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Posted: 14 years ago
dolly

wow yaar

amazing job than ever

your updates are one of a kind

i just love them more tahn anything

amazing job

upadte soon


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Posted: 14 years ago
dolly u will b no more
if u will not update it now
mamiiiiiiiiiiiii plz is ko bola na update kar dy
its really unfair
ya to likha mat kar
likh hy lia galti sy to update bhi to kar na plzzzzzzzzzzz
omggggggggg ur update just killed me man
last scene reminds me of mein hoon na
firstly u cheated my story
no doubt u write just 1000000000000000000000000000000s time better than me but still have thought that story in 2 weeks
n see u copied it
i dont know y it use to happen with me???
mery more than half ideas leak out ho jaty hein
fazool ka comment
sorry
ok just amazinglyyyyyyyyyyyy written dear
loved it completelyyyyyyyyyyy
every single word was just perfect
u know na i hate reading novels n have never read it
so i found ur ff's really twisty 🤣
unhy understand krny k lie 3 sy 4 bar parhna parta hy
do continue soooooooooooooooooooooon plzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
We want update dear
plz update it soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg guys thanku soo soo soo much for such enocouraging response sorry for the delay guys clg start ho gaya hai n i am all busy busy :(
but will try my best to update this ff two times b4 sunday:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Dolly... this story is different and you have written it nicely too.. Do PM me when you update next....
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Posted: 14 years ago
dolly... i just found this story, and its very very intriguing i must say

plzz pm me whenever u update next
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Posted: 14 years ago
Plz Plz Dolly For God sake
Update it soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hee hee sorry guys for all the delay
umm i am trying my best to finish this story by next week !!! no promises this time coz whenever i say the word promise i always broke it 🤣
any way on the eve of the amazing world cup win i decided to finish this tory so here's the next part !!!
green is the flashbacks and blue is in present
pls do comment guys n give ur veiws nn criticizm to me its really veryyyyyyy importent lov yaa alll muahs
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Part 3>

(Present)

nupur felt all her courage leave her in that instant..

why was this happening to them?,

where was mayank? , n

samrat was he still'..

she left the question incomplete in her mind, completing it wasn't necessary, the fear of its answer was already scalding her from within.

She felt her blood boil as she saw the ruthless fellow moving towards her.. he was the one responsible for all of this.. he was the one ,because of whom samrat was in this condition.. he was the one because of whom mayank's whole family lived a life of estrangement

He was the one coz of whom she herself had lost more then half of her family..

He was the one who would be the most affected from mayank's dad's software'

Infact looking at him now, no one could have guessed what a venomous snake this handsome exterior hid'

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(flashback)

Samrat moved really swift' within few minutes he was down to where his bug was parked n the next second he was driving away in the direction of the dispensary!!!..

Nupur had always been an idiot..she never wanted heavy medications in her bag.. samrat always hated her for this, nupur hated showing weakness! N now she was suffering because of her stupidness.. why was it so important for her too hide her weakness?? Why couldn't she accept other's help n care when she needed one??? Why did she always wanted to appear strong n independent??

Was all this related to the deaths of her siblings?? Samrat stopped his chain of thoughts right there!! Uday n tamana's deaths have been heart wrenching..

Sometime last year nupur had returned from her holiday trip totally shaken ..

It was like her life had been taken away from her' n just few fragments of her soul held the control of her weak n wounded body!!!

Till date samrat didn't know the specifics of uday's n tam's deaths.. nupur n her mother have never been able to talk abt that time again .. and that was the time when nupur had started behaving strangely .. it was as if she was frustrated because everyone was worrying abt her , trying to care for her..

She has said clearly , she was capable of handling her grief alone!!

No one needed to waste their time on her!!

And that still continued' it was enough .. when nupur came to her senses this time she will have to bear a piece of his mind.. he had had enough from the past year..

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The role of sanjay is played by rahul arora[ranvijay]

{present}

Sanjay tilted his head and observed the girl carefully..she was beautiful and too darn young but he wouldn't have noticed her had it not been for that day last year'sanjay's minions had been successful in tracking down that brute varun sharma(mayank's father).. the one who had started all this nonsense.. he was killed though n yet still his son was able to keep the software a secret from them .in a mere accident some civilians were killed.. it had been in news next day .. n sinse sanjay was mayor of the area he was hard pressed to visi the family of the deaceased. Moreover he had to make sure whether any one of the remaining family of those dead kids knew something abt him or varun's software..

No one did.. no one behaved differently.. the mother kept on crying day in n out ..the way she was shrieking had gave him a headache then ' remembering it now was no better.

He had noticed this girl though. Nupur.. she was the deaceased kid's elder sister. She wasn't crying,wasn't even mourning.. she just looked numb and well kept on giving him a stank eye!!

That!!! That was what appeared strange to him.. she looked suspicious of him n yet she didn't do or say anything.. he didn't gave her much attention then ..

It was wrong obviously .. this girl knew mayank. Varun's son .. she was his key to salvation.. she would be the one who will finally free him from the fear of being exposed for what he was..

And as sanjay carresed the girl's cheeks with his fingers, he was sure this girl would do much more for him, she would quench his thrist.. once he was done with this mayank/R.A.W mess.he would exploit her !!! that would be adventurous and lovely..

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Mayank was disgrauntled beyond measure.. what the hell had just happened??? Why was he so worried about nupur. She was safe.. hopefully.. atleast he could place some trust in that samrat nupu called her best friend. He would make sure nupur is fine. Mayank had no reasons to worry unnecessarily for her. He was at a mission here. His mission being protecting his sister from forces beyond her knowledge. Not even for a second could he divert his attention from gunjan and yet everything in him screamed to go and searh all the dispensaries in 10 km radius for a clur of nupur..

Insane ..irresponsible ..mayank was a senior field officer of R.A.W he had been trained to control his emotions under pressure.. but strange he was unable to do now..

As mayank waited outside gunjan's class for the bell to ring, his fingers twitched again and again , nervousness written clearly on his face .

Mayank thumped his temples.. he had such a headache. And gunjan?? It was almost after 15 years that he was seeing her. Gunjan never new she had a elder brother. She had been too small back then to remember. N now that mayank was here he would make sure that gunji never missed his elder brother. Earlier that day when gunjan had left her house for attending college mayank had visited her place.. he had been afraid that his mother wont belive it was he , she would say he was a hoax. His dad's death must have warned her.

Yet still his heart hammered against his chest , he was about to see his mother after so many years. When he had rung his bell , he wanted to run away.. he was so unprepared . how does one greets his mother he thought was long dead?? What if his mother didn't like the way he looked?? What if his mother hated his new hairstyle or hated him for going in the career which seprated his family so brutally??

What if his mother was dissapionted in him?? This n many more insane thoughts crossed his braing in those few seconds his mother took to open the door.

But when they came face to face everything got erased. For a few minutes bth of them just kept staring at each other.. drinking each other's long forgotten faces n such..

Mayank was sure his mother had recoganised him the moment she saw him. Ofcourse she would his father must have been sending him his pics..

N then mayank moved forward and hugged his mother. Submitting himself to her. His mother was heavenly , still too beautiful , there was aanciet sadness in her eyes because of his father's death but shilpa sharma even carried her grief with an ease.. mayank ;et all his inhibitions dissppear n hugged his mothertightly ..

It was a long afternoon then. Both mother and sone crying and laughing together , seeing old and new photo albums, filling each other on the years they had missed together.. mayank departed his mother;s house with a strange satisfaction in his soul and now he was here to meet his sister.. she would have him always , his mother had told him so many things about her childhood that he had missed and now he would live every moment of his remaining life with her. She was way to important and nupur was a past , a painful one at that. Their meeting last year was crowded with too many painful memories and blood..

He wont think about her any longer . it will be just his sister from now on!!!

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Nupur cringed from the man's touch, it was as if her body was suddenly burning. Every bit of her was doing its best to get rid of the ropes that bpound her to the pole . the ropes cut her flesh deeper. It seemed as if with every move that she made to rid herseld of the boundings, they grew tighter and tighter.

Sanjay seemed to enjoying her pain. It was as if seeing her struggling gave him a certain high. He was sure she was the key to solving all this mess. That boy mayank had banged into their car while running away from his men and instead of asking help from these college students he had forced them to go away leaving him alone. Obviously this was strange and this time sanjay wasn't willing to ignore any strangeness .. so this girl he would use and finish everything that was against him once and for all.

He inched closer to nupur and enjoyed the way her nody grew rigid , then slowly savouring every monment sanjay took out a sharp blade knife from his back pocket and cut a deep gash in nupur's neck..

The next second he heard an angry shout from his back , a searing pain engulfed his head and everything went black !!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
great work dolly!!!!!!!!!!
and thank u 4 FINALY(!!!!) uploading it!!!!!!!!!!!!

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