Our MAYUR Story!(mayurians only)updated pg.8+NOTE

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Auroni

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

Plz if anyone continue d story pllzzzz pm me. Im a diehard artian/mayurian.

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

thn mayank came to nupur and npur and mayank share a cute eyelock which was disturbed by traffic in their surrounding both were shocked to see their lives in front of other
the love forwhich they were searching for long the one for whom they have spend teary nyts and restless sleeep

tears starts flowing from their eye suddenly it started raining
mayank came forward so as to confirm bye touching her
when he touched her
m: nupur tum
N: maayank tum
both hugged each other tightiy

Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon
Kya yeh sab ko hota hai

{ maaynk was really happy his joyful tears wee reflecting it he hugged nupur as tightly as he culd to never leave her again in any part of lfe}

Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab batein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua

{ nupur was lost in hs arms frgettng the world forgettng all others becoz he was here with her the life the soul of nupur}

M: tum kaha thi aur mjhe btaya kyu nh tumhe pta hai mene ye teen saal kaise guzare hai

N: aur tum ne mjhe dhundha kyu nhe

both had much to talk much to do

precap? pehli baar mohaabbaat sequence

any one add other wise i can add tht one with full romance

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aswathy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

by GOD....pls continue soon dear,................................................................................awesome update dear

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

she said amazing guyS...so thanku 2 😆

plz continue the romatic part ...going too gud

Edited by drfizaahmed - 15 years ago

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#55

okie mee will cont after one hour

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

there had been a distaance of years between mayank nupur
they wanted to vanish all their dooriyan now
they wanted to be one soul again
mayank and nupur were standing in the middle of the road
didnt realized people all around screaming them to side off
man: oye laila majnu side ho ke romance karo
this brought mayur back to senses
nuppur blushed but far more she was happiest person not her only but both as both get their lives back
their prayer worked out
sooon it started raining
mayank and nupur hi them self under cottage
he lit fire
nupur was drying her hair
maayank was gazing her
m: nupur aj kitne saalo baad tmhare in bheege baalon aur is kabhi na khtam hone wali khubsurti ko dekh raha hu
a lone tear fall from mayanks eye
nupur went to him and wipe of tear
n: maayank ab ye aansu kis liye
m: nupur tum nhe jaanti me ne tumhe kitna miss kiya.har lamha kitnam ushkil hogya tha.. pta ha i me kehne ko zina tha par ekzinda laash se kam na tha
N: shh mayank ab hum jab saath hai to ye dooriyo wali bt nhe ma ab un 3 saalk i khofnaak yado ko bhulana chati hu
M: me bih
both hugged each other tightly forgetting their dark past of three alone years

Thode bheege bheege se thode nam hai hum,
Kal se soye voye bhi to kam hai hum.

(mayank cupped her face kiss her on forehead thn on nose thn on ear thn on eyes thn he was forwarding towards lip but nupur shyed away and went to corner)

Thode bheege bheege se thode nam hai hum,
Kal se soye voye bhi to kam hai hum.
Dil ne kaisi harkat ki hai,
Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai,
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai,
Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai,
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai'

(nupur was standing at corner smiling and blushigng.mayank came from back hugged her on side and ran his finger through her neck .creating tingling sensation to her .she turned around ..mayank carried her in his strong arm .nupur was feeling so comfortable afer 3 long yrs)

Aankhein doobi doobi si surmayee madham,
Jheelen paani paani hai bass tum aur hum,
Hmmm baat badi hairat ki hai,
[Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai,
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai

( mayank make her lay on bushes and now he was on top of her)

Hmmm khawab ke bhoj se, kapkapati hui,
Halki palkein teri yaad aata hai sab,
Tujhe gudgudana' satana yuhi sote hue,
Gaal pe teepna' meechna bewajah besabab.

(he was giving sensation to her both were now lost in each other sooooooon their all loneliness vanished)

Yaad hai peepal ke jiske ghane saaye the,
Hum ne gilehri jhoothe matter khaaye the,
Yeh barqat unn hazrat ki hai.

Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai,
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki ha
Hooo..hoooo''.hoooo'

hope u all liked my this update

Edited by sizzlingsis - 15 years ago

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Kiran

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

ummm i liked it, but i just want to say, if everyone was supposed to contribute, u shouldn't be putting precaps, everyone should be able to add whatever parts/twists they want. if u you want to write it by yourself then make a ff. and there isn't any sajan in this.

Edited by KiranSD1 - 15 years ago

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#58

ur idea is nyc to have ff
but i already have 5 pending ff and one o gallery so cant do that

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sehrish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#59

koi aur bhi to cont karo yr

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

#60

THE NEXT MORNING

Nupur in a deep sleep ...n probably after a long time a peaceful one….her head was lying on her husband's shoulder….her hand was grasping his shirt's corner so tightly as if she is still afraid of losing him

Mayank woke up …with a smile he lookd at the most beautiful lady in his life…he gently touchd her checks…..she open her eyes

Nupur with a blush looked at him..n get lost n his eyes….suddenly both of thm realizd where thy r….thy collect thmself….n start walking towards mayank car n start thr journey towards Maynak's home which finally today will b thr home

AT HOUSE

Nupur was amazed to c the house ..it was the most beautiful house she can ever imagine…she went towards the door n was about to open it whn…she was surprised 2c a peacock was carved all over the door….

Nupur: peacock ..on the door…is k beechay koi tu wajha hogi ….tu Mr. Mayank Sharma yeah kis liyan

Maynk with a smile….hm Mrs. Sharma..kya hai k…he stand beside hr an point towards bth of thm saying …MayUr…mayank n nupur…

Nupur…hayyyyyy…meray ddlj k Raj..BY GOD

Bth laughtd n thn she opnd the door ..he was abt to enter whn again nupur stopd hm

Mayank : ab kya hai Nupur

Nupur…ek min….frstly Ur right foot in ….actually our right foot …together

Mayank: Meri filmi biwi…chaliy

Finally thy entered…Nupur was amazed to see the house…each n every little thng was just the way she has always told hm tht v'll have….

Nupur: finally HUMARA GHAR…n a tear dropd 4m hr eye

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i dont know y i did the Mayur thng..dnt get mad at me 4 tht🤔

Edited by drfizaahmed - 15 years ago