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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Part 5 - Prelude ... by dlip

Visarne itke sope aste tar?
Tar, jagane-hii kiti sope Zale aste

Aayushya-chi waat chaalatana;
Aathavanin-chya khach-khalgyat,
Paaul tari adakale naste!

Reshmala Bahina-bain chi kavita athavali ani dole bharun ale tiche

Man vadhaaL vadhaaL
Ubhya pikatale dhor
Kiti hakala hakala
Firun yete pika-war

Vicharan-chya tandrit taxi Sujay-chya office samor kadhi thambali te kalalech nahi

...

Sujay Sathe aahet ka?

Aapan?

Mi Reshma. Tyana ha tiffin dyacha hota.

Mr Sathe magashich baher gelat eka client la bhetatala. But, he informed that he will be back by lunch. Aapan basa na...

Nahi ...nako mi jara ghait aahe. Tyana ha lunch box dyal ka tumhi?

Ithe reception madhe nako thevayala. Madam tumhi aat madhe jaun, tyanche colleague aahet Lele mhanun kinwa tyanchi assitant aahe ... Vaishali mhanun, tyanchya kade deta ka? If you don't mind..

Oh yes, certainly! Kuthe ikadun jayache ka aat madhe?

Ho ikde right-la ... Dusari cabin

Thanks

Ata madhe Reshma la kon bhetel? Lele Ki Vaishali? Ki Sujay office madhech aahe ani ...

Sujay janun-bujun avoid kartoy ka Reshma la?

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Part 5 ...continued (and completed!)

Excuse me...

Yes?

I want to meet Vaishali...

Hello, myself ... Vaishali (kon hi 'kaku-bai'? ani... english boltey?)

Hello, myself Reshma (bapare... Itke ghtta' kapade kuni kase kay ghalu shakte? )

Oh .. Rreshma ... Khup aaiklay tuzya baddal. Sujay kadun (agadi ordinary' tar aahes tu disayala!)

Pan Sujay-chya bolnyat kadhi tumchya-baddal aaikale nahi amhi (muddam sangat nasel. Sagale chidawtil na!)

Mi na just, eka mahinya purvi join kelay (mahitey, to Sujay mala kahi bhav det nahi.) Kahi kam hote ka? (nasel tar ... ja ithun!)

Ho.. Tyala ha lunchbox dyayacha hota (ek diwas mala uthayala ushir zala tar... ala tasach nighun. Daba na gheta!)

De na ... Mi dein tyala (Ata tuza daba alya war kashyala maza tiffin share karel to?). Tuzya jevanachi khup tarrif karat asto Sujay (ani tuzi sudhha. Kay pahilay tyane tuzyat, te tya-che tyala-ch thaauk!). Reshma... pan kharach ha, tuzi preparations khup Chan astat (ani tyamule mazya receipies bakwas watatat Sujay-la!)

Thank you. Pudhachya weli navin kahi padarth kela na, tar tumchya sathi pan nakki pathavin Sujay barobar (ugach tuzi najar lagayala nako... aamchya Sujay la!)

Oh, so nice of you Reshma (kashala ? mala khijavayala? Thamb, ata dakhavatech tula!)

Chala, mag nighate mi ata. Tevadha daba dya ha Sujay la.

Aga, lagech nighates? Cofee ghetas ka? Sujay che dusre collgue aahet Mr. Lele. Tyana bhetun ja na. He bagh alech Mr Lele. Sir, hi Reshma. Sujay Sathe kade ali hoti. Tyancha lunch box dyala (Reshma, ata baghuya tuzi maja!).

Are wa! Ata Sujay la gharun garam garam' jevan yenar watate?

Nahi, tase kahi nahiye. Sakali lavakar nighala to office la. Tevha dyayacha rahila mahun atta gheun ale.

Ha. Tya navin client kade jayache hote na tyala. Client-kade 10 la pochayala yevadhi dhav-pal kashala karayachi? Jayache na aaramat. Client kay palun jatoy? Sujay che na jara atich aste. Sarkhe aapan kiti sincere' aahot he dakhavun dyache.

Ho. Pan 'dilali wel palnyat' kay chuk aahe?

Tyachya mule mag itara-na pan tras hoto na. Mi tar boss la saral sangato. He kaam na ... Sujay Sathe uttam kartil. Tyanach sanga kaam karayala. Mag boss sagali kame detat ...Sujay-Sathe-la. Ani Sujay pan...kashala nahi mhnatach nahi. Gheto sagali kame swataha-chya khandya-war!

Khup sadha ani saral aahe aamcha Sujay. Nehmi sagalyana madat karayala tayar asto. Swtaha-la kitihi tras zala tari dakhavanar nahi ki kunala sangnar nahi.

Ha tar 'ghaabrat-pana' zala.

Ek sangu ka? Sadhe-panat dekhil ek taakad aste. Swataha-la janvat nasel ti kadachit. Pan itarana jaanavate ti. Ani tyana mag ashya sadhya mansanchi' bhiti watatayala lagte.

Ozya-che gadhav' honyat kasli aley taakat'?

Mag aju-bajuche aggressive' hotat, sawatahala wachavanya-sathi. Te mhantat na agrresion is the best form of defense'!

Mahnaje, kay mhanaychay kay tumhala?

Nahi, mala kahich mhanayache nahiye. Tumhi-ch mhanalat Ozya-che gadhav'! Tyawarun aathavale itkech. Bare, tumcha ugach wel ghet nahi. Nighu mi ata? Namaskar!

Namskar.

...

Reshma parat janya sathi lift chi waat baghat ubhi hoti. Tichya manat ale Office kiti chan aahe Sujay che. Pan ti Vaishali ani to Lele...Kathinach aahe bicharya Sujay-che. Ugach nahi ghari yeto tevha vaitaglel asto.'

Lift thambali. Dar ughadale, ata janya sathi Reshma pudhe janar tar samor lift madhun Sujaya-ch ala baher!

Tu? Ithe kashi aalis?

Kashi mhanje? Taxi-ne.

Te mahitey. I mean, ithe kashala aalis?

Tuza luncbox gheun ale. Sakali mala uthavalas ka nahi? Tasach nighun alas daba na gheta.

Aapan ata-madhe jaun bolu ya ka? Ithe lift samor nako.

Aat-madhe jaun aley mi. Daba dilay... tuzya tya Vaishali kade. Ani tuza to Lele pan bhetala.

Halu bol. Bar, aatmadhe nako tar chal aapan khalti jaun boluya.

Tula wel aahe ka? Mazya shi bolayala?

Reshma... chal

Doghe lift ne khalti ale.

Kashala tu dhav-pal kelis ani yevhadha tras gheun mazya-sathi daba gheun alis? Bar Chal, tya samorchya naral-walya kade jaaaun naral-pani piyu ya.

Nakoy mala kahi. Uagach tula kashyala tras?

Reshma... Ragavu nakos ga. Mala mhanayache hote ki mi ithech canteen madhe khalle aste na.

Ho tar. Canteen madhe khalle aste na. Kal sandhyakali baher che khaun zaley, salkali nashta pan bahera-ch kela asnar ani ata punha baher-che khayache ka? Tyat paawasala aahe. Nantar tras hou naye mhanun adhich kalaji ghetaleli bari. Kalale ka?

Ragawlis ka tu mazya war?

Mi kashala ragavu? Maza kay adhikar raagvayacha? Chal nighete mi. Tu ja office madhe. Tula ugach mazya-mule ushir nako.

Reshma Sujay chi najar taalun nighun geli.

Kalalay mala Reshma. Nantar tula' tras hou naye mhanun adhi kalji ghein mi... tuzya baddal mala je kahi watatay te na' sangayachi!

...

Saap-sheedi'-chya khela-sarkhe Sujay ani Reshma punha jithun nighale' tithech yeung pochlate ka? Kona madat karel tya doghana? Kaivalya, Meenal ki ... Supriya?

(this part was originally posted on 3D thread)

Edited by dlip - 10 years ago

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dlip

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Part 6 by Manasi_MD

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Half an hour after Reshma left, Sujay called her.

"Hello, Reshma, pohochlis na ghari?"

"Ho, atach pohochle. Kahi kaam hota ka?"

"Nahi aga, tech vicharayla phone kela mi."

"Bara..."

"Ani parat kadhi mi daba visarlo tar nako itki dhavpal karu tu. Mi khain canteen madhe kahitari."

"Are pan pavsalyat asa baher khana..."

"Reshma, tu yaychya adhi amhi baherach khat hoto na? Kahi nahi hot... Ani ugach ya saglyachi saway lau nakos amhala. Pudhe Rakesh ne tyachi chuk manya keli ani tu tyachya ghari gelis, kinwa divorce houn Akolyala gelis ki amhalach tras vhaycha ya sawayicha...!"

Reshma che dole achanak panavle. Eka kshana paryanta sagla thik hota, ani dusrya kshani aplyavar khup motha sankat alyasarkha vatu lagla.

"Sujay, mala zara kaam ahe. Apan nantar bolu. Bye."

"Reshma, aik, mi maskari..."

But she had cut the call.

A few hours later, Sujay got a call from Kaivalya.

"Hello, Kaivalya.. Kay zala?"

"Sujay, tuzhya ani Reshma madhe sagla okay ahe na?"

"Kaivalya, mi tumhala adhich sangitlay ki mala ya vishayavar ajun charcha nako ahe."

"Are, tya baddal nahi bolat ahe mi."

"Mag kay zala?"

"Ti tula daba dyayla ali hoti na?"

"Ho. Kay tyacha?"

"Tuzya office madhun alyapasun mood off vatat hota ticha. Minal ani Ashu gelyanantar tari bedroom cha daar laun radaylach lagli. Kahi sangat pan nahi ahe mala. Tu kahi bolla ahes ka tila?"

"Mi kashala kahi bolen. Tu bolen bagh na tichyashi."

"Are, mala baher jaychay ata. Thoda important ahe kaam."

"Bara mi nightoy ata. Alyavar bolto tichyashi."

Meanwhile, at home, Reshma was trying to solve the mess in her life. Sujay's words had really hurt her. There was no fault of his thought, he hadn't meant to hurt her. Even so they had made her sad. But, that was because she would miss her friends, right? Or was it due to the fact that leaving Mumbai would mean leaving Sujay? Whatever the reason, Reshma knew that she would be leaving this house as a divorced woman, not as Rakesh's wife. Over the last few weeks, she had realized that all her hopes and dreams with Rakesh were dead. And with them, whatever love she had in heart for Rakesh had dropped dead too. She didn't want to be with Rakesh anymore. All she wanted was to be free from this mess of lying to her family.

As for Sujay, that one dinner that they had had together and the reaction their friends had given about it, had sparked off a great confusion in her mind. Did it really mean anything? she asked herself. Does it mean anything for me? She recalled the words her alter-ego had said to her, "Sujay baddal tuzhya manat je ahe te swikar, tyala samori ja." Reshma was starting to think that her alter-ego was right. There was something she felt about Sujay.

Sujay went home in a hurry. He opened the door, threw his bag on the table and knocked and the door of the bedroom.

"Reshma?"

"Don minute ha Sujay. Alech.."

"Reshma, mala Kaivalya cha phone ala hota. To mhanat hota ki tu swatahala bedroom madhe band karun radteys kadhichi. Kay zalay?"

"Kahi nahi re. I'm fine."

"Reshma, mala nahi sangnar ka tu?"

"Are kharach Sujay, mi thik ahe."

"Adhi baher..."

Suddenly, the doorbell rang. Sujay opened the door and found Rakesh standing there, his cellphone in hand.

"Reshma ahe ka? Jara kaam hota tichyashi."

Sujay knocked on the bedroom door and called out to Reshma,

"Reshma, Rakesh alay. Tyala kaam ahe kahitari tuzyashi."

Reshma came out, wiping her eyes. "Kay zala?"

"Reshma, mazhya babancha phone yenar ahe. Boltes ka tyanchyashi?"

"Bolte na.. Kashababat karnar ahet te phone?"

"Gavakadchi property mazhya navavar karaychi ki nahi he vicharaychay tyanna. Tevhdhyala ho mhan fakta."

This really irritated Reshma. She said, "Achcha, mhanun mi athavle ka aaj thumhala?"

"Reshma kay bolteys tu?"

"Nahi, barobarach boltey mi. Itke diwas Sujay mala sangat hota ki tumhi fakta tumchya babanche paise tumhala milave mhanun majhyashi lagna kelat. Pan mi nahi aikla tyacha. Ata asa vagun tumhi siddha kartay ki Sujaycha na aikun mi kiti mothi chuk keli ahe."

"Reshma, tula nakki kay mhanaychay?"

"Mala mhanaychay, ki mi tumchya babanshi bolnar nahi."

"He baray..! Mhanje tujhe baba phone kartat, tujhi bahin yete tevha amhi madat karaychi khota bolayla, pan tu ekdahi majhya babanshi bolnar nahi."

Sujay interrupted at this point. "Rakesh, he visru nakos ki he sagla tila tujhyamulech karava lagtay. Tila tujhyamule itka tras hotoy. Tila ajun tras zala tar mi ajibat khapavun ghenar nahi!"

Oh, god! What had he just said..?! She didn't realize anything, did she? Anyways, I can explain this later. Now isn't about me and Reshma. It's about her and her good-for-nothing husband. Or maybe he's not good for nothing. He's really good at messing things up for Reshma.

The ringing of Rakesh's phone broke Sujay's thought process.

"Hello, baba?... Nahi ti zara baher geliye... Ho ti ali ki karto phone... Ho nakki karen... Bye."

Rakesh pleaded to Reshma, "Reshma please bol tyanchyashi.. Nahitar gavakadchi kahich property nahi milnar mala. Please!"

"Rakesh, mi tumhala ekda sangitla ahe, ani Sujay ne hi clear kelay ki mi bolnar nahi ahe. Tumhi nighu shakta."

Sujay opened the door and waited for Rakesh to leave, all the while, glaring at him. If looks were daggers, Rakesh would have been a tea-strainer by now!

Rakesh moved to the door, slightly afraid of this side of the usually calm and composed Sujay.

Sujay closed the door behind him and went over to Reshma. He made her sit on the chair as she started to burst into tears.

"Reshma..." he said, putting a hand on her shoulder.

"Tula mahitiye Sujay, mala na vaitag alay ata ya saglyacha! Itke diwas je mi nailaaj mhanun karayla tayar zale hote te ata swa-ichchene karnar ahe."

"Mhanje? Nakki kay karnar ahes tu?"

"Divorce. Ata paryanta majhyakade dusra option nahi mhanun mi ho mhanat hote, pan ata mala divorce havay. 'Rakesh chi bayko' he naata nakoy mala..."

Reshma tried to compose herself. Meanwhile, a million things were racing through Sujay's mind. What had compelled Reshma to take such a decision. But, whatever the reason, she had made her choice. She didn't Rakesh to be a part of her life. Now, the biggest question Sujay was whether or not she wanted him to be a part of her life. He had to talk to her. It was now or never.

Reshma got up, wiping her tears, "Mi pan kay bolat basley. Office madhna alays, damla asashil. Chaha karte mi masta. Bara vatel tula."

"Aik na..."

"Ani khayla kay karu? Ashu kadhipasun mage laglay, bhaji kar mhanun. Chalel ka tula, ki dusra kahitari karu?"

"Reshma..."

"Are tu ubha ka ahes? Ja na patkan change kar."

"Mala bolaychay tuzhyashi."

"Apan nantar boluya na. Kaama padli ahet khup, ti atpun ghete.."

"Reshma, bas ithe. Mala tujhyashi bolaycha ahe, ani te khup mahatvacha ahe."

Kay bolaychay Sujay la?

(originally posted on 3D thread)

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dlip

@dlip

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Part 7 ... by Tarantella

"Asa kai mahatvacha bolaicha ahe tula Sujay? "

She looked at him with anticipation.

"Mi je vicharen, tyacha khara-khara uttar deshil? Mi seriously boltoy. Ya kshani Rakesh baddal chya bhavna kai ahet tujhya? "

She looked up at him in shock. A moment later, composing herself, she broke into a fake laugh.

" Are Sujay, te Rakesh.. "

He cut her midsentence. "Mala khara kai te sang. Ani mala tujha chehra agdi spashtapane vachta yeto, mhanun ugach swatahala patvun denyasathi khota bolu nakos." He stared at her with absolute stillness. She could feel the dead seriousness of the situation. Her eyes clouded with tears.

"Tula yeto na majha chehra vachta? Mag samjala aselach? " she was on the verge of crying, her voice quivering with every word she uttered.

"Ho, te samajlach ahe. Pan mala tujhya kadun aikaicha ahe te. Bol Reshma. Tujhya manat Rakesh baddal kay bhaavna ahet?"

He wanted her to accept the truth, and move on. He could not bear to see her suffer silently, take all the blame over herself when she was not even a bit at fault. Rakesh was a person to be detested, and not be saved again and again. Chuka Rakesh ne kelya hotya, tyachi shiksha Reshma ne ka bhogaichi?

Santapun, ti patkan bolali, dolyatil ashru vahat hote. She shook him with desperation and anger, her shaky hands firmly clutching his collar.

"Ho. Nahi vatat mala kahi Rakesh baddal. Tya saglya bhavana samplya ahet. Mala patlay ki Rakesh sarkhya eka atyanta selfish, ahankari purushapasun dur rahilelach bara ahe. Khara tar, mala ata saglyacha kantala alay re. Kiti divas mi aai-baba-n pasun lapvun thevnar ahe? Nahi sahan hot ata he khote bolane. Sujay, sang na re? Kai karu mi!!? Bol na? Asa gappa ka ahes? "

Sujay che dole panavle. Tichi reaction tyala apekshit hoti pan tichi ashi awastha baghavat navti tyala.

He pulled her close into an embrace. She cried her heart out, resting her head against his chest.

"Reshma, hi shevatchi vel ahe, hya pude Rakesh ya vyakti mule tujhya dolyat pani dista kama naye.. "

" Hm. Ho.." she managed to say amidst sobs.

He smiled, pulling her close to a tight hug. "Promise?"

"Promise."

...

"Sujay!!"

Reshma called out from kitchen.

"Kai zala ga?"

"Mi batate vade kartey, tula avadtat na? Jara bhaaji chi chaav gheun bag ani sang barobar zali ahe ka. "

"Wah. Batate wade!! Mast. Ho karto na taste..."

Kaivalya he sagla ekdum confused state of mind madhe observe karat hota. This is getting out of hand, he thought. Lavkarach kahi tari kela pahije.

Ratri, sagle zople astana, Kaivalya Sujay javal gela ani tyala uthavla zopetun.

"Sujay, nakki tujhyat ani Reshma madhe chalalay kay?"

Sujay eyed him with irritation. "Tula kiti vela sangitla ahe Kaivalya. Tu aikat ka nahi? Ani hi vel ahe ka ashya sensitive topic var charcha karaychi?"

"Mala je distay te boltoy."

"Kay? Kay distay tula?? "

" Hech ki.. Tu tichya premat padla ahes Ani ti tujhya." he bluntly replied with a straight face.

"Ved laglay ka tula?"

"Ved tula laglay, Sujay... Premache."

"Fine. Manya kartoy mi. Pan ticha jara tari vichar kar yaar. Tyancha divorce nahi zalay ajun! Toh Rakesh tar, parat jar to majhya samor ala tar I swear fodun kadhen tyala!!"

"Hech!" Kaivalya smirked. "Hech tar prem ahe!"

"Tu mala shikavnar ahes ka prem kai asta te? "

"He asa sarkha ragavun, vaitagun, kahi honar nahiye. Tya-peksha te sagle efforts tichya manatla janun ghayla lavshil tar tujha Khup faayda hoil.."

" Are you out of your mind!! "

" Absolutely not!" Kaivalya walked away.

Sujay stared blankly at the wall. Another sleepless night, he sighed.

...

Vicharan-madhe Reshma evdhi guntun geli hoti ki tila ek minute- hi zop lagli nahi. Sagla kiti kathin houn basle hote. Tya guntlelya natyat gurfatlya sarkha hot hota. Kiti tari prashna tichya manat hote jyachee uttar tichajaval navhti, Ani uttara milali tari ticha man manya karayla tayar navhta.

Sakali Saglyacha nighaichya veli, bell vaajali.

Ashu opened the door and accepted the courier.

"Taai, tujhyasathi ahe."

"Majhyasathi?

She opened the brown envelope and checked its contents. At that moment, her phone beeped.

"Hello? ".

"Tula papers milale astil. Aaple divorce papers." Rakesh said. "Sign kar."

She collapsed on the floor, her eyes wide with shock.

...

Ashya kathin prasangi, Reshma karel ka sign divorce papers?

(this part was posted before on 3D thread)

Edited by dlip - 10 years ago

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dlip

@dlip

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Part 8

Reshma... aga kay zale tula ekdam?

Kahi nahi Anna, mi thik aahe. Jara ...

Bhendi hya Rakesh-chya. Tyachah phone hota na? Reshma tula lai puLka aahe tyacha. Thamb mich phone karte tyala ..

Nako Minal. Jau de na. Hou de hya saglyacha shevat.

Shevat?

Ho Rakesh ne Divoce papers pathavalet.

Pathavalet mhanje? Swataha la yeun dyayachi daring nahi ka? Erwi kase jamate ekade yayala?

Tai, tu thamb. Mi jaun gheun yeto Rakesh-bhaujina.

Ashu... ajjibat jayachi garaj nahiye kuthe.

Aga tula evdha tras hotoy to Rakesh-bhauji mulech na? Ekdam chakkr alya-sarkhe kelas.

Mala Rakesh mule tras hot nahiye. He tar kevha tari honarach hote... aja ti wel ali itkech. Pan he papers alyawar mala ekdam Aai-Babanchi aathavan ali. Tyana he kallya-war baba-che BP wadhale, tyana tras hou lagala tar? Hya nustya kalpane-nech ghabarle mi.

Bagh Reshma.. mhanun mi mhanat hoto, tumhi tya Rakesh-la ugich pathishi ghalatay. Tyala uagach itke mahtwa detay.

A kaivalya, tu gap re...

Minal tu ...

Ek minute...tumhi sagale jara shanta hota ka? Reshma... tula kay watatay? Kay karayala pahije aapan? Kuthalya wakila-kade jau ya ka aapan?

Reshma ... tu sahi karun tak

Ani maar te papers tya Rakeshchya tondawar.

Kaivalya, Meenal... tumhi jara Reshma-la bolu denar aahat ka? Reshma?

Nahi, wakila-kade wagire jayachi kahich garaj nahiye. Mi tharvalay ki sahya deun takachya ... divorce papers war.

A he bagh tai...

Ashu; Rakesh ni he nate kadhi maanalech navhate. Ani je nate suru honya-purvich sampalele hote, tya natya-chya bandhanat kashala adkavun thevu mi tyana?

Reshma-ne Rakesh cha number dial kela.

Hello, papers milalet mala. Sahya karun dete mi tumhala. Nahi ... nahi tumhi ithe yenyachi kahich garaj nahiye... Sahya zalya ki pathavin me papers. Pan ek nakki, sahi karnya aadhi mi he sagale mazya ani tum-chya gharchyana sanganar, ani mag sahi karun dein he papers ... To tumcha prashna aahe... pan yevadhe mahtwache paul uchalnya adhi mi nidan mazya aai-baba na tari he sanganarach. Bye.

Sagale awaak houn baghat hote.

Reshma tu...tuzya aai-baba na sanganar?

Ho Minal. Mi papres sign karnarach aahe pan adhi aai-baba na sangun. Bas zali hi lapva-chpavi.

That's the spirit Reshma. Phone-war ekda shant-pane bol tyachyashi

Phone-war nahi Kaivalya, tyana pratyaksh bhetunach sangin mi he sagale. Sujay, mala aaj ratrichya Vidarbha' nahi tar Howrah' mail che ticket miltay ka baghashil? Tatkal madhe milale tari chahlel.

Tai, mi pan yeto tuzy barobar.

Nako Ashu. Navin mansala mazy barobar baghun aadhich ghabartil te.

Pan mi navin kuthey? Mi already publish zaloy na tyanchya pudhe...courier-wala mhanun

Asha, ti barobar boltey. Aapan kuni jaun ugach gondhal vadhavuya nako.

Reshma, Vidrabha tar pahate 4 lach pochtey ani Howrah cha pravas sudha ratrichach aahe. Tyapeksha udhya-cha sakalchya Gitanjali che ticket kadhato. Sagala pravas diwasaa hoil tuza.

Are Sujay, mi Mumbai la ale tevha Ratrichya train-nech ale na? ani ti hi ekati! Tevha tar mala kahi mahita sudhha navhate.

Ho pan tevha aamhi hoto na tya train madhe! Jokes apart, Te kahi nahi. Mi Geetanjali-che ticket reserve kelay. Bagh PNR alay ka tuzya mobile war te. Ani, pahate mi sodin tula station war.

Ho , mailala PNR number. Ani mi jain na 40 number chi bus pakdun.

Mi tula vicharat nahiye station war sodu ka mhanun', tar sangtoy.

...

Sakali Sujay Reshma-la station war sodayala ala.

Reshma, kharach ektine jane ani aai-baba na he sagale sangane barobar aahe ka? Ki hya week-end la jates? Mala jamel yayala tuzya barobar.

Sujay, are fakt train cha pravas ektine karnar aahe mi. Ani tasa hi tu ... tumhi sagale mazya manaat aahatach na? Sambhalin mi sgale nit

OK. Pan aapan tuze return train che ticket kadhalech nahi. Kadhiche reserve karu return ticket?

Baguyat ata gelya war kay hotaya te.

Mhanje? Mi tuzy baba-na phone karu ka aaj sandhhyakali? Tyancha number aahe mazya kade.

Sujay, ata baba-shi tu bolshil te Sujay' mhanunach... Rakesh mhanun nahi. Mich Karin phone tumhala!

Nakki?

Ho, nakki.

Chal bye. Kalji ghe. Pochlya-war SMS kar.

Ho. Tu... tumhi sagale sudhha kalji ghya.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Part 8 ... continued

Reshma Akolya-chya aaplya ghari pochali tevha duparache 4 wajale hote. Gadi thodishi late zali hoti.

Ghara-chya gate madhun aat shirtanach Resma-cha gala datun ala hota. Javal javal 6-mahinya-ni ti akolyache ghar pahat hoti. Bell wajawatana dekhil hat kaapat hota ticha.

Reshma?

Daara madhe Aai la pahatach dhirache sagale bandh futale ani Reshma Aai-chya kushit shirali

Kiti diwasani pahatey Tula Bala

6 mahinyani...

Ani pudhache shabda doghinchyahi ashrun-madhe vaahun gele. Thodese sawarlelya Aai-ne vicharle

Tu Ashi achanak, na sangata kashi aalis Reshma? Sagale kahi thik aahe na tikade?

Ho aai. Sagale thik aahet.

Ani Rakesh-ni sodale bare Tula ithe yaayala!

Tyani kevhach sodalay mala Aai.

Mhanje?

Mhanje kahi nahi. Baba kuthe aahet?

Aga te yetilach 5 wajeparyant. Chal tu hat-pay dhuvun ghe. Mi chaha takate

Ho Aai.

...

Baba... Kase aahat tumhi? Ani tumchi tabyet kashi aahe?

Tabyet ata uttam aahe mazi. BP cha ajibat tras nahi. Pan, tu kashi aahes Bala?

Kashi disatey mi Baba?

Mage Mumbai la alo hoto tevha peksha badaliyas tu. Aamachi ti halavi Reshma ata khup dhit zalya sarkhi distey. Rakesh-ni barach badal ghadvalela distoy tuzyat.

Ho baba, ha badal Rakesh-mulech zaalay.

Chan.. Chan... bare Rakesh nahi ale te? Ka te magahun yenar aahet?

Baba... Rakesh kadhich yenar nahiyet

Mhanje? Kay bolteyas Kay tu he Reshma? Kay zalay?

Ani mhanun tu Ashi achanak aleyas ka? Reshma, aamhala...

Aai, Baba; tumhi aadhi shanta-pane basa baghu ithe. Mi tumhala sagale sangate. Pan sagalyat aadhi sangatey ki mi ajibat dukhii nahiye tevha shanta pane sagale aakun ghya.

Baba, tumhala aathavate lagna-nantar Rakesh ek diwas sudhaa thambale navhate. Ani tyanchi mala Mumbai la bolabanya-chi pan talaatal chalali hoti.

Ho pan te mhanale hote Ki tumchya gharache renovation chalu aahe ... Tu yenar mhanun

Aamch ghar! Te ghar maze kadhich navhate baba. Naa Rakesh kadhi maze hote. Tyanchya aayushat lagna-aadhi pasun Nisha hoti. Ani te doghe ektra rahat hote... Aajahi rahatayat.
Pan Rakesh-chya wadilancha hya sagalya-la virodh hota ani jar Rakesh-ni tyanche aaikale nahi tar, tyanchi property te Rakesh-la denar navhate. Mhanun Rakesh-ni mazya-shi lagn kela. Tyanchya sathi he lagn mhanje fakt ek garaj hoti, vadilanchya property war hakk thevanya sathi! Mi navalach' lagnachi bayako hote tyanchi. Tyana mi nakoch hote. Ani he mala tya gharat pahile paul taaklyawar samajale. Mhanje, tyanich sangitale tase.

Reshma...

Mala dekhil swabhiman aahe aai. Mi tyach pavali ghara-baher padale. Ithe paratale aste tar tumachi badnami zali asti, Rewache lagn modale aste. Tashich eka rastyachya kadela basun hote. Tithe mala Minal bhetali ... apghatane. Ti mala tynchya ghari ghun geli ani...

... ...

Reshma ne sagale sangun takale aai-baba na

Sagale aaikatana doghan-chya hi dolyatun ashru vahat hote

Tu he sagale aamhala adich ka kahi sangitlas?

Sorry Baba, sorry Aai. Pan khare sangate, mala tumhala tras hou dyacha navhata ani Rewache lagna hi modu dyache navhate.

Pan mhanun tu he sagale ektine sahan kelas?

Ekti kuthe hote mi aai? Mala sath dyala maze jeeva-bhavache mitra hote na.
Ashu, Minal, Anna, Kaivalya ani Sujay.

Minal nusati mala gharich gheun geli nahi tar mazya sathi gharchyanshi ani Rakesh-Shi sudhha bhandali. Aai, Tula mahitey Minal na USA la geli hoti.

Ashu sarkha bhau milala mala. Baba, tumhi Rakesh chya ghari ala hotat tevha Jo courier-wala banun ala hota na toch Ashu. Rakesh tumchya samor mazyaahi nit wagtayat na te baghayala ala hota to.

Ani aamchi Ana tar itki god aahe na. Sagale tila sarkhe chidvat astat pan ti kadhihi kunawar chidat nahi Ki ragwat nahi. Kuni aapli thatta keli tar ti thatta manala lavun ghayache naste hi mi Ana-kadun shikaley. Ithe astana kiti ragit hote mi.

Kaivalya nehmi tirkas bolnar, aapan kiti korde aahot he dakhavnar. Pan tyache sagalikade laksh aste. Tya-diwashi Minal la airport war anayala sagale janar hoto. Pan amhi sagale zopun gelo. Mag ha ekta jaun tila gheun ala. Kaivalya-na Nishachar' aahe. Aamhi sagale ratri zopayal jato tevha hyacha diwas suru hoto. Baba, tyala na promise kelay mi... Aaji-chya shetawar neun hurda khayala ghalayche.

Sujay cha sagal shistit. Tyala jara ikadachi vastu tikade zaleli chalat nahi. Mag sarkhi chid chid karto. Pan tyala saglyanchi kalaji. Aaj sudha tyanech mala sangitale ki ektine ratrichya train ne jayache nahi.Ani mhanun Geetanjali che ticket kadhalen. Pahate station-war mala pochawayala ala hota. Sagale Sujay la baba mhanun chidwtat ani mala Jagat-janani.

Baba, tumcha achanak phone ala Ki Sujay bolayacha tumchayshi Rakesh mhanun. Ani tyalahi tumchashi bolayala khup awadate. Chetan-che ek mitra achanak ekda aamchya ghari ale. Tyana tar mazya lagna vishayi kahi kalu dyayache navhate. Karan mag ikade akolaya-la sagale samajale aste. Mag, amhi saglayani Sujay-chi olakh Rakesh' ashi karun dili tyana. Sujay ne mazya sathi itke kelay na...

Aai, he sagale mitra khambir pane ubhe aahet mazya pathishi. Tyanchya mule mi mazi mala sapadaley. Mala Minal bhetlich nasti tar kay zale aste maze kunas thauk. Kadhi kadhi watate Rakesh-Shi nuste navalach lagna zale mhanunach mala hya sagalyan-chi maitri milali, Navin nati milali!

Je have hote te milale nasale tari tyapeksha kiti tar jast milalay mala aai.

Reshma-che Aai-baba awaak houn sagale aaikat hote. Resma-chi fasavanuk zali mhanun dukh kaarawe ki tya-mulech tila aatmabal miale, navin mitra milale hyancha anand manava hech kalat navhate tyana.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Part 8 ... continued from previous page and completed

Bare, Reshma .. bolta bolta ratra khup zaliy. Tu zop ata. Udya sakali aapan Rakesh-chya wadilan-kade jauya. Tyana vinanti karuya ki Rakesh-la samjava ani...

Nahi baba, ata tyachi kahi garaj nahiye.

Mhanje?

Rakesh ne Kaal divorce papers pathavalet. Tya-war sahi karnya purvi tumha doghana-hi he sagale sangave mhanun mi lagech ikade aley.

Aga, aapan Rakesh-chya gahrchyan-shi boluyat na. Tyana ikade bolavu-ya ani kahi tad-jod hote ka te baghuya.

Nako Aai. Rakesh-chya swarthi-pana mule maze mana-ch udalay hya lagnatun. Ani je nate tyani swikarlech nahi te kashala jabardastine ladayache tyanchyawar? Mi tharvlay... divorce gheun he nuste navache-ch' asalele lagn sampavun takayache.

Reshma, aga ase kay kartes ...

Aai, nako na ga ata hi charcha. Eika na maze? Please...

Bare Bala. Hou de tuzya mana-sarkhe. Pan mag tikade Mumbai la parat jaun kay karnar tu? Ata ithech raha. Tula hawi tar pudhachya shikshana-sathi admission ghe, nahi tar ekhadi tuzya aawadichi nokari bagh.

Baba, to vichar aapan nantar karuya. Aadhi mi parat jaun he divorce papers Rakesh na deun takate. Mag shant pane boluya pudhe kay karayache te.

Tya-sathi parat Mumbai la kashala jayala pahije? Aapan Register AD' ne pathavun deu na divorce papers.

Ho, Ata kahi amhi tula ektila parat pathavanar nahi.

Baba, pan

Chal, zopuya ata.

Ekda divorce papers sign zale ki aaplya-la Mumbai la partayala kahi karan-ch urnar nahi he Reshma-chya lakshat alech navhate. Ti vicharat gadhun geli. Baba mhantat te barobar aahe. Ata parat jaun kay karnar aahe mi Mumbai la? Pan sagalya navin mitra-na takun rahata yeil mala ithe?

Milel ka Reshma-la parat Mumbai-la jayachi parvangi? Kon samjavel Reshma-chya Aai-Babana?

End of Part 8

(this part also posted on 3D thread)

Edited by dlip - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Part 9... By Tarantella

Sujay was frantically pacing through the living room, a deep frown plastered on his face.

"Sujay, kai challay tujha? Ratriche bara vajle ahet... Udya office ahe na?"

Are kahi samjhat nahiye re Kaivalya. Khup kalji vattey re Reshma chi. Tine sagla sangun takla asel aai-baba na ata paryanta. Ticha swabhav lakshat gheta, ti radat tar nasel na?"

"Tu adhi shanta ho. "

"Kasha shanta basu me? Tithe tichi kai awastha zali asel te kahi mahit nahiye. Tine ek sadha call pan nahi kelay! Tari char char vela sangitla hota ki call kar mhanun. "

" Mag tu kar na?"

"Vajle kiti mahit ahe na? Zopli asel tar ti? "

Kaivalya tyachya javal gela ani mhanala. "Sujay, mala sagla kaltay ani mahit pan ahe. Akolya la jaun Reshma ne kharatar murkhapana kela ahe. Tila tiche aai- vadil ka pathavtil punha mumbai la?

Ho, te ahech ki.

Tu jagi ahes meenal?

Ashya prasangi zop lagnar tari hoti ka? Sujay, tulach kahi tari karava lagel.

Mi karu tari kay? Apan sagle ithe basun fakta speculate karu shakto ki pudhe kai honar ahe te. Jo paryanta Reshma cha call yet nahi toh paryanta tari kahich nahi karaychay apan.

Ja udya Akolya la.

Kai? Asa kasa jau mi? Ani majha asa tithe jana bara disel ka?!

Tujha geetanjali cha ticket book kelay mi.

Sujay la hasava ki radava he samjhena. Ho, tyachi khup ichha hoti Akolya la jayachi, pan jo paryanta Reshma kahi sangat nahi, asa achanak kasa janar?

Thevdhya Sujay cha phone vajla. Tyacha chehryvarche bhav badalale naav baghtach. Ekahi kshan vaya na ghalavta tyane bolayla survat keli.

"Reshma, vyavasthit pohochlis na Akolya la? Aga tu mala pohochyavar message pan nahi kelas. Kiti kalaji vata hoti mala. Amhi sagle kiti tension madhe hoto ithe, mhanje ajun hi ahot. Sangitlas na sagla? "

Ek- minute. Tumhi Sujay Sathe na?" tyala veglach awaj aiku ala.

Sujay ne ha awaz patkan olakla.

Ho... Tumhi Reshma che vadil na.. Ho. Kalat- nakalat apan khup gappa marlya ahet hya adhi..Reshma ne sagla sangitla na tumhala. Ho.. Okay. Apan he asa phone var nako boluya. Nahi tyachi kalji karu naka tumhi. Mi yeto udya Geetanjali ne. Ho. Nakki. Bye. "

"Call cut hotach, Sujay ne Kaivalya la meethi marli. "Thanks mitra. Reshma chya vadilancha call hota. Tyanna majhyashi bolaycha ahe Rakesh-Reshma baddal. Mi jatoch udya Akolyala. Tumhi sagle pan yeta ka??"

"Nako. Ekdum sagle nako. Tu jaun jara situation observe kar. Mag yeto amhi jar garaj bhasli tar."

...

"Kaka, namaskar karto. Tumhi kashala alat mala ghyala.. . Alo asto mi! "

"Aho, asa nahi. Amche pahune ahat tumhi.."

"Kaka, evdha respect nako. Mala Sujay- ch bolava. Tumchya mulasarkhach ahe mi."

Te hasle."Ho. Chala mag. Ghari jaun savistar bolu. "

...

"Taai, tu mala tari sangaicha ga sagla. Kiti tras sahan kelas tu ata paryanta. Even, mi ashi vedyasarkhi achanak mumbai la ale hote. Khup guilty vattay ata te sagle prasanga avthvun."

" Reva, tu kashala vaait vatun ghete ahes. Je kahi ghadla te ghadnarach hota. Mala tumhala konala tras hovu dyaycha navta shivay tujha lagna pan ahe ga... Khara tar, mi thodi ghai keli. Tujhya lagna paryanta thambaila hava hota. Chuklach majha... " tiche ashru tar kahi thambnyache naav ghet navte.

Ag, majhya lagnavar ka parinam hoil hya saglyacha? Ketan chi family khup samjutdar ahet, ashya goshti-n mule majha lagna nahi modnar."

"Ag pan tari... "

" Tu radu nakos na... Mag mala - hi radavasa vatat."

Tichi aai tichya javal ali. "Bala, ag asa radun kasa chalel. Apan baher jau, chal. Thoda bara vatel. Kal altapasun swatahala bedroom madhe kondlya sarkha kela ahes."

Ti ho mhanali.

...

Reshma cha motha, prashastha ghar pahun Sujay-la khup chaan vatla.

After they had settled over, Sujay looked at Reshma's father with seriousness.

"Kaka, asa kai mahatvacha bolaicha hota majhyashi?"

"Rakesh baddal. Mi asa dharun chaltoy ki tu Rakesh la baryachda bhetla ahes. "

"Ho, agdi. Khara sangaicha tar, Rakesh doesn't deserve Reshma. Tumhala asa vatel ki mi Reshma cha mitra ahe mhanun tichya bajune bolen, pan Rakesh sarkha swarthi manus ajvar pahila nahi mi. Reshma ne sagla sangitla na tumhala? "

"Ho. Kalach sangitla. Mala tar dhakkach basla hota. Asa kahi amcha Reshma baddal ghadel asa swapnatahi vatla navta. "

"Kaka, tine he hi sangitla asel na, ki eka misunderstanding mule, and ithe Akolyala kahi kalu nahye mhanun baryach vela mi tumchyashi Rakesh mhanun bolaicho."

"Mhanunach, mi tumhala kal ratri call kela. Majha tujhyavar purna vishwas ahe, kadachit toh apan keleya evdhya charchan ani gappa-n mule asel. Khara-tar mala fakta Rakesh baddal vicharaycha hota, mhanje he bolna phone var pan zala asta. pan tumhi agdi tatadine ithe Akolyala alat. aabhar maanto tumche... "

Aabhar kasle. Mi.. Amhi saglyanni tharavlach hota ki Reshma cha call nahi ala tar jayacha direct Akolyala." Sujay hasat mhanala. Te hi hasayla lagle.

"Pan kharach, amchya Reshma madhe khup badal zalela distoy. Tila itka khambir ani bedhadak nirnay ghetana aj pahilyadach pahat ahe. Hyacha shrey tumha sarvanna jata. "

"Ho, te manya karen mi."

"Apan, muddyacha bolu."

Pudhcha ardha taas, Sujay ne sagla Rakesh cha vagna, tyacha harkati, sarva kahi goshti sangnyat gela.

Tiche vadil, atyanta kaljit mhanale. "Amchya Reshma la ata kuthe hi jayachi garaj nahi ekda divorce zalya var.."

He aikun Sujay la dhakka-ch basla. Kaivalya hech mhanat hota, nahi ka? Reshma chya aai- baba na convince karava lagnar, ani tyala kahich karane suchat navte Reshma la parat tyachya barobar Mumbai la nenyachi.

Tevdhyat Reshma ali baherun. Sujay la pahatach ti manmoklepanane hasli.

"Tu ithe kasa? Baki sagle kuthe ahet?"

Ticha ha hasra chehra pahun tyala bara vatla. Ti at least radat tari navti.

Mi Reshma la nenar parat Mumbai la, by hook or by crook, toh manatlya manat mhanala.

"Paltan yetey udya." To hasat mhanala.

...

(This part was originally posted on 3D thread)

Edited by dlip - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Part 10 ... by dlip

Tyach diwashi sandhyakali, kitchen-madhe...

Reshma, kay karu ya jewayala? Kay awadel tuzya mitrala?

Aai, Sujay-che tase kahi nakhare nastat, hech pahije tech pahije..ase kadhi sanganar nahi! Pan fakta tikhat khayala nako aste. Tula mahitey, mi ata sagalya bhajya-n madhe gul nahitar sakhar ghalayala shikley.

Kay?

Tu nako kalji karus. Mi baghate jevanache.

Bar bai. Tu kahi aaiknar nahis. Bagh, tula kay awadel te kar.

...

Jevan houn, haat sukhun gele tari Sujay ani Reshma-chya baban-chya jevanachya table' warchya gappa sampat navhatya.

Sujay, tikade kasa re aamhala ordat astos haat dhuva, kharkati bhandi tashich taku naka, visalun theva... kordi padali tar mag swacha honar nahit. Ani ata ithe swatahche haat ani taat walun gelay te chaltay watate?

Oh... Sorry Sorry Reshma...Baban-shi bolnyachya nadat lakshatach ale nahi.

Are... mi gammat keli. Mi awarate, ja baher jaun basa bolat

...

Resham, Sujay chi zopay-chi vayastha tya magchya kholit karu ka? Kholi changali mothi aahe ani haveshir sudhha. Te bed-war zoptil ki khali? Ani kay maccha-dani ...

Baba, mi baghate sagale. Tumhi naka kalji karu...

Ani Sujay sangat hote ki udya tuze bakiche mitra pan yenar aahet. Tevha mag zopanya-sathi vyasatha...

Baba, tumhi nak tension gehu. Koni-hi kuthe hi and kase he zopu shaktil te. Mi baghin sagale. Minal ani Ana, mazy ani Rewachya kholit rahatil. Ashu, Kaivalya ani Sujay tyach kholit rahatil. Ani, khare sangu ka.. tya sagalyana na ashya chotya chotya gair-soyi janvat sudhha nahit. Nusta ek-meka barobar asane mahatwache!

...

Reshma, bas ki ga. Kiti tayari challey ti zopayachi. Navin chadar, navin abhra, navin panghrun... ata fakta air freshnar' marayacha rahilay

Tu Baban-cha pahuna aahes baba, tuzi nit kalji ghetali pahije. Nahitar te ordatil mala.

Bas ha Reshma. Yevadha bolayal nakoy. Baba-ni phone kela te barech zale. Nahi tar mala Dhumketu-sarkhe' yawe lagle aste. Ani kay ga, tula ek sadha SMS kinwa phone karta yet nahi? Aapan ithe pochalo, Aai-baba na sagale sangitale... chala... tension gele... ata aapan mokale... nahi ka? Pan tikade aaple mitra aapli kalji karat astil. Tyanachya-shi pan jara boluya ase kahi manat nahi ale na?

Ase kahi nahiye.

Mag phone ka nahi kelas?

Mi gondhalun gele re. Aai-baba na sagale sangitale. Agadi divorce dyache tharalay maze te sudhha! Tar baba mhanale aapan ithuna-ch divorce papers pathavun deu ani mi ata itehch rahun pudhe kay karayache te tharavu.

Mag changale aahe na. Raha ata aai-baba jawal. 3-hajar bhade bharayala nako, aamchya-sathi jewan banvat basayal nako, ekach flat madhe itar 5-janan barobar rahayala nako... A...Reshma... mi just maja karat hoto ga. Tu ashi radveli hou nakos lagech.

Hi maja aahe?

Sorry. Pan, logically wichar kela tar Baba mhantayat te kharach aahe na.

Tech na. Mhanunach gondhalun gelay mi. Ikde yetana ha vichar-ch mazy manat ala nahi. Ani tu tyanchich baju ghenar.

Aga, baju ghenar kay? Mhanun sangat hoto... apan nit sgale planning karun tharvuya. Pan aaiknar kon?

Sujay, tula nahi kalnar khote-panache oze' kay aste te. Mumbai la yei-paryant mi mazya aai-babnshi kadhich khote bolale navhate. Ani Mumbai-la gelya-war fakta kote-ch' wagat rahile. Kdhi ekda hya kohote-panatun baher yetay ase zale hote mala.

Tuze barobar aahe Reshma. ani tu kela te yogya-ch kelas. Tumchya nasale-lya natyacha shevat karnya purvi tu aai-babna sagale sangitale he bare zale.

Pan ata mi ikadech ...

Tula yaychay na parat Mumbai la? Aaplya maaj-ghari?

Mazya manatale kalate na tula? Mag ase ka vichartos?

Ho pan tari hi... manat-le yogya-weli bolane, dusryala sangane he sudhha garjeche aste.

Ti wel ali nahiye ajun!

Kuthali wel?

Kahi nahi. Pan mala yachay parat Mumbai-la

Tula yaychay na? Mag apan kahi tari marg kadhu. Ani udya paltan-pan yetey na. Tevha ata sagalyanche ekach mission Majghar-wale Resma-ko le jayenge'! ...Haslis te baghun chan watale.

Zop ata. Aamchya ghari zop lagel na?

Kal tula lagali ka chan zop'?

Nahi na.. Pan aaj lagel. Tu alayas na tya ..

Kay?

... udya bakiche pan yenar na ... tya anandat. Good night

Good night Reshma.

...

Kya Majghar-wale' Reshma ko leke ja payenge?

Originally posted on 3D Thread

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Part 11 ... By Tarantella

Meenal took the call and put it on speaker.

"Ag Meenal kiti boltes tu? jara mala Kaivalyashi bolu deshil ka? Aik Kaivalya, tu mhanala hotas, agdi tasach zala. Tiche aai-baba tar ata tila parat Mumbai la nahi pathvat. Aplyaalach kahitari karava lagel.

Hum sab ready hain Sujay baba, kal ke Gitanjali se aa rahe hum Akola!

Ho, te mi sangitla mhanun. Ata jara vichar kara tumhi sagle ki Reshma la kasa parat nyaycha mumbai la.

Tyat vichar kai karaychay? Tu ahesach Akolyamadhe ani tujha tichya gharchyanbarobar changla tuning jamla ahe. Magni ghal lagna chi! Case closed! A devilish laughter erupted.

Maar khashil Kaivalya tu! Kahi kai boltoy tu? Ticha ajun divorce pan nahi zalay..

Achha, mhanje ha future plan ahe khara...

Ho Sujaa, Kaivalya ne mast idea dili ahe. Anna chirped in.

Tu gappa bas Anna. Ani hya goshtit mala bhankas nako. Jara seriously vichar kara. Chala thevto mi. Bye.

Are, Sujay, aik tari...

Thevla phone, Meenal mhanali. Ae pan Kaivalya, tujhi idea bhaari ahe, edkum zakaas.

Don't worry Meenal. To divas lavkarach yenar ahe. Chala, udya bhalya pahate uthaycha ahe. Zopa lavkar.

...

"Reshma!!!"

Anna and Meenal literally ran over to her, hugging her tightly, as Kaivalya and Ashu walked with annoyance. Their apparent annoyance was due to all those bags they had to carry. Well, Kaivalya had sarcastically asked Meenal, only to be taken seriously.

"Don divasansathi evdhe kapde!" Kaivalya cursed.

"Tumhi Reshma che Mumbai che mitra na? " Reshma chi aai mhanali. " Ya, na..."

Tevdhyat Sujay ani Reshma che vadil aatlya kholitun baher ale.

areh wah. Alat ka sarva. Ya, basa..

Sarvanni Reshma chya aai- vadillana namaskar kela.

Nahi, pan kharach kaku, amhi ase achanak alo sagle, evdhya short notice var.. " Meenal mhanali.

"Ag tyat kai evdha? Tu Meenal na? Bagh, agdi barobar olakla mi. Ani tumhi sagle mala majhya mulasarkhach ahat. Tumhi sagle thakle asal pravasane. Chaha ani mast pohe karte. "

" Aho kaku, rahudya. Tasa khana jhalay. "

"Ag ho, pan evdhya tasancha pravas zalay. Mi patkan anate chaha."

"Reshma kadun tumchya saglyanbaddal khup aikla ahe." Tiche vadil mhanale. "Ayushya kasa valan gheil kahi sanhu shakat nahi, pan tya mule, Reshma la evdhe changle mitra milale he pahun mala khup ananda zala. "

"Chaha zalay. Ante mi." Asa mhanun Reshma aat geli.

"Aiiya, tumhi sagle alat Akolyala Reshma sathi? " Rewa exclaimed, as she saw the paltan comfortably settled in the living room.

"Ho mag. Tujhya taai shivay amha sarvana karmatach navta, especially Ashu la. Purna ek diwas tyala tujhya taai chy haatche pohe ani chavdar jevan nahi milala na! "

Sagle hasayla lagle.

...

"Aai, kharach avadle na majhe mitra tula?"

"Ho ga bala. Sagle kiti susanskrut ani sanskari ahet. Sanglyanna bhetun bara vatla. Bara, ha tray ne baher. Mi pohe antech.

Ho.

Don taas gappa ani khanya-madhe kase nighun gele konala pattach nahi lagla. Purna sandhyakaal, ashich nighun geli. Reshma baddal bolnyachi sandhich milat navti.

Kholit, Kaivalya haluch mhanala. "Sujay, let's get straight to the point."

"Are pan asa kasa direct vicharnar? "

"Kahi havay ka tumhala?" darwajyat Reshma-che vadil ubhe hote. Kaivalya tyanchajawal gela.

"Kaka, tumhala vel ahe ka atta? tumchyashi mahatvacha bolaycha ahe."

"Bola na. Kahi serious ahe ka?"

"Reshma baddal bolaycha ahe."

...

Maajghar-wale neu shaktil ka Reshma la parat Mumbai-la?

(this part initially posted on 3D thread)