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Madiha Rashid

@MaddyStilinski

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#31

OMG!!!!😲 Loved It....I'm so glad that u have included SaNu in this...I always wanted Samrat to be the 1st one to meet our Nupur😳...I have to say u'r an amazing writer👏..Do write more😊

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Fiza

@mayurian-artian

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#32

OMG yaaar awesum story do p.m me de nxt tym u update dis is surely a gr8 OS

do cont soon

luv

Fiza

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#33

GOSH!...i thought u guys will be shocked on JD and RV, but u all are laughing😲, LOL..😆🤣, but thank u all for ur appreciations..😊

PART 6

S...JD aur RV??.....i dont believe this!...shoro se batao nupur.

N..samrat kia karo k jan kar, tum jao yahan se..

S..pagal mat bano, batao shoro se..

N..JD aur RV ik dosre ko bht time se jante hain, aur jail main dono miley bhi they, aur kyunki wo dono jail hamari waja se gaye they is liye unhon ne badla liya hai, hamara accident bhi inhon ne karwaya tha, aur us k baad mujhe kidnap kar liya tha, un ko laga k mayank aur gunjan tumhe jail bhijwa deen gey, per aisa hua nahi, lekin phir unhon ne mujhe se drug dealing shoro karwa di, samrat wo her waqt hum pe nazr rakhta hai, abhi bhi koi na koi zarror hoga, please tum jao yahan se..

S..abhi jo they unhain main ne hospital phoncha diya hai..

N..kia??

S...haan wo do aadmi they bahir, chup chup k tumhe dekh rahe they, mujhe laga eve-teasing ka chakr hai, tu unhain hospital phoncha diya..

N..BY God samrat!!...*smiles*...per ab jao yahan se.., JD aur RV janwar hain, unhain pata chal gaya tu mar dale gey tumhain, please jao..

S..haan aur tumhain in janwaron k pas chor jaon?, nupur tum ne bataya ku nahi, its not possible k tumhain 3 saal main ik mauqa nahi mila!

N...mauqa mila tha, lekin wo dono hewr waqt tum logo pe nazr rakhte hain, mayank ka ye accident b unhon ne hi karwaya hai, kyunki main mayank se mine wali thi...tum jao yahan se..

S...thek hai, per hum subha miley gey, aur phir hum gay k barey main sochen gay

N..agey k bare main kia?

S..yehi k tumhain wapis kaise le k jana hai..

N...samrat tum phir se wohi..

S...tommorow morning, airport k pass wale mall main..

N..samrat per wahan tu bht rush hota hai..

S..haan tu achi baat hai, rush main milen gey...

N..tum mano gey nahi, lekin agr mujhe thek laga tu ihi main aaon gi..

S..tum zarror aaon gi!..

Gunajn and mayank attend the meeting the next morning,,

G..acha experince tha na jiju..

M..haan...ummm gunjan mujhe kuch books leni hain, mumbai main nahi mil rahi, main yahan mall se pata karta hon..

G..ok jiju, main wapis hotel ja rahi hoon, lunch pe milte hain..

M..ok...dehan se jana..

G..ok ..*smiles*..bye..

Mayank enters the mall, and goes towards the book section, where he starts finding his desried books when he sees the book pn CONSUMERISM....he couldnt stop smiling, he remebered the scholorship, his mis understanding abt nupur's pregnancy and of course nupur wish of a baby boy ..pranav, he was smiling , he held the book, but he was not alone, he turned sideways and it was nupur holding the book with him...

again both were shocked...

do comment...😊

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pari sharma

@kiarathediva

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

awesome......

pm me next tym....

love this part

pari

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ChocoLatte

@ChocoLatte

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

awesome yaar...plz add me in ur pm list...

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gurpreet

@preety88

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

awesome plsss pm me when u cont

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#37

thank u again for ur support guys...😊

PART 7:

both of them were surprised to see each other so unexpectedly, they were lost in each other's eyes and when suddenly nupur realsied that there will be some one following her,

N...tum yahan..mayank tum ne wada kiya that k peche nahi aao gey!..

M...nupur main..

nupur suddenly realisis that JD's spy was looking at her so she turned her face away from mayank and ran away.

mayank agian was filled with anger, now all his hopes were declining, why was nupur behaving like this?...what happened?...was it that she was no more in love with him, or was it that there was somebdy else in her life, all these thougths were killing him, he wanted answers, but nupur was running away, he was not at all able to understand!...

nupur saw samrat..

N...samrat jao yahan se...JD k log her waqt mera pecha karte rehte hain, abhi b koi pecha kar raha hai..jao..

S..us ko main ne police station phoncha diya hai..

N..kia?..

S..haan, mujhe pata chal gaya that k ye tumhara pecha kar raha hai, main ne mall se ik ghari uthai aur us ki pocket mai daal di,, phir manager ko bulaya aur us ko shop lifting mian police station phoncha diya...simple

N..*smiles unbelievably*...samrat tum kar kiya rahe ho..kal hospital phoncha diya tha, aj police station...BY God!!

S...apni friend ki help kar raha haon, ab chalo, is mall k uper wali lobby main ne book karwa li hai, whan chal k baat jkarte hain..

N...samrat agr koi aur b me peche hua tu?

S..main ne tasali kar li hai, and dont worry JD yahan ziyada tension nahi leta hoga, ye tu delhi hai, wo tu janta b nai hai k hum yahan hain..

they both go to the lobby, and then samrat takes out a note pad..

N..ye kia hai?...parhai likhai shoro karne lage ho?

S..ufff nupur tum abhi b parhai se utna hi darti ho..

N..v funny..kia karna hai in ka?

S...tum mujhe shoro se batao aur min sab kuch note karon ga, then we will plan..

N...samrat main ne yahan mayank ko dekha hai..

S..mujhe pata hai wo yahan hai, wo ik meeting attend karne yahan aya ha, aj subha hi shulkla sir ne mujhe bataya, but dont worry hum thora plan kar k usey sab bata den gey, abhi wo ghuse main ghalat kadam bhi utha sakta hai..

N...hmmm..ok,

nupur tells samrat the whole story, that how she gained consiousness and found RV and JD smiling on her, then when samrat was not punished by mayank and gunjan, the wanted to complete thier revenge by torturing me and then they started drug-dealing through nupur, she had travelled through out india, met all the corrupt and high class people who bought drugs , but she was never allowed o penetrate into the system, she was used as a carrier., but still she can recognize people and once she also spent a night in jail, she was caught while selling drugs and...suddenly a breaking sound...it was probably a vase...

nupur's breath was caught, and so was samrat's..

N...main ne kaha that na ,wo mujhe kabhi akela nahi chorey ga.

the voice sad from behind..

raj ne b kabhi apni simran ko akela chora hai?

IT WAS MAYANK!!...both of them turned and nupur could see the eyes of mayank which had the repentance of 3 years...

samrat could also read mayank's eyes, he looked at both of them, wanted to say something but then he moved towards the exit, he wanted both of them to cover thier distance alone,...he went out and saw that they had forgot to lock the door....he smiled and looked upwards..

S...thank u DUDE!...

he left and locked the door.

and inside the lobby were mayank and nupur standing in front of each other...with a the distance of 3 years, which finally they were about to cover...

do comment..:)

Edited by mehak03 - 14 years ago