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Posted: 9 years ago

And then comes the leap..Dear it's my favourite phase.😳😳 .I don't know why but I enjoyed their adult years more than their childhood years even if they were dark..😲😳where as in my case I still miss my childhood...😆ha ha..anyways...the way you connected the epistles with interlude that was really nice...⭐️ In the interlude-1 I really liked the plot a lot..And the way you descriped the grave attitude of Ranveer..And wow !!! Caffeinated Love - sounds great...😳 he he... I had assumed it to be Ishani's name in Ian Hake-Parish 😉😳...superb thought & superb pseudo name too..he he😆..And I just loved the scene at Sydney business school.😳.You have so beautifully explained the scenario right from Ranveer's entry to his exit from the hall...That's so intriguing ...And the small conversation between Ranveer & Steve,that was amazing 😳😳...I was really impressed with Steve's question "What connects a businessman to an author in the fields of time and money, sir?" & also with Ranveer's reply ...That's love.😳😳.he he..It's inspirational...just loved it 😳...I was really smiling while reading it...A big hug to you...🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

Interlude-2...I don't know what to write about..It's full of agony yet so captivating 😳😳...I was completely lost...Fantastic job dear...❤️ She was so alone,no one by her side to care for... "Just like a cold manipulative bitch" - It hurts yaar & it hurts even more when You are lonely...the pain she must be going through which she can't share with anybody as she does have none.. it's depressing...I can understand her state of mind...I just felt like crying...This piece is so touching & influential...wonderful darling... On the positive side I really appreciate that Ishani has solely rebuilt the Parekh empire from the ashes without anyone's help...She is independent and strong (but equally vulnerable at times,mainly emotionally).Actually I did n't expect Ishani to be this tough & strict & it came as a surprise for me...But it's so nice yaar..It's the fact..How life changes one person so drastically..It's beautiful..Now Ishani is the real competitor for Ranveer..-XD.. And I really chuckled at the sentence when she said "have a good day" to Puneet..LOL...after yelling quite a bit & even threatening to fire ,..he he..that was really cute of her...It's like scold a person to the fullest & then saying "have a good day"..he he...that's so interesting about their personalities..Even Ranveer had this type of scene in the previous chapter...They are true at hearts..love them a lot & love you too...❤️❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago

Why did Ishani lost the ability to cry in epistle-20 ..& again she lost the ability to cry four years ago..I'm a bit confused here..Interlude-3 was once again brilliant.. The intense conversation of Ishani & non-existent Ranveer in the bathroom was quite poignant...beautifully penned..But I have a doubt..Does scars really give temporary relief..I mean self harm...Being suicidal is something else when you have lost the desire to live & simply want to end your life...and I could understand that..But self harming is the thing which I m finding a bit difficult to grasp...😲

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Posted: 9 years ago

You are brilliant dear..⭐️⭐️ seriously the dream part was excellent(I have one doubt which I ll be writing in a while) This is it..really..In reality mostly our dreams are like this,connecting different events at the same time,merging different plots in one dream & many times confusing us...magnificent idea...well coming to my doubt, was Parish narrating that quote in the book that Ishani saw in her dream ? then ben & sarah are the protagonists na,so who is Elizabeth then...& what was Parish talking in her dream ? and who said this "That's it, you're nearly there." near the ending of her dream.

"She let out a cry of jubilation as she saw the triple honour that Ranveer had bestowed upon her as she kept the paper aside and hugged the book to her heart" what is triple honor here ? And I salute her professionalism..Just moments after the emotional turmoil in her heart Ishani chose to answer Puneet's call ..That's truly something that I need to learn from her as well as Ranveer..sigh...⭐️⭐️

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Posted: 9 years ago

Interlude-4..So Finch knew that it was Ishani Parekh whom Ranveer love..& he knowingly did this..Correct me if I am wrong..

The conversation of Ranveer & finch in the flight was nice in interlude-5..But then again this interlude gave me heart ache..never mind ya...you know the reasons...But I am trying to get over it...It may take some time...what to do yaar..me - a typical human being,a possessive one..he he..and I m really amazed by your clarification about multidimensional love..so...I am trying to understand it & trying to be a little broad...XD...After all this has already happened...

Interlude-6 was again a beautiful one...I really liked how serious she is about her work...This strict & cold Ishani has got her own charm..And Chirkut..the least said the better..I should really appreciate how shameless he is...Even after ditching her he came to Ishani to request her to sign a deal which he knew neither he nor his company was not worthy of...Hey wait..it was not a request at all...he just asked her to sign the deal...great...I don't understand where does he get that confidence from...Useless...I really admire Ishani's bold attitude here...superb one...and dear I am eagerly looking forward to Ranveer-Ishani's meet...do update soon...❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
Congratz with 123 pages 😳🤗🥳
Edited by ShadikaIshVeer - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _priyaa_

heya...sorry for so late...and dear i ll be posting in fragments as my reviews contain some of my doubts as well or truth to be said many..😆😆 he he..so it ll be easier for u to reply..😳 .and dear...have a hectic time reading & replying my posts.😆😆 .he he..never mind ya.. 😳😳

and please it's no hurry...hw is ur eye ache now ?..when u ll be completely alright & feeling good,then only reply me..😳😳


I admit that I was really a bit upset knowing about Ranveer marrying Ritika & I was even more upset knowing it was not only about forced marriage,Ranveer really wanted a companion... I thought " can only marriage give you a companion-a friend ?...Ritika could have been his crying shoulder even being a friend & marriage was not at all necessary..." May be I was being or am being more selfish to not letting them (Ishveer) married to others instead of eachother.

Their childhood memories were really fun as well as emotional too..But dear one thing that I wanted to tell you that both of them were being more matured than their age...I mean this somehow affected their innocence that i felt..Ranveer was always sacrificial n that I can understand,but still I missed their childishness a bit...never mind dear...apart from this I really loved their scenes a lot...Infact the care and concern they have for each other even in that age is really admirable..⭐️⭐️

The scene where Ishani got lost in the fair,that was really painful,...& the next scene was so beautiful when she called Harshad uncle as papa...that moment was so nice...😳😳

And one of my favorite description is when she was getting senseless gradually after seeing those shrads in Ranveer's hands and that blood...Oh god the way u have described how she was slowly being unconscious and the state of her mind,the chain of thoughts she was having right before being senseless ,that was amazing...beautifully written...❤️🤗

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Hi there, sweetheart! 🤗🤗 Please don't apologize for the late reviews, it's totally cool. 😛😛 And it's alright, it's my pleasure to solve all your doubts and queries. 😃😃 My eyeache is okayish, it keeps coming and going and I do have one of those headaches now.
Coming back to your first question, yes I knew that a lt of you would be upset with the fact that Ranveer was married to Ritika and even more so that apart from Zaveri's dying wish, if it was only companionship that he sought from Ritika, he could very well just remain friends with her. Why marry her for it?
In response to that, I'll be letting you behind the thought process of Ranveer. When Ranveer decided to marry Ritika, there was not one, but several factors that played game here. One, was Amba and Kailash's constant urging to him to get married; second was Zaveri's dying wish and third was his seeking a companion. But what really convinced him into doing it were two factors - Finch's own marriage to Monica and his own assumption.
Ranveer chose to marry Ritika because he wanted to move on from the pain of the heartbreak that Ishaani's rejection had brought upon him. He wanted to stop loving her, to stop feeling the agony that came along every time he thought about her. Like most people, he believed that if he did get married, he might actually have a chance to move on in life. That, and the other three factors played a crucial role in formulating the plan in his head, but it was not until Finch's marriage did he actually decide to go ahead with it.
It was only once he got married to Ritika and the latter passed away did he realize that he was stupid to belive so; stupid enough to believe that he could ever stop loving Ishaani. That's where the entire monologue about love from Interlude 5 kicks in. You are not wrong if you are angry or upset that they were married to different people and you are justfied to have these views - what I put up here are simply my own experimentations with the human psychology and the following thoughts that I believe in.
And coming to your second point, yes I agree with this as well. They are too mature for their ages and their childhood cannot be called what would normally be termed as "fun". But this comes witha twist again. Ranveer and Ishaani were two children who were forced to see a lot in life at a very young age that made them the people they were. It was only after they got the company of each other that they truly learn what it felt like to be childish and immature. The "childhood" that you refer to will come in the upcoming epistles (or so I hope), that'll depict for they complete and set free the child in them when they are with each other.
Hehe, I'm glad you liked the scene. It was a troublesome one to write, I must confess, but I'm relieved that I did do some justice to it.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _priyaa_

And I have a question why did you use italic for some words in a sentence,is it to give it more importance ?

Like "I don't trust that... woman" "You thought that I tried to take my life?" She felt it in her heart, felt it that she was right.

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Yes, I do use italics to give a particular word more emphasis. Usually in emotionally demanding sentences, using italics often gives the reader that emotional connection and boost that helps them understand the emotions just a tad bit more.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _priyaa_

And now comes the dream part...I got the sense..but still have so many doubts...Why he was repeatedly having that dream ? what does that imply...In neopolitan city I could understand why Ishani had those nightmares ,it was her fear of loosing Ranveer..but dear I am a bit perplexed here... ...and what does that fog in the room symbolise..and whenever he tried o free himself of those chains ,it would tighten him even more & hurt him,his limbs...what does it mean... would u plz explain me about the cliff too..and why he no more had those dreams after jumping from the cliff..Is that falling in love ?I am trying to make my own reasons n ideas..but it would be better if you will explain me ..I mean I want to go deeper in understanding...

AND explain me this convo "What if I just jump?"

"It's a leap of faith to see where it takes you," she says intelligibly and I nod my head in a trance.

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Yes, the dreams are quite an intriguing segment now, aren't they? 😉😉
Coming back to your queries, it's too early for me to say why he was having the dreams repeatedly, because as you read on ahead, you will notice (or may not, too) that there is a pattern of occurence with respect to the dreams as well. In fact, the day Untold Stories comes to an end, I'll be posting an extra trivia chapter immediately based on the dreams and some other facts so that understanding the entire concept around it becomes a lot more easier.
The symbolism of the fog is again something that you will have to wait for. In fact, every single thing about the dream stands for a symbolism of a particular something. 😆😆 As to the chains, well the chains didn't hurt him when he tried to free himself from them, it hurt him when he experienced something else. I know my answers aren't going to be helpful at all, but I want the revelations to be gradual. In case you still want me to disclose the suspense of the dreams to you, I'll send it to you via a PM.
As to that particular part, there are again two meanings hidden behind this part. Oh dear, just reply back to this in affirmative if you want me to explain in detail about the dream because everything is too intricately connected to it.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _priyaa_

And then comes the leap..Dear it's my favourite phase.😳😳 .I don't know why but I enjoyed their adult years more than their childhood years even if they were dark..😲😳where as in my case I still miss my childhood...😆ha ha..anyways...the way you connected the epistles with interlude that was really nice...⭐️ In the interlude-1 I really liked the plot a lot..And the way you descriped the grave attitude of Ranveer..And wow !!! Caffeinated Love - sounds great...😳 he he... I had assumed it to be Ishani's name in Ian Hake-Parish 😉😳...superb thought & superb pseudo name too..he he😆..And I just loved the scene at Sydney business school.😳.You have so beautifully explained the scenario right from Ranveer's entry to his exit from the hall...That's so intriguing ...And the small conversation between Ranveer & Steve,that was amazing 😳😳...I was really impressed with Steve's question "What connects a businessman to an author in the fields of time and money, sir?" & also with Ranveer's reply ...That's love.😳😳.he he..It's inspirational...just loved it 😳...I was really smiling while reading it...A big hug to you...🤗🤗🤗

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Yeah, the leap was something that blew me off my feet as well. Trust me, writing Epistle 20 was so painful after the first two epistles because I'd gotten into the groove of the adults' minds that switching back to the minds of a 10 and 9 year old kid got very tedious. But I'm glad that you liked these grown-up versions.
Oh yeah, that attitude is something that he has been lacking for so long that it was about time he was cut some slack and he got his cofindence up. And yes, that name kind of appealed a lot to me as well. As to his pseudonym, there was such a raucous of discussions upon it but a lot of the readers did have this assumption in mind. As to the scene with Ranveer and Steve, I enjoyed writing that part a lot. You know that I have a fascination with explosive endings and I like leaving those quotes and one-liners' here and there. 😆😆

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