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Originally posted by: Avyakta

Great update Urmila . Thank you .

Originally posted by: shipreeta

You are writing it so well. Just waiting for the next part

Originally posted by: Snehamadhuri

Great update Urmila👏 . thank you .

Originally posted by: shiningstar77

UrmilaDi...Sorry billion times for my Late comment...Little busy...that's why only.😭

No sorry brother, this is palace of forgiveness you know 😊 Dharmaraj's door is always open for all.

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Wow...this update is Lovely as well as heart-rending one..Beautifully Penned!👏👏

Yudhi n Ghatotkach scene...Lovely.. Hidimba was right..His soothing calmness can calm him..What a line!!😛

Then pandavas scene...aww...loved it...😳

Thank you for loving it 😊 I enjoy writing happy Pandava moments!

But after that,Ghatotkach lost his childhood ealy n have taken the huge responsibility on his shoulders..Maharishi Vyasa too hinted what would happen for him in future...Hidimba n Ghatotkach want to live seperated from Bheem...hmmm...But when I Read Hidimba's reply,I was speechless...So pure-hearted Woman..👏

Yes Hidimbaa is a noble lady. And Ghatotkach too is a good son 😊 you cannot achieve Dharma unless you make a sacrifice, that's the lesson MB teaches you here!

Arjun's reply to Ghatotkach."how can a tree forget its first flower? " wah!!...so true...where come u r getting these meaningful lines?..very nice.👏

That line just occurred in my mind, Krishna's kripa 😳 without Lord's blessing I can't write a single word! Glad that you liked it 😊

Nakul n Sahadev making the atmosphere pleasant n joyful.

Bheem n Hidimba scene...My eyes moist with tears...

Union and separation were simply rules of bodies! But bonding of true love can never be broken! Wherever we would stay, our souls would keep radiating love towards Hidimbaa and Ghatotkach! Even after this separation of bodies, we would never be separated!

These lines...More beautiful.👏👏

Those are my favourite lines too 😃 I guessed that Yudhi's eternal loving nature must have thought something like this while leaving rakshasavarta 😊 And we too should not forget Hidimbaa, I will try to bring Hidimbaa and Ghatotkach again in my story, in some happy time.

Originally posted by: shiningstar77

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Fantabulous update..👏👏

My mind n soul got refreshed on reading the word KRISHNA..aww...My ManMohan...loved the description u gave for him...His beauty could not be expressed in words...😳😳

Krishna appearing in Yudhi's mind during meditation..Divine feeling it was!

I know the effect of Krishna Name on a devotee mind 😃 ManMohan is coming very soon, just showed a hint of His shubha darshan 😊

Then...OMG...Nakul n Arjun jokes...too wonderful...I was giggling so hard..😆😆🤣

Thank you for liking the jokes!

Then Panchali's description...Loved the way u have penned it..

Yes, it is heard that both her complexion and fragrance are like blue lotus, and that fragrance can be sensed from a distance of one krosha."

Loved this line..😊

Yes Panchali too is coming 😃 here they are just listening about her, for the first time!

Then Gandharvas scene...Yudi n Arjun's moments...👏

Yes this part is mostly overlooked by all, so I tried to show this in some detail. Glad that you liked it.

Thanks for the pm...Waiting