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@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#71

O My God dear Its too much mysterious story great great great update

So interesting dear very different Kind of Story

Really wao Mayank Is intelligence officer Great

I am dying to know the sort of relationship between mayur

Really great piece of Work . Hats of Too u 👍🏼

Plz Plz Update soon and dont forget to Pm, me.

Edited by DhanakZ - 14 years ago

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deepti

@.VanishingDream

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#72

wow dolly finally u updated..thanks to aashi for finally telling u this lolz

coming to ur update

awesome , mindblowing , fab update!!!

totally loved it🤗

loved the mystery...loved the jealousy of mayank😉

suspense bahut hai....ab jald update karo warna bahut saare chappal padenge tujhpar 😆...

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gurpreet

@preety88

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#73

wonderful update.....this is a interesting and different ss....cont soon

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#74

u made my eyes fall on my laptop...........i felt as if am reading some sherlock holmes story...awesome dear........

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nisha

@XSilentWishesX

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#75

OMG dolly di wow u updated it 😲 🤗

Seriously i loved this part!

Thanks for the background story!😳

Ok i m loving the way how the story is moving!

Mayank is really protective!

U wrote their emotions really well! It was realistic!

Thanks for the pm and continue soon🤗

Edited by nishi_sajan - 14 years ago

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rupal.sri24

@rupal.sri24

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#76

awesome update...

you are indeed a good writer.

but yaar...itna short update....and you left at the suspense......

please please cont soon.

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mjht_admirer

@mjht_admirer

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#77

res***

just one thing before going offline

byyyyyy GooooooDDDD!!! kya part hain!! tooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooodddd
toooooooo tooooooooooo awesome!!

aage ka reply raat ko.
n aaj acha khasa lamba chauda, teri tarah, reply karungi. 😆😆😆😆

chal bye 4 now
need to rush now.

loads of love
vinu

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358674

@358674

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#78

its outstanding.......

awesome.......

superb update...

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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aashi

@aashizin

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#79

b4 reading this update i want to say thank god u read that pm otherwise i thought u didn't get mine 😆i want to seriously hit u yar u have left ur all FF's update and hang us to wait 😆u better continue those updates otherwise god know what will happen to u when i will throw my pms on u everyday for reminder🤣

ok on serious note sweety just love ur all updates whenever u get time do post it bcz many of ppl r here who r dieing to read ur all FFs update i am also one of them 🤗

and ya i will comment after reading update ok

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aashi

@aashizin

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#80

wow dolly first of all superb update 👏superb combo of past and present with very interesting story 👏concept is just too good yar i am amazed that u have seriously amazing and brilliant thought process for such a superb concept and u always describe it wonderfully that all ur readers will have roller costar ride with each and every updates seriously loved it now can't wait for next part do continue soon and thanks for pm

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