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@Jenny..

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

aweome update mehak

do continue soon

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syeisha

@Syeisha_Maini

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

MYSTERY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dhan, dhan dhan!!! Seriosuly tOOOO GOOD!!!! I love the way you thought everything out! please continue ASAP!

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Jessie

@jes_jade

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Mayank!!...BY GOD!...aj b utna hi handsome hai, aur rough balon k sath tu aur b cute lag raha tha, aur red color k kapre tu usey waise hi bht suit karte hain...hamari pehli date pe bhi us ne red shirt hi pehni thi...

so sweet....❤️

& wow mystery!!!!!
loving it..
continue soon...
& thanks for the pm..😃

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ruchi

@--Ruchi--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

awesome mahek..i really want this to happen in MJHT...
i am loving it plz PM me next time when u update 👏 😳

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

dear..1st of all i was not knowing it was an ff.........aall the parts were brillaint..loved it to the core..pls continue soon..............

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

awww...thank u guys... i am honoured...😳

PART 5:

N...samrat!....

she was stunned to see him, and samrat was standing with all the satisfaction in his eyes, finally seeing a dream into reality..seeing nupur, he opened his arms to get a hug from his friend who hAd been away for three years...and nupur who was so broken and weak at the moment that she immedietely rushed towards her friend for support....nupur hugged samrat and she was crying like a child, and samrat on the other hand couldnt control himself, he himself was over-whelemd, finally nupur controlling herself and they drew apart, samrat wiping his tears..

N...*in a choking voice*..hmmm...*takes off his glasses*..tu chasma pehna shoro kar diya hai...

S...haan...chasmish ka asr ho gaya hai..

nupur wipes his glasses with her dupptta and puts them on samrat, samrat holds her hands and gently caresses them..

N...jab b mujhe dost ki sab se ziyada zararat hoti hai, hamesha a jate ho!

S..kia karon ana hi parta hai...waise b kia dialogue hai wo, dosti ki hai tu nibhani tu pare gi na

both of them laugh with tears flowing..

S..kahan chali gayi thi nupur?..ik bar b hamari yaad nai ayi

nupur's smile vanished and she suddenly r all the events of three years started moving inf front of her eyes, she couldnt answer..

S..per koi baat nai, ab chalo ghr chalte hain...

nupur didnt moved..

S...chalo nupr...

N..main nahi ja sakti samrat..main ab tum sab k laiq nahi rahi..

S..pagal ho gai ho?..kia bol rahi ho?..chalo..

N..tum samjh nahi rahe ho...tum jao yahan se,

S..jab tak jawab nahi do gi main nahin jaon ga!

N...main nahi chal sakti samrat!

S...kyun??

N..kyunki main DRUG-DEALING karti hoon!!..

S...kia??...d..ddrug dealing?

N..haan!..ab sun liya hai tu jao yahan se!!

S..nahin, tum..nupur...tum kia keh rahi ho!

N..sach keh rahi hoon samrat, ab plz jao, meri liye zindagi aur mushkil mat baonao, ab main main purnai zindagi kabhi ji nai sakti, plz jao..

S...tum se ye sab kaun karwata hai.?

N..samrat tum ku samajh nai rahe ho !..jao yahan se..

S..nupur tum janti ho main nahin jaon ga...agr tum nahin baato gi tu main khud pata karwa lon ga, jaise tumhain dhoond liya hai, ye b dhoond lon ga..

samrat moves towards the exit..

N.. batai hoon..

S..bolo..kaun hai?

N...devraj...JD

S...JD!...wo wo politician..us ki itni himmat!...main usey..

N...wo akela nahi hai..

S..kaun hai us k sath?

N...RUN VIJAY!!..

do comment!! 😊

Edited by mehak03 - 14 years ago

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ruchi

@--Ruchi--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

OMG ye sare villens milkar nups se kya karwa rhe hai 😆
drug dealing ...actually good track....sorry for my *LOL* 😉
and what about mayank...kya hoga ab uska 😔

do cont soon...i want to mayank part soon