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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
Ummm guys. Like really there is no point in complaining how this story is going, go make a different story, let people be in peace.

MY PART!!!!
Nupur gets dejected after returning from the hospital. She could find no information. Then she thinks for a sec, and smacks herself on the head!!!! "By god! How did i believe my beti had seen Mayank!!! Pagaliy! didn't you watch bhoothnath!!!! Chote Bache can see ghosts!!! By God! The glow on her face fades. I guess that means Mayank is watching over me, and our child :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i will cont


thn nupur go into deep sleep

new morning
mayank was driving to excel
on da way he saw al day fighting with aauto wala
her voice was same as of nupur but mayank ignored her and proceed in to the way
his and nupur cars were one after other
both wee feeling each others presence
but thn both cars struck in traffic jam

mayank asked the officer when road will open
he said for two days road will b block

mayank: ab kiya hoga


guys now its tym for mayur meeting
so cont

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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
awesome part dear...some1 plss continue.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i summarised the entire thing and so here it is.
NOTE: Sajanians if you r participating please write only mayur parts or ignore this post.
Arti is an added character to this story who is Nupur's adopted daughter.
here it goes.......................

after accident
5 yrs later
Nupur is doing aarti . She prays from the depth of her heart. A little girl comes running to her.
Gril: Mummy chalo na mujhe skool jana hai.
it wasnt school but just a playhome but still little Arti likes to call her playhome her skool. nupur smiles at Arti childishness.
N: Chalo.

Nupur drops Arti at school. as Arti gets out of the car she turns around and asks.
A: mummy mere daddy kaun hai?
Nupur was taken abak. she hated answering anything related to HIM.

Arti : Mommy!!!
Nupur quickly snapped out of her thoughts and realized that they were at school and the bell had rung
Nupur : Chalo beta.. You don't want to be late. After school we'll get some ice cream and go to a movie.
Arti : Ok Mommy... Bye
Arti kisses Nupur goodbye and heads off.
Nupur turns around and starts walking towards the car. But she's feeling really lost. That one question from Arti really pierced through her heart.
Before starting the car
Nupur asks herself : Why did this happen to us?
And with tears in her eyes, she pulls away.

nupur returns back home.
she sees d table-evrything is just messed up.nupur goes up 2 it n begins 2 rummage thru d stuffs 2 find her purse.she gets it n clears d table.

she looks around d room 2 see whether everything is tidy or not.during d past 5 years, every single habit of mayank had been incorporated in her-his punctuality n all.she wished she cud tell her daughter bout her father,but she couldn't.
suddenly she glanced at her wardrobe-wht was dat paper-???
MAYAPARI.her favourite.why?it ws mayank's first gift 2 her.he had pasted their snaps over bolly stars pics..a particular aamir-kajol fanna pose was her fav.she felt her eyes moisten.

Tears were streaming down from Nupur's eyes now.

Mayank
That one name meant everything to her. That one name was her heart. That one name was her life.
She started to dig into the wadrobe. After a while, she finally found what she was looking for.
Her wedding picture.
Slowly Nupur sat down on her bed without breaking any contact with the frame. She looked at herself in the picture. She was dressed very elegantly in red and had a great big smile glowing on her face.
A small smile creeped up onto Nupur's face as she held the frame close to her.
Her eyes moved across the picture onto him.
She suddenly felt her heart ache. It was unbearable.
Nupur closed her eyes. She remembered all her moments with Mayank. Their first meet, their confession, their marriage, their reconcilation.
She remembered how Mayank had announced she would be going along with him to USA.
And then Nupur remembered that one day. That day everything fell apart. That day they had never expected.
Unable to control the pain, she started crying, holding the wedding frame close to her heart.
At that same moment, Mayank was sitting in his classroom, looking at the locket. He held it tight in his hand as tears also streamed down his eyes.

Nupur starts cleaning up the big mess. But Mayanak keeps staying on her mind. She starts hearing the audio version of all her memories with Mayank. Finally she can't take it and drops down, cuddling up, she says "If only i didn't lose you on that day! If only you could come back."

Mayank looks at the locket n rember nupurs words...yeah dil is dil k pass rahy ga tu yeah pyar hamesha zinda rahy ga.......He looks around the house n says ' look nupr everythng is just the way u always wishd 4..same shafon curtins...39 inchs TV so tht u can enjoy srks movies evrythng is the same ......bs..........he fall on hs knees.. tears drop 4m hs eyes .....Ur nt here...i wish i can change tht 1 day of life..i wish ur here with me..i wish

Mayank sat down on the couch and was in deep thoughts about Nupur.
At that time, he barely had an identity and Nupur's father had never accepted their marriage. There were many struggles he had faced along with Nupur afterwards. But he was able to fight against it because he had her by his side. She was his backbone, his support. Without her, nothing would've been possible.
And now that he has everything, he feels very lonely. This was their dream, her dream.
How can he enjoy this without her?
Nupur looked at the time and realized she had to go to Arti's school. She quickly got up and got ready. The car was parked outside and Nupur got in and drove towards the school.
She was really deep in thought that she wasn't paying attention to the road.
She snapped out when she finally realized a truck was coming in the opposite direction and she had to make a sudden turn to avoid colliding with it.
The car landed safely on the side of the road. Tha truck zoomed past honking at her.
Nupur sat inside without moving. She was shocked at what had just happened. Tears streamed down from her eyes again. She was partially relieved that she was safe but another thought crossed her mind.
She asked herself : Why was it only me?

mayu got into his car
still telling god
M" plzz mujhe nupur ke pass pahuncha do........... nahi jeena mujhe uske bina
he was driving his car and he drove past arti's school
at that very moment nupur was talking to another mother and all that mayu could see was nup's back
mayu just could see arti properly
arti was waving to everyone who was passing by her car
as mayu's car passed by nups car
arti waved at him too
mayu smiled and waved back to her and drove away ............
just then nupur turned and sat inside the car
arti was still waving at everyone
N: kise bye kar rahi ho arti
A: maa sabko
N: achcha kiskisko bye kiya ?
A: ek uncle mujhe bhi bye kiya pata hai...............
N: achcha......? aur kisne tumhe bye kiya?
arti and nups chatted their way away .......................
At home
nups had forgotten to hide the photo
Arti just rushed into the bedroom and started to look through all the scattered stuffs and suddenly spotted the picture
she picked it up
A: mamma........... mamma
nupur rushed in
N: kya hua? gir gayi ......... kahan laga? kya hua?
A: nahi mamma ............... yeh uncle............ yeh uncle ne mujhe bye kiya aaj................ aap inhe jaanti ho? aap is photo mein kaise ho? bolo na mamma............
nupur was shocked on hearing this and was just standing still ....................
A: mamma .................
nupur came back to senses
N: she knelt down
N: beta tumne is uncle ko kahan dekha tha?
A: school ke bahar.......... pata hai uncle ne mujhe bye bhi kiya..............
Nupur to herself
N: toh mayank zinda hai................ aur isi sheher mein hai ......................... bhagwan ji us accident ke baad maine aapse kuch nahi manga hai par aaj mang rahi hoon please mujhe mere mayank se milwa dijiye........please ............

MAYANK
smiling n driving ..hmm nupur kitni pyari larki thi na woh jo mjhy wave ker rahi thi...just like u..u know wht i didnt told u bt i always wantd a girl...just like u bubly full of life beautiful adorable.....aur jo itni baatein kery k tumhara sir kah jay ..so tht u get to know tm mjhy kitna iiritate krti hooo (with a naughty smile)
NUPUR(mayank's imagination) acha tu mein tum ko irritate krti hn..thk jao....... i m leaving
MAYNK....breaks .......NUPURRRRRRRRRRRR NO
he looks around ...n realize she is'nt here with hm

Nupur... (sits on hr knees)..wht Maynk..Maynk is alive asa kasay hosakta hai..how it can be....arti is kid us ny dkhny mein galti ke hogi.....pr By GoD nupur tu yeah kyun bhol jati hai k woh MAYNK ke beti hai galti tu ker hi nhi sakti.....wh nazar ke bht taaz hai...so really is maynk alive.......bt
FLASHBACK back 2 hopital
Nupur become concious...: mayank gunjun
Nurse: doc doc she is back....doc arrivd n said after 2 wks ur back 2 concious
Nupu: . where is my hausband my sis n my frnd
doc. i dnt know a lady brought u here n said nobody is with u..it was an horible accident all died
NUpur: kya ...asa nhi hosakta Mayank mjhy chor k nhi ja sakta...nhi he promised me..nhi gunjun mein us ko nhi bacha pai...no its nt posible
plz i wana c thm plz mayankkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
doc: u cant thy r nt here..
Nupur: wht i wana c thm mjhy un k pass jana hai
she become out of cntrol n faints

Nupur:; so if mayank is alive y did the hospital people lie..n if he is ..y on ths earth he didnt try 2 find me....i even went to our home nobody was thr even at sami house nobody was available......

wht if he do nt wana find me...no no....tu kya bol rahi hai Mayank asa nhi ....bt ........awww mera deemagh karab hojay ga

I need 2 find out whts going....i'll surely go 2 the hospital 2 findout..who was tht lady ..maybe she knows sumthng

At excel college

Sami's mom: Mayank tm ny samart ko kahin dkha

Mayank: no ma'am ..i haven't n I dnt know..excuse me

Sami's mom: yeah smarat bhi na pata nhi kis duniya mein rahta hai.. us larki k is ke life se janay k bad I thought tht he'll settle down in sum time bt samart tu khud ko he mujrim manta hai…..bt atleast she isn't part of hr life any more

Nupur (at the hospital) hey I want sum information regarding an accident tht happen 5 yrs back …plz can u help me.

Nurse: yes ma'am …the administration depart can they have all the info abt every pateient

Nupur with admin person: plz sir plz help I really wana know who bring me here whn I was injured…it's the only way I can know abt my family plz sir plz

Admin person: ok ok ma'am u need 2 wait …I'll find ur admison form…..(after sumtime he returns) … I can't find much bt the signature at ur form is of sum MRS Shergill

At excel college

Sami's mom Flash back

Sami: on call: hey mom I m returning ur cheque I don't need it now…..i have my world back wth me now..MY BETER HALF with me….(while looking at the ring he bought 4 gunjun)

Sami's mom: bt son u don't need 2..n by better half wht do u mean…u r marryng sum1..sami ans me……..

(Call drops) I need 2 go 2 india..yeah larka apni life spoil krk hi rahy ga..the way suhani was talking tht grl doent seems 2 b of shergil std

Forward 2 post accident at hospital

Sami's mom: at Nupur…she saw her mangal sutar ( I hope I spelld it right any ways)

Ohh..tu yeah hai sami's better half…


Nupur gets dejected after returning from the hospital. She could find no information. Then she thinks for a sec, and smacks herself on the head!!!! "By god! How did i believe my beti had seen Mayank!!! Pagaliy! didn't you watch bhoothnath!!!! Chote Bache can see ghosts!!! By God! The glow on her face fades. I guess that means Mayank is watching over me, and our child :)


thn nupur go into deep sleep

new morning
mayank was driving to excel
on da way he saw al day fighting with aauto wala
her voice was same as of nupur but mayank ignored her and proceed in to the way
his and nupur cars were one after other
both wee feeling each others presence
but thn both cars struck in traffic jam

mayank asked the officer when road will open
he said for two days road will b block

mayank: ab kiya hoga

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thats how far it has got.

some of guys didnt want mayur's child so soon in the story or a baby track so let me make one thing clear. Arti is adopted . she is 7 yrs old.

another thing.

just because sam's mom is involved dont write sajan scenes please stick to mayur and only mayur.

thank you

Lekha









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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
LEKHA,it would be nice if we put the age of arti to 3-4 years.a small cute loving girl.after nupur recovery from accident and mayank,gunjan left her,she stays with a family.nupur considers arti mother as her sister.some mishappenings to arti's family which will make nupur take care of that child as a mother.
after mayur meeting ,mayank seeing arti he feels that nupur was married again to somebody bcoz before the accident there was no news that nupur was pregnant and even mayank told that nupur medical certificates were also clear.nupur also misunderstands that mayank has forgotten her and has a new girl in his life,ria.both will have wrong assumptions and finally truth will be out.some mayur-arti scenes finally happy ending.
Edited by shantip91 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46

thank God mayuarians r back....sum1 plz right abt thy r frst meeting as im nt good at writng passion,...plz continue

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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
seems like i missed a lot. ok lemme try continuing
Mayank got back into his car and was thinking about what to do next. Nupur snapped out of her thoughts and was wondering about what was happening at front.
She decided to get down and check for herself. Mayank was so irritated with the traffic. He plans to turn his car around and find another route.
Nupur started walking up and passed Mayank's car. She went up and asked what the situation was and why there was a traffic jam. She was told that the road is blocked for two days.
Not knowing what to do, she took few steps back and hit Mayank's car. Without even turning around, she motioned her hand at Mayank apologizing for bumping into his car. She was feeling a bit jittery inside. Her heart started pounding. Nupur put one hand on her forehead and tried to figure out what was happening to her. She turned to go back to her car and as she did that, the wind blew onto her as her dupatta slightly covered her face.
Mayank was on his phone and hadn't noticed what was going on. By the time he put his phone down, he had seen some girl (Nupur) walk past his car, but he wasn't able to see her face. But her felt some uncertain feeling about this girl. Though he hadn't seen her face, it felt as if though he had known her.
Nevertheless, he wanted to move away from the traffic. He poked his head outside of his car window, and looked front and behind to see if he can clear. At that same moment, Nupur reached her car, but the wind blew so hard forcing the dupatta to fly off of her. Nupur was still trying to figure out the reason for her heart pounding that she didn't even notice it.
The dupatta travelled with the wind and wrapped around Mayank's head. He quickly took it off and turned around to see whose it was. To his shock he saw Nupur, the same girl who was standing in front of his car. He tried to yell her name, but she didn't hear. Nupur got into her car and drove away. Mayank tried to follow, but there was a car in between them, and he wasn't able to reverse.
Mayank sat facing the steering wheel. Tears streamed down from his eyes. In a fit of rage, he started pounding it.
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i dont know why i did the dupatta....
so dont kill me for that lol
Edited by supercool3 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48

its really goin nice enough

some one plzz cont
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Posted: 15 years ago
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evrythng just got still around him...he cnt feel cnt breath ...cnt say..anythng....his mind said ur again imagining her....his heart say she is thr....he was in shock thnkng ..is it posible....
Mayank: to hell wth the posibilities i need 2 i need 2 find her.....i can feel her...tht was nupur...my heart cant b wrong about tht ...no my heart can never...Nupur is here she is ..my life is here
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He start driving again'praying plz God plz mjhy nupur se mila do'Plz

After driving a bit he by passed a car n Auto..on the other side'.n stopd

A girl was fighting with the Auto person as he struck it with her car'it was nupur

He was abt to open the door '..thn stopd With a scare in his eyes as if he will go out of the car n turn towards her she's gonna disappear again 'he closed hs eyes ..collect himself'n came out of car

Turned towards her

Suddenly.. again the wind blows the dupata to her face'mayank nt being able to c her'he was so impatient n restless to c her'.

Mayank'awwwww plz yeah dupata hatoa

An as if God was answering to his heart ..she slowly removed it 4m her face.

OH IT NUPUR'YES SHE IS'.

his eyes are moist'his heart misd a beat..he was just looking at her '..

Nupur : Bhaiya ap ko dekhi nhi dayta ..itni bari car'.already barish hony wali hai upper se mein late horahin hoon ..aur ek ap k riksha hai k us ko meri car se galay lagny k dil chaha raha hai'My GOD 'Aa Bhagvan aj tu SAB K SAB MERAY GILAF SAZISH KER RAHY HAIN..

Mayank was still stiring at her'hearing to these words ..he smile with moist eyes rembng the nght before he was leaving to banglore..(the way riksha driver was fighting with her n he said nobody ..NOBDY except hm have right to fight with her)

With tumbling steps he start walkng towards her 'even cant realize tht he is walkng on a road ..he was just staring at her n walkng step by srep closer to her'..

A car was cuming 4m the other side..bt Maynk was completely in his lady love''car came'..fullllllll breaksssssssssssssssssss'slighty hited him..he tumbles a bit..bt didn't care abt tht the driver is shouting at hm'still staring n walk..he reach just behind her

Slightly n gently he puts his hand on Nupur Shoulder

Nupur heart stops..awh..the touch is so familiar ..she can feel the warmth running down her spine'..she did'nt had the courage to turn'

Nupur'maynk..wht..really 'is it him

She turn around n shockd yes'Mayank

Edited by drfizaahmed - 15 years ago

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