karma hai

Nupur : bas 5 min , she wents back to sleep

SB: Adi uth ja , naye school main jana hai aaj

Adi: Morning Dadi , No school today , aaj Sunday hai J

SB: Aaj Monday main hai mera raja beta

Adi:- Hum , Nupsie mummy ke sath hee jayenge , sirf unke sath

SB: uske pyaar ke sath jaoge adi

Adi : Haaa, main bhee pyaar karta hoo use dadi

SB:- Nupur uth aur ja apne pyaar " Nano" ko check kar , kya hal chal hai, use bhee to ready hona hai

Nupur: Thanks dadi, mera pyaar " nano" , so sweet of u , main dekhti hoo..hum teeno ready ho jate hai, Papa ready hai aur ma uth gayee? Main maa ko dawai dekar aatee hoo.

SB : han dono uth gaye aur shashi ready hone jar aha hai , aaj uska pahla din hai sharma bombay branch main

Nupur :- dadi ek minute , tumhare main kuch hai

SB: kya

Nupur :- Mera Morning Hug

Adi:- Nupsi mummy n dadi apke back main kuch hai

SB & Nupur ' Ek sath bolte hai kya

Adi :- Adi ka hug J

That's how Sharama family starts their morning everyday.

Mayanks House in the morning:-

Everything is different in this house. All work has done by servants n people lead their life based on time table apart from Mayank Sharma. Mayank had a late night party with Diya n his friends n he came home drunk, he had a fight with few people at the night club , do media make it as a news and posted his photo with Diya in a newspaper. His arrogant, partying, getting drunk, being with girls has become daily news for media people n they try to follow mayank wherever he goes. He is always in a news for wrong reason even if it is not his mistake and diya will be on always on cover page with him, So people assume that he is serious with her, but somehow mayank does not think like that.

JS :- Its morning and everyone is sleeping, no routine in this house, kya hoga is ghar ka , Uday kee wife bhee responsible nahi hai jara bhee, Subah Subah bhee manhus khabar , Is mayu ke bache ka kuch karma padega,

SS :- Maaji , main kya boloon, mayu ke papa ka kia karaya hai

JS :- Who tujhse bahut close hai, kyo nahi samjhati

SS:- who hamare aura jay ke risthe ke barain main janta hai aur hurt hota mere barain main sochkar aur tabhee to who ajay se thang se baat nahi karta

JS:-lekin who ajay kee baat to saree suntan hai

SS :- saree galat batain follow karta hai jaise party karna, drink karna, gfs etc

JS :- aise kaise chalega , iska kuch to karna padega , sabse pahle is diya kee bachee

SS:- maaji , ek achee ladkee aa jaye naa

JS:- bilkool tumhare jaisee

SS :-nahi maaji, main nahi chahti mayu aur uskee bibi hamare jaise couple ho

Suddenly they hear Ajay Sharma, Uday and Tam came to the dinning table and Ajay asked Shilpa ,kis couple kee baat kar rahee ho , Shilpa changes the topic and Ajay sharma gets little bit hurt.

Everyone is at the breakfast table apart from Mayank and Suhani.

Back to Nupur House in the morning:- Nupur is running around Adi and Shashi Bhushan and making them getting ready , Nupur mum and dadi are watching this drama. Nupur wants to see her father to look better as an accountant head in Sharama & Company and also wants to Adi look cool n handsome on his first day in his school.

ShashiB-Nupsie tujhe bhee school jana hai aaj tera pahla din hai naa

Nupur:-han papa, main ready ho jaoongi , pahle do bacho ko to ready kar do

ShashiB:- Beta ja Apne " Nano" ko check kar le , sath hee jana hai na tum teeno ko

Nupur:- han Papa

KB:- Calls her slowly

Nupur:- Han Maa, she runs to her mother n hugs her

KB :- Blesses her with a smile

Nupur :- Maa aaj bahut bada din hai hamare liye

KB:-smile but crying also

Nupur :- aao maa

Everyone goes to the living room where they Shashi and Kavita Bhushans Elder Son n his wife photo. Nupur says while looking at the photo .." Bhaiya aaj hum naya suru kar rahe hai apnee life yahan , Papa ka naya job, Adi ka school ka pahla din, mera dream job as a music teacher, maa ka ilaaz aur dadi ka dher sara support aur pyar in sab kaam main , Nupur talking to bhaiya n bhabhi and says be with us , we need ur support and nupur mum starts getting emotional, than everyone gives hug to each other , Suddenly

Adi ' Who are these people in this pic.

Nupur looks at Dadi n her father

SB:- Adi beta they r ur bade papa and badi mummy

ShashiB:- Maa yeh kya bola

SB:- abhee yehi rahne do beta

Adi seems does not understand anything , he seems happy with dadi answer , as long as nupsie mummy is with him, he is happy, today he is more happy because Nupsie is going to join the same school where Adi is going to study , everyone is ready to go.

Back to Mayank Sharmas House:-

Everyone is waiting at the breakfast table for Mayank , Dadi is furious while reading Mayank last night fight in page 3 headline, Ajay Sharma n Uday are tryin to calm her down but she is more angry when she saw Tam smiling.

JS :- Itna mat muskarao tam, tumhari bahan kee reputation bhee kharab ho rahee hai mayank ke sath

Tam:- Dadi , inkee shadi to hone walee hai to mujhe koi problem nahi hai is roj ke news se

JS :- mayank ne to kabhee nahi bola who diya se shadi karega

Tam :- han nahi bola , lekin dono bahut close friend hai

JS:- thank god bach gaya mayank

AS:- Shilpa kya baat hai tum chup ho

SS:- main kya bolooon, woh aapke raste per he chal raha hai

AS:- Shilpa aisa mat bolo, bachon ko jo ladkee sahi lagegi who use hee choose karenge khush rahenge

SS :- han kash aisa hee hota

AS ' kya tum khush nahi ho

SS- kash aap samajh pate, ab bahut der ho gaya hai

AS- main janana chahta hoo

JS ' bas bas chup karo tum dono, aaj Mayan ko 2 important kam karna hai

Uday, Tam, SS ek sath bolte hai KYA ??

JS :- Suhani ko school chodna aur Office jana, Delhi Branch se Shashi Bhushan join kar rahe hai aaj as a head of accountant , at least Mayank ko waha as a boss to present rahna chahiye naa.. aaj bhee who der karega .

AS :- Mayank has to be responsible now when it comes to work, rest I do not care

SS:- but I do care about rest rather than work when it comes to Mayank

Dadi fir beech main aatee hai inka jhagda bachane

Mayank is still sleeping, than he got call from intercom n get instruction to get ready n come down in 15 minutes, he has got hangover but he has to do it because it was Dadis instruction. He is annoyed with the call but cannot say no to Dadi. Dadi asked Uday n Tam to take Suhani to school then TAM said Suhani is goint to school with her governess, dadi is furious to know that also. Tells Uday to control TAM

Uday:- Dadi main kya control karoo is out of control track ko, he treis to make atmosphere light

JS- Tere isee soft nature ke wajah se yeh out of control hai

Uday:- Dadi main drop karoonga suhani ko school, aaj uska first day hai J

JS- han tum dono karo ise school drop, no governess for suhani aaj se

Tam;- dadi main busy ho office main

JS- aaj se Suhani main busy ho jao

Tam- looked at Ajay Sharm and says papa

Ajay sharma- aaj hee sab decide karna hai, pahle mayank ko time per office bhenje

JS ' aaj he is governess ko bahar niklana hai

Ajay ' Mayank kahan hai , he is ignoring dadi now n wants mayank to go to office on time

Mayank came down ready was standing behind the mfurious and angry because he has to meet Mr Shashi Bhushan, who is just an accountact head moved from delhi to Mumbai, he seems not able to understand why he has to give up his sleep for Mr Shashi Bhushan. He is getting annoyed n moody because Ajay sharma keep saying that he is late for his work. Mayank is not in a good mood today, kisko mayank ke mood ka samna karna padega aaj.

Phew Chapter 1 Done ( kitna type karna padta hai, btw i just wanted to give family outline that is why this chapter is long 😆😆)

Precap :- Pahlee Mayur meeting 😳 😃 😆

Lovly concept,cs n update.😊

Nice part dear

Nice start Priyanaka
Lovelyyy
do cont. it