short story the dark nights(mars)part6,pg32:) - Page 25

Thank God u updated'

tanaaa
heya buddy whats up
finally m back
shoryyy for the delay yar
i know a comment in ur siggy shop is pending as well
but now m a bit free so no worries
after ages m here missing u sooo much dear =(

n seriously now after reading ur update m cursing myself y i came here
shittt now who will wait for the next part
i will die with curiosity whats next
hate you asa mat kra kar
the update was a bit short wasn't it???
plzzz jani lambi update mar na plzzz
loved the only scene u have written in the flashback
i guess there was only one na
but was really really amazinggg one
loved it completely my roxstar
n the first scene while reading i was literally praying "dont dare to stop"
magar pta nae to kis baat ka badla le rahy hy
aik or scene nae likh sakty thy chintoo
tery exams khatam nae hue kya
next time suspense py khatam mat krna or long update dena
mujhy tery tareef ki zaroorat nae hy u r simple beyond perfectionist
to itny perfect kesy hy???
m in love with each single word that u have written
muahhh
plzzz continue sooon
n do tc misssing u terribly

haye allah !!!!!! ye kya tha ??????? but jo bhi tha bahut ultimate tha !!!!! seriously loved it to the core !!!!!!! muahhh !!!!!!!! mayur ne sajan ka band bja diya !!!!!! hehehehehehehe bechare kaise confused huye khade the hehehehehehehe

dolly... such a late n short updt!!!!!!!
you always do that...chalo late updt is ok.. but when u r already updating late bt at least updt quantity..!!
or may bhi mera hi dill nai bharta tere updates se..bcoz my dill always mange more of ur updt😳 :P
btw sorry for late reply..nah actually tit for tat.. hehe boo!😆
continue next part soon...

dolly i have read up all the parts...please pm me the next time u update...:):)