Our MAYUR Story!(mayurians only)updated pg.8+NOTE

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capricornFA

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

hey al of u had a great work more better n even more more better den cvs

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

y nobody is intrestd in continuing yr...

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Guys im nt writing a sajan track bt the way I want story it demands sajan 2 b in co operatd…if any1 of u thnks it shud'nt b like tht..i can edited n v'll re-do it.. so plz let me know

Nupur:; so if mayank is alive y did the hospital people lie..n if he is ..y on ths earth he didnt try 2 find me....i even went to our home nobody was thr even at sami house nobody was available......

wht if he do nt wana find me...no no....tu kya bol rahi hai Mayank asa nhi ....bt ........awww mera deemagh karab hojay ga

I need 2 find out whts going....i'll surely go 2 the hospital 2 findout..who was tht lady ..maybe she knows sumthng

At excel college

Sami's mom: Mayank tm ny samart ko kahin dkha

Mayank: no ma'am ..i haven't n I dnt know..excuse me

Sami's mom: yeah smarat bhi na pata nhi kis duniya mein rahta hai.. us larki k is ke life se janay k bad I thought tht he'll settle down in sum time bt samart tu khud ko he mujrim manta hai…..bt atleast she isn't part of hr life any more

Nupur (at the hospital) hey I want sum information regarding an accident tht happen 5 yrs back …plz can u help me.

Nurse: yes ma'am …the administration depart can they have all the info abt every pateient

Nupur with admin person: plz sir plz help I really wana know who bring me here whn I was injured…it's the only way I can know abt my family plz sir plz

Admin person: ok ok ma'am u need 2 wait …I'll find ur admison form…..(after sumtime he returns) … I can't find much bt the signature at ur form is of sum MRS Shergill

At excel college

Sami's mom Flash back

Sami: on call: hey mom I m returning ur cheque I don't need it now…..i have my world back wth me now..MY BETER HALF with me….(while looking at the ring he bought 4 gunjun)

Sami's mom: bt son u don't need 2..n by better half wht do u mean…u r marryng sum1..sami ans me……..

(Call drops) I need 2 go 2 india..yeah larka apni life spoil krk hi rahy ga..the way suhani was talking tht grl doent seems 2 b of shergil std

Forward 2 post accident at hospital

Sami's mom: at Nupur…she saw her mangal sutar ( I hope I spelld it right any ways)

Ohh..tu yeah hai sami's better half…

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Aliya Singh Kapoor

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

omg interesting turn

please some one continue

ill try to write further tomorrow

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-RS-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

idea was really good but some points i would like to mention

1.bringing a child into the story makes mayur too much for their age and in such accidents pregancy doesnot sustain.

2.before the season 2 has started nupur tells samrat that there is no gud news so no chance of pregancy and a child.

3.nupur becoming serious ,dull or similar to mayank will make the show boring .we must have nupur bubbly,outspoken,loving and cute similar to season 1.

gunjan in season 2 tells that she had not seen her for the last time,it means hospitakl people has mistaken on nupur's death and gave her belongings to gunjan and mayank and they accepted it without thinking twice abt dead body etc.so nupur cannot get back to consciousness after mayur left would be inappropriate.memory loss is most suited i feel.

actually nupur is the one who fell far from all.so she falls down into valley and doctors will come to decision that she would have died falling into the valley and will give her belongings to gunjan and mayank.but nupur will be saved by someone and will be taken care of them as a family member with utmostlove and care.that family lives in a small town from which nirbhay has come.he have seen nupur 2-3 times there so he stares at her photograph.since he is not that comfortable with mayank he doesnot converse with mayank abt nupur.

later nupur comes to mumbai and stays with nirbhay instead of staying alone in big city.sayank,gunjan sees her,knows that she forgot her past.but by the time mayank was abt to tell truth to nupur,her family members decide to get nupur married.All the gang(old+new )ones somehow convince nupur's family and get mayur married once again.

This time we can have all the formalities of marriage,good song sequences,family involvement of nupur as well as mayank's as we did not see all this previously.it would be great fun if they add comic elements properly.mayur will start new life.their story concentrates on post marrige love.post maarriage love stories are very successfull on t.v these days example-sasural genda phool,yeh rishta kya kehlata hai,pavitra rishta etc .there's lot of scope.though mayank knows nupur ,nupur doesnot.so they can show adjustments,cute nokh,romance of mayurish type.mayank will try to make her remember her past etc and finally nupur recovers .her recovery can be planned in a very excited way .

i request u all to minus the child and tragedy part of nupur becoming serious,thinking mayank has dies etc bcoz it would makethe show much more dragging,dull and serious..

Edited by shantip91 - 15 years ago

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..pebo..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

guys i just decided I DIDNT want arti , coz it wuld just drag and as shantip91 said , i would no prefer another baby track so i supposedly put nupur as her babysitter and her maybe thats her job.
I decided to see this for myself . i mean how can mayu , my mayu be practically aalive when the doc told me , he had just found me ! i was waiting desperately for dayafter to come. My unluck , it is a holiday for some stupid science project for the senior classes. urgghh! Now science also made me remind of him !!!oh god! anyway i decided to stroll past , mybe i would see him dont be im practical nupur but my heart pulled me there and as soon as i reached there to his car speeding away ................

Edited by ..pebo.. - 15 years ago

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Aliya Singh Kapoor

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

guys i also have the same thing to say

but we can do one thing.......................

arti is nups adopted child...........just b'coz she was alone and wanted someone in her life and also that arti is in play house so she is not more that 2 or 3 and it's 5 years after accident

and it was shown that mayu and gunji had left with nups belongings so it can be done that she gained conciousness but that sam's mom thing can be ruled out .........................

so guys don minus the kiddy as she can play a major role to bring back bubbly nups as she herself is bubbly ......................... and nups need to be a bit serious for sometimes as till now she din know that mayu was alive .............. but now she can be back

what do you think ????