#3 ~FF: Untold Stories~ - Page 12

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

What happened? 😲😲 Ahem, do we need to again go back on that discussion? I am not as cute as you, girl. You are the cutest person I have ever met. 😳😳 He-he, it's okay. And yep, sure. 😉😉

We will shift to your thread. Otherwise, you will break your promise of not spamming. 😆😆

Hi LM..,
Epistle was no doubt an amazing one..
Hats off to your writing capabilities 👏 👏
And your concepts are something which make your writings effective..

This epistle was something a kind of lesson as well..

Aaah Ranveer knew Ishani very well that she could easily be manipulated,
Poor girl..how hurting it'd be for her when she is reading this epistle now become a new Ishani... 😭 😭 ,

There are many things which relate to her new life(without Ranveer) ,
As she got under the spell of chirag's blablabala... 😡
She pushed Ranveer while getting her love 😭 😭 , as Ranveer feared...
If he'd be there he'd definitely smelled chirag's intentions,though he did but Ishani pushed him away...

There were many lighter parts as well..to lessen the effect of serious no is which adds more to your style...

Keep rocking dear

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

Hey LM! Is it okay if I don't review 'Washed Away' and 'Smiling Through My Soul'? Because they are mild chapters. The asli baat u believe lies in the other two. I don't remember the name but I know that it's the forest dream and the eighteen promises. Also, I am yet to read this one, too.

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Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

But actually I loved the 'Smiling Through My Soul'. It's truly what I found adorable and deeply meaningful. And 'Washed Away' gave me that sadistic pleasure while reading it. *gives an evil grin*

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Originally posted by: ShadikaIshVeer

Review : Loops & Hoops ( Epistle 26)

( I am not sure if I have reviewed this chap or not, if I have kindly bare another review 😛 )

First of all I so understand Ishani 's anger on Ranveer, cause I am way worse dancer than Ishani hahaa . Poor soul, I can so relate to her, and Ranveer wanted to participate with Ishani because there is something called " Dance pe chance " ahem ahem 😛🤣

But at least they came on third place, if it had been me I would have created world war 3 for sending me to dance competition hahaa😈

Damn I love Ishu here ❤️ When she said "ow I'll see how he doesn't make the amalgamation. In fact, I'll see to it that my whole name is amalgamated as his pseudonym now! Huh!" I cracked up I swear 😆😆, and you go girl I love her attitude Okey I can start to see some similarties between us , was this what you and Aaru was talking about?😲😲 And senorita don't you dare give me criptical answer

"Yeah okay fine, we came in third, so it's a win-win everywhere. But still, it was thankfully just a school competition so atleast Ranveer's reputation isn't at risk. Mr. Perfect Prefect. Ahem, that just sounds ridiculous, and full of envy. May be I am, but you can't blame me! Nobody can be this perfect at everything he does. Name it and he is - prefect, yes; first ranker, yes; student of the year, yes; college representative; yes, best participant in all forms of the creative and literary arts, yes; best in all academic subjects, yes. Damn it, he's a whiz kid! He's supernatural, I swear." - Her ranting about him was adorable and damn funny , oh Ishu ! This is couple goals 😆😛😛

LM ARE U WRITING ISHANI OR ME? 😲😲Like so many simmilarties in one epistle!!! Her teachers drool on her ability to talk non- stop .😲😲 Welcome to the club Ishu 😛🤗 . They practically have to ask me to shut up atleast thrice per lecture. They know I'm good at studies too" - This part reminded so much of my school year last year😆😆 , the teacher had to ask me to shut up and stop laughing because I was always the one who stopped laughing last🤣😈

"So now you can imagine the expectations of the school riding upon Ranveer when we were participating for this inter-school dance competition and you can imagine how much the teachers must have expected from me. Ranveer was never the problem - I was. Atleast I can safely say that my teachers were genuinely impressed with me for upholding the school's name and for a good performance. You personally ask me, I'm glad that I didn't faint on-stage in fright." - Okey this is enough LM 😆😆 you are basically freaking me out now, cause when ever I have exam and test my biggest goal is to not faint!!!

YES Ishu you should kiss Ranveer😛😛 , when he slept on the terrance for you with the puppy . You are late , but chalta hai boss 😎 Aww Ranveer has to be the most patient teacher 👍🏼That is adorable These two makes us all go " aww"😳😳

Is Ranveer out of his mind?😆😆 State competition😲😲I swear he is lucky if he survive Ishani's evil plans, I am on Ishani's side on this 😈😈 Just cause I found soulsister in her , wow I never thought I would relate this much to Ishani😆😆😆

I am so excited for that they are going to Manali😃😃 okey don't judge me but I have never been in India so don't know a lot , but is it not snow in Manali? Okey this is such a stupid question, and you are going to laugh at me. Damn this is awkward... ahem I will just go and hide my face!!!

"Honestly, if Ranveer loves being a daredevil, I'm going to be putting my foot down this year. I'm not going to risk his life for something as stupid as kite flying. Okay shush, nobody should know that I just called 'kite flying' stupid because Papa and Ranveer will both disavow me. But still, it's dangerous. That kite cost Amir and Hassan a lot in The Kite Runner and goodness knows I couldn't even imagine anything happening to Ranveer" - Okey Ishu might me 100% crazy😆😆but she is cute as hell, her care for her Ranveer is 100% adorable And do I need to say anything about your reference to " The Kite Runner" That book gave me so much personally , gosh LM just because of a reference from my favorite novel made me fall for you all over again❤️❤️

"Great, I already feel bad about it. Hmm. Now I'll have to go and make his mood proper, and somehow convince him to accept it. I think I will need to put up a practical argument that he's freeze to death instantly at -2 degrees if he doesn't have any accessories on. Idiot; sometimes, I really wonder where does his common sense go?" I agree with Ishani here,😆😆Ranveer your idiot do you want to die in the cold Trust me on this bro , I know a lot about winters 😆😆Hehe Ishani in this update was the carbon copy of me LM😛😛

A very funny update to read LM Amazing job as always Senorita 😳😳A huge hug from me 🤗🤗 Keep writing like this 😉😉

Loads of love

MM❤️❤️

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Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hey dear how are you hope you are enjoying vacations very well
Starting from the start this heading caught my attention it's very informative chapter in life as well
Ranveer and his own long chain of information always leaves me in an aww is he reading philosophy also well he don't need to I guess he knows each and every subject too well
So from here start all that driver crap I mean now he is personally every time around ishani wheather at home or outside
Ishveer also gossip so much but the only difference is they have a meaningful conversation
Our society is definitely harsh on girls and when it comes to falling in love and running away and if mistakenly she gets dumped then he'll break loose for her and everyone points at her
This whole chapter gives an Insight on their future story no matter how much ishani deny the fact but ranveer k ows she can be easily manipulated as she is too naive to see through anyone's facade
But the whole outburst of ishani and blushing and jealousy was very awesome to read am just not able to understand if at all she had done one sensible thing of reading her own diary entries after ranveer was gone scene would have been different I mean it's so obvious that she loves him and ranveer was quick to catch on that point
Well you have explained very perfectly difference between manipulation mind reading and convincing
But though they promised that they will scan each and every person before he goes to the other ranveer never got the chance or should I say that ishani got so easily manipulated that she never gave a thought about all their conversation.
Well to be very honest you are the most ambiguous writer I have come across I mean from the start your each and every chapter just don't give the proper trail to land at any conclusions or should I say you leave such clues that no one will able to arrive at ending judgements that easily. Here also this example wheather she will be able to trust anyone or not and wheather that void will be filled with the love or not is still a dicey point.
I guess this chapter was a whole insight I to what happened to ishani how she got that easily manipulated and how she wronged her friend in every sense and how she did the thing she was most confident about like never pushing him away never getting that easily manipulated
I must say your chirag was really a hell of villain he played heis mind games very well and I must appreciate your effort in coming up with such a character who really looks like a villain and not some laughing joke personality
So I guess after getting duped by chirag ishani did each and everything ranveer said about her wheather making a nmw in society or taking revenge from that manipulative chirag
You know what this story is well beyond my hopes and expectations I !mean it's so well crafted that I a really short of words to explain
Now these both felt for their most destructive demons heartbreak and betrayals now I just hope that they are able to heal themselves with the help of each other and I just can't wait to see what ranveer does to chirag when he comes to know about her suffering because no matter how much he pretend to hate her or hurt her by her cold look no o e is allowed to do that to her
Thnx for pm dear
And a big applause for this whole beautifully written chapter
Waitng for next

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Originally posted by: sakshi5050

Hi LM,

Nice Epistle dear doing a amazing job keep going 😉😉

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Originally posted by: 1ishveerian

Hi LM..,
Epistle was no doubt an amazing one..
Hats off to your writing capabilities 👏 👏
And your concepts are something which make your writings effective..

This epistle was something a kind of lesson as well..

Aaah Ranveer knew Ishani very well that she could easily be manipulated,
Poor girl..how hurting it'd be for her when she is reading this epistle now become a new Ishani... 😭 😭 ,

There are many things which relate to her new life(without Ranveer) ,
As she got under the spell of chirag's blablabala... 😡
She pushed Ranveer while getting her love 😭 😭 , as Ranveer feared...
If he'd be there he'd definitely smelled chirag's intentions,though he did but Ishani pushed him away...

There were many lighter parts as well..to lessen the effect of serious no is which adds more to your style...

Keep rocking dear

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MM, you're the cutest of all and I think we all did arrive at this decision that you could not challenge the fact now. And hehe, sorry for freaking you out once again. 😆😆

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

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No problem, review whichever chapter you feel like. Ismein puchne waali kya baat hai? 🤪🤪