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Posted: 10 years ago
Urmi, well done ⭐️ I'll reply at ease after reading again...
Draupadi's thoughts are beautifully expressed by Varaali, I wanted to read more 😊
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So Urmi, I am commenting again 😆 well done, again 😆
Jokes apart; You've put forth Yudhisthira's thoughts very beautifully, so many thoughts in his head at the same time and all brothers were restless; Bhimsena's restlessness is for a different cause 😊 don't know when he'll get to eat but when he gets someone very priceless he wont be bothered when he'll get to eat ..
finally the moment came - an event which turned their life forever, the presence of Draupadi-Krishna in their life gave them a new meaning, filled up the hollowness of their life .
Yudi finally has his audience with Krishna , who he had been dreaming about and very soon Krishna would be inseparable from them, his words, deeds all had such impact on Pandavas
finally his moments when he saw Krishnaa and kept wondering about her qualities, Arjuna winning her swayyamvara surely was the happiest moment for him..
Draupadi's thoughts also are put forward very beautifully , she is fearless about the unknown future and only a woman with immense self belief and confidence in self and whose hand she held can do such a thing...
She took the new turn in her life with determination and was not scared of new responsibilities , that is the inspiring Draupadi for us!
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Posted: 10 years ago
My dear Urmila,

Thanks to your PM of today, I have discovered your FF. While I have never before read 23 chapters of any FF at one go, and to be frank I read very few FFs, please rest assured that I will read them all over the next few days, and comment on them whenever I have anything to say.

I know that Yudhishtira does not enjoy a very good press, to use a modern term, but I am glad to be able to read something written from his point of view. I must congratulate you to making this brave attempt to keep your own likes and dislikes out of this narrative; it cannot have been easy.

I do not know if you watch Dharmakshetra, the weekly show on the EPIC channel, which is like a court indictment of one character after the other from the Mahabharata in Chitragupta's court.The one on Yudhishtira, spread over 2 episodes, was extremely interesting. Especially as regards his accepting that he fell in love with Draupadi the moment he first saw her, and that this influenced his readiness to follow Kunti's command that they should share and share alike. And also that he deliberately planned psychological warfare on Karna by getting Salya, as his sarathi, to insult and bait him and destroy his concentration.

More later, Incidentally, I have always had very great admiration for Swami Vivekananda, and so I like your id no end. One question: have you changed your id recently, and if so, what was it earlier?

Shyamala B.Cowsik


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Posted: 10 years ago

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Nice Update Urmila 😃



Welcome to Dharmaraj's palace 😊 Thank you for reading and commenting 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Maverick_me

Urmi, well done ⭐️ I'll reply at ease after reading again...

Draupadi's thoughts are beautifully expressed by Varaali, I wanted to read more 😊



I will be eagerly waiting to get your feedback 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sashashyam

My dear Urmila,

Thanks to your PM of today, I have discovered your FF. While I have never before read 23 chapters of any FF at one go, and to be frank I read very few FFs, please rest assured that I will read them all over the next few days, and comment on them whenever I have anything to say.

I know that Yudhishtira does not enjoy a very good press, to use a modern term, but I am glad to be able to read something written from his point of view. I must congratulate you to making this brave attempt to keep your own likes and dislikes out of this narrative; it cannot have been easy.

I do not know if you watch Dharmakshetra, the weekly show on the EPIC channel, which is like a court indictment of one character after the other from the Mahabharata in Chitragupta's court.The one on Yudhishtira, spread over 2 episodes, was extremely interesting. Especially as regards his accepting that he fell in love with Draupadi the moment he first saw her, and that this influenced his readiness to follow Kunti's command that they should share and share alike. And also that he deliberately planned psychological warfare on Karna by getting Salya, as his sarathi, to insult and bait him and destroy his concentration.

More later, Incidentally, I have always had very great admiration for Swami Vivekananda, and so I like your id no end. One question: have you changed your id recently, and if so, what was it earlier?

Shyamala B.Cowsik




Respected Madam,

First of all, a warm welcome to this palace of Dharmaraj 😊 This is a Temple for me. I always try to forget my own self while writing Yudhishthir's POV. I try to feel him. And to speak the truth, I love him. He is my most favorite character in MB after Lord Krishna.
But unfortunately, present generation rarely understands his nobility, and this fact pains me. I have read many novels on MB and found that most of them shows him as a perfect villain. Such a wrong message is being spread in this already corrupted society, I think so. It's time to respect Dharmaraj's Dharma if this Kaliyug wants to learn something good. That is my only intention behind this work.
I have watched Dharmakshetra serial, and did not like its first episode at all. How can they mark Yudhishthir as a 'kshamaa-heen', 'dayaa-heen' ruthless lusty man? I oppose such thought. Acording to me, the answers given in reply to yaksha prashna were not mere book knowledge, he indeed lived those answers. I did not like that they tried to prove he did not follow his own theory in his life. How come? He had forgiveness, had he not? He was kind, was he not? And as for Draupadi, I will try my best to explain this in upcoming chapters. Anyway, second episode was really good, and I loved the verdict Chitragupta gave finally.
I am a disciple of Swami Vivekananda so I keep my Guru in DP. And I have changed my DP long ago. Initially it was pic of Urmila actress from Ramananda Sagar's serial Ramayan. as a fan of Lakshman-Urmila I use her name as my ID too.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful! At one time I just forgot that I ws reading rather thought I was watching... The set up was quite similar to starbharat.
The dependence and finding of problem solver, that was the most amazing part!
Oh my innocent yudi doesnt know, where krishna was...
The karna's part also was short and sweet.

Another thing Draupadi's thoughts nd feelings werr also marvellously written very much like an ordinary girl yet very special.
You and varaali di write too good together.. (even that Yudi Arjun os was also fantastic)
Kudos to you... eyes waiting fr nxt update! ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nicely written. I need to read the first 22 chapters now.
As Jonathan Swift had said " Vision is the art of seeing things invisible". You have that art.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very well written Sema Di!! Loved reading it!!! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
First of all, toh, did Bheem get his food? Or did he have to wait till Drupad recognized them? And this Nakul, he's soo naughty, but wait! Let Kanha come! He'll get back all of these jokes! 😆 And yes, Yudi's arguments turned out to be so so accurate! Not Drupad, but his cousins, no, cousin managed to crack their disguise! Then, the description of the swayambar arena was so beautiful! It was all before my eyes! After that,

His eyes seemed to suppress laughter within them!
^His always does! ☺️
Yes we all can depend on him, blindly!! He's the best guardian, and the best thief!
Aww, Yudi is really bhola! Or maybe Kanha is too cunning! But either way, this aankhmicholi is really funny! Seriously, all those kings were a bunch of donkeys! Kanha must have had a gala time watching the live comedy! After all he wasn't so modest, like Yudi to have kept his thoughts within himself and only shook his head!
And this Karna! He was good, no doubt, but his definition of goodness missed the most important phrase, i.e. if you plan to be loyal to your friends to the very end, you better choose them carefully. ANd ift was Draupadi's life, and her choice to choose a man she liked! Maybe she didn't like Karna by intuition, and took advantage of the one and only 'flaw' of him. What else could she have done at that moment?
Oh my Kanhaiya! He always takes care of everyone, this way or that way, but he does.
Yudi took the right decision, to give 3/4 of the responsibility to Kanha! Bheem couldn't be trusted when it comes to Dury!
Oh I wish I could see him myself, speaking to Yudi with his pretty eyes and smiles on his handsome face! He's just so adorable!! My Kanha. 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
@Varaalidi :

I love this Draupadi! So confidence, with not a small hint of fear in her voice! Loved the way you portrayed her determination dedication to her inborn urge to uphold dharma!! Simply brilliant that was!

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