#1 ~FF : Untold Stories~ - Page 57

Originally posted by: kimnana

lovely dear ...happniess is seeing ur loved ones happy too good

lovely update ishani so cute n thoughtful

ty for pm ...happy diwali

Chap 7 is again a nice one.⭐️.i m fond of dark..😈😉 😳 he he.😆😆...Initially I was confused thinking if u had changed the writing pattern 😕..he he.😆.later I got to know.😉😳. This style of writing is really creating a lot of thrill letting us to anticipate or guess more n more..⭐️ just like a thriller picture 👍🏼...he he.😆.liked it... 😳 & what can I say about baa ,least said the better 😡😡...& can totally understand the state of mind of that eight year old girl who is witnessing all these grievances n atrocity right before her eyes,yet she is a lot more mature than her age 😲😲...

Poor Ranveer 😭😭...It must be very difficult for this young chap...😭🤢 .& he made suicide attempt 🤢...Unbelievable 😲...but I can understand he is very young to understand these complex things as he has suffered like no one even at this age..he had no childhood to say... 😲.but I am very keen to read the next chapter...⭐️ .many questions are yet to be answered...

Beautiful update dear...

Chap 8 is a lot more than I expected...You have raised a very serious issue of ragging 👏...It's quite scary to know about the bruises of Ranveer 🤢🤢 ...It's cruel..🤢🤢 seriously dear even after the imposition of so called strict Govt rules to stop ragging,it's still deeply rooted 😡...I never understand what kind of fun do the seniors get by torturing the students for the ugly ragging culture 😡...It's horrifying to know that there are many suicide cases due to ragging...i just hope these idiots understand what they are doing...anyways...I am feeling so sorry for Ranveer if he had to face the ugly side of ragging..😲 .It's too heart wrenching & emotional...literally a hair-raising one ⭐️...I was lost...well done dear...😃

Originally posted by: _priyaa_

Chap 7 is again a nice one.⭐️.i m fond of dark..😈😉 😳 he he.😆😆...Initially I was confused thinking if u had changed the writing pattern 😕..he he.😆.later I got to know.😉😳. This style of writing is really creating a lot of thrill letting us to anticipate or guess more n more..⭐️ just like a thriller picture 👍🏼...he he.😆.liked it... 😳 & what can I say about baa ,least said the better 😡😡...& can totally understand the state of mind of that eight year old girl who is witnessing all these grievances n atrocity right before her eyes,yet she is a lot more mature than her age 😲😲...

Poor Ranveer 😭😭...It must be very difficult for this young chap...😭🤢 .& he made suicide attempt 🤢...Unbelievable 😲...but I can understand he is very young to understand these complex things as he has suffered like no one even at this age..he had no childhood to say... 😲.but I am very keen to read the next chapter...⭐️ .many questions are yet to be answered...

Beautiful update dear...

Chap 8 is a lot more than I expected...You have raised a very serious issue of ragging 👏...It's quite scary to know about the bruises of Ranveer 🤢🤢 ...It's cruel..🤢🤢 seriously dear even after the imposition of so called strict Govt rules to stop ragging,it's still deeply rooted 😡...I never understand what kind of fun do the seniors get by torturing the students for the ugly ragging culture 😡...It's horrifying to know that there are many suicide cases due to ragging...i just hope these idiots understand what they are doing...anyways...I am feeling so sorry for Ranveer if he had to face the ugly side of ragging..😲 .It's too heart wrenching & emotional...literally a hair-raising one ⭐️...I was lost...well done dear...😃

Thank you so much, darling! 🤗🤗 I'm so elated that you've been liking all the epistles so far!

Oh yes, the seventh chapter was indeed very, very dark. Much darker than I initially intended it to become. Yeah, I was surprised that nobody asked me about it and you did. Given that I'm trying to say an entire story through this format, narratives are also going to be a part of it along with the diary entries certainly. 😃😃 That was, it doesn't become too detached, aloof or boring for the readers. 😛😛 And I could not have been happier that you are feeling the same aura of thrill and mystery while reading the epistles that I enjoy creating. 😉😉

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

It ws an awesome update LM i loved it 👏
Lykd tht diwali xplanatn part of urs vry mch 👏 👏 ⭐️
Kamba HD so mch loyalty towards dere master is sumthng vry nice to knw 😃
Poor ishveer were nt able to celebrate diwali never mind nxt tym dey ll 😳
Ur happiness defntn nd an altogether new meaning of diwali ws jst beyond wrds u r such an amazing writer yr I m big fan of urs.dis chp specially last few Paras were jst too gud shrt of wrds to explain my overwhelmingness 😳 👏 👏
Sry fr rplyng late ws bsy
Waitng fr d tym whether he disclose his nitemare to ishani
Update soon
Thnx fr pm

Thank you so much, love! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked this chapter!

Yes, Kailash, Amba and Ranveer's loyalty to Harshad has always been a key element of the show, so that focus is always going to be on. Hehe, this is just one Diwali where they are away, hopefully they'll celebrate a lot of Diwalis together. 😃😃

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

TBH, this was the first time that I found it really difficult to select my favourite part...It was that good, LM...I simply reread this chapter for six times now...👏👏 So, I've now selected one part even though that it is small, the explanation which you gave was commendable...

Sometimes, happiness does see a reason to be felt. It's something that everybody deserves to feel - pure, whole and simply there. Happiness is something you do not have to pay a price for, but what makes everything worthwhile. Maybe that's why we light up those diyas every Diwali - to remind us that even though happiness may be as strong as a wick flame, it's there nonetheless. Maybe that's why we make rangolis - to remind us that though we may see only black and darkness, there will always be those colours that will come to our relief.

Maybe that's why we use so many flowers - to remind us that no matter how bland your life may be, you will always have nature's fragrance to realize what they truly have. Maybe that's why we make sweets and distribute them around - to remind us that no matter how bitter we are, there is always a little amount of sweetness that can evoke that spirit of happiness. Myabe that's why we light crackers - to remind us that happiness can come sometimes in crackling sparkles.

So, these are those few lines...I know, it is pretty much small, but I can't help it...I cannot copy the whole text,you see.😉😉

Ranveer missing Love!! Dreams stopped? Something's fishy here and I'll wait for it to know...😃😃 And those words of happiness from Ranveer's POV was simply amazing! The way you expressed his innocence was⭐️⭐️ And Ranveer home finally after eight long months...Poor guy, must have missed his mom...But the lectures were🤣 Even I get that from my mom🤣

Overall, a super-cute update...😳😳 Do you something? I find this Ranveer cuter than the show's Ranveer❤️

#Yours3Fan
Aarushi

Thank you so much, sweetheart! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! And hehe, that's quite a compliment!

And don't worry, the dreams are my little love over here, so you'll have to keep reading to see what's to happen. 😉😉 And I'm glad that you liked the happiness part. 😃😃 Yes, he did miss his mom, but uske saath lectures bhi free mil gaye. Yeah, even I get those from my mum at times. 😆😆

Originally posted by: Ishveerian

Hey I can not write a long reply like others😉

writing is a hard work and really you are doing a great work😊

we all are lucky to have a writer like you😊

Nice chapter keep writing like this always😊

keep rocking😊