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Vidya Shetty

@vidya0906

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Very nice take Dilip. How i wish they would do such episodes of 3D the whole of last week was just crap 😡

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dlip

@dlip

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Wish-claimer - Whatever written below has not happened in 3D. I do not know if such things will ever happen in the serial. But, I do wish somthing like this or even better than this should happen in the serial! What say?

Hope you will enjoy this weekend drabble ...

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Kaivalya Minal-shi Phonewar bolat hota ...

Ata tuza Jet lag' gela Ki nahi Minal? Ki ajun zopeta-ch aahes?

Ikade na sandhyakal-pasun khoop paus padtoy. Nusta kosaltoy. Pan mast wattay ase ratri aaply majgharach-ya khidkit basoon CD aaikat basayala!

Nahi Sujay ajun ala nahi ye ghari. Ho, tasa nehmi-chya manane late-ch zalay tyala.

Ana? Ashu ani Ana kevhach zopalet. Ashu chya ghornya-cha awaj yeta nahiye ka tula tikade US madhe?

Phaltu pana Kay tyat? Kharach aahe na te!

Reshma? Ata, tumchya room-madhe aahe. Aaji basalya astil ashru' dhalat.

Nahi tar Kay, kadhi kalanar tila Ki ...

Tevhadhya Reshma tithe ali ...

Kaivalya, 1130 wajun gele re. Ajun Sujay aala nahiye ghari. Paus pan thambat nahiye... Rastya-war pani sachale asel ka re? Panya-tun kasa yeil Sujay?

Ek..ek minute Reshma. Ha Minal, Ithe Resh-Maa alyat... Sujay Baba ale nahit ajun tyachi kalaji karat. Aapan nantar bolu ya. Bye.

Kaivalya,are Sakal pasun gelay Sujay... Ajun aala nahiye. Ani sandhyakal pasun paus pan khoop padtoy. Tyach phone sudhha lagat mahiye.

Aaji, Sujay-baba roj sakalich jato Ki kahi kama-war? Ani office madhe video conferencing' asale Ki tyala ushir pan hoto. Ho Ki nahi? Mag, ka kalji kartay tumhi?

Ho ka? Aaj tyachi video conference hoti jka? Pan ase kahi mhanala navhata to mala. Bapare, tyala na mi fakta sakal-chya jevana-purtach daba dila hota.

Aga mag yevhadha Kay tyat. Khail kahi tari office chya canteen madhale.

Office chya canteen madhala khalla ki mag acidity hote. Ani are, to dupari pan nit jevala nasnar. Sakali ghait na tyachi 'kami tikhat' bhaji dabbyat bharnya aawaji; aaplich bhaji bharli mi dabyat.

Mag?

Are, tyala tras hoti na tikhat khalla Ki. Tyachi tabyet tar bighadali nasel na?

Aga ase kahi nasel. Ani kahi Zale aste tar tyacha nahi tar tyachya colleague cha phone ala asta na aaplya-la.

Nit daba dila nahi mhanun mazya-war ragaval asnar to. Dupari message kela hota mi tyala, Sorry' mhanun. Pan tyacha kahi replya-ch ala nahi. Ata phone pan switched off yetoy. Baik wagaire kuthe band tar padali nasel na?

Aga ase kahi...

Mi kay mhanate Kaivalya, eik na. Tu jaun baghtos ka tuzi baik gheun tyachya office madhe?

Ho, apan ajun thoda wel waat baghuya. Nahitar mag jain mi.

Nako, tu lagech nigh. Please... Mi Ashu-la pan uthavu ka?

Ugach saglyna uthavu nakos. Nighato mi

...

Kaivalya wind-sheeter ghalun, baik chi chavi ghun nighanar itkyat tyach phone wajala..

Unknown number? Hello, Yes..

Ha Sujay... are tu kuthe aahes? Office madhun atta nightoy? Achya... Office vehicle drop karanar aahe ka tumhala. Bare thik aahe. Ani ha kuthal phone? Sujay, tu yewadha vywasthit, phone charge karayala kasa visarla? Bar. Thik aahe aalyawar bolu. Ikde lok tuzi waat baghtayat... dolyat pran anun. Lawkar yere Baba.

Aaji, Sujay-baba sukharup aahet. Pochatil ghari ardya tasat. Ani kay ga, tula tyachi yevhadhi vishes kalji ka?

Sujay ekdacha ghari pochal ki hayase watel. Ani Kaivalya,... tumhi sagale baher jata tevha mala saglyanchi-ch kalji aste.

Ho, pan mahnun kahi yevadhi hyper hot nahis amchya-sathi. Halli pahatoy mi Sujay-chi kalji aamchya peksha jasta aste tula, tyal pahile ki hayase watel, tyane message cha reply dila nahi .. ragaval tar nahi na? He kay aahe sagale Reshma?

Kay? Kahi tari bolu nakos Kaivalya. Mala Sujay chi eka mitra Mhanun kalji watate. Baki kahi nahi. Ani mi ek lagna zaleli mulagi aahe he lakshat thev.

Ho ka? Mag Rakesh ghari pochala ka tyachi chaukashi kelis ka? To pan baik warunach jato na office la.

Rakesh-na kashyala phone karu mi? Tyancha kay samb...

Bol na, a Reshma... nighun kay jates? Wakya purna kar na... Tyancha kay Sambandha'... asech mhanayache hote na tula? Tula kalat kase nahiye Reshma, kaydya-ne nasel pan mana-ne khup door nighun ali aahes tu ... Rakesh pasun. Kadhi swikarshil he satya? Sujay-baddal watnari kalji, tyala sukharup ghari alela baghnyachi odh' ani Sujay-ne aaplya Sorry' message la reply kela nahi mhanun watanari hur-hur' ... Sahajach nahiye Reshma!

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Kadhi Kalel ka Reshma la Ki... khhoop pudhe nighun geley ti... Tichya-hi nakalt!

(also posted on 3D thread)

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Vidya Shetty

@vidya0906

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Yeh dil maange more...keep them coming Dilip 👍🏼

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dlip

@dlip

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Missing moments of Saturday, 11 July 😊 -

Reshma, tu ithe kitchen madhe Kay kartes? Ja tikade Rewa- jawal. Tichi nighayachi wel Ho aley na.

Are, tichi-ch tayari kartey. Bag bharun zaliy mazi. Ata khanya-cha daba bharatey.

'Tuzi' bag bharun zali mhanje? Tu pan jates Ki Kay?

Sujay, mazi bag bharun zaliy mhanje ... Mi tichi bag bharun dili

Ka?

Ka mhanje, kashi bharlai hoti bag tine. Rewa-la na kahi shistach nahi. Kase honar aahe tiche lgna zalyawar, kunas thuak!

Reshma, Tula na jar sudha ekadchi wastu tikade zalelu awadat nahi. Ghari alyawar sudha, Rewa ani aamchya barobar thambayche sodun ithe kitchen aawrat baslis

Sujay, tumhi kitchen chi ji kahi awastha...

Kalale, nantar alyawar orad amhala. Ja Ata nighyachi tayari kar. Rewa- la station war pochwayala lagel na?

Sujay, tu sodshil ka re Rewa-la station war?

Sodashil mhanje? Mi yeinach na tumchya barobar.

Nahi, mi mhantey tuch jaun sodun yeshil ka Rewala?

Ani tu? aapan sagale jau ya na. Tumhi taxi madhun ya. Mi ani kaiwalya baik warun yeto. Minal yeil amchya barobar.

Nako, tuch ja tila sodayala. Mi nahi yet.

Ka?

Gele don diwas itak khota wagtey na tichta-Shi. Mazi malach sharam watatey. Amhi doghi ekmekin madhe sagale share karayacho ani Ata mazya aayushyatali evashi mothi ultapalath mi lapavtey Rewa-pasun. Mala khup guilty watatay.

Ho pan he sagal tu nailaj mhanun karateyas na? Tuzya baba- na tyacha tras hou naye mhanun.

Tarihi. ani na, tithe gele Ki mala khup radayala yeil

Mag thyat Kay Navin aahe? Te tar nehmich...

Sujay

Sorry... OK. Mi Jain Rewa-la gheun station-war. Taxinech jato. Tichya bags aahet na.

Thank you Sujay.

'Thank you' Kay thyat? Mi Tula magech mhatale hote Ki tu hakka-ne mala kahi sangitalas Ki mala khup bare watate.

(initially posted on 3D thread)

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Vidya Shetty

@vidya0906

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

One more awesome take Dilip, thank you 😛 keep them coming 👍🏼

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dlip

@dlip

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Ek Pair (SuShama) and many writers ...

Part 1 (Original story and idea) by 'Tarantella'

He had been ringing the bell for some time. Getting no response, in anger and exasperation, pulled out the key. Maazghar was unusually quiet. He made his way through the house only to find Reshma in the bedroom.

Sitting on the bed, Reshma was busy with her mobile, very much engrossed in whatever she was seeing or reading.

Weird, Sujay thought.

Sujay la pahatach ti uthun tyachya javal jate.

"Kadhi alas tu? Mala samajlach nahi. "

"Mala zale tari, 10 minutes. "

"Are mag sangaicha na. Tula bhook lagli asel na. Patkan kande pohe karte tujhya sathi. "

Bag table var thevto ani mhanto. " Baki sagle kuthe ahet. Ghar aj khupach shanta vattay.. "

" Anna la achanak kamanimitta tichya boss barobar java lagla and Ashu Kinjal kade gelay nal repair karayla. Kaivalyacha kahich mahit nahi. Fakta mhanalay ki tyala ushir honar ahe, tyachyasathi jevaila thambu naka. Kasa ha vagto? "

"Mhanje aj mala thodi shantata milnar!" Sujay plonked on the bed, his arms spread wide. "Shantata.. " he closed his eyes, smiling.

"He bagh. Meenal cha msg ala ahe. Kiti god.. "

She sat besides him and showed him the picture.

Kiti cute disto to! Ani handsome pan ahe!tyacha gora rang..! "

"Ha kon? "

"Konitari tichya nataka sambandhit ahe. Are ti tyachya barobar dinner date la geli hoti kal! Kiti lucky ahe Meenal..."

Ka ga Reshma, jar tya mulane tula vicharla asta tar tu pan geli asti ka date la? "

" Obviously!" ti hasat mhante. "Pan kharach, meenal khup nasheebwan ahe. Sujay, actual date kashi aste re?"

Sujay gaped at her.

" Reshma, tu kiti innocent ahes ga. Agdi sadhi, sarsal. Mhanun mala tu avadtes."

"Kai!? "

"Aga, maitrin mhanun!"

He sighed. His feelings were better not expressed. But then, after pondering for a few minutes, an idea struck him.

"Aj tar sagle ushira yenar ahet. Chal apan baher jau dinner la aj."

He was expecting a sudden trashing of his idea, but she agreed. Without any hesitations or thinking, she said yes.

"Chal mag. Ready ho. Mi pan fresh hoto."

"Theek ahe."

After some time, he called out to her.

Sujay couldn't believe what his eyes perceived.

Reshma, dressed elegantly in a crimson- gold kanjipuram saree, walked towards him, smiling all the way.

He agreed. He had fallen in love with her.

He held out his hand and she graciously took it.

"Let's go."

She was always afraid of bike rides, in fact, she detested them. But it was different today. She was not fearful but a sense of thrill filled her. She had always wished for this, hadn't she? They were part of her 'extremely important' kind of wishes. To be with someone who cared for you.

"Baslis barobar? "

His voice brought her back to reality.

Ho.

Sujay had cleverly chosen a garden restaurant complete with musicians and ambience. They were sitting at the corner table, pretty much isolated yet romantic. Soft violin melodies swayed around.

He stared at her face, dimly glowing in the candle light. Small lanterns glowed yellow, spreading their light, calm and low.

" Aiyaa. Kiti chaan ahe he restaurant. "

Reshma was admiring the decorations, quite unaware of Sujay's presence.

If he could, he'd stop the time right now.

Starters were served and both engaged themselves in eating and general talks.

Avadla ka ga ithe tula? "

Ho. Khup. She smiled.

Khara sangu, ti mhanali, aj mala khup bara vattay. Mhanje, mi kiti swapna sajavle hote - long drive var jayacha, dinner la, bharpur majja karaychi. Pan te sagla... " she trailed off.

Rakesh incident would always haunt her, always make an attempt to make her realise her circumstances, her broken life.

Her face turned grim.

Sujay quickly took her hands in his.

"Ag Reshma, tu kiti ajun blame karnar ahes swatahala? Tujhi hyat kahi chuk nahiye. Rakesh doesn't deserve you. Tyachyasarkha swarthi manasapasun dur rahilela bara."

She looked at him, teary eyed.

Ani, amhi ahot na sagle. Mi ahe na tujhya barobar. "

He was right. No, she would never want to ruin this moment. This was hers, entirely. Rakesh had no place in her life, he was never meant to. It was a harsh truth to digest, but she knew, today or tomorrow, she'd have to. The ones around her were so much caring for her, especially Sujay. She felt she owed a lot to him. A lot more than she could ever repay.

Courageously fighting back her tears, She broke into a chuckle.

Thanks, Sujay.

Hatat hath dharun, doghe hi hasayla lagle.

Over the other side, an exceptionally shocked Anna, frantically dialled Kaivalya. He'd be very much interested in this latest development, she thought.

...

Mala kashala bolavun ghetlas ithe? "

Kaivalya, in his usual rude tone, retorted.

Are te bagh!

Kai?

She pointed her finger at the farthest table.

Oh my God! Goshti itkya pudhe gelya ani aplyala samajhla pan nahi. Maan gaye Sujay! Hyane tar ekdum sixer marli!" Kaivalya smirked.

Anna and Kaivalya were witnessing something they had never thought they would. Though, he had his suspicious of some budding feelings in Sujay mind, he was very much confident that he would never straightforwardly confess.

Aga kharach, he khaun bagh na!?

Pan mi he kadhi khalla nahiye re Sujay, mahit nahi kasa lagel.

"Majhyavar vishwas ahe na?"

"Mag 'Aah' kar? "

He stuffed a spoonful of pasta in her mouth. They were blissfully unaware of those shocked eyes that were fixed over them.

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(earlier posted on 3D thread)

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dlip

@dlip

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Here goes the Part 2... 😊 (by Manasi_MD)

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Sujay paid the bill and went to the parking lot, along with Reshma.

Reshma said, "Kay re Sujay, aaj contribution nahi ka?"

"Nahi, aajcha dinner mazyakadun.."

Kaivalya and Anna were shocked. Kaivalya said, "Eravi detergent ani toothpaste karta pan contribution kadhayla lavto ha. Ani ata bagh!"

Anna, "Keval, ata apan ghai jaun Ashu la sanguya. Te ghari alyavar baghu tyanna!"

"Bara, chal."

Here, Sujay and Reshma had just left too. They had hardly been going a few minutes that Reshma suddenly said, "Sujay, thamb patkan, please!"

Sujay braked. "Kay ga, asa adhech kay zala tula?"

"To bagh tikde kulfiwala ahe. Chal na khauya."

"Ashi rastyavarchi kulfi khaychi?"

"Are, rastyavarchi kulfi khaylach saglyat jasta maja yete. Chal!" Saying so, she almost half-dragged Sujay towards the kulfiwala.

"Bhaiya, do kulfi dena please.." Reshma said. "Ha, Sujay, he ghe.."

"Hmmm.. Masta ahe ga!"

"Bagh, bolle hote na!" Reshma looked up at him and started giggling.

"Kay?"

"Kahi nahi.."

"Aga sang ki!"

"Joker sarkha distoys! Naakala lagliye bagh kulfi!" She wiped the kulfi off his nose and they both burst out laughing.

They reached home after half an hour. Anna, Kaivalya and Ashu were waiting for them. Their faces told Sujay that something was really, really wrong, but he didn't have even a wildest guess as to what the matter was.

Kaivalya : Kay mag, kashi hoti tumchi doghanchi date?

Reshma : Date? Amhi tar dinner la gelo hoto fakta..

Anna : Baccha, tyalach date mhantat!

Reshma : Pan tumhi konich jevayla navhtat ghari mhanun amhi dogha baher gelo. Fakta jevayla baher gelelo, baki kahi nahi.

Reshma looked at Sujay, hoping for some support, but he said nothing and just stood there, with an expression completely indiscernible to Reshma. "Mi change karun yete." She said, and left.

Kaivalya : Sujay, tu kahi bolnar nahi ahes ka?

Sujay : Tinech mala vicharla, date kasha aste, mhanun mi...

Ashu : Scholar, amhala vatlela ki tu pahilyach ball la sixer marli. Pan ha tar catch nighala.

Anna : Mhanje?

Kaivalya : Mhanje, Sujay, tu Reshma la date mhanje kay, he dakhvayla dinner la gheun gelas, ani ti date ahe he tila sangitla pan nahi..?

Ashu : He tar konachyatari hatat kaach mhanun hira dilyasarkha zala!

Kaivalya : Ashu, tu gappa bas re don minute. Sujay, tu bol. Tu tila baher jaycha ka, asa vicharla tevha tuzya manat nakki kay hota?

Sujay : Khara sangu, mala ti avadte ani mala tila kharya date var nyaycha hota pan ti nahi mhanu naye mhanun mi asach casual outing mhanun bollo.

Anna : Ani tila ho mhanayla kiti vel lagla?

Sujay : Kahich nahi. Lagech ho bolli ti.

Ashu : Tine saadi adhi pasun nesali hoti?

Sujay : Nahi, amcha tharlyavar nesali. Ka?

Kaivalya : Mhanun mhantat, fakta pustaki dnyan kahi kaamacha nasta.

Sujay : Mhanje?

Anna : Ti itkya lagech ho mhatli, tine saadi nesali, tari tuzya kahich lakshyat ala nahi?

Sujay : Kahi yayla hava hota ka?

Ashu : Scholar, itka shiklela ahes tari itka doka chalet nahi tuza!?

Kaivalya : Mag kay tar! Anna la saglya goshti itkya ushira kaltat, tari tichya lakshyat ala. Ashu saatvi napas asun tyala kalala, tari tula kalat nahi..?

Sujay : Asa kay kalat nahi ahe mala? Sangaal ka koni?

(original story by Tarantella, this part was posted on 3D thread before)

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dlip

@dlip

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Part 3... (by dlip)

Reshma tyanchya room-madhe sadi change karanya-sathi aali. Sadi badlun, Kanatale kadhun tehvayala ani kes vincharnya sathi ti aarshya samor ubhi rahili. Ani... samorchya aarshy-at baghun ti ekdam dachakalich.

Samor chya aarshy-at dekhil Reshmach hoti; pan, Rakesh-Reshma chya lagna-talya veshat!

Tu ?

Mi Reshma Patil, Akloya-chi. Maze lagna zalay ... Rakesh barobar.

Mahit aahe mala.

Pan tu matra badal-li aahes. Ata khup confidence alay tuzyat, khup mokali zali aahes tu.

He sagale mazya mitrna-mule zalay. Tyanich atamvishwas dilay mala, tech ubhe rahilet mazya pratyak adchanichya-weli. Mag te baban-shi phonwar bolane aso nahitar achanak alelya Rewa-pasun Rakesh-che satya lapvane aso.

Ani tyanich tula ase Hasat ani Anandi' thevalay nahi ka? Khup majet disteyas tu... Minal barobar Modern Dresses' che shopping, Kaivalya Barobar Ratrichi bhtakanti ani aaj Sujay-barobar Date'!

Ka? Anandi rahanyacha mala kahi adhikar nahi ka? Ki mi pan tuzya sarkhe radatach basale pahije? Ani... ek minute... mi kahi date' la vagaire gele navhate. Gharat itar kuni navhate mhanun amhi doghe fakta baher jewayala gelo hoto itkech.

Itkech? Nuste jewayala tar Sam-chya katya-war sudhaa jata ale aste na! Tya-sathi Sujay-barobar yevhadhya lamb-chya restaurant madhe jayachi kay garaj hoti? Ani te hi Sadi nesun, gajara ghalun?

Haa mhanje ... Hmm... He bagh tase kahich nahiye. Ugaachah ...

Ugaachah? Sujay-la ghari yayala usher zala ki tula ugaacha-ch kalaaji watate, ho na? Office madhe Lele-samor Sujay-chi fajiti hou naye mhanun ugaacha-ch tyala dance step shikvalyas nahi ka? Rewa-la sodayala ja ase nemke Sujay-la ugaacha-ch sangitales? Rewa-sathi Sujay ghairh thambala tevha ugaacha-ch tuze dole bharun ale, nahi ka?

He sagale mi maitri-chya hakka-ne kelay ani karatey. Tula kay mhanaychay?

Mala itkech mhanaychay ki... he sagale ugacha-ch nahiye. Je itara-na janvatay te tula-hi janavu de! Sujay baddal tula je watay na ... Te Maitri-peksha adhik kahi tari aahe. Tyala saamori ja Reshma... Anandi rahayacha tula dekhil hakka aahe he swtahala-ch bajaaw... ani ... mala ... hya Akolya-chya radu-bai' Reshma la ata visarun, aayushyat pudhe ja...tithe kuni tari aahe ... tuzi waat baghanare..

Bas... Pure kar. Amchyat ase kahi nahiye.

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Ani Reshma-ne aarshyata-le kahi disu naye mhanun lights off karun takale. Ana-ne yeun kahi prashna vicharu nayet mhanun tine dokya-war pangharun ghetale. Tari-hi tila Aarshyata-lya Reshma che Sujay baddal tu je watay na ... Te Maitri-peksha adhik kahi tari aahe. Tyala saamori ja Reshma' he vakya punha punha aiku yet hote ani tyach barobar athavat hoti Sujay barobar ghalavleli sandhyakal!

Kadhi swikarel Reshma he satya ki Sujay mitra-peksha adhik javala-cha aahe?

Maitri ani Vishwas ... haa tar kuthalyahi natya-cha bhakkam paya asto. Nahi ka?

(Original story by Tarantella, this part was also posted on 3D thread)

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Vidya Shetty

@vidya0906

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Superb trilogy!!!!!!!!! hats off to all 3 of you 👏 enjoyed all the takes...God alone knows when will we get to see such scenes of SuShma

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dlip

@dlip

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Part 4 by Tarantella

"Mala ata kahihi bolaycha nahiye ya vishaya var. That's final. Mi thakloy khup."

Sujay declared, his voice dangerously low and an apparent annoyance clearly masking his face.

He walked off to the kitchen, paying no heed to Kaivalya's and Ashu's exasperated rantings.

...

What was it? Her lips quivered and she could feel a strong lump in her throat. Involuntarily, she pulled the blanket close, clutching it tightly.

It was dark already it wouldn't hurt to let tears flow, would it?

Truth was staring straight at her, waiting for her to acknowledge the fact. But why was she running away? Sarva kahi tila hava tasa ghadat hota, something was amiss, something was not right.

Her hand clutched the mangalsutra.

Sujay baddal je vattay tula...tyala samori ja reshma...

Sujay.

Ti samjhenase zale hote, vichitra bheeti nirmal zali hoti tichya manat. Sujay ha ticha fakta khup changla mitra hota, nahi ka?

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Andharat otyavar baslelya Sujay agdi haluch bollala.

"Reshma. He baki sagle kahihi boltat. Tyanchyakade laksha devu nakos."

Panyane barlela glass tasach thevat ti mhanali. "Tyancha aikna tar kadhich sodun dila ahe re, pan majya manala kasa shanta karu?"

He didn't know how to respond to her.

Mala kahich samjat nahiye. Ani sadhya samjun ghenyachi manstithi-hi nahiye. "

Apan visrun jauya kikalchi sandhykal. Aplya donghansathi hech theek ahe - Hech mhanaycha ahe na tula? "

"Ho." She gulped, tears were freely flowing now, but very much hidden from Sujay. Darkness saved her.

Her tone expressed otherwise. It felt as if she was deliberately mouthing those words.

"Jasa tu mhanshil, Reshma."

Reshma ne amcha conversation aikla asel ka? Tila most probably majhya confession baddal samajhla asnar. Ki nahi samajhla? Rakesh? Ti ajun hi Rakesh chi vaat pahat ahe ka?

Kahi hi aso, My feelings for her won't change. No matter what.

She got up hastily. Her eyes grew wide seeing the time.

Sade nau vajun gele! Mala koni uthavla pan nahi! " she stomped out of bedroom, fretting.

Anna was all ready to leave, while Ashu was busy lazying around. Kaivalya was, as usual, busy with music.

" Zop zali na? Anna asked.

"Ag ho. Pan kiti ushir zala mala uthaila. Mala koni lavkar uthavla ka nahi. Tumhi breakfast kela ka? Ho. Ani Sujay kuthey? Tyacha daba!"

Ag zara shwaas ghe! Nahi ajun amhi breakfast nahi kelay." Ashu replied.

"Are pan mala uthvaicha tari. Patkan karte pohe mi. Anna, tu khaun ja, bara ka? Ani ha Sujay kuthey?"

Kaivalya, who was till the moment, deliberately ignoring the conversation, took off his headphones and broke into a smirk.

"Toh gela office la."

"Evdhya lavkar?"

"Tyachya boss cha phone ala hota bhalya pahate, asa toh mhanala. Ani khup kaam pan hota aj tyala. Asahi toh mhanala. Evdhi kalaji ahe na tyachi? Tyalach jaun ka nahi vicharat? " he shrugged.

" Kaivalya, tu gappa bas re." ashu said.

Tears were already clouding her vision, but Reshma was determined to prove everyone wrong. She was brave. She knew herself. She knew her feelings. She was capable of handling her own thoughts, wasn't she?

No matter how much strong she wanted to be, her mind was a complete mess of emotions. She realized how difficult it was to accept the truth. In fact, the truth her heart was eager to accept, her mind quickly shrugged off the effort. What she supposed to do?

Gathering herself, she turned towards kitchen. It was the only place where no one would dare enter and question her about anything. She had ample time to think while she prepared Sujay's tiffin.

...

It was almost 11.00 when she had packed his lunch. She went straight to her room to get ready. Taking her purse and the small bag containing Sujay's tiffin, she set out.

"Challis kuthe ekti?" Kaivalya was quick to ask.

With an annoyed look, she replied."Sujay chya office madhe. Yetos?"

Her sudden reply resulted in him dropping his headphones on the hard floor, while he stared at her retreating form, dumbstruck.

...

While waiting for a taxi, last night's conversation flashed before her. How did Sujay know? Tyachya manat nakki kai challa hota?

She sighed.

Visarna evdha sopa asta tar...

...

(this was posted before on 3D thread)

Edited by dlip - 10 years ago