Divya's OS & Music Corner- Updated Pg.122 (06/21) - Page 14

1st of all this ws really a surprise for me.......finally a dedication to me.......😳😳😳............bt still u showd ur naughtiness n tht fun u love in irritating by callin me by tht new nick name....uff...i hate u for tht.......😆😆😆😉😉😉........

OS

i really really likd d os di.....ws vry beautiful.......both care for each other to d core n also love each other to d core...n yeh sab clearly beautifully portray ki......kudos....👏👏👏.....

Songs

i likd both d songs....n i din knw this is ur most fav one....yeh gaana maine bhi gaayi thi apne thread mein long time back....last yr....ur both versions of tu mile were gud....👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼.........

Suggestion

Di....u r technically vry much sound in singin....so i dnt need to say nythin on tht part...bt i do wanna say on one part-Feel of d song......thts a thing i kinda miss in ur songs(me tellin abt romantic ones).....kuch feel aur thoda laate in romantic songs then it wud defo make a huge difference....
aap tend to sing the song in some 'classical music type style'....so u need to slightly giv attention to tht part.....*hope i din offended u....just wanted to say this...to improve ur talent...*...

this is wht i think....bt at the end...u do wht u think is rite....coz its onli u can decide whts gud n whts wrong 4u...😃😃😃

Divya Diii

Amazing OS dear ......👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

ek toh itna acha likhti ho upar se kehti ho criticize karne mein kanjoosi mat karo

koi kyu criticize karega itne ache OS.......

Loved it to the core.......abhi ke abhi likh diya....tum toh badi fast ho

Tu Miley.....Lovely the SOng....aap ki sweet voice mein toh aur bhi beautiful ban gaya ....... Nupur ki current situation ko pakka match hai...............

wow Mayank took her to the beach.........now I want a beach scene in MJHT again ..........😕

Aaj khush toh bohot hu mai ....wajah hai Mayur ....tum toh jaanti ho kabse kabse meri aankhein taras gayi thi yeh dekhne ke liye .................

I'm having very positive feeling now.....bas Arjun jaldi wapas aa jaye......

Very beautifully wriiten OS ....do write more

Love ya
Nidzy~

very nice specially how u used the smileys n the image
keep it up 😊

Hi Divya di....

Hi Divya
awesome OS.
just amazing.
loved mayur convo.
and the loved mayus cheering idea
u beautifully wrote the whole thing
and about ue song- sorry dear i cant listen it.
mera stupid net itna slow hai ki download nehi ho rahe hai.
lekin main baad mai jarur try karungi.
take care

awsome OS na Divya

U write as beautifully as u sing!!

I loved the story u built around shuklajee and class!! wow:)
wud love to see this in MJHT :)
u write so well Divs:)
cheers!
U sing awesome too :)

waah! awesome blossom OS Divya di!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
& the song.....beautiful!🤗