#4 ~FF: Untold Stories~ - Page 114

Both episodes r really very good...the way Ishaani cared for Ranveer was simply awesome... B safe & stay healthy didu

Hy dr
Thr update is great
The way ranveer keeps loyalty before everything even his life 😲
Even that's gud, he didn't cared about his iwn health too
Ishani's anger is well justified here 😛
Her dream . now everyone know what that mean?
And really ranveer and harshad are gem in her life whom she can't be without 😃
Superb dr
Keep smiling and take care 😉
Ps: I am sorry as I was really so late in reading this part and commenting. Can't manage time for this.. Also wishing you the best year 😳

Hey LM,

Hey LM...Though I still don't have enough courage to write a review for such a beautiful piece of creation but this one is for the epistles...Hmmm childhood and that innocent love covered with loyalty all over...Reminds me of both, the initial episodes of our show and the two books of this ff...Such a wonderful period of time they were when we all believed that this show will continue for at least 5 years but...
Coming to the first BE...Well beauty that it was, the complete tree climbing. And that girl was always so open with Ranveer to show her real self, even at the cabin night at the resort...U-Uhm-Uhmm...Moving on, the whole part of Ranveer getting mesmerized in his village and the tree climbing was just amazing...The fact that Ishani had really climbed tree is really wonderful...And then Baa...God that woman is a robot or does she considered others as one...Whip...I mean seriously are to mad woman...Poor Ranveer had to go through so much...And Ishani witnessed it all, she would have felt far more pain than Ranveer then...And then comes ishveer's famous ice-cream scene...How I loved all those scenes from the show...And the way you have used those signatures of our show is just amazing.

And now the second BE...Haha nadas, ties and shoelaces were never his cup of tea and Ishani kept on making him learn but he...Though the way he learnt at the end is ...Hehe...
And so finally she made him to tie them...Lovely it is...And then comes the nadachadis...And still the same memories...I so loved those two-three particular scenes in the serial when they used to compete for it...Ishveer...
And our poor soul still was afraid of Baa...That woman needed a mental asylum I suppose...And then comes the whole copying fiasco...When if we comes in terms of Ishani then she did had a lot of pressure from Falguni...She doesn't allows her to be a kid really...But Ranveer was right, getting full marks with cheating never gives that hard work fruit feel...Though he was a little too over reacting, really...Well what can we expect, our Raja Harshchandra's aulad Ranveer...🤣
And pani Puri competition... Wow I am a champion in it...And another lot of memories from the show...phew... I love our show so much...And Ishani finally told her parents about it, I love Harshad so much for his endless and impartial love towards both of them...And their first hug, Remember the show one...Ranveer's( or rather Shakti) expression were just like a cute pup..And you have just made that scene even more beautiful with your writing...loved this epistle particularly so much...

And then the third BE...It's after the ragging incident , I suppose...Wooh...That woman doesn't posses neither a mind, nor a heart...Really I am still surprised by the show one's transformation... Like seriously who makes people wash cars in the rains...Just the same like watering plants in the rain...
And our genius too has gave his mind for brainwashing I suppose...Really this time Ishaani deserves a Nobel prize in terms of comparison with Ranveer's opinion on this topic...
And boy , you need bed rest and here you are doing silly jobs...New school searching, I soo love the fact that they both study in the same school...And here is Ranveer with a cold...Idiot...And turmeric milk...Argh! it does taste very bad in my opinion...
Ishaani's dream...That turning point...That night...Nooo...
Oh how I wish she would have never dreamt of something like that... But of course it was not in her hand we all know that...Also she is very young to know the real meaning of those dreams right now...Huh...even think about it gives me goosebumps...
Your writing is fantabulouse and Historic...really...Untold Stories is ingraved in my heart...And that's a Universal truth...
And I think that these are epistles of all the signature and Lovely scens of the show and ishveer, the one's which made us fall in love with them...
Keep going...Love ya' so, so much and waiting for the PAN's impatiently now...
I wish I could have write waiting for the next one...😔

PS.-I will reply for the chapters and epistles as soon as possible...Someday...

PS. 2- Are you on Instagram?...If yes then plzz tell me your user name...

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

hi dear how are you?
sorry see I am holding my ears please sorry next time I will inform and go it was a sudden plan. You both ganging up against me bachche ki jaan loge kya and you both should always remember one thing i am not going to leave you guys even if i leave the forum. Elvish is doing her job so perfectly justlike the way she writes and till now i haven't received a response from her.😆😆 you know after coming back the first thing i did was writing reviews to you guys because i know you both would fire me up if i delayed even for a day
🤗🤗

you know reading this whole thing again gives so much happiness and sometimes i wish time could go back to those times and i can review once again all the chapters and wait for your another update. even the hot romantic ones and sad crying ones both.

ranveer's birthday celebration improved with time and now she in present time will be focussing on giving more personal souvenir then other things 🤣 these personal gifts means double profit even for her and that's what miss parekh always prefers🤣

let her come in gorgeous avatar all the principles and orthodox approach goes straight to sea then its only them and nothing else in literal sense nothing else🤪 well can we blame them pani puri itself is such an awesome thing no one can deny.

see thats why i love you so much you never fail to surprise me i wish there was addition in last book as well because reading about love stuck puppies is much more fun given the level of matureness they show when around each other.

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hi LM
Hope you are good and less angry at me.

so this chapter is after his accident and ishani well i just have a one thing to tell how much less she speaks and even TB also😆😆😆 this girl but can we blame him and that old hag making car wash in rain. Baa must have fallen on her head many times and that wound took long time to heal that's why she ends up doing all these stupidities. but her rants really had me in splits this girl.

you know what i always like one thing that how you have maintained the innocence yet matureness in their diary entries even in book 1 this was such an awesome thing. Its difficult to bring both the factors together and you have like always done it brilliantly the way they care for each other and realise their responsibilities too is something very well depicted. how much happy she is by doing all the chugali in front of kailash and ranveer the funniest part is this boy can move mountain but get scarred of rats really and her care is really overwhelming.

how you do it everytime i mean till date never once your chapters lowered its essence and it makes me mesmerized every time you are really a abrilliant writer and this book is defintely my favourite one.

so she have these hazy nightmare since start but she is too small to understand them and is putting it aside only the clarity of dream intensified and detailing started. and rains are the deciding factorfor every part of their life and that rain also indicated to the nightmarish day of their life.

amazing update LM and even best thing is the fact that how much importance this story is to you even after completing it you have left so stone unturned to make it just perfect just for this fact i give a standing ovation to you dear your dedication is really admirable.

thank you so so much for this amazing surprise i just loved this update the most of all the bonus updates.

thnx for pm

lots of love
DV
please sorry

Originally posted by: PrinceAsif

Both episodes r really very good...the way Ishaani cared for Ranveer was simply awesome... B safe & stay healthy didu

Originally posted by: Mayashelly

Hy dr
Thr update is great
The way ranveer keeps loyalty before everything even his life 😲
Even that's gud, he didn't cared about his iwn health too
Ishani's anger is well justified here 😛
Her dream . now everyone know what that mean?
And really ranveer and harshad are gem in her life whom she can't be without 😃
Superb dr
Keep smiling and take care 😉
Ps: I am sorry as I was really so late in reading this part and commenting. Can't manage time for this.. Also wishing you the best year 😳

Originally posted by: Sania03337

Hey LM,

I wasn't able to be here because I was out of my town for studies.😭

Well, I am sorry because of not giving individual replies for your epistles and chapters . I am really very sorry and ready for the chapals.😆

Coming back to the topic , as we know that all good things have to come to an end , and so this book too.😭 but it was a great journey of approximately 14 monthes , which we had😳 .Every word of your book has been sown in our heart like a mango seed 😛.you have done a great job👏 . If we missed the essence in the show , you made us gain it 😳 I am just out of words right now .Dead I am blessed to have a writer like you in this world[Embarrassed]. Though, I know I am failing in defining this but it was purely perfect👏 , I must saw . It touched evry string of my heart😳 . I know I am bad at it , but I dedicated these two poems to you and the best novel I have ever read , The UNTOLD STORIES :

UNTOLD STORIES

Your and mine untold stories,

Inscribed in our dear diaries,

Having our witches and fairies,

Combine to make a story,

Unknown to the world,

Of the times when we felt weak and old,

And when you will open up the pages which were fold,

Since a long time,

You will find your name written with gold.

BEAUTIFUL PAST

A nightmare,

A daydream,

A friend,

An enemy,

Everything a man can have ,

Is you to me.

I know I am wrong,

I know I am not perfect,

I know I make mistakes,

But I also know,

You don't care,

About all these things,

And I know,

You will be their,

When no one else will be their.

The distances are also the paths,

The lead me to you,

That lead you to me,

So why to be afraid,

When No one lead a happy life,

Except you and me.

We have memories,

Of good times,

Of bad times ,

Nursery rhymes,

Horse rides,

Blue files,

Walking miles ,

In our present,

We hold a beautiful past,

If you see,

We can take to have new start,

We hold a beautiful past.

With loads of hugs and love , I wish you happiness and blessings. 😛

With love ,

FAM.😳

Originally posted by: Anne30ishveer

Hey LM...Though I still don't have enough courage to write a review for such a beautiful piece of creation but this one is for the epistles...Hmmm childhood and that innocent love covered with loyalty all over...Reminds me of both, the initial episodes of our show and the two books of this ff...Such a wonderful period of time they were when we all believed that this show will continue for at least 5 years but...
Coming to the first BE...Well beauty that it was, the complete tree climbing. And that girl was always so open with Ranveer to show her real self, even at the cabin night at the resort...U-Uhm-Uhmm...Moving on, the whole part of Ranveer getting mesmerized in his village and the tree climbing was just amazing...The fact that Ishani had really climbed tree is really wonderful...And then Baa...God that woman is a robot or does she considered others as one...Whip...I mean seriously are to mad woman...Poor Ranveer had to go through so much...And Ishani witnessed it all, she would have felt far more pain than Ranveer then...And then comes ishveer's famous ice-cream scene...How I loved all those scenes from the show...And the way you have used those signatures of our show is just amazing.

And now the second BE...Haha nadas, ties and shoelaces were never his cup of tea and Ishani kept on making him learn but he...Though the way he learnt at the end is ...Hehe...
And so finally she made him to tie them...Lovely it is...And then comes the nadachadis...And still the same memories...I so loved those two-three particular scenes in the serial when they used to compete for it...Ishveer...
And our poor soul still was afraid of Baa...That woman needed a mental asylum I suppose...And then comes the whole copying fiasco...When if we comes in terms of Ishani then she did had a lot of pressure from Falguni...She doesn't allows her to be a kid really...But Ranveer was right, getting full marks with cheating never gives that hard work fruit feel...Though he was a little too over reacting, really...Well what can we expect, our Raja Harshchandra's aulad Ranveer...🤣
And pani Puri competition... Wow I am a champion in it...And another lot of memories from the show...phew... I love our show so much...And Ishani finally told her parents about it, I love Harshad so much for his endless and impartial love towards both of them...And their first hug, Remember the show one...Ranveer's( or rather Shakti) expression were just like a cute pup..And you have just made that scene even more beautiful with your writing...loved this epistle particularly so much...

And then the third BE...It's after the ragging incident , I suppose...Wooh...That woman doesn't posses neither a mind, nor a heart...Really I am still surprised by the show one's transformation... Like seriously who makes people wash cars in the rains...Just the same like watering plants in the rain...
And our genius too has gave his mind for brainwashing I suppose...Really this time Ishaani deserves a Nobel prize in terms of comparison with Ranveer's opinion on this topic...
And boy , you need bed rest and here you are doing silly jobs...New school searching, I soo love the fact that they both study in the same school...And here is Ranveer with a cold...Idiot...And turmeric milk...Argh! it does taste very bad in my opinion...
Ishaani's dream...That turning point...That night...Nooo...
Oh how I wish she would have never dreamt of something like that... But of course it was not in her hand we all know that...Also she is very young to know the real meaning of those dreams right now...Huh...even think about it gives me goosebumps...
Your writing is fantabulouse and Historic...really...Untold Stories is ingraved in my heart...And that's a Universal truth...
And I think that these are epistles of all the signature and Lovely scens of the show and ishveer, the one's which made us fall in love with them...
Keep going...Love ya' so, so much and waiting for the PAN's impatiently now...
I wish I could have write waiting for the next one...😔

PS.-I will reply for the chapters and epistles as soon as possible...Someday...

PS. 2- Are you on Instagram?...If yes then plzz tell me your user name...