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NatluS-Sahiba

@NatluS-Sahiba

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

wow... wow... amazing... esp. samrat's lines... amazing... i wish aisa hi ho... n i wish k wo kisi aur city ja k bi search karen...

samrat's role will be magical then...

CV's should contact u for story-line n dialogues

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

thank u guys..😳,

@natlu...awww...that is so sweet of u..
@sonam..now if nobdy is continuing so i will have to continue...😭, but i really wished that if somebody would have..

PART 3:

samrat immideately booked his ticket for delhi..and he got the ticket of tommorow evening. He then went to gunjan and mayank, who were sitting on a bench and gunjan was cryning whereas mayank was standing still,

S...mayank ,chasmish, chalo yahan se chalte hain..

M...haan..chhalo...ji sk liye aye they wo tu kabhi yahan hamre liye ayi hi nahi..chalo..

samrat looks with deep eyes at mayank..

S..chasmish utho..

G...haan cahlo samrat, cahlo jiju, ik parchaiyi k peche bhag rahe they, aur parchayi tu kabhi hath nahi ati na!

S...parchayi hath nahi ati lekin hamesha sath rehti hai...

M...han lekin sirf roshni main, andherey main tu parchayi b sath nahi rehti..

S...wo parchayi ki majbori hai, andhera us k pehchan chupa deta hai, lekin parchayi sath nahi chorti..andhere main sirf nazr nahi ati..

all three of them look at each other with three different emotions...mayank with a shattered heart...gunjan with despair..and samrat with a hope..

next day..all three of them meet in clg..

S...chasmish , mayank main kuch dino k liye london ja raha hon, mom k tabiyat thek nai hai aur suhanni keh rahi thi k wo mujhe bht yaad kar rahi hain, tu main milne ja raha hoon.

M...ofcourse tumhe jana chaiye, family se barh kar kuch nai hota..

G...wapis kab aao gey?

S...jab apni ghalti sudhaar lon ga tu a jao ga.

samrat left as he could not face them, he knew that a moment or two more with mayank, and mayank will read his plan in his eyes...

Shukla sir enters..

SHUKAL SIR...mohadey mayank aur gunajn..hindustaan k saare clg k teachers ki meeting rakhi hai sarkar ne aur excel ki taraf se ap dono ko jana hai...jayi aur hamare clg ka naam roshan kijiye...

M...sir kaisi meeting..

M...mohadey..hindustan main parhai ko behter kaise banaya jaye, is bare mian..

G...thek hai sir, hum jaye gey...chaley gey na mayank?

M..smiles..ok..sir kahan hai ye meeting..

SHULKA SIR...DELHI..!!

G...thek hai sir..kab hai..

SHUKAL SIR...kal hai aur app dono ko aj sham ko hi jana hai...

M...thek hai , wise bhi ab main ne kismat se larna chor diya hai....dekhte hain kismat ne delhi main mere liye kia rakha hai...

hope u liked it guys..do comment..😊...an if again nobdy will continue then i will update the 4th part...😕

Edited by mehak03 - 14 years ago

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Jessie

@jes_jade

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Yayyy!!!! First one to comment!!!!
Mehak you are awesome..👏
Sorry..I am not a good writer....😳
Fabulous part...⭐️⭐️

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syeisha

@Syeisha_Maini

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

FABULOUS!!!! please please please continue!!! WISH ALL THIS HAPPENS!

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315925

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Awesome...it's awesome....MayUr SaNu...me loving it 😃

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pari sharma

@kiarathediva

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

ohkk plz pm me next tym u update

i m loving it,.....!@#@%@U*

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yashasvini

@Yashh...

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

woowww...........its amazing dear
i loved all the 3 parts yaar 👏

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@Jenny..

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

awesome update

plz pm me whenever u update next part

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

thank u for all ur support guys...it really made my day and boosted my confidence..😊

PART 4:..NUPUR's STORY:

Nupur ran and sat in the bus and went away from maynak, whereas she could clearly read what his eyes were saying to her...but she couldnt help.

Nupur was travelling from the past three years, all over india, , the work which she was assigned demanded travelling, and now she was very used to it, she had travelled through bus, train , road, plane and even ship, but this journey was becoming the longest for her.

She had to leave her life behind, once again!!...but at the same moment she was happy getting a glimpse of her beloved people...nupur takes her diary out and starts writing, this was her only compnion from the past three years, it was her diary which had witnessed everything...she starts writing..

Mayank!!...BY GOD!...aj b utna hi handsome hai, aur rough balon k sath tu aur b cute lag raha tha, aur red color k kapre tu usey waise hi bht suit karte hain...hamari pehli date pe bhi us ne red shirt hi pehni thi...

Gunjan...meri choti si gunajn aj b waisi hi thi, wohi chasma,aur wohi innocence, bilkul b nai badli..ur samrat!..*smiles*...nahi samrat nahi jiju!!...aj b utna hi charming hai aur BY GOD!!..chasma pehney laga hai...heheheeh...per acha lag raha tha, waqai apni chasmish se bht payar karta hai.. aur.....

Suddenly the bus stopped, it was not delhi, the bus's last destination was delhi but it had several stops and at each stop nupur had to complete her assigned work.

All this happened and she kept on completing her work and then reached delhi, almost the next day evening.

The same time when her family..MAYANK, GUNAJN and SAMRAT reached!!..these three travelled in the same plane but didnt see each thier...Afterall God was there watching them..

Nupur reached that prison which had kept her for three years..she entered the home and there was that person sitting with the usuall devilish smile on his face..

WELCOME BACK Mrs NUPUR BHUHASN SHARMA!!..mil ayi apni family se?..kaisa hai tumhara pati, tumhari behn aur tumhare jiju??..bolo??

N...apni gandi zaban se mere ghr walon ka naam mat lo...tumhara kaam ho gaya hai..ye rahe paise...*hands a brief case*

Mujhe tumhari yehi baat tu pasnd hai Mrs Sharma...tum ziyada tang nahi karti...aur kaam pori imandari se karti ho...very good..

N..main tumhari tarif suney nahi ayi hoon..

nupur gets out of the house and the person said from behind.
main ne kaha that na k tum mumbai main nahi reh pao gi!..dekha wapis a gayi!..

nupur runs away with tears ...she was walking on streets...it was dark...and he was crying when she saw a mandir, she entered their and started crying in front of GOD..

N...kyun kar rahe ho mere sath aisa...aisa kaun sa gunahh ho gaya hai...jis ki itni bari saza de rahe ho...teen sallo se meri zindagi maut se b badtar bana di hai..., mujhe mere mayank k pas jana hai bhagwan, mujhe gunajn k pas jana hai, mujhe wapis samrat k sath wohi sari dosti nibhani hai...mujhe merey ghr jana hai ...

TU CHALO NA NUPUR!...a voice said from behind...

suddenly she stopped crying!, there was somebdy behind her, she turned and it was ...IT WAS...SAMRAT!!....the same charming smile but this time accompanied by teary eyes...

do comment..😊

Edited by mehak03 - 14 years ago