#4 ~FF: Untold Stories~ - Page 62

Originally posted by: robal

brilliant work...I have been waiting for this chapter, it was beautiful. Finally they found solace in each other. I must thank you for updating the chapters so fast, it's a lot of work, but you are so good. Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: PrinceAsif

Woooww...marvelous s well s hot episode... Too exciting to read it repeatedly... How Ranveer & Ishani shared their moments...how they got into an intimacy relationship ...& u described it so passionately that anyone will open their mouth in awe...great job sissy...let's c what will happen next...b safe & sound

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hi LM...

I love you so much dear...

I have started watching castle😛 and I can say that its amazing one most important thing about it I can visualize many things I know you understood the meaning😉.

Did the revenge saga ended or a new more deadly dangerous chapter begun only time will tell.

Finally everything over and the revenge flame drowned leaving behind a void😭😭 which will take so much time to heal but given the current scenario😕 I can say safely that it will be fast healing and yup enjoying one also. This revenge made her into something which she never wanted to be cunning heartless and deceiving something which her papa and ranveer wanted to protect from and its easy to create a different personality from one's own but its more difficult to let go of that fake personality for the original one.😭😭

And this is interesting given the fact that chirag is under several non bailable offence how the other part will start😲 and also the fact that ishani took away his company with all the offences and killing his ego and then returning back his company to him with more offences and killing his soul wow I love this girl and I love you more for this brilliant execution of the plan.😳😳😳

He again ran to the place which can fill him with strength to be strong enough to stand for her pain and make her get rid of it by healing her😭. And the reason that I want to take the robot home because ishani and elvish wont allow the human form of it go away from them🤣. Elvish is already heartbroken now that her ranveer is going away from her🤣. if its you i can atleast try to convince but them.😆😆😆 And ranveer isn't taking a leap but is trying his best to run towards the alley from where he would have to take the leap it reminded me of his dream.

Is ishani trying to get rid of life😕😕 that only had pain and for which she was responsible. Lemon and honey 😳😳😳 oh man what are you upto I just cannot even imagine future things☺️. Really glad that his essence was strong enough to refrain her from doing so.

Every time he enters her room why he keep on removing his clothes🤓 please through some light upon that fact we innocent people don't know😳. And ya also in future is he planning to come in shirts only because it will be fast and less to remove given that he cannot stop himself from removing them. I like his way of healing a lot no not that part because I to just loved that part so much it's the way he thought of bringing her pain to the brim and then let the pain itself drip away without ishani even trying to and what she is demanding to wipe away all that scars is not possible but they can heal it that it wont look like that.😕😕

And their moment I guess I have to update my vocabulary because I am kind of falling short of words to summarize all the adjectives☺️. This wasn't a kiss it was a moment encompassing many things. It was passionate loving hot tantalising and what not. LM you are brilliant in this👏👏 and I certainly knew that my demand or rather protest wasn't even a bit a wrong. Honestly its killing me now even to think about what will be in future he has made her wait so much next time its gonna be . And look at ishani she was like a greedy fellow😲😲 craving more and more thank god need for air increased otherwise🤣. I wish I could go on the detail analysis because their every move had a meaning in it. but one thing though stupid was satisfying 😆that chirag wasnt close to erupting this kind of passion in her it was always ranveer chirag can never match to him no matter how much he manipulates.

Finally she showed him those paintings and the dumbfounded look on his pain its like he wasn't able to believe that ishani can also love him back so powerfully. Hey that was right I had told you about the painting where ranveer looks at ishani both the painting were a story connected to each other. And that psyche evaluation was also known to her he must be filing how she developed so much brain. So much calculative a leap year and all I hope he doesn't end up analysing and calculating everything which will come because he will fail🤣. And in that moment they reminded be of castle and beckett and their banter especially after there is some passionate or important moment between them. But he is running away from his pain which will be more cause of worry for both of them.😭

You know ishani has turned so awesome she has answers to his every question now and smashing answers which can make him speechless and he is just avoiding going there this was always the problem with him once hurted he takes very long time to trust and heal. he have a face also to look🤪 for this girl every thing in him make him desirable for her🤣 and this is what happens when you suppress feelings too long his ijjat is in grave danger😆😆. Hehe ranveer asked that question which I felt everytime they were in the moment and the answers remain same and like ishani we are waiting for ranveer to comeback you know when he was in surat he was wondering that ishani was seeking RV not him and here she answered even that unsaid question.

To be honest the last part of them on being terrace crying holding each other making themselves comfortable healing and saying their unsaid sorrow of lifetime with the help of nature was the best part of this whole chapter and it reminded of fault in our stars moment. Just a stupid thing was caffeinated love more related to fault in our stars I feel like that. I loved it because it dripped of pain and love equally and the stars and moon witnessing it. i loved it more than the shower glass.

I so so loved this chapter it was fantastic and you are really the most amazing writer I have came across.👏👏👏

Thnx for pm

Waiting for next.

PS how do you manage to leave me always speechless with your awesome updates?

ps2 i openly drool on stubbles it so much more* ahem ahem*

Originally posted by: matsh

Res, Res !
I can post review only after my hyper ventilating heart sobers down 😉😉

I have unreserved my post on page 79 for review of earlier chapter.. Ah the pleasure of having one's own laptop 😆😆😆

Originally posted by: matsh

What a smashing one LM!!
Res
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Finally, the most awaited revenge !! and what an amazing delivery of it !! 👏👏👏
I am at loss of words really ! Perfect planning and execution you have proudly displayed in this one, right from the way they dressed to the emotional graphs of each character ! Bravo !!

Ranveer surprisingly did not try to dig into the purpose of the event, our man really seems to have decided to give his lady free hand after she so smoked his original plan.. 😛😛
Red tie, black suit and snow white shirt...😳😳😳 you just know how to make us drool don't you ! He is so proud of her, its heartening, after all, she has been through a lot like him.. How much faultless he can get, driving smoothly even in Mumbai madness.. driving and running are the only two things that seem to relax him !

The way you described him sitting in the best seat overseeing the entire program, reminds of those opera scenes in Hollywood movies actually ! Our man is no less than a star and then his lady love appeared, looking like million bucks !! Ah the drooling just went through the roof !!
and damn that audio check had to happen at the wrong time !! 😆 They have started loving the new equation between them, well, we too 😉😉😉 Of course we loved their pain and angst too but IshVeer being coy and loving to each other without really saying anything is the best !!

Of course, then the whole drama unfolded in a way that can put the most dramatic events to shame !! Chirag the snake, had the nerve to not just put the painting for sale but even try to fake bid for the price hogging ! Ha, how needy can he get. For one moment I thought, Puneet will trap him by just stopping short of the price he was going to leave the auction at but nope.. you were planning a bigger revenge obviously ! And Ranveer as usual, brilliantly worked out the why and hows of that painting sale without even asking a single question.and he even remembers how much it had costed him , after all these years.. I mean how much information can that brain contain !😆😆😆 .ok, enough drooling for one chapter.. 😳

Absolutely loved the way Ishani trapped Chirag with the diamonds, the fake painting, police and of course having the painter himself to certify the fake ! But the snake has such poisonous tongue.. damn it.. You reminded me too well of the GSDC episode where he spew venom with most leechlike looks.
Ranveer acted her as shield isnt it.. he would have definitely murdered Chirag had Ishani not intervened.. Chirag completely lost out now, with smacks from Ranveer and One slap from Ishani.. yeeyyy !! 🥳 Long deserved one I would say ! High time he paid the price.. All that flashback of school years and having the same audience , wow !! Utterly dramatic.. !

But here is exactly where my worry started now.. the way he hinted at continuing to destroy their lives again, he just knows how to hit them at their softest spot that is the other soulmate.. He described to her exactly like her dream, didn't he...😭 I almost stopped breathing when he used those exact terms.. oh god.. what are you planning.. Surely Chirag will continue plotting but please dont make him kill Ranveer once again literally..😕 besides you mentioned the fiery phoenix.. and that dream of white and fiery phoenix that Ranveer had long ago is still fresh in my mind.. 😔
so I am quite rattled now..

But nevertheless, the satisfying tinge of a revenge well executed and an immensely good read !! What more can one ask for ⭐️⭐️⭐️

PS. How do you do it girl.
PPS. And you already posted yet another amazing chapter even before I can come out of the guilty pleasure this one gave, that too with pleasure of a different kind 😳 seriously, how do you do it !

🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: mafaaza12

Hai LM,

Outstanding as always👏

Yeah... chiru gone(don't know how long)

Our girl done it finally. why the hell she hold scalpel after promising ranveer😕. But a sigh he is always there for her comfort. I won't put wat happened after😳😳. The way u described that scene I thought Something going to happen for sure☺️. But after all u r too sanskari na😉.

Here comes the most heart wrenching part. Ishaani shows ranveer how much she yearned for him how much she loves him without words👏. finally she admit that she want ranveer not RV. Hayeee we too wait for innocent lover boy😉.

Good girl👍🏼 u frequently update this unlike NC. Keep gng girl 👏

Originally posted by: NidsJ

Hey LM...😊 so so so.. the big confrontation.. our chirveer..

but b4 that have to go little back.. so beginning from his visit to ganpati.. I loved that part.. how beautifully u described his emotions..👏 in few previous chapters the focus was kinda more on Ishani's pain but this part gave a new meaning to his miseries.. his fears and inhibitions and why he can't go ahead so easily, u justified everything so well..⭐️ and puneet with his version of Ishveer kahani was funny.. 😆 he was trying to fool Ishani or was it his frustration of being a ping pong between these two that came out..😆 but my favorite line was this "I won't use what happened to me as some form of pity from him," I can't explain LM how much I love and respect this independent and confident Ishani of urs..👍🏼 👍🏼 and if we talk about his insomnia.. why he is behaving all mental.. Just don't want to listen to anyone..😡 but I loved the way how Finch gave him Ishani ki dhamki.. 😆 and then finally done the right thing of sleeping pills.. thanks to u LM for giving him Finch, he has a big role in keeping ranveer sane till date ⭐️, poked his crazy side without thinking about himself.. and lamp & chair..🤣 have to say FinchVeer are no less than anyone.. and on a funnier note I was thinking that somebody should give him some gyaan ke beta abhi sole jitna time hai, Ishani se patch up ke baad pata nahi mauka n time milega bhi ya nahi.. 🤪 I mean 6 years is a long time, they must have so much to talk n all.. 😳

then coming to his confrontation or I shall say his blame game on Ishani.. OMG.. 😲 he is turned into hell amazing actor.. keeping in mind the kind of majnu he is, it needs great guts to pour so much vemon on ur love and to break them like this & he did it brilliantly.. 👏 but he was kinda cruel yar.. kitna kuch suna dia ladki ko..😡 reminded me of our cruel bitchy Ishani at the time of chirag death fiasco.. 🤢

Ranveer created a big mess & it could've been disastrous but after all this the way she gained the real control on herself and threw the scalpel away was a big relief..👏 her dream was again scary but she noticed that present is different and it relived not only her but us also.. and then the interesting part began.. how sharply she used her brain and joined all the dots.. amazing.. 😎 and rest was done by Roonil Vazlib, in fact it gave extra edge to our girl, she planned one step ahead and puneet & rishi are spared of extra trouble..

nad now coming to the big confrontation.. wow.. our chirveer.. kitna uchalta hua aya tha Chirag aur kya mila...😆 loved ranveer's answers to his overconfident boasting but at the end that leech started his dirty game, bringing Ishani between them🤢, but the way ranveer shut him up at the right time was👍🏼.. thoda aur dhona chahiye tha.. but ranveer gave even bigger shock to him in next moment..😳 bechara Chirag, usne kabhi socha bhi nahi hoga ke ye sab bhi dekhna padega.. cruel ranveer..🤣 but best was her dialogue 'he was still watching' as if anybody was bothered about her explanations.. 🤣

and now coming to entire planning.. wow wow wow...👏 👏 how you did that girl.. have to read it many times to get the whole picture.. awesome work.. ❤️it was so complex.. m still wondering how u did that.. ranveer ki planning was we already had hint but Ishani's counter was a total dhamaka surprise.. smart girl, zor ka jhatka for all men who were thinking to use her in their conspiracy, she spinned a new web and abhi to they don't know the entire scene.. 😉but claps for the real brain behind all this, u were brilliant.. ⭐️ ⭐️

but I have one big confusion😕, ranveer was arrested for supplying fake diamonds in international market, this complaint has to come from London customs or final receiver of diamonds, how the surat supplier made this complaint.. and once the surat supplier sold diamond from his side then how he said they have been stolen, I mean what parekhs are doing after receiving diamonds from him is not his headache.. this point ghumaofied me a lot..

but amazing work done in all the chapters.. and instead of saying Keep writing now I'll say that I've to keep reading, God knows when I'll be able to catch up..

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

oh well i have visualized caskett and ishveer together in many scenes whether its banter, silent love, hell hath no fury or she dying and he confessing and the way he looks at her or when she gets mad at castle and other people's chemistry. and i finish a season in a day by watching hem back to back.

oh so he is getting used to going near girl in less clothes things will progress further.

Honestly you always outlive my expectations no matter how weird they are. And the last chapter have set the bar high i am just waiting for the day. though looking at your magic to create those powerful moment i am deadly sure that i wont be even able to review because it will be so perfect.😳😳😳

And honestly i am waiting the day table turn it will be awesome to get our girl dumbfounded by his action rather than his looks. and i don't have even 1% doubt that he will this time fail to express his all hidden emotion without caring about people, place and things.

i was just asking because there also its love and pain in TFIOS. and i so loved the terrace part specially the way universe was allowing them to heal and our beloved writer was mysteriously pointing about what lays in future she cannot tell and is letting them enjoy the moment.

ya definitely we need to keep our emotions in check though i keep wondering what will happen when the actual thing occurs