An Encounter with Karna (OS)Last Part on Pg23 - Page 19

Originally posted by: viji2111

So it was a dream. Now i know the reason why you did not update it earlier.

But it was awesome.

Originally posted by: panchaali

" Whenever any needy used to come here with something to ask for..i used to feel like accepted .. somewhere a part of them.. somewhere a reason for their joy ..those tears of happiness in their eyes used to wipe all those unshed tears of mine... those blessings from them used to heal the blemishes of curses within... I was not a danveer Riti.. but biggest needy of them all.. this place was where i used to get my daan..in those fulfilled prayers of someone.. "

this part is written soo wonderfully...you have put your thoughts soo wonderfully...😊👍🏼

These friends i tell you ..sometimes they can irritate the hell out of you...

very true 😆

and I was pretty sure..that He was there..for it... Only...

and oops that ending..that is heart touching, you roved yourself Karna's mom Riti Maa 🤗

and yes a wonderful ending of OS..hugss🤗

I am tired sleepy still can't stop myslef from reading ur OS, even if it is 2 am now...and my eyes are aching for sleep..what wonderful update 😃

Originally posted by: shweta2728

Wow that was beautiful! Really heart touching! Especially the end!

Originally posted by: Raghuji

Riti,

Awesome ! I can visualize how you have thought through the story. The narration is so coherent with emotions/longing beautifully portrayed.

I wish you see Karn soon, for all you know he might be within you 😊

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

What A Beautiful Ending ! Loved How Riti(di)Donated Her Umbrella !!! So It Was A Dream, Well A Good One, It aught Many Good Things !

Originally posted by: vaikartana

👏 👏 👏 👏My favourite Ritika Sharma is back with a bang.Glad she woke up atleast now 😛Loved it Totally loved it.It is flawless.Everything is so touchy.Loved his explanation for his daanveerta And a million stars to the last part.Loved it Riti baby

Originally posted by: KHUSHI-99

Riti this was just beautifull..wonderfully written..the ending was also very good...😊👏..

Originally posted by: riti4u

🤗thank you dearie...glad that u liked it..😊

Originally posted by: KHUSHI-99

😛😊 you are welcome..its so boring now a days😕