MJHT:Future Scenes Here ONLY- note pg 85 - Page 15

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

any scoops from PD??????

kavya ur idea is mindblowing!!!!!!!!!!!



It will be at night.. No scoops today😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Oh my god Caro, what a scene i just loved it. PD Please try and incorporate this one and raee's scene of all four together and nupur's birthday. Caro i would like to add something than later that night nupur can go away maybe to an isolated place in mayank's house and starts crying and mayank comes and consoles her. this will be so romantic. i WOULD BE FLYING IN THE AIR. EXCELLENT WORK CARO AND RAEE. Pd HAVE A LOOK AT THESE MAYUR AND COMBINED SCENES, YOU GUYS ROCK. i HOPE PD SEES AND INCORPORATES THEM GUYS.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Senny

Oh my god Caro, what a scene i just loved it. PD Please try and incorporate this one and raee's scene of all four together and nupur's birthday. Caro i would like to add something than later that night nupur can go away maybe to an isolated place in mayank's house and starts crying and mayank comes and consoles her. this will be so romantic. i WOULD BE FLYING IN THE AIR. EXCELLENT WORK CARO AND RAEE. Pd HAVE A LOOK AT THESE MAYUR AND COMBINED SCENES, YOU GUYS ROCK. i HOPE PD SEES AND INCORPORATES THEM GUYS.



hey senny that was kavya's creation!!!!


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Posted: 16 years ago
hey senny .....it'll be awesome..........
want some senti side of nups to be revealed......it wil have more impact on mayur relationship
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Posted: 16 years ago
whoops sorry. excellent work kavya.
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Posted: 16 years ago
yay ruchi. it will be so nice. i hope PD reads the mayur scenes.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Senny

Oh my god Caro, what a scene i just loved it. PD Please try and incorporate this one and raee's scene of all four together and nupur's birthday. Caro i would like to add something than later that night nupur can go away maybe to an isolated place in mayank's house and starts crying and mayank comes and consoles her. this will be so romantic. i WOULD BE FLYING IN THE AIR. EXCELLENT WORK CARO AND RAEE. Pd HAVE A LOOK AT THESE MAYUR AND COMBINED SCENES, YOU GUYS ROCK. i HOPE PD SEES AND INCORPORATES THEM GUYS.


😍 NOW I AM DYING TO WATCH THIS SCENE!
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh thankyou kavya. you are a sweetheart. PD please try and put in this scene.
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Posted: 16 years ago
I guess I was expecting more of Sajan this week and the dance practice this episode but it seems they are testing our patience..Uday and CJ was a toooo long scene..
PD Sweetie!!! please don't push us across the limit..and do make us see the V day dance this week and not leave us with the cliffhanger
GUYS any thing on SBS???
I heard it is being 5 days a week ..is it true???
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Posted: 16 years ago

oh my my...wot a scene yew hv created kavz...😳..m lubbin' it..😳...ah..its sooooooo touchy touchy...

well i noe m not good at these things buh i'll surely give it a try..
ma contribution:
Mayu has olwaiz' seen nupur with that BIG SMILE, doin' silly tantrums, insincere bout' life....buh dis is the first tym he could see the pain in dose sparkling eyes, and realized how alone she is...
she pretends to be a "Ninny" buh i real how deep she is..
by lukin' at nupur's pain......n' discoverin' how she misses her mum...he rememba' his own father..😭😳
FLASHBACK:
Emergency Ward..
City Hospital
MUMBAI
In the unconventional silence of solitude,he was standin' near d emergency ward...lifeless...constantly starin' @ his father........thru d lil' glass window...as if his eyes have forgot 2 blink..........n' d tears have announced their stike.....not ready 2 moist dose sad eyes...he felt like his ears have not even drunk the enuf of his dad's words .....he wanted him 2 speak...no matter what......
MUM: Mayank...
*No response...*
MUM: Mayank....(dis tym shakin' mayank's quiverin' cold body)
MUM: Dad!!...(den realized d reality...dat its his mum...not his dad...)
Oh....i thot......(stops....in dismay)
MUM: mayank....i just talked to the doctors ...n' dey saii that he iz not completely out of danger...dey will have to keep..ur dad...under observation for 24 hrs....and see how he will response...to dere treatment.....( informed mayu...with a the pain)😕
Suffocation...was overwhelming him........he felt like....as if he wanted 2 scream his heart out......but dere was no one...to listen ....😕
Mayu left without utterin' any word...leavin' worried mum behind.....😕
Does he deserve what he is goin' though??mayu questioned himself....
another minute....he revive his senses back..."well may b he does"......he said...he is reapin' what he sowed...it was meant 2 b lyk dis....its fair to be like dis....(mayu quoted...with certainty)
MUM: mayu..what are you thinkin'??
Mayu: nuthin'...tryin' 2 choose the path...what ma heart is showin' me dis tym....
MUM:*Confused*..I am not sure if i am getting what you mean..?? 😕
Mayu: Am leavin'....(said mayank..firmly)
MUM: : What?? do you even know what are you sayin' ??are you otta' ur mind??(mum questions mayu..in disgust)
Mayank:: yes!!...i noe what i am sayin'..n' m completely in ma mind....its tru dat...i got distracted from my principles for a short period of tym...but now...m back...(cold hearted mayu said..)😳
MUM: wHAT YOU THINK YEW ARE DOIN'....HUH,...???leavin' ur dad in dis condition 2 die...??
Mayu: YES.....[mayu confirms in furious tone)..😕...if he can leave his family ...mercilessly...to die....js to fulfill his selfish n' selfcentered desires.....y cant i??? God has cursed him of what he did to us.......he deserve dat...[said mayu... in a very strong n' adamant tone)😕
MUM: I noe how yew feel mayu...how you feel for me.....buh do you think..he deserve ur hatred....to dis extent???do you even realize..dat he iz ur FATHER..........😕
Raj: We are in this condition......just because of his deeds, Did he eva' took the responsibilty of bein a "DAD".do you think after wat he did to us ....its dat easy for me to forgive him??[fumin' mayank...questions his mum....)
*COMPLETE SILENCE....*
Mayank: n' yew r defencin'..that man...who has no regrets of what he did?? D man...who destroyed our lives......makin' it upside down..the man who married another women...just to satisfy his personal desires.???😕...the man who is responsible for ur endless tears???
MUM: Mayu....listen to me...(mayu intrupts)
MUM: no mum.....yew listen to me....for the last tym..."I DONT CARE WHAT WILL HAPPEN 2 DIS MAN...I HAVE NO RESPECT FOR D PERSON...WHO DONT RESPECT MY MOTHER...n' OUR FEELINGS..
Doctor intrupts the conversation...
Doctor: Excuse me....Mr. Sharma.....
Mayu looks at the doctor...with no expressionz...
Doctor: Mr.Mayank....m very sorry 2 saii buh...we could not save ur father...he is no more....😲
ONCE AGAIN...SILENCE TOOK OVER...
Mayank leaned towards the wall..n' said " take care of him god"😭😭😭
Doctor: ummmmmmmmmm...Mr mayank sharma ....we found dis letter along with his other stuff....sooooo...
HE HANDOVER DAT PIECE OF PAPER TO Mayank....
He..gently...unfolds the perfect folds of the letter....and reads....
Dear Son,
I am writin' you dis letter...because i noe..dat i will neva' be able to face you and your mother , eva' in ma life.
I noe yew hate me...and i cannot take dis anymore...I noe i shud have done dis long tym back...buh dere was sumthin' dat was stoppin' me -...may b its ma own guilt......i want to admit..dat what ever i did was not forgivable...no one will ever forgive me...not even god....Buh..son, its a request...will yew plzzz just try ....to forgive ur dad...somedaii.........it will b enuf 4 me...
js rememba'...i will always love you...n' support you...even if m not around you...
luv,n' seekin' 4 forgiveness...
ur dad...😭
Mayu......got stunned...readin' dis heart wrenchin' letter of his dad...which was truely...from his heart...for the first tym...he felt...if he could goe bac in tym...N' CHANGE THINGS...BUH.....😭😭
Flashback end: Back to reality.....
Mayu luks @ nupur and goes to consol her...😳
sorry guyz..i guess thora zyada ho gaya...sorry if i got carried awaii..with dis scene...buh i wanted to hv sum sensitive scene 4 mayank...cuz we dunt know bout' his dad .....in the show..😳
luv
neha😳
Edited by *mesweet neha* - 16 years ago

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