An Encounter with Karna (OS)Last Part on Pg23 - Page 20

Originally posted by: SayaneeH.Lecter

Riti I hate you .. u always make me cry n now with teary eyes in office I am in an odd position .. wonderful update .. I will comment on it once I am at home

Originally posted by: riti4u

yeah... ..nothing to watch on TV...and i m not getting any inspiration to write on these days.... will come to cc tonight...😊..havent visited even AT ..for few days..🤔

Hmm..nothing to watch... will wait for you.even I have not visited the AT since many days

" Whenever any needy used to come here with something to ask for..i used to feel like accepted .. somewhere a part of them.. somewhere a reason for their joy ..those tears of happiness in their eyes used to wipe all those unshed tears of mine... those blessings from them used to heal the blemishes of curses within... I was not a danveer Riti.. but biggest needy of them all.. this place was where i used to get my daan..in those fulfilled prayers of someone.. "

Originally posted by: riti4u

🤗thank you panchu.. you have been really encouraging reader ..😊..thanks so much for liking my bit..😊..and Aww.. you wrote this at 2 am.. means a lot... 🤗

waiting for your next story as well...😃

Riti... 🤗

"I was not sad, nor depressed. I was lone, like the evening fading before my eyes... And he came, sat beside me, took my right hand in his hand. I felt his warm hand, making my cold and clammy hand warm, spreading a feel I'm not lone. He didn't speak; his silence spoke words forgot long ago. Slowly, he did let me rest my head on his shoulder, just above his heart, and circled his arms around me. I heard him slowly breathing, reminding I'm alive with him. I closed my eyes, in a feeling I never felt, to a sleep I never slept. And when I opened them, I was lone again. I felt I needed nothing else; even the loneliness he left was more comforting... But who was he? How did he know me? Why did he come when I needed someone the most? I ... I still don't know..., perhaps a best friend I lost in some other birth..."

Sometimes, dreams are more powerful than reality. When I began reading this last update, I chose to read from the first word of the first part again. I was floating like a paper boat lost in stream. I could only end up in no other words than I wrote above. Mostly, my imaginations are as weird and moody as I am. (and I'm sorry for leaving them here)... Surely, this spellbound OS, has to be magical that it found way to my heart to stay forever...🤗

Keep writing!⭐️

very beautifully written ritiii 🤗

Originally posted by: SayaneeH.Lecter

" Whenever any needy used to come here with something to ask for..i used to feel like accepted .. somewhere a part of them.. somewhere a reason for their joy ..those tears of happiness in their eyes used to wipe all those unshed tears of mine... those blessings from them used to heal the blemishes of curses within... I was not a danveer Riti.. but biggest needy of them all.. this place was where i used to get my daan..in those fulfilled prayers of someone.. "

These lines Riti these lines left me in tears ..How thirsty this man was for little acceptance .. for little words of affection, to have a simple blessing .. The man only gave got nothing in return .. Everybody just robbed him out of whatever he has .. his galore, his dedication, his emotions, his charity .. human to God all just used him for their own interest .. His daan was the only way to gain some peaceful moment n genuine nice words

Riti I am sad that it is the end of this story but plz keep writing .. wanna read more from you