Mayur FF Upd-Pyar Bada Ya Abhiman Last Part -P 146 - Page 5

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

71.6k

Users

55

Likes

2.2k

Frequent Posters

ana.khan thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#41
Nyc start dearrr...
update asapp...
lyked mayank s character...😳
xcited for MN 1st meet...
Edited by ana.khan - 14 years ago
490368 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: ana.khan

Nyc start dearrr...

update asapp...
lyked mayank s character...😳
xcited for MN 1st meet...

Thanks for the encouragment ... Yes Mayank is kind of possesive about himself n his lifestyle but later on he will get possesive about his love too,...thats where twise will start...
Will update soon
Edited by ..Priyanka.. - 14 years ago
490368 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#43

Chapter 2:- Mayur kee Pahlee Mulakat 😃😳

Mayank House:-

Mayank ready hokar neeche aata hai, he is looking handsom in white shirt n trouser, Mayank dad is not happy with mayank with his time management when it comes to office, Mayank is workaholic but his office hours starts from 12.00 PM onwards. First time in his working life, he has to go to office so early who bhee Shashi Bhushan ,just an account head se milne, aaj who apnee dad kee khunnas Shashi Bhushan per nikalne wala hai.

Mayank had been a nice kid but due to his parents relationship and him seeing his mum suffering for his dad made him workaholic, party going , not believing in relationship n marriage. He is not closed to his dad that much and Ajay Sharma feels that. Ajay Sharma is realising his unfair behaviour towards his lovely wife but past cannot be rectify but Mayank sad is trying to improve his relationship with his wife . Shilpa has been a supportive wife n they had love marriage, they worked hard to make Sharma empire but Ajay Sharma became too involved in his business life, parties n started ignoring shilpa , by the time he realised it was too late. Shilpa n Janki are the only one who keep all family together.

Mayank gusse main hain ( use hangover bhee hai ) kyonki ise subah subah office jana hai naye account head se milne , jo delhi se aaye hai, yeh kam mayank ke alawa koi aur bhee kar sakta thaa lekin Ajay Sharma ne mayank ko bola kyonki Mayank Sharma Empire ka Financial Head hai. Mayank and his dad always have a good business relationship between son 'father but he never got close to his dad emotionally. Mayank is annoyed at his dad n orders but he does it. Isee beech Suhani rote rote neeche aatee hai apne parents Uday aur Tam ke sath. Suhani sabse jyada close shilpa , janki sharma aur mayank ke hai. Aaj uska pahla din hai school ka who jidd karti hai who school jayegi to mayank kee gadi main baith kar jayegi, Mayank ko suhani pyaar se Chachu bulati hai.

Uday:- Suhani , Chachu ko meeting main jana hai abhee

Suhani:- nahi , chachu ko mere school jana hai mujhe drop karna

Tam:- Suhani darling, main drop kar doongi aur daddy pick kar lenge

Suhani:- Momma, mujhe Chachu ke sath jana hai

Uday n Tam:- enough Suhani, bahut jiddi ho gayee ho

Mayank:- Suhani ko main drop kar deta hai aur Uday bhaiya hamare accountant head se mil lenge

Ajay Sharma:- getting annoyed at mayank, Mayank tum apne kam se bhagte kyon ho , Suhani ko uske parents drop karenge.

Suhani:- throwing more tantrum and went crying to ajay sharma, saying dadu aap chachu ko mat dannto pls nahi to main aapko daantongi

Everyone started laughing and Suhani is still crying , Now Dadi stepped in this matter and told mayank to drop Suhani to the school and go to the office from their as he ha got enough time n school in on the way to the office( not far from the office ) . Suhani happy n kissed his grand dadi n jump on mayank. Mayank is still annoyed to go to office that early to meet Shashi Bhushan.

Nupur House:- Shashi Bhushan is very punctual man and very professional when it comes to work , due to his hard work, he got promoted in job n transferred in Mumbai Branch as an accountant head, Nupur has taken this quality from her father and very punctual girl n disciplined n hates people who does not respect n value time. Everyone is ready at Sharma House. Nupur is a responsible girl who takes responsibility of whole house n try to make everyone happy , she is easy going girl who does not give crap and cannot take crap.

Aditya : Nupsie mumma , chalo we r getting late. He is junior shashi bhushan in punctuality

Shashi Bhusan : Best of luck to you for your school, do well n do not be scared of anyone

Aditya:- Best of luck to u dadu for ur office J, do well n do not be scared of anyone n work hard but I hate girls dadu, they r yucky

ShashiB and Sushma was laughing n smiling at Adityas Cute Discussion.

Nupur is with her mum , giving her medicine, explaining about Adityas School , Shashi Bhushan Job and her teaching music in school ( Kavita bhushan was good singer too but lost interest after loosing her son n bahu) . Nupur explains everything to her mum all the time so she can react one day.

SB:- Nupur Bitiya, Nano ko check kar le beta , aaplog late ho rahe ho

Nupur:- Mera Nano , my love dadi

SB: bas bas bahut pyar barsa liya

Nupur :- kahan dadi , aaj to time bhee spend karoongi pahli baar uske sath Mumbai main

SB:- smiling , chalo shashi beta tum bhee office ke liye Niklo , pahle din thoda jaldi jana chahiye , Ajay Sharma ko bahut expectation hai tumse

Nupur :- Dadi aur Maa , main aur Adi sath aa jeyenge , aur lunch kee chinta mat kijiye , hamne tiffin le liya hai aue papa ko bhee de diya hai

ShashiB:- All the best Nupur, jo tum chahti thee who tum karne ja rahee ho

Nupur :- Thanks papa

ShashiB:- Dhyan se jana aur Adi ka dhyan rakhna, theek se travel karna , naya jagah hai

Nupur :- Nano hain naa papa, who hamara dhyan rakhna , all the best papa, school office se door nahi hai to hum kabee kabhee lunch main mil lenge ,

ShashiB :- Good Idea .,Chalo main nikalata hai, mujhe Sharma Empire ke Financial Head se milna hai aur main late nahi hona chahta .. Punctuality is must

Nupur : Yes Papa, hum chalte hain, Dadi aap apna aur maa ka khayal rakheiyega and kuch jaroorat pade to phone kijiyega

SB:- Hamari chinta mat karo, humlog serial dekhenge, mandir jayenge aur afternnon nap lenge, we r lucky people

Nupur aur Adi sath nikalte hai apne nano ke sath aur Shashi Bhushan bhee office ke liye bilkool time per nikalte hai.

Mayank House :- Everything is going wrong in this house , Suhani does not listen to Tam because she never looked after Suhani, she was raised by governess, Shilpa and dadi janki. Everyone is running after her to feed her breakfast but suhani seems least interested in breakfast n more interested in going to school with Mayank on first day. Mayank is getting late now, he knows his dad will lecture him again if he does not reach on time to meet Mr Bhushan.

Mayank:- Suhani sweety , finish ur milk and than we will go to ur school because its already late

Suhani:- yes we will go

Mayank:- than finish ur milk

Suhani:- but I hate milk

Mayank:- than we wont go to school

Suhani:- Mayank Chachu u r getting sadu everyday

Mayank:- ab maine kya kiya

Suhani:- Ladkiyon se aise baat karte hai

Mayank:- Sorry Suhani, Shall we go to school pls

Suhani:- hmm yeh hue naa baat

Mayank:- Good Girl

Suhani:- BTW Chahchu , aaj se main music class bhee kar rahee hoo, new teacher , new school but I hate boys ..I m sooo excited about my music.

Mayank:- to milk jaldi karo nahi to teacher music nahi seekhayegi

Suhan :- why

Mayank:- Teacher wants all her students to drink milk so they can sing well and

Suhani:- Really, Okay Chachu I m drinking milk due to my music teacher only . Lets go, Bye Everybody 'We r getting late due to chahchu J , I do not want punishment

Mayank is already late for school and if he is late for school than he is going to be late for his meeting also. Pahle Mayank Sharma ko Nupur Bhushan kee Punctuality ko jhelna hain than Mr Shashi Bhushan ko .. Great Going Mayank Sharma.

At Sunshine Public School:- Mrs Decosta is principle, Miss Annie is a teacher there. Today is Nupurs first day in this school where she will start her career as a teacher; music is her life n this makes her happy. Nupur is looking very simple but pretty in lemon Anarkali Salwar Suit, high hills, ponytail and in her spects. Mrs Dicosta is the principle of this school. Today Mrs Dicosta did not come due to personal reason in the morning that is why Nupur has to do few formalities about the new students also, she is just helping principle in her absence. Nupur reached school, checked everything and went to see children. They were having their first class with Miss Annie and one student is missing is Suhani, Nupur was busy doing all formalities with childrens parents n guardians.

All formalities are done and now she is ready to take , as today is the first day in school, so parents has to stay little bit longer to make their children comfortable in school. Nupur still waiting for one more student n getting angry at parents for not bringing child to the school on time. Nupur decided to give instruction to suhani parents so they wont do same mistake again.Miss Annie class is about to finish in 10 min n and Nupur does not want to start her first music class late but she has to complete formalities also, so she decided to wait for another 10 mins for Suhani n her parents. Mayank is getting annoyed because he was already late for Suhani School as well his meeting. He is talking to himself n saying that Morning is not suitable for him, his hangover is not gone, he is getting hyper n more angry , he decided to drop Suhani at the school n straightaway going to office to meet Mr Bhushan. Mayank reached school with Suhani n looking to see Principle ..

Mayank:- Princilple se baat karke Suhani ko drop karke main nikalta hoo'I m already late

Suhani:- Chachu do not make angry face , u r not looking good, be brave, do not get scared of teacher, I will ask her not to punish u.

Mayank:- Punish me for what sweety

Suhani- because of u , we r late today, for that we will get punishment , she said innocently

Mayank:- it wont happen, its not a mistake, we r only late for 30 min , he said carelessly

Suhani:- its not good, dadu says we shud be good

Mayank:- looked at her n smiles'

Mayank manage to find Principle room, asked suhani to wait outside for one minute. Knocked at Principles door but did not hear any answer so he opened that door, he saw young girl of early 20 is busy looking at files , he can only see her back with long hair and perfect figure in anarkali salwar kurta. He thought principle itnee young kaise ???

He wanted to leave early so he started the converstation.

Mayank:- Madam, Suhani is here, I came to drop her n now i need to go urgently , he said it annoyingly

Nupur :- apne bache ko drop karne aa gaye , bahut bada kam kar diya,😕 ( nupur felt mayank is just doing formalities of dropping his kid , she did not like that mr sharma is in hurry to drop his child n leave her like that)

Mayank:- Excuse me

Nupur:- I do not like irresponsible people , because of u , Suhani missed one class n introduction period too , you shud be aware of this .

Mayank:- due to traffic n late night engagement , not because of me, he said it angrily

Nupur :- yeh traffic can be excuse , find new excuse pls without getting angry

Mayank:- Dekhiya mera pass time nahi hai , I m here to drop Suhani n I need to go now , so excuse me , said angrily

Mayank is getting annoyed n angry now with the Nupur . Mayank did not even say sorry for being late , Nupur turned back and their eye meet for the first time. Mayank was amused to see beautiful girl in her 20's in lemon color salwar kurta, big expressive eyes, perfect lips , sharp nose and anger on her face., for a second he was lost but than again nupur brought him back to reality by her lecture. She was not going to let him forget his first mistake being late in school.

Nupur :- Mr Sharma, agar app punctual nahi rahenge to apke bache kya seekhenge, this is not nice naa

Mayank:- what not nice , she is here now and I have to leave so please start the formalities , he said it arrogantly

Nupur:- you r already late Mr Sharma, formalities aram se karoongi . Please Sit Down

Mayank:- I do not have time , I have a meeting he said it angrily

Nupur :- Cancel ur meeting mr sharma, she said it smiling n tryin to calm him down

Mayank :- Dekhiye aap limit cross kar rahee hai, u cannot tell me what to do , mayank was getting more annoyed with her smile now

Nupur:- Yes I can n I will when it comes to my students , 😃

Mayank:- bahut ho gaya , I m dropping Suhani n going

Nupur :- No u r not

Mayank:- She is outside waiting for me

Nupur went outside and asked Miss Annie to take her to classroom and told Miss Annie to keep them engage because she will be late for her music class due to some reason.

Nupur:- Suhani has gone to the classroom, due to you, she is late for her classes, do not you think its wrong

Mayank;- no I do not think its wrong , he said arrogantly

Nupur ;- how arrogant

MayanK- Arrogant, I m being honest. Anyways I m getting late, I need to leave now

Nupur:- No you cannot leave , have u heard about Punishment

Mayank:- looking at nupur surprisingly, Punishment, what punishment??

Nupur: ' Well we do not punish children, so we need to punish their parents for not being punctual

Mayank :- thinking ..this girl is crossing her limit now, interfering in his meeting, telling how arrogant is he , nobody has spoken to him like this before, I mean girls have never spoken to him like this ever. Most of the girls drool over him for his money n looks.

Nupur :- Punishment se dar gaye kya???, asking cheekingly

Mayank:- Listen Miss, enough is enough now, main tumhari bakwas sun raha hai iska matlab yeh nahi hai kee u can say anything, I gave reason for coming late, is'nt that enough

Nupur 'No its not enough, said nicely , you have to learn to bring ur child to school on time, this rule is same for everyone, is that clear.

Mayank- Listen you, enough is enough, you do not know who we r? We can buy this school if we want, we r paying fee to teach my suhani not to hear ur lecture.

Nupur : Ulta Chor Kotwal Ko Dannate, Kya Jamana aa gaya hai

Mayank:- Kya bola, than he got call from Office

Nupur :- Switch off ur phone if u r in a meeting

Mayank:- Do not tell me what to do , things are getting out of order now

Nupur :- Listen Mr Sharma or whoever, My job is to tell my students parents to bring their child on time, today is the first day in school so all the parents had to stay longer to see their children settled in school properly but u missed that opportunity. You r arrogant person who is not ready to accept ur mistake, I m very surprised.

Mayank:- Enough Now, I m not in a mood to argue anymore, I have to go now for the meeting.

Nupur :- its your choice , make sure u be punctual when it comes to Suhani School , nupur said it in authoritative voice .

Mayank:- did not like her tone and said mind ur own business n do not tell me what to do

Nupur:- than we need to send offcical letter to ur home if u do not bring Suhani from tomorrow on time

Mayank:- thinking, this is first time someone is telling him to improve, he is getting more angry

Nupur :- Mr Sharma, I m letting you go now , make sure from tomorrow onwards u better not being late to bring my Student Suhani to the school

Mayank:- You r letting me go , he could not accept this line from Nupur , I m leaving this place n taking Suhani with me also.Listen Miss,

Nupur :- you cannot do this , accept your mistake n move on please

Mayank:- Mistake , what mistake ???

Nupur :- Anyways , I m done with my formalities, please sign this form and leave

Mayank:- he is in a argumentative mood now, aaj tak kisee ladkee ne is tarah se mayank se baat nahi kee hai, it seems someone has pressed wrong button today and he is feeling humiliated , he said dekho miss angrily n loudly

Nupur :- Mr Sharma, calm down n lower ur volume. You can discuss this matter to Our Principle Mrs Dcosta this evening when u come to pick Suhani around , now u can leave

Mayank:- Who are you ,Excuse me , do no speak to me like this

Nupur:- I m Nupur , Music teacher n assisting Mrs Decosta in her absence

Mayank:- Assiting or taking advantage of her position.

Nupur:- Its your thinking , I cannot change, I did it what i felt was that time,

Mayank:- Enough now , he said angrily , you do not know who am I ?

Nupur :, I m least interested to know, Good Bye Mr Sharma, Improve ur timing , it will help others too n she is about to leave the room

Mayank:- hmm , who the hell she is to tell me what to do,

Nupur :- I heard, you can speak to Mrs Decosta about this matter in details this afternoon because of u I m getting late also , kab sudhrenge yeh log, khud to der hote hee hai aur bakee logo kee unke kam main der karate hai

Mayank:- I will meet Mrs Decosta, fix my meeting with her today afternoon 3.30 PM

Nupur :- Okay Mr Sharma, See u at 3.30 n speak to mrs decosta,

Mayank:- I will see Mrs Dcosta n make sure u r out of this school today.

Nupur :- Okay Good Luck than

Mayank morning did not start very well today and for the first time in his life , he met someone who can actually finding mistakes in him n telling him openly n very authoritative for the first time. He felt humiliated n angry and decided to take revenge.

Second Chapter Done, I enjoyed writing this more, i know its long but i cannot help when it comes to Mayur Argument ..Mayank Arrogance n Nupur Perfection is going to create more drama 😆😆😆... Sudharegi Nupur ise bhee😆

Edit:- Nupur is sweet n shy as a persona but when it comes to professional life, you have to be strict n bold. Mayank is arrogant n it shows in his behaviour. Both of them r opposite to each other, its not about mannerism, people do learn from their mistaked once they realise.😃😃.. BTW i m not a FF writer at all, this is just an attempt n i will try to improve based on u peoples comment n feedback😃
Precap :- Mayur Second Meeting at 3.30 at Sunnshine Public School 😳😃
Edited by ..Priyanka.. - 14 years ago
--jiya-- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
#44
whoa!! Mr. Arrogant isn't he??😆 Nupur sure has lots of work in her hand!!😆
nice chapter Priyanka... i like ur style😃
thnx for the pm
~jiya~
Wings-of-Fire thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
#45
ok now this was the limit. nupur was way too harsh and i was actually shocked to see this side of her. cuz her earlier image was of a sweet caring well behaved girl. if i was in mayanks place i'd do exactly the same what he said he'll do. honestly, even sitting here and reading it, i got so angry on nupur! it was way too much i think. she needs to learn manners. cuz thats not the way of behaving with a parent on your first day of school joining.
490368 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: -roshnee-

ok now this was the limit. nupur was way too harsh and i was actually shocked to see this side of her. cuz her earlier image was of a sweet caring well behaved girl. if i was in mayanks place i'd do exactly the same what he said he'll do. honestly, even sitting here and reading it, i got so angry on nupur! it was way too much i think. she needs to learn manners. cuz thats not the way of behaving with a parent on your first day of school joining.

Thanks for ur feedback 😃. .
When i was in school, my teachers never allow us to come late, if we come late , we were not allowed to enter n used to get official complain.. it does happen in public school.
Well i do no thing its about mannerism, i think people do not accpet mistake than u have to tell them ...

Parents shud be punctual when it comes to bringing their children to school on time n if they do not do it than teachers shud tell them ...thats what i wanted to portray .. this is fictional story not real ...😆😆😆..I do not think it is about mannerism .. its about telling arrogant mayank to accept his mistake 😃... Nupur got carried away with her behavour.. it does happen in normal life.. mayank did not behave like a parents as well.. do not forget that 😃
Edited by ..Priyanka.. - 14 years ago
490368 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: --jiya--

whoa!! Mr. Arrogant isn't he??😆 Nupur sure has lots of work in her hand!!😆

nice chapter Priyanka... i like ur style😃
thnx for the pm
~jiya~

Thanks Jiya ...😃
490368 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: mahakmev

nice do pm me next time

Thanks Mahak ...will PM next time😃 ..
Edited by ..Priyanka.. - 14 years ago
Its-My-Life thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#49
Thanks Priyanka... Liking your style😃 .loved argument between mayank n nupur, they got carried away ...mayank is no ready to accept his mistake n nupur is making sure he accpts his mistake 😆😆 Opposite to each other 😃.they shud realise their mistake 😆😆😆.
Sweetness n shyness in a nature is different thing ,Mayank was arrogant to her ,just because she is shy n sweet , that does not mean she has to tolerate arrogant people...😃 ..I m liking it ..
Please update quickly n send me pm
Edited by mjht-nups-mayu - 14 years ago
Faria. thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
#50


Wow - its a beautiful update Priyanka
simply wonderful...
poor myank -- nupur jaisa joalamukhi ko jhelna para...lol lol lol

By GOD- Nups was too much - i think she was more arrogant then mayank...
i loved their convo...

btw. what will maynk do with nupur... ???? hmmm i think he'' try to snatch her job or will warn her through principal...Lets c what happened...
beautifully written priyanka- i enjoyed d whole update
do update next part soon and try to pm me

TC

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".