#4 ~FF: Untold Stories~ - Page 55

Hi explosive box.

Finally the cat is out of the bag though its tail is still in there but that can wait😉. First tell me what you had as child only almonds and bournvita little champs or is it only Agatha Christie in your book shelf since time immemorial🤓.

Ok I am glad that i wasn't wrong entirely in cracking it my brain works a little.😎

Now girl you left me complete speechless though after reading this review you won't feel like that😆 but seriously I wasn't sure how to react I mean whether to admire your writing skill or the mystery it was hands down the best after all the painful chapter in previous book this was soothing balm though the main healing is still pending but looking at the cabin interlude I don't think I will be left disappointed in future.🤣

Finally chirveer met☺️ what an intensity what a passion rare thing even between the two lovers well chirveer are soulmate😳. When he was walking back in office I was just laughing at his surprise in wait for him but yet when you mentioned ishani and her tears in starting I understood there is entirely a new surprise for us also in tow because this ishani unlike the serial one have explosive brains and she proved that hands down she beat RV into it no doubt I mean she didn't let any emotional distraction rattle up her working brain. Ok chirveer the replies of RV cant he be real please I mean so smart so cold yet warm. But I admire chirag inspite of cracking the deal other day he didn't even once let that come up to him and easily played through. Shanella oh the dear dharampatni🤣 how will he react to her that all this while they were laid into trap and not their trap🤪. Seriously bug in office how clich of chirag I feel pity I guess ishani robbed him off what little brain he possessed back. Hey white peacock that was awesome. I guess chirag has got an idea of what ishani has lured him into😕. The best sentence in chirveer was the child and dog & pig one in single stroke RV accepted graciously that he is loyal dog any day better than dirty pig and calling him child must have brought lunacy in chirag to a whole new level👏👏. Ranveer threatening chirag omg that was so awesome I so loved him he is darling. Chirag got something long overdue. So ranveer do get the gist of what happened with ishani on that day😒 how much it must have hurted him and I am not complaining at all seeing the consequences of mentioning that thing.

What was that in the office😲 I am telling you her cabin is jinxed for their interludes see they get intense and passionate in that place. so you were indicating at that thing and honestly dear it was totally unexpected. I am just thinking that if just to show that moron they can get so passionate and sizzling☺️ what will happen when they are in real for it call the fire brigade please🤪. LM that was intense, passionate and sizzling and it was much more than I can say and ishani this girl never leaves a chance to lay her hands on him😆😆. O that PDA of shanella was compensated it was really the sadistic solace and chirag baby 🤣🤣 kya din aa gaye ishveer ka pda dekhna pad raha hai.

Now the 4 of them would be finding a cave to hide into🤓. And now the plan so this was the flaw and they were right to know the weakness of these both egotistical dumbos who let their ego get a bigger room then they themselves live in. shanella married him what a sensible decision🤣 and here shanella reminded more of ishani's mentality in serial once a dumb always a dumb🤪. They seriously hired a jagga jasoos wow so rich of them🥱. So Mr. RV said his plan at that day in the conference room of rubbing it on his face just like he did😉. He is really daring one. Her signature was the flaw hehe I got that. Finch off to Sydney asap. Ok so he crafted this entire plan as per chirag and will getting scot free also that's really amazing of him.

But ishani is the women of honour👏👏👏 and I can say this is the best character in this whole FF considering the fact her intelligence and brain was highly insulted in serial the way you have crafted her dude respect👏👏. And you deserving standing ovation twice one for the entire chapter and mystery and the other one for creating such an interesting personality you know what RV was smart since childhood and learnt a lot from HP itself but ishani this girl developed herself made what she is today to dismantle any one infront of her. But I am glad that piyush didn't totally underestimated her he has seen the potential of that girl and how she has evolved herself into. She knew everything but made sure that chirag shed tears of blood I mean he must be thinking of having a time turner and remove that episode of airport where he met these two love birds which he had no idea would turn into pythons and RV was right he underestimated the strength of these two together. So chirag falls into his own trap she made all the thing come under his own name and that idiot signed and gave money for his destruction as well. Now there are fake diamonds also reaching he lost money,revenge and his ego all shattered and powdering of him will be done twice once when she let him know the entire plan and second at art exhibition. Chirag🐷 and shanella playing with fire cause more good than harm. She will allow the Beijing thing to proceed and chirag himself made sure that nothing stops it. I so loved the fact that what was once her weakness which he exploited she used that same vulnerable form to destroy him. And now she is playing along to with that same for the bigger dhamaka.

RV dude sympathy for you she will kill him now. 😆😆😆

This was outstanding dear the best from you in terms of mystery till date. Nothing can be more interesting than this nothing. How much you worked for this chapter is clearly seen in the beauty with which it was executed. Jhappi dear🤗 for this masterpiece every adjective will fall short to describe it. Its too much I have written but couldn't control I wish I could praise you a little more but one thing will do- Agatha Christie.

Love you loads and even more after this masterpiece.❤️

DV🤗

Originally posted by: matsh

😆Res Res , Res!!!

Simply brilliant!! Wow!!

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Dear dear LM !! I don't know where to begin from on this review !! 👏👏👏 I have read it like so many times already and every time I find myself grinning and marveling at your fantastic abilities !! You rocked it girl !! I was so waiting for this one to unravel the mysteries and oh boy it made my day !! 😳 😳

First of all, the starting passage of Chirag daydreaming that he had made Ishani and Ranveer eat out of his hands.. and Bechara had no idea that he wont be able to eat anything for years now !! 😉😉😉

Oh the Chir Veer !! Oh our baeeesss ! 😛😛😛 Isnt Chirag the real chirag of this script, makes chapters interesting just by his kameenapan! The sparks flew between them as anticipated. Chirag had bugged the office, no wonder Ranveer put up such a great convincing performance that day with Ishani, we know who he was trying to impress now really !! 😳😳😳

Seriously, this was one hell of a confrontation long due and the son of b** had the nerve to hit Ranveer's weak spot and rubbed in how he executed his whole game of ruining ishani and him ! He absolutely deserved the hammerlock and more, I say. Loved the dialogs there, just how more hawwtwa can Ranveer/RV get ! Standing like a shield for Ishani and talking about "we" instead of her and him !!

You know, I remembered the diamond heist episode and the first ChirVeer confrontation after RV return, so much ! I wish the forum was active and we could have re-lived our ChirVeer fascination a tad bit, spamming your FF to 150 pages!! 🥳

But for you clearly the hammerlock was not enough since you chose to gave Chirag an unexpected jealousy pang additionally !! 🤪

how he must have felt hurt to see Ishani kissing the love of his life - Ranveer !! Oh, oh, dont goons have a heart ! and you chose to crush it.. how could you !! **getting tears in eyes by laughing** 😆😆😆 😆😆

Btw, somehow I was sure that Ranveer will not allow her to speak anything and kiss her to just kill the argument even before it began !! ☺️ ☺️They both HAD to kiss in front of Chirag in a classic show off, didnt they ! As if they needed an excuse, she says "He was still watching" ! Girl, we all wish we were watching !!

The kiss was so drool-worthy and I must say you have really mastered the art of kiss writing in this FF. Both the kisses were so different but highly exquisite !

I think Ranveer's virginity is definitely at risk now, our girl is all haarrnny and will leave no chances ! Just imagine they kissing for almost half an hour ! oh my oh my.. Ok I will shut up. ** hints at needing more** 😳😳😳

What followed was clearly an amazing reveal of the plotting and planning and counter plotting and planning ! 👏

You have outdone yourself here in the complexity, research and they way you put the lid on whole thing in earlier chapters, and threw just the teasers in every chapter bit by bit, we ate out of your hands, literally ! Heck, you even added Harry Potter perfectly to the mix !! Bravo ! Its a wonderful jigsaw that you created and fitted piece by piece, to bring up the whole thing suddently perfectly.. I have no words to praise you enough. ** Bows, bows** ⭐️

Ranveer is in his Sasural now, for first time in your FF though our show one had almost made a habbit of it ! The "self-sacrificing fool" sums his character perfectly though.

And as if all this was not enough, you still had to top it all with your intelligent Ishani ! How I wish our show one had at least 1% of her brain. 👍🏼

The girl just slays all these 4 men and makes them wish they were safer in a grave !! 😆😆😆How superbly she upped the game that Ranveer started and had Chirag too eating out of her so called despodent womenly weak hands !! Only to cost him a loss he can never recover ! How brilliant !

I literally read the whole thing at one go with eyes that kept widening with every line ! This one was sheer brilliance and a pun to all the men's intellect I suppose !😛😛😛

Oopar se, now she has another plan to with the art exhibition thing.. but honestly I don't have good vibes about it, to tell you the truth because Chirag is such a snake.. I hope you give her the victory which so sorely needs without foiling her plans.😲😲

and oh, I almost forgot, the whole Ishani dream in earlier chapter was too stunning and moving, and it actually made me scared since I read it at night. That and the fake confrontation literally gave me sleepless nights.

As you would have guessed, I found a bhaade ka computer and typing this all on that since the cell is hopeleslly pathetic for typing long reviews and this chapter would have literally made me steal one if I had to !! 😉😉😉

I have been itching to write long reviews on the last interludes and the chapters of this book, and you have no idea how much I have cursed my luck for not being able to do that ! I feel so happy today like man ki tamnna puri ho gayi !! 😃

Sorry this is so long to read ! but hey, it was you who gave such a looong and superb chapter, so you have to suffer !! 😉😉😉

Once again, it is such a good fortune to read this amazing and rich work, and also to know you !! Do keep up the great work that you do !! Lots of love and best wishes !!

🤗

Originally posted by: RoshniSingh

Standing Ovation for your brilliant and masterpiece work👏 and a tight hug to you 🤗What a brilliant piece of work LM! I m speechless. After completing the chapter I didn't find the words for few minutes. In fact I wasn't able to think how to react on this. Whether to admire your work or feel shocked for all the mysteries and perfect plan execution or blush or smile... What a way of execution of all the mysteries and perfect planning!👏👏 You just nailed it.

Perfect title of the most awaited chapter😉

Ranveer- Chirag confrontation😉😛😛 Most awaited one😉😆 I enjoyed it to the fullest😃😃

Bechare ne socha kuch or and hua kuch or..He fell into his own trap. He had acted in front of Ishani all those years back and now both Ranveer and Ishani acted in front of him but he forgot one thing- "He was good but they are better"😊😊

Everything is matter of time. The boy who was once weak and innocent is now a very powerful and cunning man and no one can dare to cross his path in wrong way.

The way Ranveer threatened him not to bring her name on his lips

Every reply from Ranveer made me fall for him all over again☺️ I love his attitude everytime when RV overpowers Ranveer

And finally taste of one of our demands☺️It was really passionate and very intense 😳😳so beautifully written 😛😛Left me to crave for more and more 😉😳😛

Shanella did marry Chirag😲😲 I thought She is smart as the way she was seducing Ranveer. Kya dekha usne Chirag me??😲😲

And Ishani Parekh👏👏👏 This woman overshadowed everyone. What a brilliant planning and she did everything on her own👏👏 No doubt "She is the finest woman with brains"😊😊 They decided to keep her aside from the plan and what she did?? She came with her own plan or usne sbki chhutti kr di⭐️⭐️

LM.. Thanks for giving us such a powerful character. Everyone has loved Ranveer as RV for his brain and attitude but this woman is no way less than RV. 👏 What I liked even more is what Chirag thought of her vulnerability, she used it as the weapon and she has bruised him badly... and it's not the end. Art exhibition is on the way😉😉

Thanks for PM

Waiting for next

Take care❤️

P.S. LM.. Thank you so much for giving us such an amazing chapter. Hugs to you for all your hard work. 🤗❤️

Loads of love❤️

Originally posted by: robal

Brilliant work 👏

I am speechless, this is one heck of a chapter and I loved it. This ishani is so smart and wow, Ranveer is flawless. I love them together. How can you write such long chapters, I am amazed and I love reading long chapters. I have no words left to describe your writinig, it's just flawless.

Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: pppworld1

wow what a brilliant execution... you are such a good writer.. the way you open the mystery part by part keeping the audience at the edge of their seat is simply marvelous.