#1 ~FF : Untold Stories~ - Page 58

Originally posted by: MM123456

You know each time when i say that this was the best chapter you have written , I read the next one and I am end up saying the same thing 😛😳 So I have come with the conclusion that I will only say each epistle/chapter is part of a big masterpiece written by such a beautiful writer whose my favorite 😳😳😳

LM , this epistle was just out of the world When I read this for the first time I was in class so I read it fast 😛 But yet it had astouned me that how can someone write a masterpiece in that young age, I felt I was reading some chapter from a very experienced 30 -40 years old writer😆😉😉

Anyways when I again reread it this morning every word , every description and every feeling was bang on👍🏼👏👏 Hats of to you LM , I am sorry I am not able to say much as I am left spechless trying to find words for the beautiful masterpiece u wrote😳😳

You done more than a good job with this update , keep writing like you do cause it keep winning heart You are a fab writer dear , never forget that😳😳 Sending tons of hugs and flying kisses😳😳🤗🤗 I hope studies are going good and that you and your family had a beautiful diwali and that you are taking care of yourself😳😳

Oh before I forget I LOVED THE DREAM , and the convo between Ranveer and Love was amazing written

With love

#yoursnr1fan

MM

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

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Thank you so much, ma Cherie! 🤗🤗 I could not have been more thrilled that you liked this part so much! ⭐️⭐️ And honestly, I don't know why, but I actually do have tears in my eyes after reading what you've written here. 😭😭

Hehe, I've been getting this compliment a lot these days, and it's certainly a very different feeling. 😆😆 I just try to incorporate my ideology into the characters while making sure that it's not out of character, but fits the character's psychology perfectly. 😛😛 And I'm glad that you do like what I've been putting across so far. 😳😳

And you've left me speechless after such a warm review. Loads of hugs and tons of kisses for you along with heaps of love from my side! ❤️❤️ I hope these do keep you warm in the winters. ☺️☺️ And yes, I did have a good Diwali with my family and I hope that it's the same at your end as well. 😃😃

Ps. I love that convo too.

Originally posted by: MM123456

I did not mean to bring tears in your eyes😭😭 Just want to be the reason for the beatiful smule of yours😳 ( gosh this is so cheesy 😆, but it is the true😉) We all been loving it tbh , cause you are just that good and love who done to earth you are , makes me fall in love more😳

I am a blushing cherry now😆☺️☺️ Oh they will😳😳😳 Jippiii😃😃 So happy to hear that😳😳

PS :High five girlfriend😉

Originally posted by: amazing3

Hi LM,

I've this chapter 4 times now and didn't know how to reply...

It's OUTSTANDING and made me SPEECHLESS. ..

THIS IS THE BEST CHAPTER I'VE READ SO FAR. ...

Can't comment more just want to soak myself in it...

It's a BLOCKBUSTER of a MASTERPIECE. ...

Thanks for sharing your talent. ...thank you. ...thank you. ...lol...😛

Originally posted by: VC288

Hi LM,first of all ,happy Diwali to you !!!😊😊

sorry for such late reply !! I was out of city for holidays.😒

You have done magic this time ,really!!

your whole update was so so beautiful!! 🤗🤗

I am still unable to pick my favourite lines from it. I guess Bloomfield has picked up good lines. I would also go for them.

Really you have explained happiness truly.

Really LM , I could not find words for your praise,dear !!!!!

Seriously, I would have bought your writing, if you had ever kept it to sell. Truly speaking,while reading NC,thought never crossed my mind that it was written by someone like you !!

I felt as if I was reading professional writing.👏👏

Your writing is awesome, dear!!!!

Dreams have stopped now. that's good thing for Ranveer but it has really some realistic touch to it.I have my guess about dream.let's see what happens.😉

Keep writing, dear !!!!!!!

Your fan

VC288

I am actually overwhelmed with the response I've been receiving for this chapter so far. And I'm actually left speechless. Forgive me if my replies are short, but I'm honestly stunned. ☺️☺️ NC was a stepping stone in my life and is always going to be something closest to my heart. 😳😳 And not just that, it's made me grow a lot as a person as well apart from a writer. 😃😃

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

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Thank you so much, sweetheart! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ And hehe, that's quite a compliment! 😳😳

And don't worry, the dreams are my little love over here, so you'll have to keep reading to see what's to happen. 😉😉 And I'm glad that you liked the happiness part. 😃😃 Yes, he did miss his mom, but uske saath lectures bhi free mil gaye. 🤣🤣 Yeah, even I get those from my mum at times. 😆😆

Hawww, sacchi kya? ☺️☺️ Aaj toh compliments ka bhavandar hai mere liye. Thank you once again and love you loads! ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

No need to say a tq...you deserve it... So let me wait for those dreams... That's one of my favs..All mums of girls are like this... XD Dads need to support them... But Ranveer's case is completely different...

No More thank-you... Wanna mein gussa ho jaaungi...

PS. You Even come online for chatting?? I mean I saw the other side of LM n yesterday's ShaDhika thread... XD

Completed 10^th chapter.😳😃.he he.😆😃.It's very nice to see Ranveer becoming strong again 😃😳...& Ranveer-Harshad uncle covo was very emotional & poignant. 😳⭐️.Truth to be said this duo share their own sort of chemistry which is so pure...⭐️⭐️.You have created a very strong foundation for the future story ⭐️😃...It clearly explains why Ranveer will be so much loyal & honest to his mota babuji's family..ohh okay.😉😆 .i don't know whether this story is going to be like our serial,but one thing is sure that Ranveer,Ishani & Harshad uncle will be Ranveer,Ishani & Harshad uncle😉 😳😳😆...he he...😆

And dear...i have noticed that this Falguni aunty is a bit different from the serial falguni aunty..I mean in the serial until before the first leap Falguni aunty was a bit grey,one can clearly notice this from her words & the tantrums she used to throw...And I could never find any feelings or emotions for Ranveer in her even if he had done so much for her family...😲 . But here I don't know why I sense this Falguni maa is not fake & really cares for Ranveer though I don't know what will be her reaction for the future incidents.😉😳.he he 😳...But i am loving this falguni as of now..😳

So u have clarified the ragging issue...I am quite relieved that it certainly was not a suicide attempt... I pity on Ranveer...And I really hope that you will show him more stronger in the following days 😳...thank u darling...🤗.🤗