Creatives' Corner!!!!!! - Page 4

For SuShma-shippers, Situation fast forwarded -

Rewa-chya lagna-chya diwashi yayala Rekesh ekach ati-warch tayar zala. Lagna-la yena adhi, Resma ani tyane Mutual Consent divorce' file karayacha. Reshma pudhe dusra paryaya-ch urla nahi.

Rewa-che lagna sukharoop par padale. Rakesh tya diwashi ratrichya gadine Mumbai la nighun aala. Office madhun raja milat nahiye sangun!

Reshma ankhi char diwasiani Mumbai la paratali. Ata aaple Mumbai madhale he shevatche kahi diwas. Ekda ka divorce' manjur zala ki parat Akloya-la partayache ase tine manashi tharavale hote.

Reshma la ghari parata-lele baghun sagalyana khup anand zala. Ani ...tine bolun dakhavale nasale tari kadachit he tiche Mumbai madhale shavatche kahi diwas hya kalpanene sagalyanach khup waait watat hote.

Ata lavakarach aapan ithun jaanar mhanun Reshma ne sagalyan-sthi roj nav-navin khadya padarth banwayacha sapataa lavala hota.

Tya diwashi sudha sakali lavakar uthun ti kitchen madhe Shevayan-cha Upama' karnyachi tyari kaat hoti. Sagale ajun zopalele-ch hote. Arthat; Sujay sodun!. To aapla nehmi pramane lavkar uthun angholi-la gela hota.

Tewdhyat tyacha mobile waajala. Reshma kitchen madhun phone ghayal yeyi paryant, call cut zala. Ani ti parat phire paryant punha dusryan-da ring wajali. Phonwar Pune - Hospital' mhanun display hot hote. Phone ghawa ki nahi he tila kalena. Karan mage ekda Sujay ghai-ghaine Punya-la gela hota te tila aathawale ani tya barobar tyache ani Kaivalyache bhandan sudhha.

Aata dekhil aapna phone ghatalela Sujay la awadnar nahi ase watun ti parat jayal nighali. Pan zop chalavlyane vaitaglelya Kaivalyane Reskma aga ghe na to phone' ase ordalya mule Reshma ne nailajane call ghetala.

Hello Sujay, Mi Dr Aagashe boltoy. Are tuzya bahin jara ...

Hello, Aho Sujay na angholi la gelay. To baher ala na ki tyala tumhala parat phone karayala ...

Hello .. Hello. Nahi tevhadha wel nahiye. Tumhi tyala sanga ki Dr Agashe-ni nirop dilay - tabadtob Punya-la ye. Tyachya bahini-chi tabyet jara bighadaley.

Kay?

Ho na. tumhi tyachya Mrs boltay na? Mag tumhi pan ya tyach-ya barobar. Mhanje tumhi- hi madat karal ... tila samjawayala.

Aaho nahi, mi...

Thevato phone. Tumhi doghe hi lagech ya.

Sujay chi 'bahin' aajari? Punya-chya hospital madhe? Tya-sathich Sujay tya diwashi dhwat palat gela hota ka Punya-la? Ani doctor mala tyachi bayko samjale? Ani mala hi yaayala sangitalay. Khup gambhir kahi tari distay!

Sujay bathroom madhun baher aala

Kunacha phone hota ga Reshma?

Are Punya-hoon Dr Agashencha phone hota. Tuzi bahin ..

Ka uchalaas tu maaza call? Mala na vicharta?

Sorry are lagopath don wela aala phone ani hospital che nav disale. Mala watale ...

Thik aahe ... baghto mi kay karayache te

Sorry Sujay. Are ...

Pan uttar aaikayal Sujay tithe navhatach. To Dr Agashen-shi bolayala baher gela hota. Reshma tyachya sathi chaha galu lagali. Tevhadhyat Sujay kitchen madhe aala.

Sujay adhi chaha ghe ani mag...

Sorry Reshma. Mi ugach tuzya-war oradalo.

Are . asu de. Tu chaha - baro bar kahi tari kahshil ka? Mahit nahi na tithe pochayala kiti wel lagel...

Reshma ... aik na. Punyacha hospital madha na mazi bahin ... Sujay ne Reshma-la bahini-baddal sangitale.

Sagale eikun Reshma-la gahivarun ale. Mahnun Sujay Punya la... Ani apan sagale kay samjalo hoto he athavun tile sharamlya-sarke zale.

Reshma ...Dr Agashe mhanale ki tula pan mi Punya-la gheun yave. Zalich tar tuzi madat hoil.

Ho pan are te mala tuzi bayko...

Mhanale mala te. Pan please yeshil mazy barobar? Bolshil Shona-shi? Samjavashil tila?

Doghe hi sagale awaraun patkan baher padale. Itar kuni uthayachya aat.

Punya-la hospital madhe doghe-hi pochale tevha Sujay chi bahin barich normal zali hoti. Sujay barobar aalye la Reshma-la baghun tichya chehrya-war hasu umatale.

Tuze nav kay aahe? ...Maza dada kay mhanto ga tula? Tula pan jara kahi vicharla ki samjavat basto ka ga?

Ek na anek!

Dr Agashe ani Sujay tya doghinche bolne lambun baghat hote.

Mr Sujay... hya pudhe yetana tumhi tumchya Mrs na dekhil barobar anat ja. Tyanchyashi mokale panane bolalyacha tumchya bahinila fayadach hoil.

Sedatives mule bolta bolta Sujay chi bahin zopun geli.

Sujay... are hila zop lagley. Kay karayach ata aapan?

Thanks Reshma. Jawal jawal don varshani Shona-la mazya shivay itar kuanashi tari ase premane anit nit boltana baghitale mi. Reshma, doctor mahanale ki asech warche war tula hi ithe aanat ja. Tuzya-shi bolalya-ne Shonala bare watel. Karshil mala madat?

As ka vichaartos Sujay? Mich ka amhi sgale tula madat ...

Nahi nako, itara-na please hyatale kahi sangu nakos. Shona bari zali ki sgala sanguya.

Thik aahe. Pan aaj sakal-pasun aapan kuthe gelo hoto vicharle tar kay sangayache?

Sanguya ... Magistrate chya office madhe gelo hota. Tuzy divorce chya kama sathi.

Divorce chi aathavan aalyawar Reshma ekdam bhana-var ali.

Sujay... are mazya divorce baddal mala aai-baba na sangave lagnar aahe. Mag kadachit te mala Akolya-la ghun jatil. Ani mag...

Mahit aahe mala ... pan please nako na jau. Thamb na... mala madat karnya sathi. Please ...

Sujay sathi thambel ka Reshma Mumbai madhech?

Sasun hospital madhun Dr Mohan Agashe na bhetun, Shona chya aajar pana vishayi tayancha salla gheun kashi-bashi 730 chi Asiad milali. Nashib Sasun hospital Pune station chya jawalach aahe mhanun.

Aata ghari pochayala nidan ratriche 12 tari waajnar. Punyachya traffic madhun nighun, express way war jayalach tas-sawa tas tari lagnar. Nashib, ratri pochnar mhanun nidan Mumbai tari traffic milnar nahi.

Ghari pohchen tevha sagale zopalel astil. Kadachit kaivalya jaaga asel, synthesizer war kahitari composition banvat basla asel.

Sakali ugaach bhandalo tyachashi. Pan to sudhha hattalach petla hota. Kay sanganar hoto mi tya saglyana? Sona vishayi kalale aste Ki sagale kalji poti mazi madat karayala nighale aste. Mazi khatri aahe sakali mi dhavat plat Punyala alo tevha sagale mazya-baronar yayala nighale aste. Pan Sonachi manasik sthti kuthe sthir aahe? Mi sudha tichashi aadhi phonwar bolto ani mag tichya Samor yeto. Hya saglyana baghun tar ti nalkich hysteric zali asti.

Pan he sagale kase samjavnar mi tyana? Mhanun, Kaivalya la gapp karnya-sathi muddam mi tyacha Aai-Babancha Vishay kadhala. Khar tar chukalech maza. Ata gelyawar tyala sorry mhanato...

Missing moments' from Air cooler' episode -

Kharach itke garam hotay na gel 2-4 diwas. Ghrat thambane hi ek shikshach zaliy. Kaamaat sudhha nit laksh lagat nahiye

AC ghyayachya nustya kalpane-nech Kay utsaahat hote sagale. Pan AC chya kimti sagalya 20,000 chya pudhe. Bank-et paise aahet pan Shona-chya hospitalche hya mahinya-che charges ajun dyache aahet. Tyamule...

Actually Reshma-la vicharle pahije tyanchya Vidarbhat Kay karat te. Tikade tar ithalya-peksha jast unhala asto.

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Reshma Kitchen-madhe kokam sarbatache glass dhuvat hoti

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Reshma, Tula hya kamacha kantala yet nahi ka ga? Baghave teva kitchen madhe kahitari karat astes. Titkyach utsahane!

Are, mala awadta he sagale karayala. Ani tase hi ...

Aga magashi tu mhanalis na... Vichar Karun sangate. Kay sangnar hotis? Ani mala ek sang tumchya Vidarbha madhe tar ithalya peksha jast garam hot asel na? Kase Kay manage karata tumhi?

Garam? Are tithe tar 44-45 degree paryant jate temperature.

Pan mag ashya weli Kay Karta tumhi? Tithe saglyan-kade AC asto?

Tech tar sangnar hote mi. Saglyan kade kuthe aalet AC. Kahi Jan ghrachya khidkyana je padde astat na tyachya war pani martat. Mhanje tyatun aat yenari hava thand houn yete.

Ha. He mhanaje magashi Ashune Kaivalya-chya zopalya-la oli chadar bandhali hoti tase Zale

Kay?

Aga kahi vicharu nakos.

Ashu kay karel na... Ani are, barechae lok Air cooler ghetat. To na AC peksha barach swasta asto. Mala nakki mahit nahi pan mala watate 10-12 litre capacity cha, chota air cooler 5-6 hajarala milto.

Are Ho. He mazya lakshatach ale nahi. Air cooler che working principle tya 'padde-ole- karun-garwa-ghenya' sarkehch aahe! Actually, its a simple air moving system' which pulls fresh outside air and drives it through the moist pads. Mhanje he je water / air cooling pads astat na te khare mhanje olya-paddya' sarkhe act Karta

Sujay..mi Kay mhantey

Ani Tula mahitey ka, the water in the pads evaporates, bringing down the temperature of the air passing through the pads. The blower then blows the cool air into the room.

Sujay... Sujay... Eiktos ka jara? Mi Kay mhantey; Aaplyala jamel ka ek air cooler ghyayala? Ani to eka kholitun dusrya kholit jevha pahije tevha beta yeto. AC sarkha ek jagi fix karyala nako. Aaplyala donhi rooms madhe vaparat yeil na.


Ek number idea aahe. Gheyuya aapan ...sagale milun

Sujay, pan mazya kade..

Tevadhe paise ahet mazyakade. Aapan ek kaam karu, aapan na direct tya Vaibhav electronics madhe jau ya ani air cooler gheyunach yeua ya. Tu yeshil na mazya barobar?

Ho. Chalel. Ani aapan na hya saglyana surprise deu ya. Adhi sangayalaach nako

Ek number idea aahe. Chal lagech nighuyat. Tu baik-war bashil na?

Ho chalel. Pan yetan? Air cooler gheun kashi basnar mi baik-war.

Aga yetana tyancha manus yeil na cooler gheun. Aapan doghe yeu baik warun.

Chalel. Ani Tula mahitey ka Sujay, aamchya vidarbhat na ek Vasant Phutane mhanun aahet tyani na Mud house banavali aahet. Unhalyach tras kami vhawa mhanun. Tya mud house madhe na ...

Nighuyat ka Ata aapan? Jatana sang mala te sagale.

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Ani mag Dada-Dadi Air Cooler gheun aale 😊

(This was previously posted on 3D thread)

Weekend Drabble - SuShama

Chalel Doctor. Tumhi kharchachi kalji karu naka. Pudhchya mahinya pasun suru karuyat aapan.

Ho pan ti injections import karawi lagtil ani tya sathi 2 weeks adhi payment karawe lagte. Tevha, tumhi yetya 2 diwast 50,000/ -bharalet ki aaplya-la 5 tarkhe paryant injection-chi delivery milel. Mhanje aapli treatment chalu hoil

Ok doctor mi karto vyavastha.

Phone disconnect karun Sujay vicharat gadhun gela. 2 diwasat 50,000/- rupaye bharayachet. Kalach bank account check kela hota ... fakt 25,000/- balance hote. Salary credit vhayala ajun 4 diwas aahet. Ankhi 25,000/- kuthun aanu mi? Sagalyana sangato hya weli rent 4-5 diwas aadhich dya mhanun. Tari dekhil 10,000/- kami padtil. Kaivalya kade magu ka? Baghto bolun...

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Sujya, Kay nataka aahet re tuzi? Aadhi bhade 1-tarkhela havech mhanun hatun basayachas. Ata ekdam sangtoyas 4 diwas aadhi bhad dya mhanun. Maza ek assignment cha check somwari milnar aahe. To credit hoil ek tarkehla. Mag dein mi tuza bhade. Kahi kuthe palun jaat nahiye mi.

Minal aga, mala jar urgency hoti paishya-chi mhanun

Kashyala? Tuzy punya-chya girlfriend la dyala?

Minal... Shut up!

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Scholar, jara 4 diwasa-sathi 2000/- rupaye bhetatil ka?

Ashu, ata he ati hotay ha. Tuzya kade maze already 4500/- udhar aahet. Ani kashala havet re tula 2000?

Te Kinjal la jara eka dress che dyache hote, tailor la . Tiche Pappa ale ki lagech parat denar aahe ti.

Ashu, ek rupaya milanar nahi. Kalale?

Thik aahe na maag. Tyat kay Navin sangatoys tu?

Aashu. Gappa bas ha ata

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Kaivalya, are jara urgently 25000/- have hote. Deu shakshil kare? Ek tarkhela salary credit zali ki lagech tula parat dein mi.

Sujay Sathe, halli jara bar chalaly maze. Pan ek rakami 25000/- jara kathin aahe. Mi 10,000/- deu shakto. July mahinyache ghar bhade dharun. Udya dile tar chaltil na? Pan kay re Sujay, itke diwas aamhi tuzya kadun paise ghayacho, aaj ulti ganga kashi kay vhayala lagali? Kahi vishesh karan?

Are te jara...

Nahi, ... sangayache nasel tar nako sangus. It's OK.

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Lap top pudhe basun, donhi hatane doke dharun Sujay swtahshi-ch bolat hota...

Kase jamnar 25,000? Kaivalyane dile tari dekhil 15,000/- kamich padnar aahet. Kasi honar treatment suru? Kay karu, kahich suchat nahiye...

Sujay, chaha ghetos na?

Thanks Reshma. Are, hila kay zale? Chaha thevala ani lagech nighun kay geli? Mi kahi tichya-kade paise magnar navhato. Mala mahitey ti aaple banket le paise puravun puravun wapartey.

Sujay, jara haat pudhe kar.

Kashala ga Reshma?

Kar sangtey na.

Mala mahitey tu dawara' aahes te. Pan dawa nahi, ujawa haat pudhe kar.

Reshma-ne Sujay chay hatawar Nisha-ne parat dileli' angathi' thevali.

Reshma, he kay aahe? Hi aangathi mala ka dete ahes?

Sujay, 15 gm chi aangathi aahe. Hi aapan vikali tar 20-25 hazar milatil na? tevhadhyane kaam hoil na tuze sadhya purte?

Reshma aga khi tari kay, hi tuzi angathi mi ka viku? Ani tuzy aai-baba na kalale tar te kay mhantil? Kahi tari kay!

Reshma... Sujay che dole ekdam daatun aale.

Bar ... chal

Reshma ani Sujay angathi gheun baher padale.

Sujay manant vichar karat hota, Reshma la kase kalale mala paishyan-chi garaj aahe te? Chaha denya purvi tine maze bolane aaikale ki kay? Nakkich!

Salary credit zalya-zalya aangathi parat analich pahije. Reshma sathi!