Our MAYUR Story!(mayurians only)updated pg.8+NOTE - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
@sizilingsis..hey sorry i dont know ur name...bt it seems 2 our FF 😆
...y nobody else is contining
cumon guys its OUR MAYUR Story
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
meeez sehr

trueyr y no one else continuin
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
hey sehr ..nice knowng tht im fiza
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Mayank came to her..wipe her tears n hold her hands

Mayank: Gunjun ko pata chalay ga tu who…

Nupur: Gunjun // /kaha hai who kasi hai……I need to meet her…is she ok ….oh mein bhi na 3 yrs… ab tak tu sam aur us ny shadi bhi krli hogi…aur

Mayank….shhhhhhhh..shant hojao Nupur…Gunjun bilkul tu nhi pr han thk hai…aur sam aur us ke shadi nhi hoi…actually thy r nt even seeing each other

Nupur: wht …wht do u mean

Mayank: actually Gunjun thinks tht sami is responsible for ur accident n loss…she has broken all relationship with hm….after ur death news I went to US n she to indoor

Nupur: tu tum ny us ko samjha kyun nhi…who tu na…mayank car fast krny ko tu mein ny he kaha tha …atleast tum tu practically sochty

Mayank: ahhh..sochtaaa…practically…yaha zindagi ny sath chor diya aur tum practically sochny ke baat krti hoon.

Nupur: mayank I understand how u feel…hum dono ek hi tarah k door se kuzray hain…tumharay pass tu phr gunjun aur samart thy..mein tu bilkul akeli hogai thi…

Mayank: janta hoon…soch kr bhi ajeeb lagata hai k tum ny akelay 3 saal kasay guzaray hongay…..mein ny sami ko maaf krdiya tha bt whenever he came in frnt of me mjhy sab kuch phr se yaad ata tha aur …….ahhh…gunjun se baat krny k mein ny kafi khoshish k bt she did'nt wana listen to me….mein ny excel bhi isliyan join kiya tha..

Nupur: hmmm janti hoon…yeah pyar viar k problems solove krna tumharay bs k kam nhi…ab mjhy he kuch krna hoga

Mayank: naughty smile…acha …mjhy pyar yiar samhj nhi aata…kal itna acha welcum diya tm ko ..dobara do kya…

Nupur: Maynak …mjhy tang mat kro …phr se chali jao gi

Mayank: cuped hr face ….phr asa sochna bhi nhi mazak mein bhi nhi…

Tum fresh hojay ..gunjun lunch pr aay gi aj

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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
Very nice...sum1 plzz write a scene on Mayur n their kid....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: KiranSD1

ummm i liked it, but i just want to say, if everyone was supposed to contribute, u shouldn't be putting precaps, everyone should be able to add whatever parts/twists they want. if u you want to write it by yourself then make a ff. and there isn't any sajan in this.


no sajan .
read the note on pg.8
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
nice going guys.
i thought after my note no1 was interested.
i guess you guys forgot ArTi.
it going well.
if any1 is interested in reading an ff about mayur re union.
here is an ff.

Eternal Love-We will re-unite(Mayur ff)


read and comment if u r interested.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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At Midday an elegant woman , entered the sharma residance . The bell rang shrilly and Nupur knew who it was . she opened the door very suddenly , to /find her sister , loolking down and feeling low . She lifted her head to just get a shock !~!
G: Diiiiiii aap ?(shock amazed her truly and she could not believe her eyes ) "Jeeju !!! " she screamed and there came the hot jeeju with a perfect smile on his face plastered .
M: "Yeh meri taraf se surprise "winking at nupur and putting his arm around he shoulder.
Nupur's eyes were welled with tears as she saw her pyaar Gunjan after almost years and huggd her tight .
Gunjan who still was in a state of shochk couldn't reply back
G: Di are u really there ? she asked with a questioning look
N: Of course tumhaari di ko kya hona tha !! after all morenna ki ladki hoon
G: di!!!!!(and they hugged again)
The 'Morenna' sisters were back .
with a brief talk during Lunch Gunjan told about Mayanks state being lifeless, he never ate food and she had to force him and how they missed her.............................
These talks were kept long and soon Gunjan had to Go back for a Kids counselling.
Mayank had already sstarted picking up the plates and was very angry t Gunjan for revealing things which he didn't want Nupur to know .
"Mayank " a soft voice came from behind him and he turned in a spur of a moment . "why were you suffering this long? ""Imagine if anything would have happened to you then?"
"That's what i wanted , you would be closer to me " wiping of her tears .
"waise bhi i needed to go on a diet ,Nupur ", he said lightning the atmosphere.
"Mayank...."
"Haan Nupur ., kya chayiye ?
"Ummmmm...."
"Shopping?, DDLJ?,date ?"
"Nahi Mayank ... Beach par chale ...
"Kyun?"
"Bas itne 3 saalon se baat nahi ki , koi tha nai na ...
Mayank could not see her depressed anymore , he wanted to fulfill every wish of her which he couldnt in the last three yers. but still there was some thing which upset /Nupur. to know that he had to talk to her.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
Very nice pebo...plzz continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
nice update.
did u all forget ArTi.

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