Our MAYUR Story!(mayurians only)updated pg.8+NOTE

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey mayurians.
i was just thinkng maybe we should write our own mayur ending .
though we will fight to get nups bak i thought maybe we should just write our own mayur ending.
i'll start and the next person can cont . you can caont in whichever way you want. it is upto you.
NOTE: Sajanians if you r participating please write only mayur parts or ignore this post.
here it goes.......................

after accident
5 yrs later
Nupur is doing aarti . She prays from the depth of her heart. A little girl comes running to her.
Gril: Mummy chalo na mujhe skool jana hai.
it wasnt school but just a playhome but still little Arti likes to call her playhome her skool. nupur smiles at Arti childishness.
N: Chalo.

Nupur drops Arti at school. as Arti gets out of the car she turns around and asks.
A: mummy mere daddy kaun hai?
Nupur was taken abak. she hated answering anything related to HIM.

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okay i started it so lets cont.
Edited by Lekha.Mayur4eva - 15 years ago

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sreevijayan thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great start dear....wanna read more..pls continue..................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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guys.
you hav to cont the way u want it.
so go on.
lets all make this story together.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oo i like this..
let me continue
Arti : Mommy!!!
Nupur quickly snapped out of her thoughts and realized that they were at school and the bell had rung
Nupur : Chalo beta.. You don't want to be late. After school we'll get some ice cream and go to a movie.
Arti : Ok Mommy... Bye
Arti kisses Nupur goodbye and heads off.
Nupur turns around and starts walking towards the car. But she's feeling really lost. That one question from Arti really pierced through her heart.
Before starting the car
Nupur asks herself : Why did this happen to us?
And with tears in her eyes, she pulls away.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great start dear
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nupur returns back home.
she sees d table-evrything is just messed up.nupur goes up 2 it n begins 2 rummage thru d stuffs 2 find her purse.she gets it n clears d table.

she looks around d room 2 see whether everything is tidy or not.during d past 5 years, every single habit of mayank had been incorporated in her-his punctuality n all.she wished she cud tell her daughter bout her father,but she couldn't.
suddenly she glanced at her wardrobe-wht was dat paper-???
MAYAPARI.her favourite.why?it ws mayank's first gift 2 her.he had pasted their snaps over bolly stars pics..a particular aamir-kajol fanna pose was her fav.she felt her eyes moisten.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hope we get a good plot,unlike d cvs....i m trying fr another one.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Tears were streaming down from Nupur's eyes now.

Mayank
That one name meant everything to her. That one name was her heart. That one name was her life.
She started to dig into the wadrobe. After a while, she finally found what she was looking for.
Her wedding picture.
Slowly Nupur sat down on her bed without breaking any contact with the frame. She looked at herself in the picture. She was dressed very elegantly in red and had a great big smile glowing on her face.
A small smile creeped up onto Nupur's face as she held the frame close to her.
Her eyes moved across the picture onto him.
She suddenly felt her heart ache. It was unbearable.
Nupur closed her eyes. She remembered all her moments with Mayank. Their first meet, their confession, their marriage, their reconcilation.
She remembered how Mayank had announced she would be going along with him to USA.
And then Nupur remembered that one day. That day everything fell apart. That day they had never expected.
Unable to control the pain, she started crying, holding the wedding frame close to her heart.
At that same moment, Mayank was sitting in his classroom, looking at the locket. He held it tight in his hand as tears also streamed down his eyes.
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Edited by supercool3 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I want to continue!!!

Nupur starts cleaning up the big mess. But Mayanak keeps staying on her mind. She starts hearing the audio version of all her memories with Mayank. Finally she can't take it and drops down, cuddling up, she says "If only i didn't lose you on that day! If only you could come back."

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Mayank looks at the locket n rember nupurs words...yeah dil is dil k pass rahy ga tu yeah pyar hamesha zinda rahy ga.......He looks around the house n says ' look nupr everythng is just the way u always wishd 4..same shafon curtins...39 inchs TV so tht u can enjoy srks movies evrythng is the same ......bs..........he fall on hs knees.. tears drop 4m hs eyes .....Ur nt here...i wish i can change tht 1 day of life..i wish ur here with me..i wish

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