FF: PALLAVI by Jalebi Jane SEE NOTE PAGE 117 - Page 51

Oh this is perfect! This is how love stories should go. How beautifully you write ❤️

Wow.. it was nice as always. liked how thing are heading totally loved it. You always end your chapter with us wanting more 😢

Cant wait for the next update!!!

Well that was an unexpected surprise, ohhh Sulochana I wish I could smack her

But she may have just helped Pallavi to never doubt her plans for the DSE brand in the future, if this video was to come out to the family whilst she was working hard on expansion she’d be way more shattered.

But she’s received the blow early on which means she can deal with anything once she realises what Baji Rao would do

oh look who’s here sitting beside her... he smelt her hair and she smelt his jacket.!

Dear Maya - I am fangirling on your story ... hehehee

Gosh!!! that was another amazing beautiful update..... ❤️

When will Baba know the truth about Mandar, when will he realize that his autocratic behavior is stifling the lives of his children( or will he ever?)... Thank god for Nikhil who is as much a sweetheart here as in the show..

But I am loving this PALLAVI... and she will definitely come with some solution with Raghav's help for the future of DSE. For now let her revel in this new found sensation...

Eagerly always waiting for your updates...

Love - Moi

oh wow i am so in love with these two

please do continue

bye sumi

I’m behind and just finished Episodes 8-14. Your intro of Harish has got me laughing so much, my Gorilla! Love it! Love him💕. Look forward to reading the rest as see a girls versus boys thing going on perhaps.

Also want to mention how I loved the way you wrote Episode 9-10 when ring was returned. Amused me how they realised they were duped by Pallavi in disguise of a cousin who is expecting😂

Beautiful piece. I just read all episodes in one go. your attention to detail with emotions tied to them makes us visualize the environment the feelings..thrilling..Keep it coming..

I wonder if our hero has something to do with the sales boost that day.. but i guess that wud b too soon..

It hurt me that Baba showed no consideration to all the effort she had been putting in the shop for them.. But i guess that’s the kind of person Baba is.. I’m do glad Aayi spoke up for her..

I’m still reeling from wat happend in the end.. Raghav Rao came all the way to her house to meet her to talk abt her text?? And after all the talk, he smelled her hair?? Wow! I don know wat I’m feeling. But I’m smiling..widely

The way you spin the story around Raghav and Pallavi- there is something attractive about it. It just attracts my attention. I really loved the way how he asked her permission before smelling her hair.

This ff is so much better than the show❤️

oh and love the taunt Raghav gave using the name of Baji rao

and this created a doubt- is Pallavi student of Baji rao or Shivaji or arey they both the same person??🤔

Maha episode was maha cute especially the ending

Beautifully written. Love your version of Pallavi. Can’t wait for more.