Our MAYUR Story!(mayurians only)updated pg.8+NOTE - Page 9

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wind was blowing on her face , he duppatta flying n the air and Arti tryin to catch it . She feels her throat whole dry and.......Obviously the inquisitive so called detective husband of hers demanded a answer from her. Nupur just kept silence and could not even look into his eyes . Mayank gently held her by the shoulder pulled her a bit closer and lifted her chin up"Nupur", tears were already there in his eyes ans she couldnt bear it. She hugged him tightlytears flowing out of her eyes " i'm so sorry Mayank mene tumko tumhaari beti beti se door rakha.........................."and she told him every thin she remembered .. he was as much stunned he repeated , "Meri beti ?" "Haan Mayu our beti ".And that was all he wanted to hear.

Sorry people i didn't want Arti actually to be their daughter but .. i thought that some how their wouldnt be any track without her so....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
omg lovely update
we can make arti nups adopted daughter as she is around 2 to 3 years and the story is going 5 years ahead ............so it can be like nups was alone and thus she adopted arti.......this will be quite acceptible to mayu too..............
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sneha
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Posted: 15 years ago
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With tears in his eyes..sum of joy …….finding his inner wish got true..sum of sorrow …feeling if thy would have been together…..thy have enjoyd tht happiness together

He was looking at her……….she got nupur's dupata n was running towards them…..suddenly he broke the hug n went towards Arti

His sudden reaction made Nupur so worried

Mayank took arti in his arms…he smiled n hugged her.. Arti ..while looking towards Nupur..reward of my ibadat(love)

Arti : mjhy chory ….mein ap ki biwi hoon kya..jo asay pakar liya

Mayank…cant just stop laughing: OMG..ab tu only bhagvan can save me…..ek Nupur cum thi jo doosri bhi agai…By GOD

Arti: ap kaun hai ….mama k frnd?

Mayank…hmmm who bhi hoon….pr ap se ek baat kahoon..mein ap ka papa bhi hoon..

Arti: surprisingly…hain? Wht? Mama tu kahti thi he is very far frm us

Mayank: he lookd towards Nupur with his mosit eyes…..han buhat dor chala gaya tha

But ab mein agaya hoon aur hum sab sath mein he rahy gay

Arti:she look towards him….checkd him frm up 2 down ..hmmm im nt sure ab meray dad hoo

Mayank: who kyun

Arti: mein tu itni cool hon aur ap…

Mayank: smiled n said woh tum apni ma jasi ho na isliyan

Arti: but ap ke aur meri simle ek chasi hai…she showd him her dimples

N han no ma and papa plz…shes my cool mom n ur dad…sounds better na

He cant stop his tears n even cant stop laughing at wht she is saying…..she is so naughty n bubbly just the way her mom is……n thts wht he loves the most

Nupur: hello..ap dono ke baatein khatam hogai hoon tu…main bhi hoo yaha

Mayank: acha …ohh … I forget

Nupur: han …buhat achay

Mayank: aur nhi tu kya…dkho Nupur adaat dal lo ….aj se tum second class citizen hogai hoo..frst class tu meri beti hai…hain na Arti…they share a high five

Nupur: Mayank mein tum ko choro gi ni….she rise her hand to beat him bt he grab it….n hold her close to hm

He hugged bth of thm n kissed on nupurs forehead……..

Aj im really feeling the happiest n the most content person on this whole earth

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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
awesome update dear...a picture perfect moment.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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The returned home and for the first time in those five years Mayank was actually feeling happy and contented. He had never felt full satisfaction , his whole family back togather.
"Nupur !!!"
"aayee Mayank ek min .."
She quickly came in the room from wher Mayank was calling her with utmost satisfaction but.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
thanx all
cool update ...bt?????????😕 update soon
drfizaahmed thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87
plz continue....i cant take ths "but" more
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
pebo....plz atlest even in one linr...tell wht is this "BUT"..positve or negative...so long v havent continued the story

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