#4 ~FF: Untold Stories~ - Page 78

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

honestly i wasn't a fan of CID but one secret reading those FF of yours based on them is certainly on my bucket list after completing US. its moreover for the reason that i am just addicted to your writing and can't get over it😆

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

Hehe, don't expect much though because I'd just started off back then and it's certainly nothing like I write now because I wasn't even a quarter as good as the authors who've written their first FFs on the forum. 😆😆 But if you do want to give it a shot, you're more than welcome though because it'll definitely give you an idea of my four year journey as a writer, if not anything else. 😛😛

well i trust your writing even if its the start so i know i wont be disappointed and i am reading it but where to find all of them is a bigger question

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

well i trust your writing even if its the start so i know i wont be disappointed and i am reading it but where to find all of them is a bigger question

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

well we should be more thankful to you not just giving a beautiful story but also teaching many things about life which we face but never overcome it completely. this FF is extraordinary for me and will always remain special for me😊😊

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

Hehe, I'll PM you the link once I'm done with US. You'll find them all on Fanfiction.net, not just the CID fics but my works for all the fandoms that I've written for so far. My username is the same on FFN so it'll be easier for you to find it. 😆😆 And I'm definitely going to give out the warning once again - don't expect anything from it. 😛😛

thank you so much dear
and if you are warning then i am getting more firm on my decision of reading them.😆😆
i love adventure so be it then😳

Originally posted by: RoshniSingh

Ditto😛😛 As I have already said that LM's writing and this FF has given me the deep understanding of feelings and emotions. And LM.. I m really thankful to you for this because you have given me something for a lifetime and I'm going to cherish forever.😳😳

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

thank you so much dear
and if you are warning then i am getting more firm on my decision of reading them.😆😆
i love adventure so be it then😳

Such a sweet chapter LM ! 😳😳

Ishani is still lost in the earlier night's thoughts.. hmm.. can't blame her now, can we ! 😉😉 How mean of Ranveer to wake her up from her fantasy ! Bhaiyya, khud toh fantasize karta nahin, usse hi karne deta ! 😆😆😆

How funny it seems that he is more sheepish about it than her !! 😉😉😉 She coolly saying I was just trying to hide the "extent" of it !! Oh my, ROFL ! 😆😆
But anyway, I was happy too that he recollected it, for the reasons I already told you in the last review, so thank you !!👍🏼

Ranveer tried to give that 51% back to Ishani, so honest of him to say that she is capable enough now, but of course, she would not agree. Modest fool that he is, she knows exactly how to deal with him. 😛😛😛 All she had to mention was 'Teamwork' ! 😆😆 yeah, yeah, we see it very much, thank you !! 😳😳

So he does have a plan B obviously, and I think I do get an inkling for what it might be considering he tried to give her an "extra perspective" 🤓🤓

It was such bitter sweet moment when they recollected their bucket list.. they have come a long way since that night but still have that bucket list almost the same.. unfulfilled. I hope you are doing a good justice to the remaining ones 🤪🤪🤪

It is a beautiful conversation though, where half the things are said in their minds and they know very well that the other is able to catch on it very easily so they keep changing the topics to hide their guilt and pain. Very well written ! 👏👏👏 Also I love that sentence about "moon who now willed to become his own" !

Finally Ishani is seeing Ranveer's RV life more closely and his workaholicness too.. I mean who avoids a great barrier reef trip in his own resort, only the idiot who has his mind set on 2 things, work and his unrequited love ! 😕😕
Yeah, she surely is going to go tough, what with planning changes in their life already even before he took the leap, mannn this girl is going to be a bossy wife !!😆😆😆

The irony of life para is a top notch one, dear ! Just summarizes their lives so far, so well. Kudos to you on that one. 👏

And its good that she realized she was an oblivious buffoon ! Like hullo girl, you are like 12 years late, but never mind !! 🤣🤣🤣

Our goofball is happy again to know that she has not visited Sydney earlier and will get to complete his dream of showing her around in his karma bhumi.. ☺️ How sweet he is that he gets happy by such little things coming up as a stroke of luck !

I am sure she did not visit Syndey though for same reason unconsciously because she always somewhere wanted to see it with him.. and I love the para about they being on two opposite mountain peaks, all alone but still seeing each other clearly and waiting for that bridge to be crossed and be together. It is just absolutely beautiful.⭐️⭐️⭐️

Now comes the beloved Sydney entry part ! White Ferrari, beach mansion in Point Piper ! like just wow 😳😳😳 ! you have researched well !! 👏 Whatever made her think he will let her drive and live in a hotel instead of his house ! Ab uska ilaka hai na.. 😆

Stupid fellow, though, what is he made up of, to go to work immediately after such a long flight ! Workoholic really..

It's really nice to say good bye to the cold manipulating bitch for some time and see the old non-stop bakbak ishani ! 😃😃 How much ever Ranveer tried to be modest, the place spoke for itself I think, making her go wide eyed on him all the more. He has achieved so much and she was so blissfully unaware of it.
And OMG, he has a beach connected to his house, and you better make a good use of it. 😉 I mean just star gazing will also do, don't get more ideas !! 😆
Interestingly I realized that all your previous books of this FF were so much sanskari that even kids could read it and this book is more than compensating for it, not that I am complaining of course !! 😳😳🤪🤪🤪

Coming back, you always have this gracious staff who makes friends with Ishani and spills the beans on him at first chance! 🤗🤗 First we had Martin now Jennifer, I hope she helps Ishani further. I also clearly see Ishani ganging up with Monica and Finch as well ! and that serves him right for being such a sad soul, I would say.

Btw, what is this I am reading about Ritika puran coming up in 3 chapters..😕😕😕 please have mercy on us, we bore Chishani already, ok!!
Just kidding, I know your Ritika was an important part of his life and no offense but thank god, she is dead, may her soul RIP and not meddle in their lives !😆😆😆 If you plan to use her to make Ishani jealous and make his heart lighter by recounting her memories, then I have no problems though ! 🤗🤗

Do update soon !! Waiting eagerly for their Sydney rendezvous, the barrier reef, skydiving and what not, ahem ahem.. !😳😳

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

It's always been one of my life's aims to touch people's lives with my writing the same way an extraordinary woman once touched my life with hers. 😳😳 And the fact that I've been managing to do a bit on my part towards the same is nothing but the biggest compliment that the two of you can give me. 🤗🤗 And every time that the fact dawns upon me, it leaves me in shivers for some reason. 😕😕

Totally agree with Roshni, reading this FF is a beautiful experience, just like reading a top notch book, except that we are reading it as it is created, so that makes it all the more special. 😳😳
You have definitely touched people's hearts including mine and it makes me incredibly sad to think that the FF is drawing to its end soon and I will so miss it. 🥺🥺🥺🥺
🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: matsh

Such a sweet chapter LM ! 😳😳

Ishani is still lost in the earlier night's thoughts.. hmm.. can't blame her now, can we ! 😉😉 How mean of Ranveer to wake her up from her fantasy ! Bhaiyya, khud toh fantasize karta nahin, usse hi karne deta ! 😆😆😆

How funny it seems that he is more sheepish about it than her !! 😉😉😉 She coolly saying I was just trying to hide the "extent" of it !! Oh my, ROFL ! 😆😆
But anyway, I was happy too that he recollected it, for the reasons I already told you in the last review, so thank you !!👍🏼

Ranveer tried to give that 51% back to Ishani, so honest of him to say that she is capable enough now, but of course, she would not agree. Modest fool that he is, she knows exactly how to deal with him. 😛😛😛 All she had to mention was 'Teamwork' ! 😆😆 yeah, yeah, we see it very much, thank you !! 😳😳

So he does have a plan B obviously, and I think I do get an inkling for what it might be considering he tried to give her an "extra perspective" 🤓🤓

It was such bitter sweet moment when they recollected their bucket list.. they have come a long way since that night but still have that bucket list almost the same.. unfulfilled. I hope you are doing a good justice to the remaining ones 🤪🤪🤪

It is a beautiful conversation though, where half the things are said in their minds and they know very well that the other is able to catch on it very easily so they keep changing the topics to hide their guilt and pain. Very well written ! 👏👏👏 Also I love that sentence about "moon who now willed to become his own" !

Finally Ishani is seeing Ranveer's RV life more closely and his workaholicness too.. I mean who avoids a great barrier reef trip in his own resort, only the idiot who has his mind set on 2 things, work and his unrequited love ! 😕😕
Yeah, she surely is going to go tough, what with planning changes in their life already even before he took the leap, mannn this girl is going to be a bossy wife !!😆😆😆

The irony of life para is a top notch one, dear ! Just summarizes their lives so far, so well. Kudos to you on that one. 👏

And its good that she realized she was an oblivious buffoon ! Like hullo girl, you are like 12 years late, but never mind !! 🤣🤣🤣

Our goofball is happy again to know that she has not visited Sydney earlier and will get to complete his dream of showing her around in his karma bhumi.. ☺️ How sweet he is that he gets happy by such little things coming up as a stroke of luck !

I am sure she did not visit Syndey though for same reason unconsciously because she always somewhere wanted to see it with him.. and I love the para about they being on two opposite mountain peaks, all alone but still seeing each other clearly and waiting for that bridge to be crossed and be together. It is just absolutely beautiful.⭐️⭐️⭐️

Now comes the beloved Sydney entry part ! White Ferrari, beach mansion in Point Piper ! like just wow 😳😳😳 ! you have researched well !! 👏 Whatever made her think he will let her drive and live in a hotel instead of his house ! Ab uska ilaka hai na.. 😆

Stupid fellow, though, what is he made up of, to go to work immediately after such a long flight ! Workoholic really..

It's really nice to say good bye to the cold manipulating bitch for some time and see the old non-stop bakbak ishani ! 😃😃 How much ever Ranveer tried to be modest, the place spoke for itself I think, making her go wide eyed on him all the more. He has achieved so much and she was so blissfully unaware of it.
And OMG, he has a beach connected to his house, and you better make a good use of it. 😉 I mean just star gazing will also do, don't get more ideas !! 😆
Interestingly I realized that all your previous books of this FF were so much sanskari that even kids could read it and this book is more than compensating for it, not that I am complaining of course !! 🤪

Coming back, you always have this gracious staff who makes friends with Ishani and spills the beans on him at first chance! 🤗🤗 First we had Martin now Jennifer, I hope she helps Ishani further. I also clearly see Ishani ganging up with Monica and Finch as well ! and that serves him right for being such a sad soul, I would say.

Btw, what is this I am reading about Ritika puran coming up in 3 chapters..😕😕😕 please have mercy on us, we bore Chishani already, ok!!
Just kidding, I know your Ritika was an important part of his life and no offense but thank god, she is dead, may her soul RIP and not meddle in their lives !😆😆😆 If you plan to use her to make Ishani jealous and make his heart lighter by recounting her memories, then I have no problems though ! 🤗🤗

Do update soon !! Waiting eagerly for their Sydney rendezvous, the barrier reef, skydiving and what not, ahem ahem.. !😳😳