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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey, LM! Here's the review of the 52nd epistle.




I loved some of the lines which you have used, here. They are like, so so so true.



The art of manipulation is perhaps the most complex yet simple source of destruction.



I know that the teenage years are the golden years of self-discovery...



Love can make people do things that nobody could have even dreamed of them...



I know you better than you know yourself...



"No, I'm saying that manipulation is a very, very dirty game. It's a very slow and deliberate process. There are some people who are diabolical puppeteers or manipulators who can control situations as per their whims and desires because they have the skill set to do such kind of a thing. We cannot always be assured that we'll be able to see through them. So don't judge anyone without knowing the scenario."



"No, you are too trusting and have terrible judgment of people,"



"Mind reading and seeing through facades are two different things. You're brilliant in the former, no doubt, but you're poor in the latter,"




Thank God, I am good at both. *sighs* And I know LM, you are good at both, too.



"Manipulation is a rarely mastered art that requires great amounts of cunning and resourcefulness. If gotten right, it's nearly impossible to see through, especially if there's a strong foundation of trust. So don't take it lightly and underestimate its power... it could happen to anyone."



Doubt -



"No, I'm saying that you have an excellent knowledge on this, but you are no manipulator by nature,"



Ranveer argues that manipulation is necessary in the stock market. But he also adds that it's against his ethical principles. So, is Ranveer arguing that he is a manipulator at times? (he just gave a gimmick of it to Ishaani, also)



Well, coming back. This was a mind blowing update! It the explanation part literally blew my mind apart along with fascinating me the way it did. <3 But it was also my turn to freak out after Sugar Pie, did. Ranveer and me are so similar!



I too was explaining the difficult concept of love to my 15 year old cousin (elder by one year). She just wasn't a big believer in it and was ranting and ranting about the 'stupid' concept of love. And I had to explain it to her. Finally, after so many dubious looks and convinced smiles, and two hours (I could've as well read a book) she declared that love is interesting and she finally believed in it.



Er, see, I too got deviated like Ishaani. *slaps her forehead* Coming back, Ranveer is appointed as Ishaani's driver and he thinks that it's too high a job for him. This guy is too humble and grateful! And three days of convincing! Ranveer is truly made of kisi aur mitti. And the whole manipulation explanation which you've given is BEAUTIFUL. Every word is true.



Women discussing about that girl as if she is an oddity is cruel. People never often do put themselves in the shoes of the ones in problem. That's the whole problem in our society. How many ever decades passed, human thought process never changes much for the good. :(



Ishaani and Ranveer are so like doing a case study. Oh, this resembles me again. Must admit, your FF is the most realistic one which has some or the other qualities of people from day-to-day life.




He-he, Ranveer's slip of tongue was so adorable. And Ishaani blushing and jealous. Well, well, someone is head over heels in love, isn't so? Pity she never realised it. This Book Three is an eye-opener mostly for the Interlude Ishaani and a lil' for Ranveer (he too can observe while reading his entries that she was in love with him, I guess).



Ranveer patiently making Ishaani understand in spite of her stance not to was <3. And Ishaani is actually having a terrible judgement of people. And they both agree that Ranveer will be for her to protect her. But he also has inhibitions about Ishaani falling in love and pushing him away. But she is so sure. Oh, this is such an irony. She finally did that and became a prey to all the manipulation. It's like, most of the chapters, here - the Promises and This update is all futuristic. The last part was excellently written, as well.



Well, I have been noticing that we're getting long updates. <3 Ha, I am so glad for that. And there are only eight more epistles to go! Interludes. <33 I actually feel that if you keep up the same pace, you will be able to finish Book Three by May.



A beautiful update, again. And update the next one, soon enough!



Love,
Poplu.
Edited by -FlameOfHope- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
But actually I loved the 'Smiling Through My Soul'. It's truly what I found adorable and deeply meaningful. And 'Washed Away' gave me that sadistic pleasure while reading it. *gives an evil grin*
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Posted: 9 years ago

Review : Loops & Hoops ( Epistle 26)

( I am not sure if I have reviewed this chap or not, if I have kindly bare another review 😛 )

First of all I so understand Ishani 's anger on Ranveer, cause I am way worse dancer than Ishani hahaa . Poor soul, I can so relate to her, and Ranveer wanted to participate with Ishani because there is something called " Dance pe chance " ahem ahem 😛🤣

But at least they came on third place, if it had been me I would have created world war 3 for sending me to dance competition hahaa😈

Damn I love Ishu here ❤️ When she said "ow I'll see how he doesn't make the amalgamation. In fact, I'll see to it that my whole name is amalgamated as his pseudonym now! Huh!" I cracked up I swear 😆😆, and you go girl I love her attitude Okey I can start to see some similarties between us , was this what you and Aaru was talking about?😲😲 And senorita don't you dare give me criptical answer

"Yeah okay fine, we came in third, so it's a win-win everywhere. But still, it was thankfully just a school competition so atleast Ranveer's reputation isn't at risk. Mr. Perfect Prefect. Ahem, that just sounds ridiculous, and full of envy. May be I am, but you can't blame me! Nobody can be this perfect at everything he does. Name it and he is - prefect, yes; first ranker, yes; student of the year, yes; college representative; yes, best participant in all forms of the creative and literary arts, yes; best in all academic subjects, yes. Damn it, he's a whiz kid! He's supernatural, I swear." - Her ranting about him was adorable and damn funny , oh Ishu ! This is couple goals 😆😛😛

LM ARE U WRITING ISHANI OR ME? 😲😲Like so many simmilarties in one epistle!!! Her teachers drool on her ability to talk non- stop .😲😲 Welcome to the club Ishu 😛🤗 . They practically have to ask me to shut up atleast thrice per lecture. They know I'm good at studies too" - This part reminded so much of my school year last year😆😆 , the teacher had to ask me to shut up and stop laughing because I was always the one who stopped laughing last🤣😈


"So now you can imagine the expectations of the school riding upon Ranveer when we were participating for this inter-school dance competition and you can imagine how much the teachers must have expected from me. Ranveer was never the problem - I was. Atleast I can safely say that my teachers were genuinely impressed with me for upholding the school's name and for a good performance. You personally ask me, I'm glad that I didn't faint on-stage in fright." - Okey this is enough LM 😆😆 you are basically freaking me out now, cause when ever I have exam and test my biggest goal is to not faint!!!

YES Ishu you should kiss Ranveer😛😛 , when he slept on the terrance for you with the puppy . You are late , but chalta hai boss 😎 Aww Ranveer has to be the most patient teacher 👍🏼That is adorable These two makes us all go " aww"😳😳

Is Ranveer out of his mind?😆😆 State competition😲😲I swear he is lucky if he survive Ishani's evil plans, I am on Ishani's side on this 😈😈 Just cause I found soulsister in her , wow I never thought I would relate this much to Ishani😆😆😆

I am so excited for that they are going to Manali😃😃 okey don't judge me but I have never been in India so don't know a lot , but is it not snow in Manali? Okey this is such a stupid question, and you are going to laugh at me. Damn this is awkward... ahem I will just go and hide my face!!!

"Honestly, if Ranveer loves being a daredevil, I'm going to be putting my foot down this year. I'm not going to risk his life for something as stupid as kite flying. Okay shush, nobody should know that I just called 'kite flying' stupid because Papa and Ranveer will both disavow me. But still, it's dangerous. That kite cost Amir and Hassan a lot in The Kite Runner and goodness knows I couldn't even imagine anything happening to Ranveer" - Okey Ishu might me 100% crazy😆😆but she is cute as hell, her care for her Ranveer is 100% adorable And do I need to say anything about your reference to " The Kite Runner" That book gave me so much personally , gosh LM just because of a reference from my favorite novel made me fall for you all over again❤️❤️

"Great, I already feel bad about it. Hmm. Now I'll have to go and make his mood proper, and somehow convince him to accept it. I think I will need to put up a practical argument that he's freeze to death instantly at -2 degrees if he doesn't have any accessories on. Idiot; sometimes, I really wonder where does his common sense go?" I agree with Ishani here,😆😆Ranveer your idiot do you want to die in the cold Trust me on this bro , I know a lot about winters 😆😆Hehe Ishani in this update was the carbon copy of me LM😛😛

A very funny update to read LM Amazing job as always Senorita 😳😳A huge hug from me 🤗🤗 Keep writing like this 😉😉

Loads of love

MM❤️❤️

Edited by ShadikaIshVeer - 9 years ago
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Hey dear how are you hope you are enjoying vacations very well
Starting from the start this heading caught my attention it's very informative chapter in life as well
Ranveer and his own long chain of information always leaves me in an aww is he reading philosophy also well he don't need to I guess he knows each and every subject too well
So from here start all that driver crap I mean now he is personally every time around ishani wheather at home or outside
Ishveer also gossip so much but the only difference is they have a meaningful conversation
Our society is definitely harsh on girls and when it comes to falling in love and running away and if mistakenly she gets dumped then he'll break loose for her and everyone points at her
This whole chapter gives an Insight on their future story no matter how much ishani deny the fact but ranveer k ows she can be easily manipulated as she is too naive to see through anyone's facade
But the whole outburst of ishani and blushing and jealousy was very awesome to read am just not able to understand if at all she had done one sensible thing of reading her own diary entries after ranveer was gone scene would have been different I mean it's so obvious that she loves him and ranveer was quick to catch on that point
Well you have explained very perfectly difference between manipulation mind reading and convincing
But though they promised that they will scan each and every person before he goes to the other ranveer never got the chance or should I say that ishani got so easily manipulated that she never gave a thought about all their conversation.
Well to be very honest you are the most ambiguous writer I have come across I mean from the start your each and every chapter just don't give the proper trail to land at any conclusions or should I say you leave such clues that no one will able to arrive at ending judgements that easily. Here also this example wheather she will be able to trust anyone or not and wheather that void will be filled with the love or not is still a dicey point.
I guess this chapter was a whole insight I to what happened to ishani how she got that easily manipulated and how she wronged her friend in every sense and how she did the thing she was most confident about like never pushing him away never getting that easily manipulated
I must say your chirag was really a hell of villain he played heis mind games very well and I must appreciate your effort in coming up with such a character who really looks like a villain and not some laughing joke personality
So I guess after getting duped by chirag ishani did each and everything ranveer said about her wheather making a nmw in society or taking revenge from that manipulative chirag
You know what this story is well beyond my hopes and expectations I !mean it's so well crafted that I a really short of words to explain
Now these both felt for their most destructive demons heartbreak and betrayals now I just hope that they are able to heal themselves with the help of each other and I just can't wait to see what ranveer does to chirag when he comes to know about her suffering because no matter how much he pretend to hate her or hurt her by her cold look no o e is allowed to do that to her
Thnx for pm dear
And a big applause for this whole beautifully written chapter
Waitng for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi LM,

Nice Epistle dear doing a amazing job keep going 😉😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer

Review : Loops & Hoops ( Epistle 26)

( I am not sure if I have reviewed this chap or not, if we have kindly bare another review 😛 )

First of all I so understand Ishani 's anger on Ranveer, cause I am way worse dancer than Ishani hahaa . Poor soul, I can so relate to her, and Ranveer wanted to participate with Ishani because there is something called " Dance pe chance " ahem ahem 😛🤣

But at least they came on third place, if it had been me I would have created world war 3 for sending me to dance competition hahaa😈

Damn I love Ishu here ❤️ When she said "ow I'll see how he doesn't make the amalgamation. In fact, I'll see to it that my whole name is amalgamated as his pseudonym now! Huh!" I cracked up I swear 😆😆, and you go girl I love her attitude Okey I can start to see some similarties between us , was this what you and Aaru was talking about?😲😲 And senorita don't you dare give me criptical answer

"Yeah okay fine, we came in third, so it's a win-win everywhere. But still, it was thankfully just a school competition so atleast Ranveer's reputation isn't at risk. Mr. Perfect Prefect. Ahem, that just sounds ridiculous, and full of envy. May be I am, but you can't blame me! Nobody can be this perfect at everything he does. Name it and he is - prefect, yes; first ranker, yes; student of the year, yes; college representative; yes, best participant in all forms of the creative and literary arts, yes; best in all academic subjects, yes. Damn it, he's a whiz kid! He's supernatural, I swear." - Her ranting about him was adorable and damn funny , oh Ishu ! This is couple goals 😆😛😛

LM ARE U WRITING ISHANI OR ME? 😲😲Like so many simmilarties in one epistle!!! Her teachers drool on her ability to talk non- stop .😲😲 Welcome to the club Ishu 😛🤗 . They practically have to ask me to shut up atleast thrice per lecture. They know I'm good at studies too" - This part reminded so much of my school year last year😆😆 , the teacher had to ask me to shut up and stop laughing because I was always the one who stopped laughing last🤣😈


"So now you can imagine the expectations of the school riding upon Ranveer when we were participating for this inter-school dance competition and you can imagine how much the teachers must have expected from me. Ranveer was never the problem - I was. Atleast I can safely say that my teachers were genuinely impressed with me for upholding the school's name and for a good performance. You personally ask me, I'm glad that I didn't faint on-stage in fright." - Okey this is enough LM 😆😆 you are basically freaking me out now, cause when ever I have exam and test my biggest goal is to not faint!!!

YES Ishu you should kiss Ranveer😛😛 , when he slept on the terrance for you with the puppy . You are late , but chalta hai boss 😎 Aww Ranveer has to be the most patient teacher 👍🏼That is adorable These two makes us all go " aww"😳😳

Is Ranveer out of his mind?😆😆 State competition😲😲I swear he is lucky if he survive Ishani's evil plans, I am on Ishani's side on this 😈😈 Just cause I found soulsister in her , wow I never thought I would relate this much to Ishani😆😆😆

I am so excited for that they are going to Manali😃😃 okey don't judge me but I have never been in India so don't know a lot , but is it not snow in Manali? Okey this is such a stupid question, and you are going to laugh at me. Damn this is awkward... ahem I will just go and hide my face!!!

"Honestly, if Ranveer loves being a daredevil, I'm going to be putting my foot down this year. I'm not going to risk his life for something as stupid as kite flying. Okay shush, nobody should know that I just called 'kite flying' stupid because Papa and Ranveer will both disavow me. But still, it's dangerous. That kite cost Amir and Hassan a lot in The Kite Runner and goodness knows I couldn't even imagine anything happening to Ranveer" - Okey Ishu might me 100% crazy😆😆but she is cute as hell, her care for her Ranveer is 100% adorable And do I need to say anything about your reference to " The Kite Runner" That book gave me so much personally , gosh LM just because of a reference from my favorite novel made me fall for you all over again❤️❤️

"Great, I already feel bad about it. Hmm. Now I'll have to go and make his mood proper, and somehow convince him to accept it. I think I will need to put up a practical argument that he's freeze to death instantly at -2 degrees if he doesn't have any accessories on. Idiot; sometimes, I really wonder where does his common sense go?" I agree with Ishani here,😆😆Ranveer your idiot do you want to die in the cold Trust me on this bro , I know a lot about winters 😆😆Hehe Ishani in this update was the carbon copy of me LM😛😛

A very funny update to read LM Amazing job as always Senorita 😳😳A huge hug from me 🤗🤗 Keep writing like this 😉😉

Loads of love

MM❤️❤️





Haha, Sugar Pie, hence its is proved that Ishaani resembles you in Book 2. 😳😳 And that red part, I wanted to say that I found similarities in Ranveer and me throughout Book Two and some of Book Three, as well. 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-





Haha, Sugar Pie, hence its is proved that Ishaani resembles you in Book 2. 😳😳 And that red part, I wanted to say that I found similarities in Ranveer and me throughout Book Two and some of Book Three, as well. 😆😆


Let me read book 2 compleate 😆😆 Seriously did Lm get inspired by us😲😲 I was so freaked out when I read this update😆😆 I was like " OH MY FREAKING , THATS ME "🤣

Hahaa really?😲😲 I will have to notes about Ranveer then😉
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Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer


Let me read book 2 compleate 😆😆 Seriously did Lm get inspired by us😲😲 I was so freaked out when I read this update😆😆 I was like " OH MY FREAKING , THATS ME "🤣

Hahaa really?😲😲 I will have to notes about Ranveer then😉



OH GOD, you are too cute. ⭐️⭐️ And LM didn't know me properly till the 27th Epistle. 😆😆 But Ranveer is so like me in the whole Book Two. 😉😉 Except the Epistle 29, I guess. 😆😆
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Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-



OH GOD, you are too cute. ⭐️⭐️ And LM didn't know me properly till the 27th Epistle. 😆😆 But Ranveer is so like me in the whole Book Two. 😉😉 Except the Epistle 29, I guess. 😆😆


Chup kar😭😭 Dont call me cute , u are cute yourself Apple Pie Oh acha 😆😆 Shorry my mistake 😛😛 Hehee okey I will read Ranveers character carefully😆😆
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Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer


Chup kar😭😭 Dont call me cute , u are cute yourself Apple Pie Oh acha 😆😆 Shorry my mistake 😛😛 Hehee okey I will read Ranveers character carefully😆😆




What happened? 😲😲 Ahem, do we need to again go back on that discussion? I am not as cute as you, girl. You are the cutest person I have ever met. 😳😳 He-he, it's okay. And yep, sure. 😉😉


We will shift to your thread. Otherwise, you will break your promise of not spamming. 😆😆

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