short story the dark nights(mars)part6,pg32:)

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PRACHI GOYAL

@prachi06

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#91

nice yaar

thanx for pm

continue soon

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umaima

@cutiepie12

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#92

oh wow thnx a million ton GOD for making dis gurl realize dat she had an ss to continue n sum ppl were eagerly waiting for it😆

ok now coming to da point it ws jus awesum....awwww da mayur moiment ws jus perfect so nupur knws everythng n now da present seems soo scary...it ws terrible

plzzzz khuda k liye ab jaldi update kr dena pllzz dnt keep us waitng...

da concept is gr8 n its really different from da other stories...loving it sooo much

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#93

awesome update.

d story was so much mystrious.

i love it............ur writting style was so much unique.

continue soon.

thanks for the pm.

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Hina

@samratrocks

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#94

hhii ddii!

longg timme

hw r u??!

cuming to ur updt..

dont have to b sorryy

luved itt

grr8 jobb

well writteenn.. as alwayss

cont sooonn

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chaitali

@spreadingsmile

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#95

wonderfull dear,loved it much because i love mystery that is there in your ss😛

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Sadaf Rizwan

@saduf

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#96

hey awesome update

n an awesome ff too

loved the way u tells story

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362035

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#97

awesooooooooome.....

superb......

fab.

loved it to the core.

thanx for the pm......

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surbhi tyagi

@EtherealRati

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#98

i forgot i reserved and updated my comment in next post........😆

Edited by Surbhi123 - 14 years ago

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surbhi tyagi

@EtherealRati

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#99

awesome , fantastic , mindblowing , mysterious update jaan................
awesome , magnificient ..

i am speechless................

you describe each and every emotion so well...........................
awwwwwwww , everything is scary ...seems so scary...........
but loved the way you wrote this update................

you really rock dear.................
loved mayur scenes a lot..........they were just awwwwwwww
your original style made it more and more special 🤗

will be waiting for your next update.....................

i will be most eagerly waiting...............

and i promise i will not reply this late .................😛

Edited by Surbhi123 - 14 years ago