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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Part 12... By dlip

Reshma baddal Bolayache hote. Kaka, aamhi Reshma-la aamchya barobar Mumbai-la nyayala alo aahot

Mala kalpana aahe tyachi Kaivalya.

Mag, yeu dyal na tila ... aamchya barobar

Meenal, pan ti tumchya barobar ata tithe yeun karnar kay? Itke diwas Reshma tumchya kade rahili karan aamhala Rakesh baddal mahit navhate ani tila-hi te aamhala kalu dyache navhate. Ata, aamhala sagale kalalya-war kashala havi aahe Mumbai? Nahi ka?

Kaka, tumcha vishwas nahiye ka aamchya war? Aamhi tichi nit kalaji gheu.

Kahi tarich kay Kaivalya? Are jevha tumhi kon he mahit sudhha navhate tevha sudhha kiti premane saamaavun ghetlat tumhi Reshma-la. Mala athavatay, mi Mumbai-la alo hoto tevha ha Ashu courier-wala banun ala hota .. Rakesh-chya ghari.. ani tevhahi kiti asthe-ne bolat hota to tichya-shi.

Mag, pathava na tila aamchya barobar. 6 mahine eka dadpana khali kadhalet tine. Ata thode mokale-panane rahu dya na aamchya barobar

Tuze mhanane barobar aahe Meenal. Pan, khare sangato ata bhiti watatey tila najare-aad hou denyachi. Dudhane tond bhajale ki taak dekhil phunkun pito manus. Tase zaley maze.

Pan divorce papers...

Ho, mhanali mala Reshma. Papers courier ne kinwa register AD ne pathavun deto. Mag tyachi acknowledgement dekhil milel ... record sathi. Aso, bolu aapan nantar. Bhalya pahate uthalayat tumhi ... jeun ghya ani lavkar zopa baghu sgale.

Reshma che Baba kholi baher gele... sgalyana niruttar karun! Kay bolave kunala kahich suchat navhate...

A Meenal... tula kay zale?

Sujya.. Reshma kiti lucky aahe. Kiti kalji kartat tiche wadil tichi... Mulagi asun sudhha. Nahitar aamche Baba!

Sujay ani Kaivalya ne Meenal chya khandyawar hat thevala... amhi aahot na' ase sanganyasathi.

Reshma la yaychay yaar ... aplya barobar Mumbai-la. Kaal mhanali mala ti.

Pan kaka-na samjavane kathin distay.

Baguyat... udya parat prayatna karun

Sujay... Mi aapli 6-janachi Parwachya train chi return tickets kadhalet.

Ho re... jast sutti ghetach yenar nahiye atta.

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Sagale ratri Reshma-chya kholit jagat basale hote. Vishay arthatach Reshma ani Rewa-chi khechane' ha hota! Reshma-chya baba-shi zalel bolne tyani artha-tach Reshma-la sangitale navhate.

A Rewa, aamhi yevadhe tumchya ghari aloy; tevha tumhi doghini aamhala entertain kele pahije.

Mhanje kay karayache?

Tumhi doghi dance karta ka? apalam chaplam...' ganya war?

Meenal, gapp bas ha. Rewa, tu tichya bolnya kade laksha deu nakos.

Ka, tai tar sujay la evdha changala dance shikavalas

A.. ho ho. Rewa tula mahitey ka?

Ana, please .. gappa bas na.

Tai... tu dance shikavalas?

A.. jau-de. Aapan na udya kuthe jayache te tharvu ya. Ithe javalach ek killa aahe tithe jau ya. Paaus nasel tar. Paus padla ki mag rasts kharab hoto.

Reshma, Vishay badlu nakos... amhi tumche guest aahot. Tya mule aamche manoranjan' karane hi tumchi jawabdari aahe.

Kaivaly, tu ...

Mi sangu? Dance nako, tumhi na taai-la kavita mhanayala sanga. College madhe astana ti khup chan kavita vachun dakhavayachi. Tiche ardhe kapat kavitan-chya pustakanich bharlay!

Rewa.. gapp bas

Ka? Ti ka gapp bas? Ani tu mhan na kavita mhanje ti apo-ap gapp hoil

A ho ... mhan mhan

Reshma tula poems yetat? Mhanje he pan mala last-lach kalale

Bare, bare... mala kahi khup kavita path vagaire nahi yet. Pan college madhe astana na mala Chandrashekhar Gokhale-che Mi maza ani Punha Mi maza' khup awdayache. Tyatalya kahi charolya' vachate ... chalel?

Kaivalya... hi tuzya sathi ...

Nehmi dokya-ne vichar karu naye
Kadhi bhavanana hi vaw dyawa
Aasusale-lya dolya-na
Swapnan-cha gav dyava

Ashu ...

Na saangataa samjanyaa itke
Aaple jawalche naate aahe
Tuze mazya kade ani maze tuzyakade
Murkha-panache khate aahe

a... nahi, nahi... Murkha-panache' khate nahi ... khare tar udhari-che' khate mhanayala pahije

doni-hi

pan kahre na Ashu-sathi hi jast yogya aahe ...

Mi mansokta radun gheto
Gharat kuni nasalya-war
Mag sahaj hasayala jamte
Char-chaughat baslyawar

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Hi bagha... Shraavan' mahinya sathi...

Shraavan mhanje mala watate
Prajaktache diwas
Srushtine kadhi tari karun
Fedalela navas

...

Ani ata hi eika -

Pratyekala ek aabhal asaawe
Kadhi waatale tar bhararnya-sathi
Pratyekala ek gharate asaawe
Sandhya-kali paratnya sathi

aga.. hi tar aaplya saglynach aaplicable aahe.

Gharatya-chya jagi Maaj-ghar' mhatale ki zale!

Fakta, Sujay-che gharate aahe ... mitra-na ordnya sathi!

Nahi .. nahi.. Mahina-akheri bhade-wasuli sathi'!

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Wachatana, ek-mekanchi cheshta kartana wel kasa gela kalalelch nahi...

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A, ata hi shevatachi -

Ashi ek ratra havi
Jila pahat jodaleli nahi
Ashakyatil gosht aahe
Pan mi asha sodaleli nahi

Tevha ...'pahat' vhaya-chya adhi zopuya ata. Bakiche udya...

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(This was initially posted on 3D thread)

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dlip

@dlip

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Part 13... by Tarantella

Sagle kiti shanta zople ahet...

Reshma haluch uthun baher, jhopalyavar yeun basli.

Gappach rahavasa vatata

Tujhyajawal baslyavar...

Vatata tuch sagla olkhavasa

Mi nusta haslyavar...

"Hi charoli konasathi ahe? "

"Are Sujay, tu zopla nahis ajun?"

"Ag nahi. Zop navhati yet. Tula-hi?"

Sujay tichya bajula jaun basla jhopalyavar.

"Asach kahi. Ayushya kiti kathin vatat hota re, kiti goshti ghadlya ani pratyek sankatat tu majhya pathishi ubha hotas, mhanje, tumhi sagle hotat majhya barobar... Tya divshi, mi jar Meenal chya car samor ale naste, tar aple bhet jhali-ch nasti, nahi ka?"

"Asa pahhayla gelo tar, mala vatata, ki he sagla ghadna vidhilikhit hota. Destiny. Seriously Reshma, tujha amchya ayushyat asa achanak yena... Sagla kiti badlun gela eka kshnat!"

"Oh! Mhanje mi yayla nako hota Maajgharat! "

" Ag, mi 'changlya arthane' bolalo. Tu ata ugach kahitari vichar karu nakos."

"Tu chidlas ka?"

"Tujhya-var kadhi chidu shakto ka?"

"Asa kahi nahi ha Sujay. Pan, kharach, kadhi vatla suddha navta ki Mumbai sarkhya evdhya mothya shaharat, mala evdhe chaan, jeev taknare mitra bhet-til."

"Hehe. Mag, amhi ahotach khaas."

Ti hasta-hasta ekdum shannta zali.

"Sujay, majhi ichha kahihi asli tari aai- baba mala parat Mumbai-la nahi pathavnar. Magashi majha aai shi bolna zala. Ani, eka arthane tyancha hi barobarach ahe. Mi kai karnar Mumbai-la parat yeun?"

Ya ashya prasnache kasa uttar denar hota to? Tyachi marji chalali asti tar ya kshani tyane parat nele aste Reshma la.

"Tujhi savay zali ahe Reshma."

"Kai?" Ti agdi ashcharyane mhanali.

"Ho. Barobar tar boltoy. Tujhi amchya ayushyat aslyachi savay zali ahe. ek 'vaait savay' mhanayla kahi harkat nahi. Tu ek divas navtis tar ya poranchi kiti kharab awastha zaleli! Sujay mhanala, tichyakade baghat."

Ani tujhi? Tila vicharaycha hota Sujay-la, pan shabda baher padlech nahit.

Tichya dolyat ek veglich chamak disat hoti tyala, pan ti tyachya samajhnyapalikade hota. Tichya baddal vatanare feelings Apan jar confess kele, tar tila tyacha kiti tras hoil, kiti motha dhakka basel- ha niskarsha kadhun he tyane swatahalach patavun dila hota. Tyala prema-mule Reshma sarkhi maitrin gamvaichi navhati.

Pan to jya chuka karat hota, tya chuka kon sangnar tyala?

Reshma-la tyachi ghaal-mel janavat hoti pan ti tari kai karnar? He sagla tichya mulech hot ahe, he tila kalun chukla hota. Pan Sujay denial madhe ka hota? Nahi, denial nasa-ve. Confusion nakki ahe tyachya manat.

Tichi najar tichya galyat aslelya mangalsutra-kade geli. Sagla kahi ekdum spasta zala.

"Sujay, apan khup vel gappa marat baslo."

"Ho ga. Kharach."

"Zop-ahi yayla lagli ahe.."

Doghe-hi jad manane apaplya kholit paratle.

...

"Morning Reshma!! Uth na ga. Mi chaha kelay! "

" Ag zopu de na... "

" He bagh Anna, tikde, Maajgharat, agdi bhalya pahate uthaichi ani aplyala pan uthvaichi, ani ata ithe bagh!"

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"Sujay, nakki ata kai tharavla ahes? Apan ekda bolun pahila kaka-n shi. Parat bolaicha ka?"

"Ho Kaivalya. Mala vatata ki parat ekda bolun pahava tyanchyashi.

"Sujay, taai la kahi karun parat Mumbai-la nyaychach! "

"Ashu, apli sagyanchi kiti-hi ichha asel tari tichya aai-baba-ni pathavla pahije."

"Tu kar na kahi-tari! Convince kar tichya vadilanna!"

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(This part was posted before on 3D thread)

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dlip

@dlip

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Friends, here is last part. It's bit too long hence posting in 3 different posts

Part 14 (Last part) ... by dlip

Sagale-jan confuse zale hote. Kay sangave Reshma-chya Aai-baba na?

Tevadyat Rakesh-che vadil Reshma-chya ghari aale. Paristhiti ankhi ackward zali. Kay karave, kay bolave kunalach suchena. Mag Kaivalyane Rewa-la sangitale tyana sagalyana Akolya-chya Market-madhe gheun jayala. Meenal mhanali ti thambatey Reshma-barobar.

Sujay ne Meenal-la bajavale "Don't' interfere or get involved in their discussion. You better wait in Reshma's room. Just be there incase she needs support afterwards."

Market madhun paratalya-war tyana kalale ki Rakeshe wadil dekhil zalya prkara-ne naaraj hote. Tyani Reshma-la sangitale ki ticha pudhacha sagala khrach karayala te tayar aahet. Resma ne tyanchi madat naakarli aahe!

Sagali situation awaghad zali hoti. Ata Reshma-chya aai-babanshi punha tyach vishya-war bolane kathin houn basale hote. Sagele-ch ata Reshma-che-pudhe-kay' ha Vishay taalun, awaantar kahi tari bolat hote.

Sandhyakali punha ekda sagale tichya kholit basale hote. Kalacha utsaaha aaj navhata. Sgale tase shanta-ch basele hote.

Aapale Baba kahi ata aaplyala Mumbai la pathavanar nahit he Resma-la kalale. Tila watale, hi aaplya mitran-barobarchi shevatchi raatra... punha kadhi ani kase bhetu mahit nahi. Resmane-ch bolayala survat keli

A ... sgale ase gapp ka aahat? Kaivalya, tula lakshat aahe na mazya aaji-chya shetavar hurda khayala jayache? Ithun ek-did tasa war aamchya aajiche gao aahe. Tithe javalach Narnala killa' aahe ani Purna Nadi'. Pudhachya weli tumhi sagale yal na tevha aapan tikade jau. Hiwalyat chan thandi aste ithe.

Nahi-tar tumhi ase kara na... Tumhi sgale December-madhe yayache tahravuna-ch taka. Ana... aapan na tuzya Christmas che celebration aamchya aajichhya shetvar karuyat. Candles laavu, cake banavu, Chirstmas tree banavu, hurda party karu. Chalel? Yal na sagale?

Meenal, ratri-chi shootings jara kami kar. Ani sarkhi chidu nakos. Ata mi pan nasnar... tula shant karayala. To, aapan ghetalela dress ghalay-cha rahunach gele nahi?

Sujay, Lele-chya wagnyacha swataha-la ugich tras karun gheu nakos ha. Mi Supriya-shi phonwar bolale tar chalel ka re? Mala pathavshil tichya hospital cha number?

Ashu... tu yeshil kare pudhachya mahinyat Rakhi paurnimela? Changale 2-3 diwas ye rahayala! Mi purnachya polya Karin, masale bhat, bharli wangi... tu mhanshil te! Ani ho, yetana maze kapade pan ghun yeshil? Meenal tu deshil tyala mazi bag bharun?

A Resma... ugach violin vajavu nakos. Ka bhetalis ga mala tya diwashi rastya-war? Bhendi ...

Meenal... Jatana tari bhandu nakos na...

Sujay la Reshma-che he nirva-niraviche bolne sahan hoi na. To kholi-tun baher padla. Kshan-bhar vichar karun to Reshma-chya baban-chya kholi kade gela.

Baba, jage aahat ka? Jara bolyache hote

Are Sujay... ya na.. ya

Baba...

Sorry, sorry, Ye na, bas.

Baba, thode bolayache hote...

Ho, malahi vicharayache hote, Pune-Hyderbad kabbadi chi match udya aahe ka re? Mast watate nahi baghayala. Ani tyanche te English shabd. Aamhi jyala chadhai' mhanayacho, tyala he Raid' mhanatat. Pan maja yet. Ani, bare zale nahi Kabbdi la pan sponsorers milale? Player' na ata tari jara changale paise miltil. Tula te Mukta Barve che Kabaddi-Kabaddi' natak athavtay?

Baba, mala tumchya shi Reshma vishayi bolaychay.

Ata kay Sujay? Mi tumha saglyana sangitalach aahe. Ata tila ekte pathavayala kahi maza dhir hot nahiye. Tumhi mala orthodox mhnana, ghbarat mhana nahi tar...

Baba, tase aamhala kahich mhanayache nahiye. Pan, tumhi Reshma-la Mumbai la ka pathavat nahiyat tyache karan kalalay mala. Tumhala ase watatay na ki Reshma Mumbai-la aamchya ghari yeun kay karnar? Fakt ghar-kaam ... ani shivay tithe rahanyasathi swataha-chech paise kharcha karnar. She will be like a housemaid for us. Asech na?

Pan khare sangato baba, aamha kunalach tiche he ekti-ne' kitchen madhe rabane, sagali gharatali kame ekti-ne karne awadat nahi. Reshma yaychya aadhi aamhi sagale hi kame altun paltun karayacho. Reshmala-hi aamhi hech sangitale. Pan ti eikatach nahi.

Amhala kunalach tiche he eksarkhe randhaa-waadha-ushti kadha' awadat nahi. Ekda tar aamhi tharavun ek sagala diwas Reshma-la kitchen madhe paul thevu dile nahi. Tevha evadhi hyper zali hoti na ti. Khare mhanje hysteric' mhanayala pahije! Tumhala hasu yetay. Pan aaho kharach.

Mag dusarya diwashi tine aamhala khup mothe lecture dile. Tila cooking' kase awadte hyachya-war.

Mala khatri aahe Baba, tumhala kalji aahe titchay bhavitavya-chi. Ithe rahun tine pudhe shikave, nahi tar nokari karawi ase tumhala watat asnar. Tichya pudhil sampurn aaiyushyacha prashna aahe ha...

Maze tumhala ek suggestion hote baba, Reshma chi hi ji cooking' chi aawad aahe tyalach aapan thodese organised ani structured' swarup dile tar? It can fetch good money for her.

Mhanje ase navhe ki tine char-ghari jaun poli-bhaji' karun dyawi. But, if she take up some catering course and learn different cuisines, then perhaps she can use her skills to oraganise food for corporate meetings, events and parties.

Aamchya ani aamchya clients chya office madhe baghato na mi. When there are corporate and business meetings, they look out for such service providers. And they look for decent people offering such service. Pratyek meeting la kahi Taaj-che' jewan nahi magwat. Pan, aagadich poli-bhaji-kendra' chalvanare nahi chalet tyana. Mahanje, mi ashya lokana kami lekhat nahiye pan tarihi... these companies look for better organized service providers.

Tumhala watel ki he kam tar ti Akolyat rahun dekhil karu shakel. Pan, baba ase avenues' kinwa ashi sandhi' Mumbai madhe jast pramanat uplabdh hoil.

Mala mahitey he itke sope nahiye. Pan prayatna karayala kay harkat aahe? Ani, kuthun tari survat tar karayala havich na?

Mhanun mazi request aahe tumhala, Reshma-la Mumbai la pathava. Tumha-la jar mazi kalpana patat asel tar tine kuthala catering course' karane yogya aahe te mi parat gelyawar find out Karato ani tumhala phone karto.

Don minutes kunich kahi bolale nahi.

Strategic Timeout 1!

(this was posted before on 3D thread)

Edited by dlip - 10 years ago

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dlip

@dlip

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Part 14 (Last part) ... continued

Don minutes kunich kahi bolale nahi.

Mazi kalaji tu achuk olkhalis Sujay. Ani mala tuzi hi catering course' chi kalpana patali aahe. Pan mala thoda vichar karu de ani mi Resma'chya aai-shi dekhil bolto. Chalel?

Ashe-cha kiran distoy he kalalya-war Sujay-cha chehra ujalaa. To good night' mhanun kholitun baher padla. Dara-baher Reshma ubhi hoti, dolyat prashna-chinha' gheun!

Sujay, kasla course ani catering che kay sangat hotas tu baba-na?

Aga, mi Baba-na sangat hoto ki tuzya sathi aapan ekhada catering-curse baghuyat. Tithe tula navin ani weg-wegali cuisines' shikata yetil.

A... nahi nani nahi...Mala ajjibat jamnar nahi ha tasle kahi tari. Mi karat hote te jevan waait hote ka? Tumhala awadayache nahi ka?

Reshma, tu Rakesh-chya wadilani dileli Financial help' naakarlis ...

Tyancka hyat kay sambandha? Ka gheu mi tynachi madat? Bhik mhanun, Daya mhanun, Ki Daan' mhanun? Ani hyat kay chukale maze? Mala-hi swabhiman aahe.

Reshma, mala vakya purna tar karu de! Tu madat nakarlis te yogya-ch kelas. Pan tya barobar he dekhil lakslat ghe Reshma ki don-welchya jevana-sathi nusta Self-respect' purat nahi. Tya-sathi lagto to Paisa'. Ani, tuzya baba-na hich kalji aahe. Tyana, tu financially' kuna-war depend rahayala nako aahes. Tu, tuzya purte tari paise kamawale pahijes ase watatay tyana. Ani, Mumbai la yeun tu he kase karnar hyachi tyana kalji aahe. Ani mhanun te tula Mumbai-la jayala nako mhantayat. Mi tyana suchavaley ki Aaapan tuzya sathi kuthala-tari catering course baghuya jyacha fayada pudhe tula career' mhanun karata yeil.

Mhanje?

Mhanje, tuzi cooking' chi awad kinwa passion' aahe na ticha upyog karun tu pudhe swatahachi kahi tari activity chalu karu shakshil. And it will help you to earn money and will make you financially independent. Kaivalya, Meenal, Ana jase tyanchi aawad hech tyanche career kartayet tasech tu he tuzi cooking-chi' aawad carrer mhanun develop karu shakashil. Baba vichar karto mhanalet. Tyana patale tar te tula aamchya barobar Mumbai-la pan pathavatil!

Kharach? Mala jamel he?

Swtaha-war Vishwas thev Reshma...

Sujay, Kon aahes tu?

Ha kay prashna aahe reshma?

Tu kase nehami mala vichartos, tech mi tula vichartey!

Mag mi pan tasech uttar deto ... Mi Sujay'... tuza Mitra

Fakta Mitra nahiyes tu... Tar tu tya-hun jast aahes mazya-sathi

Mhanje?

Hmm ... mhanje ... Mitra, Tatvadnya ani Watadya'

Oh, means. .. Friend, Philospher and Guide'?

anakhi kahi tari ...

Mhanje?

Scholer tu aahes tevha ... Tuch shodh kay te!

Reshma hasun tithun nighun geli... Sujay-la wicharat takun.

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Reshma-chya baba-ni Sujay-che mahnane tichya Aai la sangitale.

Kharech, changali kalpana aahe. Resma-la tichya aawadiche kahi tari karata pan yeil. Kiti vichari ani changala mulga aahe nahi Sujay?

Ho na. Aapli kalji achuk olakhali tyane.

Mag, Reshma-la jau de na Mumbai la?

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Strategic Timeout 2!

(posted before on 3D thread)

Edited by dlip - 10 years ago

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dlip

@dlip

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Part 14 (Last part) ... continued from previous page and completed

Kiti wel lavatay tayarila? 11 chi gadi aahe. Nidan 10 la tari ithun nighayala pahije.

A Suja, aamhi aamche awaratoy ha welet. Tu ugach arda-orad karu nakos.

Meenal, mala kay watatey sangu? Suja na... Reshma chya Aai-baba na impress karnya-sthi aaplyawar ordatoy!

Ana, wel kay? ... prasang kay? ani tula suchtay kay?. Atapa ata!

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Ashu, hya-dabya madhe mi Zunka ani Bhakari dilya aahet. Kha ha gadi madhe.

Ektya bhavachi kalaji tula Reshma. Bhook aamhala pan lagate mhatale.

Ase kahi nahiye Kaivalya. Mi sagalyan-sathi dila aahe ha daba. Ashu, sagalyani khaychay... tu ektyane nahi.

Kalale ka re Ashutosh? Bahini-ne kay sangitalay te?

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Baba, nighato aamhi. Kalji ghya tumhi sagale...

Are nighato kay? Mi riksha sangitalyat, tya alaya ki aapan sagale jau. Amhi yeto na tumhala sodayala station-war.

Nako Baba, tumhi kuthe dhav-pal kartay?

Dhav-pal kasali tyat? Reshma...

Ale baba...

He kay tu tayar nahi zalis? Sagale nighalet. Tu yenar nahiyes station-war?

Nako Baba. Mi nahi yet.

Ho... karan ... mala radu awarnar nahi

Kiavalya...ase kahi nahiye

Mag chal na stationwar

Reshma jari ase kahi nahiye' mhanali tari khare karan tar tech' hote. Tila sagalyan-cha nirop ghene ashakya watat hote.

Reshma, tula nakki jayache nahiye station-war?

Nahi Baba

Hya-sagalyan samor radu yayala nako, he tar karan nahi?

Nahi

Hya sarvanchya bags' madhe, tu tuzi bag tar thevali nahis na?

Nahi

Mag mi jar tula sangitale TU PAN JAA MUMBAI-LA; tar... jaanar nahis?

Nahi

Sagalyani ekdam orda kela, Reshma-la kshan-bhar kahich kalale nahi. Pan nantar tichya lakshat ale...

Mhanje Baba... Mi pan jau Mumbai la? Aamchya ghari?

Ho, jaa bala; Kaal Sujay-ne je sangitalay te patlay mala. Tu Mubai-la ja ... tithe kay karyachay te aapan nantar savistar phone-war bolu.

Thank you Baba, Thank you Aai

Thanks aamhala nahi... hya sagalyana de.

Taai... Te thanks ithe nakot Maaj-ghari' gelya-war de. Mast bharli wangi' banavun...

...

Baray Baba...Aai, nighato aamhi

Nit ja sagale. Ani ho, Sujay, Kailvalya, Ana, Meenal ani Ashu... tumhi saglyani Rewachya lagnala yaychay... aamchya madatila. Yaal na?

Sagale ordale Ho ... nakkich'!

...

Gadine Akola station sodale...

Reshma, tula mi mage mhanalo hoto na ki tuzya aayushyat-lya pratyek situation' sathi ek gane sangu shakato mi...

Ho Kaivalya. Pan ata kuthali aley situation?

Are, ase kase? Tu eka nava-purtya' asalelya bandhana-tun mukt hoteyes, aaushyat navin kahi tari karnya-sathi bharaari gheu pahaateyas' hi kay situation' nahiye?

Hya situation sathi kuthale alay gane?

Tuch sang... bagh tula athavatay ka?

Hmm...Ha... athavale ...

Kanto se khich ke ye aanchal, tod ke bandhan baandhe payal

koi na roko dil ki udaan ko, dil vo chala

ha ha haa haa haa haa

aaj phir jine ki tamanna hai, aaj phir marane ka irada hai

aaj phir jine ki tamanna hai!

Resma navya umedine Mumbai-la partley. Aayushya punha jaganya sathi... jeeva-bhavachya mitran-chya saathine!

The End

(Posted before on 3D thread)

Edited by dlip - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Part-1 of short story by AngelVS

Reva mumbai madhe yete ani reshmala cal karte

Minal : Reshma kay zala kahi problem ahe ka ??
Reshma: (inpanic tone) hooo reva mumbai madhe ali ahe ani ata rakeshchya gharasamor ubhi ahe. ata kay karu😕

Sujay: ek minute Reshma tu adhi shant ho ani khali bas.
Reshma: sujay tula kalta ka rewa ethe ali ahe ata tila sagla kalnar ani aai babana pan ata mi kay karu ???😭😭

Minal: Don't worry reshma apan karu sagla manage nahi kalnar tila kahihi apan karu kahitri jhol
Anna: ho reshma apan kahitri sanguyat tila.

Minal: tu rakesh la cal kar.

Kaivlya: Hahaha !!! Adla Hari Gadhvache Pay Dhari !!!😈

Sujay: ek Minute mala kay watata apan ata hi lapava-chapavi pure karuyat.
Kaivlya : Tula kay mhanaych ahe sujay neet sangtos ka.
Sujay : he bagh mala etkach sangaych ahe ki reshmane rewa la sagla khara sangayla hawa..reshma tu aai babanshi nahi share karu shakat etkyat pan rewa sobat tu khup close ahes ti sagla samjun gheyil ani tula pan eka family member cha support milel.

Kaivlya: mala watat sujay barobar boltoy.
Reshma : are vede ahat ka tumhi. tila kay watel he sagla kalyanantr.
Sujay : tila kay watel jevha tila he kalel ji bahin tichya sobat sagl share karat hoti tine etki mothi gosht tichyapasun lapaun thevli.
Reshma: mala patat sagla pan plz tu bolashil ka tichyasobat yabadal. mazyat etki himmat nahi re.
Sujay: nahi. he tulach sangav lagel amhi ahot na tuzya sobat.

Reshma Reva la gheun ghari yete
Reva: Tai mala kalel ka apan kuthe alo ahot? ani rakeah jiju kuthe ahet? He sagle kon ahet?
Minal: tu bas rewa mi pani ante..kay ghenar tu ??
Reva: Tai mi tula kahitri vicharte he sagle kon ahet.ani tu rakeah jijuncha ghar sodun ethe kay kartes?
Reshma: he bagh, mala tula sagla sangaych hota pan himmat nahi zali.
Reva: kashabadal boltes tu, sagla thik ahe na tai ?
Reshma: nahi reva kahich thik nahiye.mi ethe rahte rakesh kade nahi..he maze friends ahet jyani mala sawarla.

Reshma mumbai madhe alyapasun kay kay ghadla te sagla rewa la sangte
Reva: tai etka sagla zala ani tu mala ata sangtes.tya rakesh jiju la tr mi ata sodnar nahi, jiju bolaychi pan laj watate mala.aai-babana he sagla sangayla hawa ani tu mazyasobat ghari yetes ata lagech..amhi sagle astana tula he sagla ektila sahan karav lagla.
Reshma: ekti kuthe ahe mi he sagle ahet na mazyaaobat.

Sujay: sorry mi tumchya personal goshtit bolatoy pan reva tu ata ghari kahihi sangu nako tuza lagna neet par padla ki nantr bola tumhi ghari.reshma ne yasathich hi gosht etke diwas lapaun thewli ahe ki tuzya lagnat kahi prblm yayla nako karan tyamule tumchya aai-babana tras honar..kalatay na tula mi kay bolatoy.
Reva: but...

Reshma: please rewa tula mazi shapath !!!
Ashu: are yaar kay he ? khaycha kahitri bagha na bhuk lagli ahe saglyana.
Kaivlya: saglyana ki tula???
Sujay: mi saglyansathi pohe banau ka??reshmane shikwla ahe mala basic cooking.
Reshma: Thamb sujay mi pan yete tula nahi jamnar.
Sujay: ag jamel g mala tu bas adhich khup thakli ahes.

Light chit-chat nantr sagla baryapaiki normal hota.

Edited by dlip - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Part II (Last Part) of short story by AngelVS

Ratri rewa hall madhe ektich vichar karat basleli aste.

Sujay: Tai cha vichar kartes ??
Rewa: Ho na tila kiti kahi sahan karav lagta ektila.
Sujay: ekti nahi ti amhi ahot na tichi kalji ghyayla.tu nako kalji karu.

Rewa : 🥱

Sujay: (With Sweet Smile) tumhi na same ahat..radubai!! but tula mahit ahe ka tuzi tai na superwoman ahe. sagla jamta tila saglyana samjun ghete, etka sundar jewan banwte,changli singer pan ahe ani dance tar etka apratim karte.ani bhandate pan mast..sagla yeta tila agadi perfect ahe.murkha ahe to rakesh ashya mulila nakarla tyane mi asto tar...

Rewa : tu astas tar ???
Sujay : Are bapre khup late zala ahe. tula zopaych nahi ka? udya tumcha baher firayla jaycha plan ahe na reshma bolali mala.
Rewa: saglach sangte ka tula tai? khup kami diwsat khup chagla olkhala ahes tu tai la.ani ti hi khup change zali ahe disat mala.ani ho mi lahan nahi ata baryach goshti kaltat mala.
Sujay: mhanje??
Rewa : vichar kar.mala zop yete bye good night !!!

Sujay: rewa la kalal ki kay mala reshma awadte te...😕 mi pan bawlat jara jastch bolalo.kay karu reshma badal bolayla laglo ki kalatch nahi kuthe thambaych te.😳

Next Day

In coffee shop
Rewa: Tai tu thik ahes na???
Reshma: ho g..etka sagla houn pan mi normal ahe te he sagle sobat ahet mhanunch.
Rewa: Tai ek sangu, tu na lawkrat lawkar rakesh jiju la devours deun tuza life navyane suru kar.
Reshma: he sagla etka sopa ahe ka??😔
Rewa: kathin hi nahi !!!
Reshma: ekda tuza lagna neet par padla ki aai babana sagla sangun mi akolyala parat yenar ahe.
Rewa: tithe yeun ghari radat basnar tyapeksha tu ethech settle ka hot nahis. tu well educated ahes changla job bagh ani independent ho.ethe tula sath denare ahet na.

Reshma: jaude na ha sagla vichar ata nako karuya..tu fakt chukun hi aai babana yatla kahi kalu deu nako etka kar.

Rewa: yes I promise !!!

5-6 diwas maja masti karnyat nighun jatat..

Rewa akolyala janar aste tyadhichi ratra.

Rewa : sujay mala thoda bolaych hota.mi ata spashtch bolate mala mahit ahe tai tula khup awadte.
Sujay: ag as kahich nahi tuza gairsamaj zala asel.😲
Rewa: he bagh mi lahan nahi mala dista tula tichi kiti kalji ahe. tu tila pratek veli kiti samjun ghetos.so tu ata tila he sagla lavkar sang karan ti maza lagna zalyanantar mumbai sodun akolyala yenar as bolat hoti.ani mala as watat ki tuzyasarkhya life partner chi garaj ahe tila. Vichar kar
Sujay : ho mi bolen tichyasobt yabadal lavkarch but mala bhiti watate mazya eka chukimule amchya maitri madhe problem yetil ani mi tila kayamch gamaun basen.😭
Rewa : as kahihi honar nahi.
Sujay : I hope 😊 Zop tu ata good night

Sujay(POV): rewa barobar bolte. mala ata yabadal bolayla hawa reshma sobat pan tyadhi ekda kaivlya sobat bolto toch samjun gheu shkto.😒

Next Morning
Reshma:Rewa tuzi tayari zali ka, 11 chi train ahe.
Minal: yar rewa next time khup diwas rahayla ye apan khup maja karu.
Anna: ho na..baccha kalji ghe ha.
Rewa: ho nakki..ani kaivlya next time ale ki mala hi guitar shikav ha. tai kalji ghe kahi problem ala tar lagech ph kar.😭
Ashu: are yaar ata radun vagere zala asel tr nighaych ka

Reshma: Ho chala
Rewa: Sujay mi kay sangitla ahe te lakshat ahe na 😉

Sujay : ho bai ahe lakshat ☺️

Reshma: kay sangitla ahe tu sujay la??

Rewa: te amcha secret ahe. 😉

Sagle rewa la sodun ghari yetat.

Reshma: Sujay..

Sujay: ha bol na reshma

Reshma: Thank you !! tu tya veli samjaun sangitla nasta tar kadachit mi rewa la sanguch shakle naste.. aj khup samadhan watat re at least ek family member ahe mazyasobat ha khup motha adhar ahe.😊

Sujay: Etka tar mi karuch shakto na tuzyasathi ☺️

Reshma: 😊 Sujay,Rewa kontya secret badal bolat hoti re?
Sujay : Te kalel tula lavkarch.😳😳

-The End-

(The story was posted before on 3D Thread)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Missing moments from 'Resh-ma helping Nisha-to-cure-Rakesh' episode -

When Kaivalya went home to bring 'Owa' as per Ma-Resh-ma's instructions, Ma-Resh-ma sung following song for Nisha

Mai tulasi tere aangan kee
Mai tulasi tere aangan kee,

Koi nahee mai tere sajan (Rakesh) kee
Mai tulasi tere aangan kee,

Dwar pade pade taras gai,
aaj umad kar baras gai
Pyasee badalee sawan kee,
mai tulasi tere aangan kee
Mai tulasi

Mang teree sindur bhee teraa,
sab kuchh teraa kuchh nahee meraa
Mohe saughandh tere ansuan kee,
mai tulasi tere aangan kee
Mai tulasi

Kahe ko too mujhse jalatee hai
Ay ree mohe toh too lagatee hai
Koi saheli bachpan kee
Mai tulasee tere aangan kee,
Koi nahee mai tere 'Rakesh' kee
Mai tulasi tere aangan kee

Mai teraa kya le jaungee,
kuchh na kuchh toh hai de jaungee
Dhool mai teree galiya kee
Mai tulasee tere aangan kee,
Koi nahee mai 'tere Rakesh' kee,
mai tulasi tere aangan kee
Mai tulasi

And that's why 'emotional (actually, happy) Nisha' hugged Ma-Resh-ma at end of episode 😭

(This fun post was posted before on 3D thread)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Wish-claimer - Whatever written below has not happened in 3D. I do not know if such things will ever happen in the serial. But, I do wish something like this or even better than this should happen in the serial! What say?

Reshma's 2nd birthday in 'Maaj-ghar'

Ha maaza hya Maaj-gharata'la dusara Waadh-diwas'!!

Mala navhate watale ki aajacha diwas mazya sathi he ase' surprise gheun yeil! Kase sangu tula, kay watatay mala ...

Gun-gunaave geet waate; shabd milu de thamb naa,

Sagale sangun takaychay tula. Pan, tu kharech ithe jawal asashil tevha. Halli sarkha mala tu mazya await-bhovati aslyacha bhaas hoto ...

Hul ki chaahul tu; ituke kalu de, thamb naa,

Ani tu asalas ki, chatit dhad-dhate mazya ...

Guntalela shwaas haa; sodaau de thamb naa,
Tol mazha saawru de, thamb naa!

Kharech ...

Saapadaayaa laagale mee jyaa kshani maazhi malaa,
Nemaka valanaavari tyaa jiv haa bhaambawala,
...

Khel haa tar kaalacha pan aaj ka waate nava,
Kaalcha khel bagh waate nawaa!

Tula mahitey? ...